ENTANGLED โœ”๏ธŽ

By stuckwithinwordz

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*can be read as a general fiction* ๐‘ฏ๐’†๐’“๐’†'๐’” ๐’Ž๐’š ๐’‡๐’Š๐’“๐’”๐’• ๐’†๐’—๐’†๐’“ ๐’‡๐’‡ ๐’…๐’†๐’…๐’Š๐’„๐’‚๐’•๐’Š๐’๐’ˆ ๐’•๐’ ๐’Ž๐’š... More

characters and plot
1--Everyone is late
2-- The marriage
3-- The Meet
4-- Where is G?
5-- What happened!
6-- What actually happened!
7-- An Old Friend
8-- Marraige Proposal For S?
9-- The Past I
10-- The Past II
11-- Whats on J's mind?
12-- Disclosing
13-- Knowing More
14-- I'll be there for you!
15-- Two Roads
16-- "Gam Mein Rum"
17-- New Beginings
18-- Sumod's alliance?
19-- Yes or No?
21-- Destined Together?
22-- Falling for you!
23-- New Bondings!
24-- Engagement!
25-- Old Love!
26-- Fights!
27-- Is This The End?
28-- Shaadi!
29-- A drive into old memories!
30-- I Love You!
31-- A moment of love!
32-- Nostalgia!
33-- Will You Marry Me?
34-- "I do!"
35-- Two Bodies One Soul !
36-- "Happily Ever After"
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20-- Marry me!

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By stuckwithinwordz


The next morning all are having breakfast.

Pramod was talking to someone on phone....

P: Yes Mr. Shetty we will get back to you once the deal is done. Ok bye

As soon as he hang up the call....

R : dulhe ka sehra suhana lagta hain
dulhan ka toh dil deewana lagta hain....

He came out singing from the room.

Jay and Mini laughed.

P(without looking): uth gaya meri shanti cheen ne

R: aj toh tu Bhabhi se milne jane wala haina

P: haa woh.... (to Jay) dad main files dekh ke Susheela se mil lunga phir waha se hi meeting ke liye chala jaungaa... thik hain na

J: ab tu sab sambhal raha hain toh thik hi hoga... acche se taiyar hoke jana... woh log kuch thik nehi hain
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On the way... Susheela calls Pramod.

P: haa shushi ...main bas nikal gaya hun tumhe pick karne

S: areey chota haddi suno... tum direct ussi cafe pe milo mujhe... main 12:30 tak pohouch jaungi

P: its okay shushi main wait kar lunga.... waise bhi traffic bohot hai

S: nehi mujhe zyada der bhi ho sakti hain toh tum mujhe wahi pe milo.... ok bye

P: are par.... (she disconnects)

P(to himself): kya karu main iska.... waise accha hi hain thoda prepare kar lunga khudko....

(sighs) its ok Pramod ... you can do it... sirf shaadi ki baat hi toh karni hain usko bhagake.... nehi bhaganeki baat maat kar... yeh sab usike wajah se hua hain... bada daring banne chala tha...

Mom... i am so scared.... hanuman ji please help...

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At 12:45 Susheela reached at the cafe...

S: i am so sorry bohot late hoo...

She saw him... actually noticed him for the first time. He was looking different today. He was looking much attractive and charming in grey pants and white shirt with folded sleeves.

S: waah doctor shaab kya lag raheho... itna saj dhaj ke kahi ladki dekhne jaa rahe ho k? (laughs)

Hearing this Pramod got more nervous and little embrassed.

P: no woh..(clear his throat) ek meeting hain toh ... aap baithiye naa

S: haa...

She sees the table... there were about 7 empty coffee mugs, seems like finished by him all alone.

S: itnaa coffee pi gaye akele...

P: woh.. acch... achhha hain coffee yaha ka

S: okay (doubting his weird behaviour)

P: order karlijiye

P calls the waiter.

S: ek cold coffee

P: mera yeh repeat

S: cold coffee try karo na chota haddi

P: no hot coffee is good.. it contains more antioxidants... so i prefer that

S(mumbles): yaha pe bhi doctery

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While having cold coffee...

S: toh ib aise hi baithe rahe ya bologe bhi kuch kyu bulaya

P: ha.. wohh... actually....

S: bolo v doctor shaab

P: haa... main...

