Left Right Left

By karu_nidzz

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continued series from left right left 2 ending with season 1 tadka... Kanchanjunga Military Accademy, Ambala... More

About LRL
Character Sketch - Part 1
Character Sketch- Part 2
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5

Chapter 1

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By karu_nidzz

Baroda

Two people who were in the cafeteria noticed that their fellow officer was upset. Unaware of the reason and to know the same, the woman walks towards her while taking a leave from her fellow mate.

"Oh Kanchi!" she called her in order to gain attention but got no response. She paced up and vigorously tapped her shoulder, "Kahan kho gayi thi? Tabse bula rahi hoon!"

Kanchi came out of her thoughts and saw her very lovely friend stand in front of her with a scrunched forehead. She smiled looking at this wonder woman who not only is a very courageous officer but along with that is the core strength of the whole team.

"Haan bol!" she said with a mixed expression.

"Tu munh fulaye kyun baithi hai?" the lady asked while taking her seat.

Kanchi gets dejected, "Kuch nahin yaar bas meri leave sanction nahi ho paayi.." she answers feeling dejected.

Looking at her friend also feeling sorry for her, she changes her mood "Chal koi na agli baar hi sahi. Waise bhi sirf 1 saal hua hai" and saying so she dodged it away.

Suddenly she realised something and continued to ask "Naina maine toh pichli baar chuti le bhi li,  lekin tumne.. tumne toh ek baar bhi chutti nahin maangi in do saalon mein."

Naina bit her lips as she was confused on how to answer her best friend. Yes our dear Lieutenant Naina Singh Ahluwalia had no answer on why she doesn't want to take a holiday. And why would she want to? The two people whom she loved so dearly were no more with her. So, who would she go to meet?

"Koi wajah nahin milli mujhe chutti lene ke liye." Naina answered honestly with a smile. A crisp answer which she would always give to anyone who asked her about holidays.

"Aur kyun milegi wajah jab apun yahan hai!" A man who is around the same age joined them in their conversation.

Naina smiled looking at him, "Alekh!" she softly looked at him.

Yes our Alekh Sharma, our angry young man. Both Alekh and Naina are currently working together and have bonded even more strongly throughout the time.

"Acha jii." Kanchi chuckled and took their leave. "Chalo mein gharvalon ko bol deti hoon ki mujhe chutti nahin milli" she smiled as she left.

"Kya hua ab tum itne udaas kyun ho!" Naina asked once Kanchi disappeared from the frame. She could read every action and emotion of Alekh clearly and Alekh too could never hide anything from her. 

"Kuch nahi yaar. Neelu ne Parth ke kuch aur photos bheji thi subah." Alekh stated bitterly as he kept fidgeting with his mobile. He really wanted to meet his baby and the love of his life. But..!!

"Ek din Alekh." Naina held his hand and continued, "Tum dekhna ek din woh log zaroor regret karenge iss baat se ki unhone tumhe apni Raapchik Maal se milne nahin diya." Naina gave him the much needed comfort and reassurance. Naina had always been there for him and had looked out for him in his ups and downs.

There was a burning desire in her heart and she really strongly wished to go to Yudi's house and yell at his parents but then she didn't  want to create more troubles for Alekh. She remembered her Rajveer sir's words :   "Anger always creates more problems".

Both sit in the cafeteria and talk for sometime after which they go and report to their duty.
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Nagaland

A man attentively listens to the orders given to him by his senior. He comes out of his senior's cabin and sighs heavily and starts to do his work one by one.

A captain comes in and after seeing that the man is still working goes up to him. The man gets up and salutes him "Jai Hind Sir"

" Jai Hind Lieutenant Ali, aap ke paas sirf ek hafta hai. Agar apko chutti chahiye toh sahab ji jaldi jaiye aur apply kijiye warna milne se rahi." The captain smiles and advices him to do things faster as army people rarely gets any leaves.

Ali smiles back and says "Yes Sir."

He goes and applies for 10 days leave. He informed his Abu and ammi.

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Arunachal

A woman gets a call and she gets up to speak after seeking the permission of her seniors.

" Hello! Pehle tu yeh bol itne samay baad tera network sahi time pe lag gaya!?" Without giving time for the man to greet back she speaks.

"Haan ji! Pooja ji" Ali says with a soft smile listening to his lady love's complains. Even though she is herself an officer if not in the army. She complains just like normal girl friend.

" Chal yaar Ali mujhe tumse koi sms nahi chahiye! Tu muskura raha hai!" Pooja gets angry as she can feel his smile. That's the magic of love. You feel it and nobody knows how.

"Aree pooja ji! Nahin aap galat samaj rahi hai. Hum toh aapki awaz sunke khush hue thhe" Ali tries to convince her.

She controls her blush and  acting to be ignorant of the effect he had on her, she says "chal chal ab network ka taar kahin aur mat jod aur batao tumne leave li ki nahin"

Ali wanted to prank her badly so thought to lie. "Nahin pooja ji hume lagta hai ki hume na leave nahin leni chahiye. Agli baar milenge."

Pooja gets furious just as Ali wanted and warned him yelling "Ali agar tume permission nahin li na toh mein tujhse saare networks cut kar doongi!!"

