Betrayal-The End Of Love (com...

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How a lovestory destroys because of Revenge.... Every love story have three Sides.... First which I think... Еще

Introduction
Shot 1
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shot 5
short 6
Trip to London
shot 8
Raavi's realisation
Trailer 2
shot 10
Important announcement
shot 11
Jag Soona Soona Laage
shot 13
shot 14
shot 15
shot 16
Love❤
Tujhe Kitna Chahne Lage Hum...
Tum Bin .....(Part 1)
Tum Bin... (Part 2)

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Rishita -Areee Di yeah hall hai aap dono yha par romance kyu kar rhe ho...

Rishita's voice brought them to reality...
Raavi and Shiva look at each other awkwardly.....

Both comes out of the flowers net.....
Shiva shows her the earring.....
Shiva -Raavi actually yeh sayad se tumahra hai...
Raavi -ya....it's my favourite earring... Yeah tumhe kaha se mili...
Shiva-actually mere coat me tha yeah sayad se kal reh gaya hoga...
Raavi-hmmm...

Shiva -acha nai chlta hu.... Office bhi jaana hai...
Mahima -aree beta aaye Ho toh kamse kam coffe ya phir tea tho pike jao....

Shiva -sorry aunty aaj thoda urgent hai jaana..... but next time..jarur pike jayunga...
Mahima -but beta....
Raavi -chachi kam hai to jane do.... Shiva u can go....
Shiva -Hmmm... Bye..
Rishita-Shiva bro wait....
Shiva-yes...
Rishita -actually aaj sham ko ham sare friends ne Diwali party rakhi hai.. So agar apko time Ho toh can you join us.....Di ko bhi company mil jayegi...

Raavi-yaa.. Shiva u can join us... Dev ko bhi sath le aana.... Mai tumhe address send kar dungi....

Shiva -okay.....abhi Mai chlta hu....

Raavi as Rishita smiles...

Rishita -bye.. Meet you at Evening....

Shiva smiles and left....

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At evening....
Raavi and Rishita gets dressed for Diwali party.....

Raavi wore a Pink Saree she did little makeup and open her hair..... She looks elegant....

While Otherside Shiva wears a Kurta and pujama.....

All reaches at Diwali party..... It was pool side party.....the pool was decorated beautifully...

Raavi and Rishita were taking with their friends.... Shiva and Dev also joins them...
Shiva saw her and his heart skipped....
She was looking gorgeous......
Raavi -Hi shiva... Happy Diwali
Shiva -Happy Diwali....

Dev -happy Diwali To all....
All did some chit chat then start dancing..... Raavi was dancing with her friends.....Shiva's eyes were stick on her......

Their eyes meet.... She Start felling nervous.... Why he was looking at me...?? Is I am looking like a clown or my dress is not goood....or my hair is not good.....??

She started touching her hair and arranging her dress.....

Rishita -what happen Di...
Raavi -Rish am I looking like a clown...??
Rishita -Di what are you saying? U are looking damn beautiful....

Raavi -then Why Shiva was looking at me continuously...??
Rishita saw Shiva he was still staring her...
Rishita smiles.....
Rishita -Di Aap itni sundar lag rhi ho ki uski nazar hi nhi hat rhi hai....
Raavi blushes....
Rishita -di u are blushing.....
Raavi -aisa kuch nhi hai....
Rishita -ohhhh.....
Raavi -Stop it Rish.....
Rishita laughs...

Host -So guys choose ur partner.......
All choose their partners... At last Shivi left.... Bother look at each other....
Shiva forward his hand.... She smiles and accepts his hand and all start dancing.....

Shiva's pov....

Shiva control control ur feelings..... Vo kya soch rhi hogi jab dekho tu usse ghurta rehta hai.... Manta hu ki vo aaj bhout sundar lag rhi hai... But aise ghurte rahega toh acha nhi lagega.....

Kya karu jaab bhi uske Ankho ko dekhta hu.... Koi aur hi Duniya me chle jaata hu.... Uske lal hotto ko dekhta hu toh apne aap ankhe uske taraf chle jaate hai.....
Vo jab aas paas rehti hai toh pet me Butterflies dance Karti hai.... Yeah kaisi felling hai....

Shiva blushes....

Kahi sach me toh mujhe Raavi se pyar toh nhi hogaya.... Ohhh God...no no aisa nhi hai.... Shiva tu jayada soch raha hai...
But phir yeah felling kya hai... Aur Raavi ke samne hi kyu feel hota hai....ohhh God....kitni confusion hai....

