EXPENSIVE LOVE: A trouble lov...

By Ms_fictionist_

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Joonie is a last year B.com student her life takes an unexpected change when she is forced to marry a bussine... More

NICE TO MEET YOU
CHAPTER 1 (SOMETHING FISHY)
CHAPTER 2 (LANDING)
CHAPTER 3 (I DON'T KNOW)
CHAPTER 4 (COLLAPSED)
CHAPTER 5 (UNKNOWN)
CHAPTER 6 (BRIDE SEEING)
CHAPTER 7 (FIXED)
CHAPTER 8 (WHAT'S GOININ ON)
CHAPTER 9 (WHO?)
CHAPTER 10 (WE DON'T TALK ANYMORE)
CHAPTER 11 (PERFECT OK)
CHAPTER 12 (BEFORE)
CHAPTER 13 (ENGAGEMENT)
CHAPTER 14 (IS HE THERE?!)
CHAPTER 15 (TROUBLES)
CHAPTER 16 (SOON)
CHAPTER 17 (WEDDING)
CHAPTER 18 (AMORE)
CHAPTER 19 (UFF DARK!!)
CHAPTER 20 (AS ALWAYS)
CHAPTER 21 (COUPLE THING)
CHAPTER 22 (TO VENICE )
CHAPTER 23 (DEALINGS)
ingu vanne 🖐🏻
CHAPTER 24 (THE MASK)
CHAPTER 25 (UNTITLED)
CHAPTER 26 (COME ON)
CHAPTER 27 (PANTHER)
CHAPTER 28 (MYSTERY)
CHAPTER 30 (CHASE)
CHAPTER 31 (DISCUSSIONS)
CHAPTER 32 (TAEPPPPEEE!!!)
CHAPTER 33 (GOT IT)
CHAPTER 34 (ITALY)
Poli Sanam!
CHAPTER 35 (CAUGHT 0.1)
CHAPTER 36 (CAUGHT 0.2)
CHAPTER 37 (MMH!)
CHAPTER 38 (SKIT)
CHAPTER 39 (I'LL MEET YOU!)
CHAPTER 40 (JELLY)
CHAPTER 41 (SMOKE)
CHAPTER 42 (DRAMA)
CHAPTER 43 (OVER)
CHAPTER 44 (FINAL CURTAIN)
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CHAPTER 29 (SCENE)

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Ethra nalayale nammal kanditt... Ente exams okke kazhinj njan ippo free annu😌

Ah pinne ezhuthan ulla skill okke poyonn oru doubt

So enthellum kuzhapam undakill shemikukk

Vote, comments mughyam bigile

Ok let's continue our story>
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3 weeks later

In bighit

Ravile

Kook: ithu nee thanne cheytha mathi... Atha athinte oru ith
Joonie: acha pakshe njan ottek engana...porathen ithu ente first project aa...
Kook: anna nee director dpt nn orale edutho... Ah pinne tae ye nokenda ketto avan njan aa plot nte case koduthekuva
Joonie: ah ethayalum njan onnu nokitt parayam
Kook: ninak enth doubt undakillum gwen avalod choicho aval paranju tharum... Ah pinne next week nn ullill thanne venam... Allakil aa company nammudenn kayivitt povum
Joonie: anna njan poyi work thudangatte

Yes guys joonie bighite ll work cheyan vannu... In director department

Ethayalum veetil veruthe bookum vayich irikuvale so bighit jolikk varan joonie vicharich

Drrrrr
drrrrr
drrrrr (landphone ringing)

Ente daivame ee phone calls ezhuthathe Enik ff ezhuthan ariyilla..enth cheyana shelam ayi poyi

Kook: hello? Jungkook here
Jin: aah njana jinaa
Kook: nee arunno..Edaa nee ithu evida.. Kore nalayalo ingotoke vilichitt
Jin: onnum parayenda... Joli thirakayi poyente acha.. Alla joonie enthiye.. Njan vilichitt edukunilla pinne njan amme vilichu appo angott vanenn paranju.. Aval avide jolikk keriyale
Kook: aah oru azhichayayi.. Athengana ninak avalde valla karyam ariyano
Jin: njan anno.. Njan vilicha phone edukende.. Pinne njan enna cheyum
Kook: ah enthyalum njan kodukam

Athe ningal ivide veruthe nikuvale aa joonieye poyi viliche chell.. Nadak angott.. Veruthe oru panniyum edukathe ingane ninolum..

