Humdard🔥

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Jo Tu Mera Humdard Hai... Suhana Har Dard Hai... Jo Tu Mera Humdard Hai 🙈 More

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By PreeRaNxSupremacy

Sorry for late update...
Actually I was too much lazy u all know 🙈🙈

Jhelo ab jo bhi likha hai maine.... I know bahut bore hai but please jhel lo 🙈🙈🙈

Ignore the Mistakes...😳😳

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Sherlyn kareena and Ronaa-Chiii went for shopping...they complete their shopping,,,

Sherlyn and Kareena  pay their bills.... Just then Kareena's phone rings...it was Rakhi's call...

Kareena : Haa Bhabhi,,,,,, What ohh my god..kaide....  mom thik hai.... hum abhi aate hai....

Sherlyn : Kya hua bua ... sab thik hai naa.....

Kareena : Mom gir gaye hai hume ghar Jana hoga....

Sherlyn : Oh my god bua,,, Dadi thik to hoga naa.... Unhe jyada lagi to nahi ..

Ronaa-Chiii rolled her eyes....

Kareena : pata nahi sherlyn ghar jaake hi pata chalega....

Sherlyn : Ronaa-Chiii tum apni shopping complete karke aa jana...hume nikalna hoga... Chaliye bua....

It's tym for Ronaa-Chiii...
Sales Girl : Mam Aap payment cash se karegi ya card se....???

Ronaa-Chiii (with attitude)  : Card...!!!

She gives card to girl ... Girl swipe two yo three times...

Cashier : Ronaa-Chiii aapka card block hai...

Ronaa-Chiii : What...sahi se karo... Block kaise hai.... The Karan Luthra ka card hai...

Cashier : M sorry mam yeh access nahi horaha..

Ronaa-Chiii : Yeh kaise ho sakta hai...

Cashier : Madam aap cash pay kar sakte ho...to jaldi kariye..to Yaha or log bhi hai queue me...

Ronaa-Chiii : Mere paas abhi itna cash nahi hai itna... Ek minute... Yeh lo ...

Cashier takes money...

Cashier : Madam yeh cash to bahut kam hai.... Mam aapne itni expensive chize Li hai is cash se to kuch bhi nahi aayega....

Ronaa-Chiii (embarassed) : acha jo aayega vo dedo...

Ronaa-Chiii felt so insulted...

Ronaa-Chiii : yeh kaisa card diya hai Karan ne kitna insult hui hai aaj meri...

Ronaa-Chiii came to Luthra Aashram...

Luthra's are cheering Dadi... Everyone is happy,,,,,, and smiling Ronaa-Chiii rolled her eyes seeing them happy.....

Ronaa-Chiii came and sits on a sofa with a huffed.... Luthra's didn't gave her a heed....

Preeta come with a Girish.... with Lassi glasses....

Preeta : Dadi aaj aapki manpasand lassi bani hai... Girish bhaiya....pahle dadi ko do...Aapka Dil kar Raha tha na Lassi pine...

Girish served to all except Mahesh....

Mahesh : arey meri Lassi... mujhe bhi to de...

Girish : Preeta Bhabhi ne mana kiya aapko Dene k liye....

Kareena : kyon Preeta ne kyon mana kiya...

Preeta : vo isliye Bua ...k Papa ka sugar level maintain nahi hai....Yeh rahi papa aapki Lassi Diet Lassi....

Dadi : Bahut acha kiya Preeta tune ....(teasing Mahesh)  Chal pi ab yeh diet Lassi...

Mahesh : Yeh kya baat hui,,,, sabko Lassi or mujhe yeh....

Preeta : Papa aapka sugar level maintain nahi hai.... Or aap aajkal jo foodie hide and seek khel rahe honaa mujhe sab pata hai....

Mahesh (innocently) : Hide and seek...

Preeta : Papa...

Mahesh : Shshhhhh..... Pitwayegi kya mujhe....

Preeta : Haa chaliye jaldi se finish kariye ise...

Mahesh : Daant to mat...

Rishabh : Aise hi daant paregi aapko Dad..... Pahle Dadi and bua daantte the fir Mom... Or ab aapki choti Bahu Cum aapki beti.....ki baari....

kritika : Bhai aap mujhe bhul gaye..

Rishabh : Tujhe kaise bhul sakta hu... Lekin tu dad ko daantti thodi hai....

Sammy : arey rishabh bhaiya yeh to sabse badi danger hai....

Kritika : hawwwww Bhai aap yeh kya bol rahe ...

Ronaa-Chiii : Oh God yeh inka family Melo drama.... yeh Karan kaha hai.... Usne mujhe yeh block card thama diya... Khabar leti hu uski

Girish gave Lassi to rishab and Sammy...

Rishabh : Thank you Girish..... Vaise aaj yeh Lassi is tym....kis Khushi me...

Rakhi : Mummy g ka aaj Dil kar Raha tha Lassi pine,,, isliye Preeta se kaha k Punjabi asli waali Lassi banaye....

Sammy : Acha hai ...... it's tasty....

Girish : Preeta Bhabhi... Aapki Lassi....

Preeta : Girish bhaiya aap rakh dijiye... Fridge me.. mera abhi Dil nahi kar raha.....main baad me pi lungi....

Girish : Thik hai Bhabhi....

Ronaa-Chiii : Girish mujhe do...

Girish looks at her and made irritating face...

Girish : Yeh meri Preeta Bhabhi ka hai... Main dusra laata hu...