Cut by S: ib bolo naa... tum sirf meri curiosity badha rahe hoo

Fedup of her interruption and frustrated of being so nervous...

P: chup... bilkul chupp... ab jab tak main apni baat complete na kar lun aap tum kuch nehi bologe

S nodded.

P(nervously): Shushi woh... tum.... tum toh jaante hona ki .. Dp uncle tumhare liya ladka dekh rahe h

Toh.... darasal kuch dino se mere dad v pareshaan the ... unhe laga ke hum dono ke beech kuch... toh unhone Dp uncle se baat ki...

Hum dono ke...

Susheela was taking a sip when her expression changes hearing this.

Realising this Pramod got more nervous and scared so...

Pramod in one breath: Hum dono ke shaadi ke baremein aur uncle ne haa keh dia phir dad ne mujhse pucha toh maine v haa keh dia toh ab hamare ghar waale chahte hain ki hum shaadi karle

Hearing this S brust out the coffee from her mouth and it directly fell on P t-shirt.

A few seconds later realising what she did...

S: i am so sorry mai saaf kar deti hun...

While getting up she hit the table and due to this P's mug of hot coffee falls on his thighs

P(in pain): aahhhh.... mera paair

S(seeing this): sorry ... sorry ...maine kaha tha cold coffee piyo..... main ice leke aati hun

P: haato ... pagal ladki... ek toh mera paair jaala dia aur tumko yaha v coffee k upar argument karna hain.. mujhe yaha aana hi nehi chahiye thaa...

S: zyada jaal raha (was about to touch)

P(jerks): kaha haath lagane jaa rahi ho

S (realises what she was going to do): sorry sorry ... tum baithoo...

P: nehi mujhe urgent isse treat karna hoga warna baad mein aur pain hoga... hum fir iss mamle mein baat karenge

He left quickly. Susheela then realise that everyone was looking at them. She got embrassed and left from there as fast as she could.

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At night...

Garima and Puttu are laughing their lungs out hearing about what happened with Susheela . But she didn't told them about the marraige proposal.

G( laughing): bechara Pramod... kitna dard horaha hoga

Pu(laughing): haa Pramod bro...

When Dp enters...

Dp: kis baat pe itni haasee chuut rahi

G: woh papaji....

Dp: Garima beta raat bohot hogayi hain...iss halat mein der tak jaagna thik nehi jaa soo ja..

G: ji papaji...

Garima and Puttu left. (Garima is staying with Agni in another room)

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Dp: Kusum ne bataya tujhe kuch baat karni thi mujhse...

S: ji papaji wohh....

Dp (seeing her discomfort): Pramod se baat hui

Susheela looks at her father.

S: kya sach mein ap bhi yehi -

Dp: dekh beta... mujhe pata hain yeh baat sunke tujhe jhatka laga ... mujhe bhi laga tha jab Jay ne iska zikr kya....

Woh log bohot acche hain... Pramod bohot accha hain...
Haan main thoda naraz tha usse tha par jabse Garima ko khush dekha hain Agni ke sath... uske upar se saara gussa chala gaya

Tu bohot khush rahegi waha... aur yeh baat tu bhi jaanti hai

(Strokes her hair) koi joor nehi hain... tera faisla sunne bagair baat aage nehi baadhayengey... chal soo ja ib raat bohot ho gayi...

Susheela lays on bed thinking all this.

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At Chautala house,

R(laughing): bhai log dil jalate hain tu paair jalake aagaya

M: seriously Pramod how can you be so careless... dekho puraa jal gaya

J: aur meeting bhi cancel karani paadi

P: seriously guys... chadh jaao na mere upaar saab... ek toh meri yaha itni budi tarikese laagi paadi hain aur aplogoko mazak suj raha hain..

J: chal ab zyada nakhra mat kar... doodh pilee aur soo jaa( hands him a glass of milk)

M: shorts mein soona

R: yes... common baby boy

P: tuu gaya aaj

P runs behind R to the room.

M: yeh nehi shudrenge

J: chalo hum bhi soo jatein h

M: haa


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𝑻𝒉𝒂𝒕𝒔 𝒇𝒐𝒓 𝒕𝒐𝒅𝒂𝒚. 𝑯𝒐𝒑𝒆 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒍𝒊𝒌𝒆 𝒊𝒕.

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