Onnulellum njan story paranj tharunathale

Ah pinne aa povunna vazhikk aa vote edutho.. Pinne comment athu thirich varumbo edutho.

Few minutes kazhinjapo joonie ethi

Kook: ah da aval vann... Inna jinaa
Joonie: (hesitantly vangi) ah halo
Jin: joonie nee enna call edukathe.. Ethra vattam njan villichu.. At least aa messages nekillum reply thanude?
Joonie:......
Kook: athe inni njan ivide irikunnatha preshnakil njan poyekam... Nee avanod onnu samsarikk

Enit kook poyi... Aa pokk kanda ariyam banana milk kudikana... GR ee athinnu samathikaruth ayalk diabetes ullatha...po poyi athu vangi kudikk.. Ithu njan nokikolam.. Pinne aa canteen nn enik oru puffs um vangicho.

Jin: ente joonie nee ingane mindathe irikale.. Please... Enthelum okke onnu vaa thurann para
Joonie: njan enth parayana...enik onnulla parayan
Jin: joonie njan ninnod athonnum parayathel anno nee ennod ingane kanikunne...enik pedi arunn nee sathyam arinja enne ittitu povonn
Joonie: athin njan athinonnum alla mindathe irikunne
Jin: pinne enthina?
Joonie: njan ivade vannit ethra week ayi.. Ningalk enne onnu vann konda povalo..at least onnu poruno ennakilum ningal ennod choicho? Enik ningale ethra miss cheythannu ariyavo.. Athengana ningalk ithonnum ariyendallo full time oru jolli..
Jin: appo ninak enne miss cheyth
Joonie: aa-th pinne... Angane alla paranje..ah joonie vili miss cheyth.. Vere onnulla
Jin: (chuckles) sherikum?
Joonie: po enik onnum kekandaa
Jin: joooooniieeee
Joonie: vendaa
Jin: jooonieee
Joonie: (smiles but purath attitude) vendann paranjille.. Njan vekuva
Jin: ayo vekale vekale...
Joonie: mmh? Enna?
Jin: njanum miss cheyth aa jinetta ennolla vili.. Athonnu kittirunakil..
Joonie: angane ippo athu kekanda...

Joonie ended the call

oh nanayi  cut akiyath allekil dialogue kittathe njan oru vazhi ayane

Meantime in kochi harbour

Time: 9: 15 am

Kai: daa enik pedi avunn
Enwoo: enthin? Eda nammal ee bracelet kodukunnu documents vangunnu.. Thirich povunu
Kai: kekan nalla simple... Aah zeyane ninak ariyallo avan 6 piece akki nammale kadalill thallum
Enwoo: athin nammude koode force ille.. Pinne enna... Nee pedikatheda

Appo angu dhoorenn one direction ship nte Horn sound

Kai: edaa avan alle ath.. Karthave... Enik veeti ponam
Enwoo: daa be cool... Onnum pedikenda njan ille
Kai: ah atha ente entavum valya pedi

And aa ship karakk adipichu athinn zeyan and teams irangi vannu

Aa harbour zeyan nte annu so ippo avide zeyante teams and Enwoo kai ollu.

Zeyan: ah salam.. Njanga late aya?
Enwoo: ey illa... Ah documents ready alle?
Zeyan: documents okke set annu..njanga paranja sanam ningal kond bannatile.. Athu kittiya ingak ee documents njanga thara

Enwoo car ll poyi oru black brifecase eduthond vannu

Zeyan nte left side ll ninna oru guy vann aa brifecase vangi

Enitt athu thurann zeyane kanichu

And zeyan aa panther bracelet eduth nokki

Zeyan: mmh ithu original alle?
Enwoo: ah athe..ithannu njangal Jackson nte kayinn vangiya panther bracelet...
Zeyan: ayin avan tharan kootakiya
Enwoo: aa kurach kashtapettu.. Ninak sadhanam kittile.. Documents tha
Zeyan: kabire aa documents sir nn kodukk

And kabir vann oru file enwoo kk koduth

Enwoo aa files thurann check cheyanne

Kai: zeyane nammal thammil ulla ella dealingsum ithodukudi kazhinju
Zeyan: but oru dealing mathram kazhinjillallo sire
Kai: (looked at enwoo)

Zeyan moves towards Enwoo and grabbed his collar

Zeyan: ninga nth orth namma pottamarananna.. Eh? Edaa my** ithoke namma kore kandiknn... Evide original bracelet?
Enwoo: kayi edukk zeyane... Kayi edukada (pushed him away)
Zeyan: DAAA!!

