ENTANGLED ✔︎

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*can be read as a general fiction* 𝑯𝒆𝒓𝒆'𝒔 𝒎𝒚 𝒇𝒊𝒓𝒔𝒕 𝒆𝒗𝒆𝒓 𝒇𝒇 𝒅𝒆𝒅𝒊𝒄𝒂𝒕𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒕𝒐 𝒎𝒚... अधिक

characters and plot
1--Everyone is late
2-- The marriage
3-- The Meet
4-- Where is G?
5-- What happened!
6-- What actually happened!
7-- An Old Friend
8-- Marraige Proposal For S?
9-- The Past I
11-- Whats on J's mind?
12-- Disclosing
13-- Knowing More
14-- I'll be there for you!
15-- Two Roads
16-- "Gam Mein Rum"
17-- New Beginings
18-- Sumod's alliance?
19-- Yes or No?
20-- Marry me!
21-- Destined Together?
22-- Falling for you!
23-- New Bondings!
24-- Engagement!
25-- Old Love!
26-- Fights!
27-- Is This The End?
28-- Shaadi!
29-- A drive into old memories!
30-- I Love You!
31-- A moment of love!
32-- Nostalgia!
33-- Will You Marry Me?
34-- "I do!"
35-- Two Bodies One Soul !
36-- "Happily Ever After"
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10-- The Past II

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stuckwithinwordz द्वारा


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P: tum ?

Boy: ha main .... the one and only Abhiraj Singh... suna he tu jarahe toh socha ki good bye hi bol du....

P: hamesha ke liye nehi jaaraha hu... aur mujhe teri wishes ki zaroorat nehi hain

AS: par mujhe teri kuch tips ki zaroorat padegi

P: kya matlab?

AS: matlab tu ja raha hai toh aab koi toh hona chahiye teri Susheela ko sambhalne ke liye, tu toh jaantahe thodi ghussail hain woh-

P holds his collar: tujhe main last time bol raha hoon dur reh meri Sushi se warna anjam thik nehi hoga

AS : arre main toh uski bhale ke liye bol raha tha ... tu khud jaa raha ha toh Susheela ke liye koi toh chahiye na joh usska khayal rakhe...pyaar de

P: tuu-

AS: jab tak tu waha hain tab tak main sambhal lunga usse, phir jab aa jayega tab woh teri... kuch saal ke liye toh maaze lene de

P slaps AS hardly.

Seeing this few students gathered there.

The mates of AS were about to come and hit Pramod but he stops them and said-

AS: aj yeh personal matter hain... koi hamare beech nehi aayega

He pushed Pramod . Pramod got more angry and he rushed towards him. They both started fighting.

Slowly the crowd increase. Susheela also went to see what was happening. She got shock when she saw the view

S: yeh kya kar rahe ho?

Both were busy in fight in fighting.

Seeing everyones response of being unbothered she herself went to stop the fight.

S: chodo yeh kar rahe ho!

She hold Pramod's shoulder and dragged him away from AS.

P: Sushi chodo mujhe ... aj main isse nehi chodunga

S: tum...

She sees everyone staring at them: Kya bheed jamake bethe ho langar laga h yaha. Niklo sab!  ( shouts).

Everyone is familiar with her anger so they left quickly. Just AS and his friends were there.

AS came to her .

AS: dekho na main toh bas bye bol ne aaya tha aur yeh maarne lag gya

P: main?? ... sach me jaan se na maar du tujhe aj

S to P:  chup bilkul chup.... yeh kya kar rahe the.... halat toh dekho apni.... sharam nehi aayi junior se lad rahe the

P was listening silently.

S: ek baar bhi nhi socha ke agar koi teacher dekh lete toh kya hota

P: ....

AS: maine bhi bohot kaha ki chod do ... lekin yeh

S: dekho iski taraf se i am sorry

P: Sushi

S: bas!

AS: nehi tum kyu sorry bol rahe ho i mea..

cut by S: ab niklo

AS: kya

S: maine kaha niklo yaha se

AS left with his friends giving a look to Pramod.

S to P: chalo

They got into car and went to Pramod's house .
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P: sshh.....

S: chup karke baitho aur mujhe ointment lagane do

P removes her hand.

P: tumne sorry kyu bola?

