Betrayal-The End Of Love (com...

By Samikshafan

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How a lovestory destroys because of Revenge.... Every love story have three Sides.... First which I think... More

Introduction
Shot 1
shot 2
shot 3
shot 4
shot 5
short 6
Trip to London
Raavi's realisation
Trailer 2
shot 10
Important announcement
shot 11
Jag Soona Soona Laage
shot 13
shot 14
shot 15
shot 16
Love❤
Tujhe Kitna Chahne Lage Hum...
Tum Bin .....(Part 1)
Tum Bin... (Part 2)

shot 8

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At evening everyone gets dressed in traditional clothes... All girls wore Saree and boys wore kurta pyjama.....

At swimming pool side.. .
Raavi is walking holding her Saree slowly slowly....
Raavi's outfit

Raavi ...someone calls her from back..
She turned but She gets trip Due to her Saree And about to fall on swimming pool nearby.....
She closed her eyes in fear.... But two hands holds her tightly......
She opens her eyes and saw Shiva......
He was staring her.......
Shiva's pov
She was looking gorgeous today... Her twinkling eyes....Make her more beautiful....... She Always manage to look simple yet elegant.....I was in love with her simplicity..... Her pink cheeks..... My eyes were stick on her......she is very beautiful.........
Shiva's pov ends....
Shiva's outfit...


Raavi looks at his eyes deeply..... Both were lost in each other.......shiva tucks her hair strand......she closes her eyes..... He touches her cheeks......
Wind start blowing....... Her hair was flying.......
He was looking at her lovingly...... Raavi unknowingly blushes.......

Sanjana and Roohi comes there and saw them in that position....
Roohi -Shiva....
Roohi's voice break their trance.... Both look around....
Sanjana -tum dono yha kya kar rhi ho... Chlo born fire starts hone walla hai...
Shiva -yes....
Raavi -thanks...
Shiva look at her..
Shiva -for what...
Raavi -mujhe bachane ke liye....
Shiva -abb toh aadat ho gyi hai.... (he smiles and leaves)

Sanjana -Raavi tu bhi chl....
Raavi nods.....
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At garden
All sits on the chair.....
Nisha -so guys good evening.... Welcome to born fire......toh aaj hum bhout maje karenge... Aur game's bhi khelenge.... But there are some rules that you all have to do..... First u all have to participate in every games...
Second -sab sach batana hai.... Third -tum kisi chij ke liye no nhi keh sakte.. .
So aaj ki raat ko special banate hai...
All -yes......

All were having so much fun talking n enjoying the snacks nd all...
Nisha -so first hum song se start karte hai.... Maine usse bowl me sabke name ke chits rakhega ....so I will choose one chit.... Jiska bhi name aayega usse song ganna padega....
So let's start...
Sam-yaa... Bhout maja aayega...
Nisha choose one chit and open it..
Sanjana -kiska name aaya hai Nisha....
Nisha -Shiva...
All look at Shiva....
Sam -Shiva sing a song....
Shiva -but....
Sanjana -please shiva sing a song......
Shiva -okay...
Nisha pass him the guitar .......
As soon as Nisha pass the guitar....shiva look at Raavi and found her already looking at him... They share a cute eye lock.....
Shiva start playing the guitar....
He starting singing.....

O.. Yahin doobe din mere

Yahin hote hain savere

Yahin marna aur jeena

Yahin Mandir aur Madeena... x2

Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan..

Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galliyan

Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri, galliyan..

Yuhin tadpavein, galliyan teri, Galliyan...

Tu meri neendo me sota hai

Tu mere ashqo mein rota hai

Sargoshi si hai khayalon mein

Tu na ho, phir bhi tu hota hai

Hai sila.. tu mere dard ka

All we're really impress with his singing talent.... He really got a soulful voice.... All were looking at him and smiling.....

Mere dil ki duaayein hain..

Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan..

Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galiyan

Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri, galliyan..

Yuhin tadpaavein, galliyan teri, galliyan..

Kaisa hai rishta tera-mera

Be-chehra phir bhi kitna gehra

Ye lamhe, lamhe ye resham se

Kho jaayein.. kho na jaayein humse

Kaafila.. waqt ka.. rok le..

Abr se juda na ho

Raavi couldn't stop admiring Shiva... His voice was touching her soul....
Why is she feeling this way...??? She tries to ignore her feelings...but his voice always attracts her.....

Teri galliyan... galliyan teri galliyan..

Mujhko bhaave galiyan teri galiyan

Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri galliyan..

Yuhin tadpaave galliyan teri galliyan..

Galliyan...

Teri galliyan..

Tadpaavein

The song ended....
All claps for him....
Sam -wow Shiva tum toh bhout accha gaate Ho....
Nisha -yaa ur voice is amazing.....
Roohi -tum bhout accha gaate Ho....
Sanjana -shiva ur voice is fab...