Shiva kaha kho gye let's go.....mujhe bhout bhuk lagi hai... Kuch khate hai.... Raavi said...

Raavi's voice broke my trance....
Yes we were dancing.....but suddenly Raavi told me that she was feeling hungry so... We were going towards Food area......

Shiva's pov ends.. .

At food area Raavi and Shiva were eating some snacks.... Some sauce lefts in Raavi's lips corner...
Shiva comes near her removes it with his thumb.....
They share an eye lock.... They were lost in each other eyes....
Shiva -Raavi..
Raavi -hmmm.....
Shiva -Raavi.... Do you like me....??
Raavi -yes....

Rishita -what (shouts)

Rishita voice brought them out of their trance.......

Both look at her....
Raavi -what happen Rishita.... Why are you shouting....
Rishita -Di.... Shiva ne aapse abhi pucha ki do u like him... And u said yes.....
Raavi choked.....
Shiva gives her water...... Both were stunned....
Raavi -Yeah kya bol rhi hai tu... Rishita...
Rishita -aree Mai jhut thodi na bol rhi hu..... Sach me.... Di apne mujhe nhi bataya ki aap shiva bro ko like Karti Ho..... Haww it's not fair....
Raavi hits her head....
Raavi -pagal Aisa kuch nhi hai....
Raavi start going from there but her legs twisted and she falls in the pool..... All looks at her....

Shiva -Raavi....
Rishita -Di....

She was struggling to come out of the water... She throws her hands and legs randomly to come put of the water....
Raavi -help.... Please help....
She start drowning....
Rishita looks at Raavi confused.....

Shiva jumped in to save her......he wrapped one arm around her waist and And swam to the edge of Pull through other hand and made her sit. But she was unconcious......He was worried for her..... His heart was filled with an unknown fear...
Shiva -Raavi open ur eyes... Raavi.... Utho na.... He shakes her... But she was not responding....
His eyes were teary.....

He was scared..... He gave her stomach pushes....taking the water out through her mouth.... She wakes up...... Shiva sighs in relief.....

He hugged her tightly.....
Shiva -Raavi tum thik hona.....
Raavi nods....
Raavi snuggles into him...

Dev gives her towel....
Shiva -Raavi tumhe thand lag rhi hogi.... Tum ghar chlo.....

Dev -Yes Raavi we should go back....
Raavi -No no... It's okay I have extra Dress Mai change kar leti hu.... Aise party destroy nhi karte hai.....

Shiva -but....
Raavi -it's okay Shiva.... I am fine.....Mai change Katie aati hu.....
Raavi left....

Host -So everyone let's enjoy the party.....

Dev-Rishita kya hua tum yha kyu khadi Ho....

Rishita -nothing.... Mai Di ke pass jaati hu unhe age koi help lagi toh....
Dev -yah... Offcorce....

Rishita follows Raavi.....

At Room Raavi changed her dress and drying her hair.... Rishita comes there.....
Raavi -Rish tu yha kya kar rhi hai... Jaa tu party enjoy kar Mai bhi ready hoke aati hu.... (smiles)

Rishita-Di apne jhoot kyu bola...
Raavi -Maine joot... Kab bola...
Rish -Di apko toh swimming aati hai... Phir Aap drown kaise Ho gyi....

Raavi's frown ...
Raavi -Rish tu kya bole jaa rhi hai... Mujhe swimming kab aati thi....
Rishita -Di mujhe ache se yaad hai Bachpan me Dad NE apko Swimming sikhayi thi.... Di aap jhoot kyu bol rhe ho.....
Raavi -Rish tu bhul gyi hogi aisa kuch nhi tha... Maine kabhi swimming nhi sikhi....
Rishita -Di.... Why are you lying....
Raavi -Rish stop it... Kya bakwas Kare jaa rhi hai...Go and enjoy ur party. (irritated)

Raavi push her outside and Close the door....
Rish -di why are you behaving like this...?? Okay nhi karni baat.. Baat toh Mai bhi nhi karungi....
Rishita leaves form there....

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After party.... Rishita leaves angrily from there....
Shiva -isse kya hua...
Raavi -Kuch nhi just Mujhse gussa hai...
Shiva -ohh....

Dev -I have something to show you both....
Shivi look at Dev...
Shivi -what....
Dev gives them his phone.... There was their pictures which dev clicked at pub.... And at last their was a video in which... Shiva asked Raavi does she like him??...
Both was shocked.....