S : tum nhi bologe toh mujhe hi bolna padega

P: galti uski thi

S: lekin tumne bhi toh usse mara

P: haa toh kya karta woh badtameezi kar raha tha

S: kya ho gaya hai tumhe ?  pehle toh tum aise nhi the... aur usne jo kuch bhi kaha ho usme itna gussa karne ki kya baat ho gayi

P: jo bhi baat ho tumhe sorry nehi bolna chahiye tha

S: Pramod tum chale jaoge lekin mujhe inn sab k beech mein hi rehna hoga

P: woh toh isilye sorry kaha .... correct.... tumhe inn sab ke sath rehna hain .... main toh chala jaunga.. toh mere bare mein koi kyuhi soche

S: mera woh matlab nehi tha main toh bas..

Cut by P: oh please tumhe jo kehna tha tumne keh dia ... and i am sorry ke tumhe meri wajah se sarmindigi mehsoos hui apne dost ke samne

S: kya bakwaas kar rahe ho?

P: sahi toh keh raha hoon... jab se woh aaya hain tab se yahi toh chal raha hain

S: woh hamare beech kabhi nehi aaya tha... tum usse le aaye hamare beech

P: itni bholi mat bano ki tumhe kuch pata hi na ho... sab jante hue bhi tumne usse kuch nehi kaha

S:...

P: ab bolo kuch chup kyu ho

S: ab mujhe lag raha ha ki woh sahi tha... tumne hi jhagda kiya hoga.

This words hurt him a lot.

P: tumhe sach mee.... get out

S: Pramod

P: just leave... i don't even want to see your face

S: ....

P: niklo ( shouts)

She left with teary eyes.
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Pramod was lying on bed when Mini entered his room.

M: Pramod yeh chot kaise lagi ?

P: kuch nhi mom... bas ek se jhagda ho gya

M: tum kab se jhagda karne lage .... dekho kitna chot lag jaye

P: mom please kuch aur baat kijiye

He made her sit on put his head on her lap.

After a few minutes of silence.

M: Susheela naraz h tujhse?

P: hmmm... isbar kuch jyada hi daat diya usse

M: toh jaake baat karle .... maana le

P: mujhe nehi lagta woh manegi .... kyuki galti usiki hain

M: Pramod galti dono mein se kisiki bhi ho par solve hamesha sath milkar karna chahiye... aur tu usse itne saalo se jaanta hain aaj tak tum dono ka koi bhi jhagda 2-3 ghante se zyada nehi tika hain

P: par mom woh sab silly reason ke wajah se the lekin issbar wajah kuch aur hai koi tisra hain

M: wajah koi bhi ho hume apne close people se zyada time naraz nehi rehna chahiye... agar hum apne nazdik logo se hi sorry bolne se katraye toh baki duniya ke sanme kiye galti se kaise face karenge.... sorry bolne se koi chota nhi ho jata ....

After few minutes...

P: yes mom... you are right.... par apko har baar kaise pata chal jata hain ki humara jhagda hua hai

M: maa hun main tumhari....chal maana le ab meri beti ko.... hamesha usse padeshan karta rehta hain

P: mom seriously? Main kal jaa raha hun aur aap aaj bhi uss chindi ki side le rahi hai?

M: toh.... beti h meri !

Pramod gets up from her lap and sits in front of her.

P : thankyou mom

M kisses his forehead.

M : chal dinner karne aaja.
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After dinner P tried to call her but she kept on rejecting his call and after few times she blocked him.

P: block kardiya ! kya karu main iss ladki ka?

P thinks for a while and then decided to visit her next morning before heading to airport. He also wrote a letter for her confessing his feelings and kept it between those DVD's he had brought for her and packed the gift. He also added a sorry card on top of the gift and tied it with ribbon.

P: mujhe nehi pata ki tum kaise react karogi but main aise aur nehi reh sakta... aur tumhara joh bhi decision hoga i will respect it happily !

The next morning he visited Ruhails and took their blessings. He then excused himself and went to Shushima's room hiding his gift.

Garima was at down talking with everyone and Susheela was still sleeping.

Pramod went into the room and saw Susheela.

P: main jaa raha hoonn phir bhi  nehi uthi ?  chalo koi na uthti toh aur bhi problem ho jati.

He kept his gift at her side of cupbroad and went towards her.

He slightly strokes her hair and smiles seeing her sleeping peacefully.

P: I will miss you... a lot !  Bye Sushi !

F͟l͟a͟s͟h͟b͟a͟c͟k͟ e͟n͟d͟s͟

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R: hmmm..... Yeh AS toh bohot bada chu-

P glares at him.