Ali laughs and pooja understands it was a lie. She gets more angry and cuts the call.

(A/N :- Ab bechara Ali poore time koshish karega pooja se connection jodne ka)

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Panjim

A man is seen complaining to himself about how his friends forgot about him. He is missing his KMA days with his friends and his Rajveer sir. He remembers those days
When aalekh used to be rude to him.
When he wore a gown to go to the freshers ball.
When he tried to suicide but his Rajveer sir made him understand that he had abilities in him to be an army officer.
(A/N :- yes he is our Yudi)

Rajveer sir... He missed his rajveer sir a lot. "Kaash aaj woh zinda hote!!"
He was reliving his memories when his comrades came in and initiated conversation thus breaking his chain of thoughts.

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Darjeeling

A man in his late 40s is seen to be working in his cabin. He works day and night to help people in need and save their lives. He was busy in his file when suddenly his phone rang.

Man: Hello shyam ji! Boliye.

Shyam ji: .................................

Man: What!? Mein abhi aa raha hun.

He rushes to his house. A 2 storey independent house with a beautiful garden. He rushes to the room where a patient is seen laid down all medical equipments attached for two years. The patient is breathing with the help of artificial ventilator.  

The man was trying his best to make the patient stable. shyam ji came in with all the other necessary instruments. After sometime the patient became stable.

"Thank you Shyam ji! i just hope ki yeh thik ho jaye" the man thanks shyamji and wishes for the betterment of the patient. He has been working on this patient in secret and giving him the best treatment possible free of cost. He doesn't know if the man will be able to give him his money and he had no intention of asking any fees.

Shyam ji then assures him "aree honge kyun nahin sahab akhir DOC. HARSHVARDHAN KHANNA inka illaj kar rahe hai."

harsh just smiles and says "meri tareef bahut ho gayi. Ab ye do saal se soya hua insaan do din ke andar uth jayega." 

shyam ji then nods with a smile and says "ab sirf yehi bol sakta hai, ki yeh kon hai aur uss blast mein kaise phas gaya" 

**************flashback*************

doc harsh came to ambala for a function. he was returning back to Darjeeling when he heard a bomb blast. The doctor inside him made him go to the blast area where he found an unconscious man heavily injured. It was clear that he tried to jump off a height. Several gun shots were heard. harsh thought it was a good idea to hide the fact that he was treating some one as he thought it would put the man's life in danger. 

He treated the man without anyone's knowledge and from last two years. Even if the patient is in coma, he is taken good care as harsh is takin care of everything.

**********flashback end**********

Harsh just remembers the past and looks at that patient. He then requests shyam ji to serve him dinner. They both have dinner and just waits for the person to wake up. 

AFTER 2 DAYS 

The man slowly gaining consciousness. One servant who was cleaning the room saw the moment in the patient and informs Harsh who stayed back from the hospital as he knew that the patient will wake up sooner. 

While Harsh was coming towards the room, the patient was having difficulty in opening his eyes because of the sunlight.

Harsh enters the room and quickly closes the curtains to make it easier for the patient. 

After 1 hour of adjustment to the surrounding and his headache being reduced, the patient could open his eyes and sit comfortably. He tried to speak but could not voice it out.

Harsh understood the matter and informs him about his health "kuch din tak you cannot do any motor skills as you were in coma for the last two years"  

The man widens his eyes in surprise but quickly masks it out. he has various question in his mind and thus his eyes was showing restlessness tho his body language was normal. 

But as doctor Harsh knew what and all questions the man was having. He smiled gently and said " pehle tumhara check up kardunga uske baad i will answer all of your doubts."

The man just nods his head. Harsh finds it confusing as none of the patients he had handled was so calm after coming out of coma. He finds the guy mysterious. Keeping his thoughts aside, Harsh was doing all the check up simultaneously.   

After check up, he tells the patient everything about himself and how he [the doctor] found him [the patient]. But still after hearing so many things the patient's face showed no signs of fear or surprise. 

The guy then asked for a pen and paper in signs, as a doctor harsh understood and brought it. He was unsure whether the man would be able to pick the pen up, but to his surprise the man picked the pen and wrote 

'CAPTAIN RAJVEER SHEKHAWAT'

Harsh was shocked to know that he is from Indian Army and thinks that it was be a mistake that he had not informed anyone because if he informed anyone, rajveer would be safe with his team. 

He apologized to Rajveer on this matter and rajveer just shook his head indicating that  he did not mind at all. He then writes a number hoping that the number would work. 

9984378XXX

Harsh understood what has to be done and goes out with the number after making sure that Rajveer is comfortable.

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Helloo my dearest readers, 👋

Hope you enjoyed my first chapter!? 🙈

Please leave loads of comments as it will boost my motivation to write more.🤭

Please share this story if you like it so that it reaches maximum lrl fans.☺️

Any comments on Doc Harshwardhan and Shyamji?🤔

Do you think of Doc Harsh had informed someone, Rajveer would have been safe?🤨

Whose number must have Rajveer given?🤫

Who is your favourite jodi (excluding Raina) ?😏

Note that all characters are equally important in this story. No one is completely innocent and no one is completely at fault!!😤

Take care and be safe 🤌🏼

Love 😘
Nidzz

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