Dev -Jatka lagana.... Pata hai tum dono ko bin bataye pictures and videos click ki hai... But it's beautiful.....

Raavi -abbb mai chlti hu....
Raavi start going....
Dev -bhai agar aaj apne nhi bola na... Toh bhout der Ho jayegi.... Please bata do... Ki aap Raavi se pyar karte ho.... Vo jaa rhi hai bhai go... Go bhai go......

Shiva -Dev abhi tak Mai hi sure nhi hu ki Mai usse pyar karta hu ki nhi... Aur tu bol raha h...

Dev interrupt -bhai aur kitne proofs chahiye.... Look at this pics aap dono ek dusre ko kaise dekh rahe Ho.... Aur jab Raavi pool me giri toh ap kitna gabhra Gaye the....bhai please accept ur feelings....
Shiva close his eyes.... All moments with Raavi comes in his mind.....

Shiva shouts -Raavi....
Raavi stops...

Dev whispers -bhai all the best.....
He goes from there......
Shiva open his eyes and saw Raavi was standing there.....
Raavi -Shiva kya hua kuch kehna hai....
Shiva -Raavi actually.....
Raavi -actually. ...
Shiva -Vo... Vo... Main.... Vo main keh raha tha ki....
Raavi-kya shiva....
Shiva -vo main....
Raavi -shiva batao toh kya kehna hai....
Shiva -Wait na.... Thoda time to do.....
Raavi -okay take your time.....mai chlti hu...
Shiva -no no... Wait.... Mai bata hu... Vo main bol raha tha ki.... Ki...
Raavi -ki...
Shiva -ki....
Raavi -ki....
Shiva -ki.... U are looking beautiful today...
Raavi -ohhh.....thanks.... Bas yehi kehna tha.
Shiva -ha... I mean no...
Raavi -Shiva sahi se Bolo kya bolna chahte ho.....ha.. Ya na...

Dev look at them from far...
Dev -iska kuch nhi ho sakta....

Shiva huffs.....
Shiva holds her hands and close his eyes....
Shiva -Raavi aaj pata hai jaab tum pool me giri ...meri toh Jan hi nikal gyi thi...mujhe toh lga ki Maine tumhe hamesha ke liye kho dia.....tumhe us situation me dekh Kar Mai bhout dar gya tha....tumhe pata hai aisa kyu laga kyuki Mai tumse pyar krta hu....
Tumare sath spent kiya har ek time mere liye memories ban gyi hai....tumari hasi dekhke Mai koi aur hi Duniya me chle jaata hu... Aisi feeling pehle kabhi nhi hui hai...... Tum jab pass rehti Ho.... Bhout accha lagta hai.....
Tumhe pata hai Mai aise kyu feel karta hu... Kyuki.... Kyuki....

"I LOVE U"

YES I love you Raavi ....muje Tumse pyar Ho gaya hai.... Mai Tumse dur nhi reh sakta.... I love you alot.... Tumhe jab pehli baar dekha tha tab hi Tumse pyar Ho gaya mujhe.... I love you Raavi....

Raavi hugs him.....Shiva open his eyes....

Raavi -I love you too Shiva... Mai tumahre jaise apne pyar ka izhar nhi kar sakti.... I just love you.. Kab kaise kuch pata nhi hai... Just Ho gaya.....

Shiva hugs her tightly..... Both have a tears of joy....

Raavi cares his cheeks....
Raavi -shiva tum bhi mujhe Vinay ke tarah chod to nhi doge....
Shiva -kabhi nhi..... Kabhi nhi chodunga....
Shiva kiss her forehead.. She smiles and hug him.....

Shiva -Raavi iss moment ko aur special banate hai...
Raavi -kaise....
shiva-wait.....
Shiva brings his guitar form his car......
Raavi -Shiva tum gaana gayoge....
Shiva -no...
Raavi -then....
Shiva -aaj tum gaogi aur Mai sununga.... Raavi -mai but mujhe ganna nhi aata....
Shiva -Raavi please for me online one song....
Raavi -okay......
She starts singing.....