Enwoo jacket nte ullinn gun eduth point towards zeyan

Ah kai yum gun eduth avide nikkunna vere kore allkarude nere points... And aa alkarum did the same

Enwoo: edaa zeyane nee enth vicharich duplicate documents kanich njangale ondakano...ninak panther bracelet enthinannoke njangalk ariyam...
Zeyan: daaa my** mone seen kaburakand bracelet thada
Enwoo: (grabbed his collar) ithinte okke pinnil aranennu parayada...
Zeyan: (pushed him away)

Ennitt zeyan coat nte ullinn gun eduth

(ivarkokke gun und nammuk ille.. Nale thanne poyitt onnu vanganam)

Kai moves towards enwoo

Kai: daa nice ayit scoot ayalo (whispering)
Enwoo: nee gun load akki vecho (whispering)

Aah time ll Zeyan avide nikkuna etho oru allude gun vangi avarude (enwookai) nere point cheythitt back lekk nadannu

Kai: edaa avan povunnada nammakum poyallo
Enwoo: avan ethra povunn kanatte

Zeyan ship ll poyi kerii

Aa h ship start cheyth

Suddenly  DIASHHHUUMM!! (Gun sound)

Zeyan fell down

Enwoo zeyan nte leg nokki shoot cheyth

Enwoo: nee enna nokki nikuva poyi avane pidikada (to kai)

Aa ship edukunna munn kai poyi zeyane pokki

Appo avide nikkunna kore perr ivare thalan vannu

Kai: inni arekillum oru step munott vechaa  (gun reloaded)

Ennit points zeyan

Kai: ivane njan kollum

Appo kurachu dhurenn oru SHIP'S SOUND

Avar nokkiyapo oru ship varunn like this


Aah ithoke kittiyoll adjust

And aa boat ll  nammal prethikshikatha aaa mask itta pullikar (dali) entered

kai, enwoo face to face nokki

Ayal ship nn irangi moves towards them

Enitt avide nikkuna dudes ivarod "hands in the air" ennu paranju

Enwoo and kai gun thazhe ittitt hands up ayi ninn

Zeyan: ikka ivar ivar njammale pattich ikka
Dali: shut the f*ck up... Ninne okke...

Zeyan annakil bleeding condition annu

Zeyan: ik-ka ivamare veruthe vidaruth... Just kill 'em...

Dali bend down enitt grabbed zeyan's collar

Dali: nanayi bleed cheyunund... So (Points gun to his forehead)
Zeyan: i-ikka...(shivering voice)
Dali: shuuu... Njan paranja karyam ninak cheyan pattilla... Nee ee mission fail ayi.. *smirks* pinne... Enik zeyane arinjude vere arre trust cheythallum ninne njan trust cheyilla.... Ninte plan ee bracelet kond escape avanarunn... But zeyan nee kalikumbo nokki kallikande mone... Athum ennod
Zeyan: ik-ka... I'm so-rry... Please.... Just... Pl-ease...
Dali: (stood up) I'll pray for your soul

Ennit zeyan nte forehead nokki shoot cheyth

Ee zeyan nte koode vannoroke dali deyum koode alakara so vere boss poya vere onnu angane okkeya underworld ennu thonunn

Appo avide nikkunna vere ethoru random dude poyi ayalde (dali) aduth chenn entho paranju

Dali Enwoo and kai nikkunna place lekk moves

Dali: ivide bracelet?
Kai: thann ethado kore nalayallo avante oru mask annanekil mask urada

Random guy vann kai de face ll Punched

Dali: (again moves towards them) where's it?
Enwoo: ah bracelet ningak enthina?
Dali: that's mine.. So enik athu kittiye pattu

enwoo looked kai ennit kannukod expression ittu

Suddenly enwoo and kai thazhe kedanna guns eduth avide nikunore shoot cheyan thudangi.