Ronaa-Chiii : Arey to kya hua... Yehi dedo vo nahi pi Rahi naa...

Kritika : Haa Girish dedo.. ise yeh vaise bhi Preeta Bhabhi ki jhutan hi ise pasand hai.. second hand ..

Ronaa-Chiii glares her ....

Preeta : Girish bahiya aap yeh ise de dedijiye....

Girish : Nahi Preeta Bhabhi yeh aapka hai... Maine dusra Lata hu....

Girish left with the glass.....

Ronaa-Chiii (angrily in mind)  : yaha k nokar bhi kam nahi hai...

Kritika : Arey Bhabhi choriye naa aap mujhe batao shopping per kab chal rahe ho...

Preeta : Kal kaha tha naaa kritika....

Preeta : No bhabhi abhi please..

Rakhi : Haa preeta jaa

Preeta nodde her head...

Kritika : Ok fir Sameer  Bhai chalo jaldi

Sammy : Main nahi hamari meeting hai,,,

Karan enters talking on phone.... His eyes met with Preeta,,,they share a Eyelock.... thier trance were broken by Ronaa-Chiii sound...

Ronaa-Chiii : Karan yeh kya card diya hai tumne mujhe yeh block hai....

Karan (Uninterestedly) : Ohh my mistake ... Main tumhe batana bhul Gaya tha... Mere saare cards block hai....

Ronaa-Chiii : Tumhare cards block hai lekin kyon maine kuch bhi shopping nahi ki Karan...

Karan : To cash use karleti Ronaa-Chiii

Ronaa-Chiii : Cash jitna tha mere pas usme sirf yeh sandals aaye hai.. or kuch nahi....

Kritika giggles.   : Baad me yeh sandals bahut kaam aayenge.

Karan : Ab main kya Karu .  Tum jaano tumhari shopping jaane...

Ronaa-Chiii : Tum mujhe karao shopping...

Sherlyn : Vo kaha se karaayega shopping ... Uske accounts or cards ka access preeta k pas hai....

Ronaa-Chiii shocked ....

Ronaa-Chiii : Matlab

Sammy : Matlab yeh Ronaa-Chiii k karan Bhai ki liability and assets sab kuch Bhai ne Preeta k naam kiya hai... Unhe agar kuch bhi kaam karna hota hai to pahle Preeta bhabhi se permission Leni hoti hai....even car ki servicing k liye bhi preeta Bhabhi ki permission needed hai...

Kritika : Ab samajh gayi yaaa kisi or tareeqe se samjhaye hum (laughs)

Ronaa-Chiii : Karan matlab tumhare pas bhi kuch nahi hai....

Karan : Exactly.. isliye to use bardasht kar raha hu yaha....well leave tum jao mere kapdo wash kardo....

Ronaa-Chiii : What ....

Karan : Kapde mere Clothes,,,,washroom me  hai laundry karo jaake unki ironing karke wardrobe me rakhna hai... Or Mera room bhi bahut Ganda hoagaya hai.. use bhi saaf kardena...

Ronaa-Chiii : Whatttt main yeh sab karu... servants hai naa...

Karan : Meri would be wife ho naa to yeh sab karna padega Preeta bhi karti thi.... Tumhe bhi karna padega.... I don't like others to touch my things ... So go and do the work...

His phone rang...

Karan: Yes coach m coming....on the way coach...

He cuts the call..

Karan : Bua mujhe Jana hoga,,, coach ne bulaya hai team meeting hai...

Kareena nodded Karan leaves from there giving glance at Preeta....

Kareena : Ronaa-Chiii jao Karan k kapde wash kardo and uska room bhi saaf kardo...

Ronaa-Chiii : Aunty lekin main ...

Kareena : Preeta karti thi uske saare kaam...tabhi vo khush rahta tha usse....and tum tension mat lo tumhare liye main apni designer friend se bridal outfit banwa dungi.... wedding gift from my side ..... Jao tum Karan k room me uska room saaf kardo... Sherlyn chalo tumhari Mom se milte hai usne phone Kiya tha ..

They leave....

Sammy : bhai chale.... Meeting k liye late ho raha hai....

Rishabh : Haa chal

Rakhi : Rishabh tu mujhe.... Mandir chorh dega puttar...

Rishabh : Mom main bilkul drop kardeta aapko,,but hum dusre side ja rahe hai....

Mahesh : Rakhi ji chaliye hamare sath hum aapko Mandir le chalte hai....mom chaliye aap bhi..

They all leave one by one.... Ronaa-Chiii glares preeta and went to Karan's room for washing his clothes....

Kritika : Bhabhi sab Gaye chalo na ap bhi shopping karenge then icecream khaayenge .....

Screen Shift to Arora House....

Everyone is present in Arora House.... Preeta is pacing here and there in tension....

Preeta Dadi : Preeta baith Jaa puttar....

Preeta looks at Dadi..... She was worried for some reason...

Sarla comes.... with tea... Shrishty serves tea to all....

Preeta : Dadi mujhe tension ho raha hai.... yeh Shaadi....(tear Comes in her eyes)

Door bell rings...

Shrishty : Main dekhti hu ....

Preeta : Ruk...

Preeta opens the door...

She shocked to see a boy standing there with full Attitude......

Preeta : Tum....

Boy smirks seeing her...

Screen Frozed on Preeta Shocked face ....

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Ronaa-Chiii insult ...???..

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