Dil charkhe ki ik tu dori
Dil charkhe ki ik tu dori
Sufi iska rang haaye

Ismein jo tera khwaab piroya
Ismein jo tera khwaab piroya
Neendein bani patang

Dil bharta nahi
Aankhein rajjti nahi
Dil bharta nahi
Aankhen rajjti nahi
Chaahe kitna bhi dekhti jaaun
Waqt jaaye main rok na paaun

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja sohneya
Tu thodi der aur thehar ja
Tu thodi der aur thehar ja zaalima
Tu thodi der aur thehar ja...

Ha...

Shiva also joins her.....
He cares her cheeks and kiss her cheeks..
Raavi blushes. ...

Haaye din tere bin ab jee na paaye
Din tere bin ab jee na paaye
Saans na leti raat
Ishq kare tere honthon se
Ishq kare mere honthon se
Bas ik teri baat

Teri doori na sahun
Door khud se rahun
Teri doori na sahun
Door khud se rahun
Tere pehlu mein hi reh jaaun
Tu hi samjhan jo main chaahun

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja sohneya
Tu thodi der aur thehar ja
Tu thodi der aur thehar ja zaalima
Tu thodi der aur thehar ja...

Shiva -Brilliant Raavi. Ur voice is amazing. .....
Raavi -par tumse jayada nhi.....
Shiva smiles......both hugs......

Shiva -so miss Raavi kal pura din tumare liye.. Tum jaha bologi hum vaha par jayenge......
Raavi smiles looking at him......

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Next day...
At Raavi's house
Raavi was sleeping peacefully..... Someone comes in her room through window and sits beside her...... The person comes close to her and about to kiss her but At the time Raavi wakes up and stretch her arms...... Due to Raavi's arms The person falls on the floor.....

Ouchh. The person shout...

Raavi gets shocked....
Who is this?.....she stands up on the bed and what she sees was unexpected for her......

Raavi -Shiva....
Shiva -Yaar Raavi mujhe itni zor se lagi hai... Ouch....
Raavi -tum yha kya kar rhe ho....
Shiva -offcorce Tumse Milne aaya hu....
Raavi -ohh....
Shiva -aabbb khadi rahogi yah phir mujhe help karogi...
Raavi -ohh... Yah....
She helps him and makes him sit on the bed....
Raavi -I am sorry... Actually mujhe nhi pata tha tum aayoge isliye galti se....
Raavi touches her nose......
Shiva -ahhh....
Raavi -bhout dard hai.... I am sorry... Wait Mai balm laga deti hu.....
She starts applying balm on his nose.....
Shiva admitted her...
Raavi -aab thik hai...
Shiva -nhi... Thodi der aur.....
Raavi -kya ....
Shiva -I mean abhi bhi dard Ho raha hai......
Raavi -ohhh...thode der me thik Ho jayega don't worry....

Shiva -ahhh Raavi bhout dard Ho raha hai.....
Raavi -Shiva Maine itne jor se bhi nhi Mara hai...
Shiva laughs....
Raavi -Idiot.......

Shiva hugs her from behind and kisses her neck....
Raavi -Shiva kya kar rhe ho....
Shiva -Raavi jldi se ready Ho jao hum log Ghumne jaane walle hai....
Raavi -okay.... Just wait for 5 minutes mai abhi ready hoti hu....

Raavi goes to washroom.... While shiva was roaming in her room....
He saw a diary was there.... He takes it and about to open it.....
Don't touch it..... Raavi said.

Shiva turns and saw Raavi was standing there in her bathrobe...water was falling from her hair.... She was looking very hot....
Raavi takes her diary from him....
Raavi-don't touch it...
Shiva -why.....?Aisa bhi kya secret hai....
Raavi puts her hand around his neck......

Raavi -Hai.. Bhout sare secrets hai jo tumhe abhi nhi bad me pata chlenge.....
Shiva smiles -ohhh....

Shiva pulls her towards himself....
He cares her cheeks and comes very close to her.... They were very close.... If someone talks they will have a kiss....

Raavi -Shiva...
Andy they kiss each other... As I told if someone talks they will kiss .....
Raavi Broke the kiss..... She look here and there.....
Shiva -I am sorry Raavi actually...
Raavi -it's okay....Shiva Tum niche wait Karo... Mai Ready hoke aati hu...
Shiva -hmmm...
He goes outside with the help of window.....

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After sometime...
Raavi dressed up in knee length frock and Open her hair....

She told Mahima that she is going out with her friends.....

Outside Shiva was waiting for her in his car....
She comes and sits beside him....
Shiva -So kaha chalna chohogi....
Raavi -jaha tum le jao.....