But avar kure members und so enwookai  bullets kollathe avide ulla ethoru boat nte side ll hide cheyth

Enwoo: kai nee left side ll kude po.. Njan right povam
Kai: wait enganellum nee ayalde mask edukan nokkenam

And they split away

Enwoo annakil dali de aduth ethi

Kai random dudes ne ayi katta fight (imagine)

Enwoo dali ayi fight.... But dali taekwondo padichitundonn thonunn enwoo  full air ll arunn

Pinne oru 5 minutes katta fight

Kai free fire pole akke shooting ithinte okke middle nammude Enwoo and dali

Ufff fight fight!! (Imagine)

Enwoo enwoo nte maximum ayalde mask edukan nokunund but dali enna sumava? Dali de face ll onnu thodan polum enwoo kk pattunilla...

But suddenly enwoo ayalde face nokki punched

Ayalde mask  fell down

Ayal appo thane ayalde face cover cheyth

And ayal coat nn left hand kond gun eduth he shooted enwoo... Ee time nokki ayal aa mask eduth veendum  face ll vech

Ithu kand kai enwoo de aduthek odi vann

Kai: daa enwoo daa (he holded him)

Enwoo kk shoulder annu shoot kittiye

Ee time nokki dali and teams ship ll keri
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Aah ithreyum neram fight arunille inni kurach vere enthellum avam

In hopekook house
10:10 am

At Sitout

Jimi: ente hobbe nee kekanam... Ee  appanum monum koode pennum choich aa sheerettan nte veeti poyekunn
Suga: njan poyathalla enne kond poyatha ivan (looked at soobin)
Soobin: ath- pinne achan varan paranjapo njan... (Head downed)
Jimi: oh oru achanum monum... Nannam illallo randennathinum college padikunna cherukan pennum choich poyekunn... Ente hobbe njan ithoke innale aa mini paranjapozha ariyunne
Hobba: eda cheruka aa pennkochine kanan enganada enne pole sudhari anno
Suga: edi nee kanditund annal joonie de kalyanathin vanille... Nammude joonie ready akiya koch aa kochadii
Jimi: ningal mindaruth manshya...oh njan ithoke aroda paranje...ellam kanaka
Hobba: oh edi nee onnu shemmik avan aa kochine ishtapettu onnu poyi chodhich allathe kettikond onnum vannillallo
Jimi: ah korach kazhiyumbo appanum monum koode athum cheyum... Ellathinum ingere paranja mathiyallo irikunna kandille pooche pole... Enna manshyaa ningak onnulle parayan?
Suga: nee alle paranje mindaruthenn...Ah kazhinjath kazhinj... Daa nee aa kochine maranerr aval ninak vidhichittilann kutikko
Soobin: achaaa...
Jimi: enth achan... Maryathek parayunna kettonam nee adhyam poyi ninte supply ezhuthi edukada... Avante oru premam

Ennum paranj jimi ullilek poyi koode hobbayum poyi

Suga: eda nee vishamikathe... First nee poyi aah kochine valakk..
Soobin: aval valayo?
Suga: ente kalath ninte amma avale pole arunn first odukathe jada pinne njan porake nadan athoke sheriyaki... Athu pole ithum sheriavum...
Soobin: ah enthelum avatte ippo enik nalla veshapp vallathum kazhikam
Suga: athu nalla theerumanam... Hobbeee innennadi kazhikan?
Hobba: puttum kadala curryum
Soobin: oh ivide ennum ithuthanne annallo...

Time skipped

At KOCHIN INTERNATIONAL AIRPORT

Time: 2:45 pm

Nammude pdchan kore nerayi avide arkko vendi waiting annu

Inger ithu arre kathu nikuva... GR ee inni vallo digolphi undo?

Angott nokkikke aa varunna alle nlla parichayam ille?

Ayoo athu jinettan alle... Kayill RJ alle... Jinetta story mari poyi ithu expensive love aa inanimate alla...

Shee appo jinettane wait cheytharunno pdchan ninne veruthe misunderstood cheyth...

Allellum ningalk ee edayayi ellareyum doubt annallo GR....