Shiva -thanks.....

Nisha -So next one have to eat a raw egg....
Sam -it's really interesting..... Jisko khana hoga uska kya hoga...
Roohi -tu bhi Ho sakta hai... Bhul mat....
Sam -mera luck bhout accha hai.. Mai toh nhi aane walla...
Raavi -Sam overconfidence is not good....
Nisha -okay okay.. Let's see kon aaya hai...
Nisha took a chit and open it...
Nisha -it's.... Sam...
All laughs....
Sam was giving 'what the hell walla look'

Raavi-now u have to eat it... Eat it.....
Sanjana -yes eat it Sam...
Sam close his nose with one hand and eat it in one go....
Sam -yuck... It's very bad... Yuck... he makes funny face...
All laughs.....
Raavi was laughing wholeheartedly..... Shiva adorably look at her....
Nisha notice him......
Nisha -uhmmm. Uhmmm... Yha pe toh koi kisi ko ghure hi jaa raha hai....
Raavi stops laughing and look at Shiva....
Shiva looks here and there.....
Roohi's face falls...

Nisha -accha accha let's continue the game... This time the person have to tell truth that he or she ever fall in love or not .....
Nisha picks the chit.... And read the name...
Nisha -Raavi...
Raavi -mai....
Sanjana -Raavi bata tujhe kabhi pyar hua hai....
Sam -haa.. Raavi tune kabhi nhi bataya ki tujhe kabhi pyar hua hai ki nhi... Bata na....
Roohi -bata Raavi....
Raavi look at everyone....
Shiva -Raavi batayo.. Tumhe kabhi pyar hua hai....
Raavi look at him deeply.....
Both were looked at each other continuously.....
Roohi -Areee Raavi kaha kho gyi... Bata na....
Raavi looks down....
Shiva -Raavi batayo na....
Sanjana -bata na Raavi...
Nisha -Raavi tell na....aur sach batana hai....
Raavi close her eyes.... She recollects all moments she share with him....
A long tear drop fall from her eyes.... She quickly wipes it... But shiva notice her....

Sam -Raavi agr tu nhi batana chahti toh rehne de hum tujhe force nhi kar rhe hai.... Chod do guys.... It's her personal life.....

Roohi -hum se kya personal... Hum se toh vo sab share Karti hai.... Bata na Raavi...
Raavi -yes.... Hua hai pyar... Hua hai pyar......

Shiva smiles...

Sanjana -kon hai....
Raavi -uska name batana question me nhi tha ....
Sam -yeh bhi Sahi hai.. Guys leave her now... Dekho kitni sad lag rhi hai.... Meri jaan...
Raavi -I am not ur jaan.... She hits his stomach jokingly

Sam -ouchh... Yaar....
All smiles.....

Nisha -so guys let's dance....
All -yaa... It's nice idea....
All stands up and starts dancing....
Nisha -so rules aren't song ke sath partner change honge....
Song starts....

Partners...
Raavi and Sam
Sanjana and Roohi
Shiva and Nisha....

Raavi and Shiva were continuously stealing glances....

Nisha -pyar karte ho usse...
Shiva -yes....
Nisha -pata tha...
Shiva come to his senses...-kya pata tha..
Nisha -yeh hi ki tum Raavi se pyar karte Ho....
Shiva-nhi aisa kuch nhi hai....
Nisha -jhut mat bolo abhi toh yes bola tumne...
Shiva -vo toh bas aise hi....
Nisha -Shiva come on jhut toh mat bolo.. Mai kisi ko nhi batayungi....
He blushes.....

Song changes....

Partner changes...
Sam and Sanjana
Raavi and Nisha
Shiva and Roohi

Raavi look at Roohi and Shiva angrily....
Roohi was lovingly looking at Shiva...
Shiva was just giving her a warm smile....
Raavi glares him....
Shiva (in mind) -Raavi ko jelous feel hota hai agar mai Roohi ke sath rahu... Toh phir yeah trick hi use karta hu... Ho sakta hai.. Jeleousy me aake apne Dil ki bat bata de....

Shiva intentionally pulls Roohi's waist.....
Raavi look at him with O face....
Nisha -Raavi itni hi agar jalan Ho rhi hai toh usse apne Dil ki baat bata do...
Raavi -kaise batayu dusman hai nera... Aur vo jaan bujhke uss Roohi ke sath chipakta hai... Gadheda... Pagal stupid....
Nisha smiles....
Raavi come to her senses... -I mean... Vo.. Vo..
Nisha -Raavi songs changes Ho gaya.. We should change our partners...
Raavi looks at her embarrassingly....
Raavi (in mind )-pagal Raavi... Tune yeh sab kya bol diya... Kya bole jaa rhi thi tu.... Tu bhul mat... Shiva Tera dusman hai..... Bhul mat....
Song changes....

This time all dance together..... They dance with full energy.....