Both smiles and start their day golfing each other hands....

(note -Here is the song.... This is very very beautiful song...i am 100% sure that you will love the video... The chemistry the scenes are beautiful.... I tried my best to describe it but still I will suggest you to watch it... Cause it's very very beautiful.... Imagine Shivi in it....and please watch the full video...... )

Mon vebeche amar hobi
Heart has desired you to be mine
Mon ekeche moner chobi
Heart has drawn the feelings it has for you

Kon haowa te kuasha kete jaay
A wind has blown away the fog
Tui dariye ei sohor hete jaay
You're standing while the city is moving

Shiva and Raavi roams around Mumbai street holding each other hands... They were enjoying every moment with each other...

Mon amar o mon amar
Heart, my heart
Ei mon amar...
This heart in my chest,
Khoje jotno tor
Craves for your care
Swopne bivor du nayan amar...
My eyes are engrossed in your dreams

Mon amar o mon amar
Heart, my heart
Ei mon amar...
This heart in my chest,
Khoje jotno tor
Craves for your care
Swopne bivor du nayan amar...
My eyes are engrossed in your dreams

Raavi hides....while Shiva fir her in crowd
Raavi comes from Back suddenly and hugs him...Shiva smiles....

Mon vebeche amar hobi
Heart has desired you to be mine
Mon ekeche moner chobi
Heart has drawn the feelings it has for you

Raavi continues Talking and showing Shiva various things... While Shiva is just lost in her innocence.. He was mesmerized in her...

Sob kichu roilo tori haathe
Everything I have now is in your hand
Tor pichu ni jonaki raate
I follow you in a moon lit night
Tor kichhu jaay ase na taate
But you don't care about it
Bujhbi bol kobe bujhbi bol
When will you understand this? say

Shiva is having coffee....Raavi snatches it from him....and have a sip from it and smiles... Shiva looks on and smiles....

Raavi buys ice-cream....their was chocolate stip on it... She takes it out with her mouth... She comes near Shiva and asks him to have it....

Both take bite from same chocolate together from opposite side...
Raavi smiles...

Tori hasir golpo baje kaane
Your laughter echoes in my ears
Phire asi mugdho se ujane
I keep coming back by that stream of amaze
Baan vashi ra bhaste thaka jaane
Flood hit heart keeps flowing in your current
Khujbi chol aalo khujbi chol
Come searching for it, come na...

Shiva buys love balloons for Raavi....
Raavi excitedly takes it...
They dance around the streets of Mumbai....

Mon amar o mon amar
Heart, my heart
Ei mon amar...
This heart in my chest,
Khoje jotno tor
Craves for your care
Swopne bivor du nayan amar...
My eyes are engrossed in your dreams

Raavi buys a rose and gives it to Shiva... Shiva takes it and kisses on Raavi's cheeks...

Haa Mon amar o mon amar
Heart, my heart
Ei mon amar...
This heart in my chest,
Khoje jotno tor
Craves for your care
Swopne bivor du nayan amar...
My eyes are engrossed in your dreams

Raavi runs towards Shiva....Shiva lifts her and twirls her....
They sit on a bench..
Shiva lays his head on her lap...
They shares beautiful moments....

Mon vebeche amar hobi
Heart has desired you to be mine
Mon ekeche moner chobi
Heart has drawn the feelings it has for you

Shivi are on car ride....shiva drives the car.... While Raavi enjoys.... She comes near Shiva and kisses his cheeks...

Mon vebeche amar hobi
Heart has desired you to be mine
Mon ekeche moner chobi
Heart has drawn the feelings it has for you

They click many pictures and deeply in love..... With each other....
The day goes like this.....

At night.... Shiva drops Raavi at Her house....
Shiva -Bye Raavi....
Raavi -Bye....
Shiva -Raavi... I love you...
Raavi -I love you too shiva.....

Shiva -Raavi kal hum nhi milenge....
Raavi -why....??
Shiva -I have an important meeting tomorrow.... So kal Mai busy rahunga.....
Raavi -Shiva kal hum jarur milenge.....
Shiva smiles....
Raavi pecks her forehead....
Raavi -kal hum jarur milenge..... Okay bye....

She left....
Shiva also left from there.....

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That's it...
So guys it's Long part.....
How's it....
So guys next part will be very important and interesting part.... There is lot of twists.....
So stay tuned....

Do voters and comment... Tell ur views...

Word count -3273

Okay bye...
Take care ❤

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