Nannam ille pdchane polethe oru manushyan samshayikan... Mosham GR ee mosham

Jin: njan paranjathalarunno ingott varendann
Pd: ethayalum njan veetil veruthe irikuvalle...
Jin: ah joonie yod paranjarunno njan varunna karyam
Pd: illa nee paranjille?
Jin: illa oru surprise ayikotten vech

Enitt avar vettilekk head cheyth

Meanwhile In ASTER hospital kochi

Kai casualty ll waiting annu shoulder injury aya karanam enwoo casualty lek matti

Kai enwoo de veetilek vilich paranjarunn

Kurach kazhinjapo angott jinnie yum sheeranum ethi

Sheeran: mone daa ennada undaye...(in panick)
Kai: pedikan onnulla avan kuzhapam onnulla

Jinnie annakil akke karachill

Kai: sheeretta ningal jinnie yum kutti avide poyu irunno... Njan nokkikolam

Appo oru nurse vannu (pedikenda nurse character njan edutholam)

Gwen: enwoo de kude vannatha ara
Kai: njana
Gwen: ahh annkunja
Kai: ehh??!!
Gwen: sorry dialogue mari poyi...ethreyum pettan B + blood  group ll ulla oralle kond varanam...
Kai: alla blood bank ll undaville
Gwen: stock theernnu... So pettanu thane oru donore kond varanam
Kai: ente AB annu
Jinnie: ente B+ annu
Gwen: anno congratulations ningal oru blood donor avan povunn... Ethrayum pettan aah room lek irunno... Ah pinne iyalde kayil injury ille aa dressing room lek irunno
Kai: aa sherii

Enitt jinnie de blood edukan njan poyi... Ningalum vaaa

Gwen: ithinu mune blood koduthitundo?
Jinnie: illa first time aa (sobb)
Gwen: blood povunell iyalk vishamam undo?
Jinnie: illa
Gwen: pinne enthina ingane kedannu mongunne iyalde chettan kuzhapam onnu varathilla athinnu ee njan samadhikilla...aah irunn mongathe ee form fill chey njan poyi tools set akatte
Jinnie: tools?
Gwen: i mean blood edukan ulla sambhavangal

Karthave enik ithinu munne blood eduth sheelam illa... Ah ee blood bag narach edukende.. Ah edukanayirikum... Ah eduthekam...inni avashyam vannallo

Ningal enna vayi nokki nikuva aaa syringe  ingu eduthe aa cotton kude edutho aah pinne aa sprite (spirit) um koode edutho...

Ah ayo matte kayar polatha entho oru sadhanam ille athilude alle blood poyi bag veezhende athum edutho

Avide poyapo jinnie form okke fill cheyth iripund

Gwen: ah athe angott kedanno... Ah inna ee ball um pidicho (sponge ball)

Ee yellow color smile sponge ball ille athu

Gwen: ningalk arodelum deshyam undakil aa ball ll theertho.. Ah pettan kedakk enik ee chapter theerkendatha

Angane 10minutes kond nammal blood okke eduth

Enitt ningal athu kondpoyi dr koduth

MISSION COMPLETED

Oru 1½ hr kazhinjapo dr vannu

Dr varunna kadille ezhunekk

Kai: Dr ippo avan engane und
Dr:  pedikan onnulla... Time nn kond vann kond critical issues onnulla pinne kore blood poyitund... So ippo rest edukatte room lek kurach kazhinja mattu appo kanam
Sheeran: thank you so much dr
Dr: ennod alla Gwen nod thanks paranja mathi
Sheeran: athenna?
Dr: author nn venne character kill arunn but cheythilla so thanks to her... Anna sheri njan povanne

Appo vicharikum sheeretan vann thanks paranjenn evide angerek odukatha jada

Aah inni enthina nammal ivide nikunne vaa ingott
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Nammuk hopekook house lek povam

Time: 4: 47 pm

Jinum pdchan koode ingott vannu... Ippo avide allarum unde

Hobba: nee valand sheenich poyaloda... Nee 3 azhicha kazhinj poya mathi
Jin: athoke athre ollu (looked at joonie)
Joonie: (rolled eyes and looked away)
Pd: nee alle paranje ninak ee njarazhicha ponnen
Joonie: athangana valya joli therakalle... Lokhath arkum illatha oru joli
Jin: (onnu podi)... Alla ee pazhampori ara undakiye amma anno
Jimi: amma onnum allada njan undakiye engane und
Jin: oh oru reksha illa njan ente jeevithathil ithra nalla oru pazhampori kazhichittila
Soobin: Italy ll pazhampori okke kitto alliya
Jin: pinne avide athu mathre ollu
Soobin: anno njan Italian pazhampori kazhichittila inni povumbo ningade koode njanum varam
Jimi: neee mindaruth avante pazhampori nee ninte supply ezhuthi eduthitt engottan vecha pokko
Soobin: oh njan ponne 24/7 hrs oru supply
Jimi: illa njan ninne pidich avale kond kettikam
Suga: athe randenam koode onnu nirtho... Enik concentration kittunillane (polling pazhapori)
Jimi: mathi ningal thinnath avanum (jin) koode kodukk