Roohi -dekha Raavi Shiva mere sath kitne romantically dance kar raha tha....
Raavi -vo toh sabke sathe hi kar raha hai na....
Roohi -par mere sath specially kar raha tha...
Raavi -koi special nhi tha... Tu jayada soch rhi hai...
Roohi -Raavi Teri ankho ko kya Ho gay's hai... Tujhe nhi dikha usne kaise mere waist pe hath rakha...
Raavi -shut up Roohi....

Song changes

Partner changes...
Sanjana and Nisha...
Roohi and Sam
Raavi and Shiva

Raavi look at him angrily....
Shiva -pata hai.. Meri Raavi na gussa karne se bhout cute lagti hai.... Uski vo lal nak.. Uff kitni cute hai....
Raavi glares him .....
Raavi -tum Roohi ke sath itne closely kyu dance kar rhe the....
Shiva -tumse jayada close toh nhi tha....
He pulls her close to himself.... They were very close.... Her hairs comes on his face....
He tucks her hair behind her ears.. .
Raavi clutches his kurta tightly... She close her eyes.... Her breath hitched....
He smiles and twirls her....
He looks here and there and kiss her cheek.... Raavi gets stunned....
Raavi -yeh kya tha....
Shiva-kiss....
Raavi -shiva.... (shiva interrupt)
Shiva-vaise uss time tum bol rhi thi ki tumhe pyar hua hai... Kon hai vo...
Raavi -kyu batayu... Hai koi handsome....
Shiva -I know vo Mai hi hu.. Bas tum bata nhi rhi hu.....
Raavi -aisa kuch nhi hai...
Shiva -ais hi hai... Baby....
Song ends.....

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It was now 11 pm.....N all had to go back to their rooms... Since tomorrow they all had to wake up early morning.....

While all of them start moving towards their rooms....
Roohi came near Shiva and stood there.   
Roohi -one minute guys..
All stops....
Roohi -mujhe kuch kehna hai..
Sam -kya kehna hai... Roohi jaldi bol... Nind aa rhi hai...
Roohi -vo..
She looks at Shiva and holds his hands....
Everyone was looking at her confusingly.....
Raavi -Roohi itni raat ko kya drama laga rakha hai... Sona hai ham sab ko...
Roohi -Raavi bas 5 minutes....
Roohi to shiva -Shiva... Actually...Jabse tumhe dekha hai... Mere Dil me ajib si feelings hone lagi hai.  .like pet men butterflies Dance karte hai... Tumhe dekhte hi... So Shiva I think....
Shiva was looking at confusingly -u think....
Roohi -I think.... I am in love with you....
She smiles....
All were shocked..... Shiva jerks her hand....
Shiva-what ....??
Roohi -yes am in love with you...
Shiva -Roohi... Are you out of your mind.... Tum kya bole jaa rhi ho..... Tum Meri dost Ho sirf...
Roohi-Shiva....Yeh kya bol rhe ho tum.... Aise mat bolo... (her eyes become teary..)

Shiva -Look Roohi I don't want to hurt you.... But Mai sidha sach bata raha hu... That I don't feel anything for u..... Aur hum toh ache se baat bhi nhi karte... Aur tumhe pyar Ho gaya.... Roohi it's not love.. 
Sanjana -Roohi tu phirse pagal panti kar rhi hai... Last time bhi tu trip me aake kisi ladke ke piche pargyi thi aur usne tujhe reject kar diya.... Phir tu do din bad usse bhul gyi... Agar pyar hota toh itne asani se tu usse bhula nhi paati...
Roohi -but sanjana this time I am sure it's love.   Shiva please...
Shiva-roohi aise pyar nhi milta... Jab tumhe Sacha Pyar  hoga... Tab tumhe khud feel  ho jayega... It's just an affection.....
Roohi Waqt aur pyar bout Khaas hota hai... Waqt Kisi ka nhi hota  ..aur pyar har kissise nhi hota......
Roohi -no shiva...sacha pyar hi hai.... 
Shiva -Roohi pyar koi chij nhi hai..  Jisse tum jabardasti le logi....vo ek feeling hai... Khud se aati hai... Roohi tumhe koi accha mil jayega....Please samjho....

Roohi(cries) -shiva tum mere liye kuch feel nhi karte... Sach batayo....
Shiva -Roohi... U are my friend... Tumhe Mai apna friend manta hu...
Roohi -shiva koi Mujhse pyar nhi karta... Koi mujhe nhi samjh raha hai... Koi nhi....
Roohi starts running.....
All follows him....
Sam -roohi stop.  
Raavi -roohi ruk ja... Kaha jaa rhi hai...
Roohi runs... She was crying...
everyone shouts -Roohi.....
Everyone's eyes widened....
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That's it....
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There is lot of twists and times we're waiting.... Something big is going to happen...?? Stay tuned for that...

Okay bye...
Take care.. ❤

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