Charlie and the Chocolate Fac...

By wooglebear

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A fan rewrite of CATCF, adding new demises, new characters, and making the story overall better. When Charlie... More

Chapter 1: Here Comes Charlie
Chapter 2: Willy Wonka! Willy Wonka!
Chapter 3: Prince Pondicherry
Chapter 4: The Mysterious Workers
Chapter 5: The Golden Tickets
Chapter 6: The First Four Finders
Chapter 7: Happy Birthday, Charlie!
Chapter 8: Four More Tickets Found!
Chapter 9: The Gamble
Chapter 10: Decreasing Hope for Charlie
Chapter 11: A Glimmer of Hope
Chapter 12: A Glimmer of Hope, Part 2
Chapter 13: It Must Be Beileved to Be Seen
Chapter 14: The Famous Chocolaiter
Chapter 15: A World of Pure Imagation
Chapter 16: Oompa Loompa Doompiety Doo
Chapter 17: The Little Glutton
Chapter 18: The Wonderful Boat Ride
Chapter 19: The Invention Room
Chapter 20: Gum!
Chapter 21: More Than She Can Chew
Chapter 22: The Corridor
Chapter 23: One squirrel for me!
Chapter 24: Log Flume and TV
Chapter 25: Vidiots
Chapter 26: A Sticky Situation
Chapter 27: Kirumi and Kaede in The Gingerbread Room
Chapter 28: Only Charlie Left
Chapter 30: Happily Ever After

Chapter 29: The Other Kids Leave

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'We must go down and take a look at our little friends before we do anything else,' said Mr Wonka. He pressed a different button, and the lift dropped lower, and soon it was hovering just above the entrance gates to the factory.

Looking down now, Charlie could see the children and their parents standing in a little group just inside the gates.

'I can only see seven," he said. 'Who's missing?'

'I expect it's Mike Teavee,' Mr Wonka said. 'But he'll be coming along soon. Do you see the trucks?' Mr Wonka pointed to a line of gigantic covered vans parked in a line near by.

'Yes,' Charlie said. 'What are they for?'

'Don't you remember what it said on the Golden Tickets? Every child goes home with a lifetime's supply of sweets. There's one truckload for each of them, loaded to the brim. Ah-ha,' Mr Wonka went on, 'there goes our friend Augustus Gloop! D'you see him? He's getting into the first truck with his mother and father!'

'You mean he's really all right?' asked Charlie, astonished. 'Even after going up that awful pipe?'

'He's very much all right,' said Mr Wonka.

'He's changed!' said Grandpa Joe, peering down through the glass wall of the elevator. 'He used to be fat! Now he's thin as a straw!'

'Of course he's changed,' said Mr Wonka, laughing. 'He got squeezed in the pipe. Don't you remember? And look! There goes Miss Violet Beauregarde, the great gum-chewer! It seems as though they managed to de-juice her after all. I'm so glad. And how healthy she looks! Much better than before!'

'But she's purple in the face!' cried Grandpa Joe.

'So she is,' said Mr Wonka. 'Ah, well, there's nothing we can do about that.'

'Good gracious!' cried Charlie. 'Look at poor Veruca Salt and Mr Salt and Mrs Salt! They're simply covered with rubbish!'

They saw Matsuda and Mr D. They were mostly okay, but with just one minor difference...

"What's that all over them?" asked Charlie.

"That's melted chocolate, honey and garbage." said Mr Wonka. "You'd have it all over you too if you'd been where they've been."

Kaede and Kirumi were standing there. Kirumi was alive, except now she was covered in bruises, cuts and scratches as every inch of her was stained black, brown and red. Her dress was in rags and her hair was disheveled.

Kaede, on the other hand, had been turned into a life sized gingerbread figure with a glazed, far away look in her eyes.

"Kaede's now gingerbread, and Kirumi's injured!" said Charlie Bucket.

'And here comes Mike Teavee!' said Grandpa Joe. 'Good heavens! What have they done to him? He's about ten feet tall and thin as a wire!'

  'They've overstretched him on the gum-stretching machine,' said Mr Wonka. 'How very careless.'

  'But how dreadful for him!' cried Charlie.

  'Nonsense,' said Mr Wonka, 'he's very lucky. Every basketball team in the country will be trying to get him. But now,' he added, 'it is time we left these four silly children. I have something very important to talk to you about, my dear Charlie.' Mr Wonka pressed another button, and the lift swung upwards into the sky.
Next the finale.

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