Appo angott taekook vann

Jin: ah ivide undarunno ithu evide arunn
Kook: njangal parambil arunn kappak thadam edukarunn
Tae: ellam koodi irunn polling annale... Enne onnu vilikarunnille
Hobba: ninne vilichathanallo... Varanjitt alle
Tae: pazhampori undenn paranjo... Ingu thadaa
Soobin: edaa onn enik vekanne

Hobba: annalum ninak onnu paranjitt vararunilleda jine
Jin: aah pettanu thonni ingott varanam ennu pinne onnum nokkilla flight book cheyth ingu ponn
Kook: oh surprise
Jin: aah anganeyum parayam

Athill inni only one pazhapori mathrame ollu vegam poyi athu edukk nammuk half adikam

Pinne velya piece enik venne... Ningal cheruth kazhicha mathi enik veshapite asugham unden ningalk ariyille

At kitchen

Joonie dishes washing and hobba fridge ll enthokeyo eduth vekunn

Joonie: amme EXO (dish washing SOPE) theeraraye
Hobba: aah paranjapole uzhunnum theerunn... Adhengan kade poyi sadhangal vangiyalalle ithoke kannu 1 masam ayi kade poyit...
Joonie: aa tae avan ivide ennadukuva
Hobba: njan pala vattam paranjitund avane chettan ennu vilikanam ennu
Joonie: deivame njan onnum paranjilla vittek

Appo angott jin keri vannu

Hobba: da oru glass chayayum koode tharatte
Jin: venda njan eee glass vekan vanadha

Enitt aa glass kond poyi sink ll vechu

Joonie: athe swantham ayi kudicha glass kazhuki vechitt poya mathi
Hobba: ayenna ninak kazhukiya...
Hobba: ammede marumon kazhukiya glass nn onnum varathilla... Maryathek kazhukikke

Joonie jin ne pidich sink nte angott nirthi

Joonie: mmh thodangiko
Hobba: edi avan ippo vannale ollu nee enna ee kanikunne
Joonie: athe ithu husband and wife problems annu ammak vazhakidan aa hall ll onnu irupille chell mmh pokko
Hobba: ennanu vecha cheyth...inni njan ayitt onninum varunnille

Ennum paaranj hobba poyi

Joonie: ningal enna nokki nikuva angu kazhukk
Jin: ninte veetithe pathram kazhukanalla njan italy nn ingott vanne
Joonie: athe EXO kurache ollu appo nokki venam use cheyan

Joonie hands okke wash cheythitt about to left

Appo jinettan grabbed her hand

Jin: athe ninak ennadi kore nerayi avalde oru attitude
Joonie: kayinn vitte jinetta

Jinettano? Ippo vidum nokki irunno

Jin pinned her to the wall (back ll ulla oru wall)

Guys nammuk inniyum chaptera und so pinned ayi poya mathi👀

Joonie: marike enik ponam (looked away)

But jin still looking at her eyes

Joonie kk blush adikan thudangi but ennalum omega attitude nammude joonie kanikum

Jin moves lil bit closer to her enitt kiss adikan poyi

Ippo ningal  vicharikum arellum keri varunn...

You know guys i don't like cliche so


Jinettan passionately joonie ye kiss cheythu

Joonie responded fast because she missed him

But suddenly jin break the kiss

Jin: ennod ippozhum deshyam undo atho...
Joonie: (gently pushed jin away) mare
Jin: ah angane angu povathe

Jin again pulled joonie

Appozhekum soobin: dii joonie kurach vell-ss-sorry njan kandillarunn

Suddenly avar separate ayi (shyoo jinettan nte face akke blushing)

Ee cherukan vann ellam nashipich ivan ippo thanne vellam kudikano

Joonie poyi soobin oru glass vellam eduth koduth
Soobin: ayo enik thallutha vellam mathi... Njan edutholam ningal continue
Joonie: ath-pinne aah njan ippozha orthe thunni eduthillarun mazha ippo peyum