R: matlab badmash... bohot bada badmash nikla... agar tera bhai waha pe hota na toh

P: kuch nehi hota tujhse.... or waise bhi ab kuch pehle jaisa nehi raha... mujhe baade hone ne ke baad realise hua ki that was just an atttaction... i only liked her not more than that aur uss age me toh sab ke sath hota tha

R: Do don't love her?

P: no

R: thik hai main try kar leta hun waise bhi lagta hain ki uska gussa thoda kam ho gaya ha pehle se -

P: jaan le lunga teri main

R: dekh zaali na teri ..... aur baat karta ha

P: chal aj mere ghar chal

R: ofcourse main toh bag pack karke aaya hun chal
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At Pramod's house Jay went to his room in search of a file when his eyes fell on the tickets. He got sad and went back to his room.

At Jay's room Mini was doing something on phone. He went and sat besides her.

M: kya hua

J: Pramod wapas jaa rha h... sach me

M: uski internship khatam hui ha par usse PG bhi toh karni hai na

J: yaha pe bhi toh ho sakta hain

M: kaisi baat kar rahe he?  Woh maan bana chuka h

J: mujhe hi kuch karna hoga abhi

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Pramod and Rishaab reached Pramod's home. They met his parents and went to his room. Rishaab was lying on his bed and Pramod was unpacking Rishaab's staff. Suddenly he saw something.

P: yeh ladki kon h ....

R: wapas de usse

P: pehle bata yeh photo kiski ha?

R: de mujhe bola na maine

They starts running the whole room.

And then Rishaab shouts : de bola na maine

Pramod got startled as Rishaab never gets angry so quickly.

P: kya hua ?  le yeh tera photo.

Rishaab took the photo and kept it nicely.

P: kaun thi woh ?  mujhe bhi nhi batayega

Rishaab's eyes got moist.

P: bhai tu roh raha ha ? kya hua ? kaun h yeh ?

R: Shruti !  meri ex fiance

P: tune engagement karli aur -

R: actually mere parents ko pasand aayi thi woh .... dadu ki tabiyat bhi kharab rehti thi toh socha ki engagement zaldi kar de

Jab maine usse pehli baar dekha na tabhi mujhe usse pyaar ho gya . She was an angel. Phir engagement ke kuch din baad usne mujhe milne bulaya toh mujhe pata chala ki uske family uski shaadi mujhse zabardasti kara rahe the. Woh kisi aur se pyaar karti ha.

Dil toot gaya tha mera. Pehli baar koi itna accha laga tha. Phir bhi laga ke mujhe nehi toh sahi lekin usko uska pyaar milna chahiye. Maine apne parents ko bataya . Thode upset hue woh phir bhi maan gaye aur engagement tod di. Phir maine hi undono ki shaadi kara di... bohot khush thi woh uss din.

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He was on the verge of crying. Pramod hugged him.
After a few minutes Rishaab slightly rubbed his face his shirt. Pramod left him quickly

P: kya kar rha h...chiii

R: sorry ab naak beh raha ha toh kya karu

P: kitna ganda admi h tu

P looks a him: tu abui thik ha na...miss karta ha usse ?

R: haa kabhi kabhi... ab woh khush ha na mere liye wohi kafi hain

P kept his palm on his one cheeck.

R looks at him.

R: kyaa... ab kiss karega kya

P: ...

R: chal soote h

and went on Pramod's side intentionally.

P : tu kabhi nehi shudrega

and went on the other side.

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𝑻𝒉𝒊𝒔 𝒑𝒂𝒓𝒕 𝒘𝒂𝒔 𝒇𝒐𝒓 𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒊𝒓 𝒇𝒓𝒊𝒆𝒏𝒅𝒔𝒉𝒊𝒑. 𝑯𝒐𝒑𝒆 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒍𝒊𝒌𝒆 𝒊𝒕.

𝑾𝒉𝒂𝒕𝒔 𝑱 𝒈𝒐𝒏𝒏𝒂 𝒅𝒐 𝒕𝒐 𝒔𝒕𝒐𝒑 𝑷?

𝑺𝒐𝒐𝒏 𝒔𝒐𝒎𝒆 𝒊𝒏𝒕𝒓𝒆𝒔𝒕𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒊𝒔 𝒄𝒐𝒎𝒎𝒊𝒏𝒈.

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