Ennum paranj joonie avidunn scoot ayi

Soobin: ningal kissuvarunno
Jin: ehh??!! Ennan
Soobin: kochkalan onnum ariyatha pole enik ellam manasilayi
Jin: poda poda... Paranjapole njan ippozha orthe... Njan ippo varave
Soobin: chee kiss miss akki... Inni korach nerathe varanam

Jin joonie kanan terrace lek odii

Avide ethiyapo joonie thunni ellam madaki vekuva

Jin: joonie athee
Joonie: enna vendum pidich umma vekan anno vanne
Jin: umma mathram mathiyo👀
Joonie: dhee jinetta veruthe irunno...
Jin: ninak ennod ippozhun deshyam anno... Njan ninte koode time spend cheyanalle avidunn ivade vare vanne... Innit nee ennekond veetile pathram kazhukikunn
Joonie: *sighs* jinettan orkunundo ennu enik ariyathilla... Oru devsam orumich nammuk purath povam ennu njan vann paranjapo jinettan annu therakk enna ippo therakk onnulle
Jin: joonie enik oru second chance tharan polum ninak pattille... Njan nannayanne inni nee kazhinje enik joli pollum ullu
Joonie:  orappane inni ithenganum mattiya
Jin: illanee.. Oru karyam chey nee poyi ready ayke nammuk oru cinema okke kandittu varam
Joonie: chinja!!!?
Jin: alla jincenzo
Joonie: athalla sherikum kond povo... Atho veruthe enne pattikan parayunnathanno
Jin: athe ee jin veruthe onnum parayarilla so ente moll poyi ready avanne
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Meanwhile in outside

Pd: kooke nee kallikalle njan ninne vishwasicha aa bracelet thanne ithippo....(panicking voice)
Kook: pdcha ningal ingane tension avathe
Pd: pinne engane tension avathe irikune onnum randum alla 12 ¼ million aa poye
Kook: pdcha avane ethrayum pettanu thanne nammuk pokkam
Pd: evidunn aa poyavante oru vivaram polum illa pinne engane... Ennalum nee ennod ippozhannalloda parayunne
Kook: ee condition njan engana ningalod parayunne atha...

Pd tensed ayi angottum ingottum nadakan thudangi

Kook: adhyam nee onnu cool ava... Avane FBI anneshikunundallo
Pd: enth FBI avar aneshicha aa bracelet government vangum thanneyum alla ithreyum naal illegal ayi sushichathin njan akath kedakendi varum...*sighs* nammale inni oralk mathre rekshikan pattu.. Ayal vicharicha avane pokkam
Kook: vishwasikan pattunavan anno enik ippo vann vann areyum viswasikan pattunilla
Pd: ippo ayal vicharichale enthelum cheyan pattu

Ee time ll jinum joonieyum koode angott vann

Kook: ah makale ningal evide povaa
Jin: just ivale kond purathoke onnu povaa...(jin noticed pd)
Jin: appa kuzhapam onnum illallo...
Pd: eyy enik enth kuzhapam... Onnullada ningal poyitt vaa
Jin: pinne enna akke verthekunne...
Kook: eda onnullada... Nee chell njan nokkikolam... Mh chell
Joonie: achan uchak kazhikenda pills edutharunno
Pd: illa mole ee therakil athum marann
Joonie: kando samayathin athoke kazhikatha kondalle
Kook: athe athoke njan kodutholam ningal ippo povan irangiyathalle po chell

Jin pdchane onnu nokki pdchan therichum nokki appo joonie jinettane nokki appo jinettan kookettane nokki kook pdchane nokki

Ithenna ivarellam ingane nokki nikkune next plot lekk potte... Veruthe nokki nikkuva

Time Skipped

Joonieyum jinum koode petrol station ll vann enit avidunn petrol okke adichitt avar seventeens theatre ll ethi

Theatre nte ullill car park cheyan sthalam illa so

Jin: joonie ne ivide irangiko enitt ticket vangan poyi ninno njan car evidellum park cheyavonn nokkatte

After few seconds joonie marakkar nn 2 tickets kitti

Anagne avar cinema kanan kerunn avide ee chapter theerunn
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Ippo thanne 3000+ words ayi atha enik vaya type cheyan

So engane und ee chapter kore lag ayi thoniyo

Atho ennatheyum pole kollavo

Aah inni enthoke vayikan kedakunn

Anna votes comments okke thannitt povan nokk

Bye💜

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