TOGETHER FOREVER

By BarkhaPatel0

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A story that was left incomplete. The story is not about only love but it's also about friendship, respect, c... More

Character sketch
part 1
part 2
Part 3
PART 4
PART 5
PART 6
PART 7
PART 8
COVER
PART 9
PART 10
PART 11
PART 12
PART 13
PART 14
PART 15
PART 16
PART 17
PART 18
PART 19
PART 21
PART 22
Shekhawat Mansion Tour part 1
Shekhawat Mansion Tour part 2
part 23
PART 24
PART 25
PART 26
PART 27
PART 28
PART 29
PART 30

PART 20

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By BarkhaPatel0

Hello all,

Thank you so much guys for your good wishes, now I am fine and thanks for your patience and love for my story. I know mene bola tha jaldi update de dungi lekin meri sister college ke work me busy ho gayi so update type nahi kar payi but abhi me thik ho gayi hu so next update bhi bohot jald a jayega.

Please votes and comments karna mat bhulna. So thank you for your patience and sorry for late update.

Update,

At night,

After diner all were seating in living room and talking about some random things. then Rajveer just observe that Shivangi looks sad and did not speak anything.

Rajveer: (with concern) Shivi kya bat he jo tuje pareshan kar rahi he.

Shivangi: kuch nahi he Raj, me thik hu.

Rajveer: nahi kuchh to he jo tu bata nahi rahi. Kab se chup chap bethi he or thodi udas bhi dikh rahi he.

Shivangi: esa kuchh nahi he, agar esa kuchh hota to me tumhe batati na. chhupaungi kyu me kuchh bhi.

Gunny: (raised his eyebrow) seriously Shivi ye bat tu bol rahi he ke tu kuchh chhupati nahi.

Naveen: (taunting) Gunny kyu apna time west kar raha he or Raj tuje pata he na ke ise agar kuchh nahi batana to ye kabhi nahi batayegi.

Shivangi: taunt kyu mar raha he, sidha sidha bol na. or tum dono bohot achhe se jante ho ke ye bat agar shuru hui to kese khatam hogi.

Gunny: matlab tuje aj bhi kuchh nahi kehna he. Tune bola tha sahi time ane pe bata dungi lekin ab to lagta he vo time kabhi ayega hi nahi.

Naveen: jab tak ise nahi batana tab tak sahi time ayega hi nahi.

Shivangi: (emotionally) esa kuchh nahi he. Kyu nahi samajte tum log, har bar is bat ko nikalna jaruri he.

Gunny: jab tak hame hamrare sare savaalo ke javaab nahi milte tab tak is bat ko nikalenge.

Abhimanyu: Shivi ne bola tha na ke sahi time pe vo bata degi, fir kyu firse vahi sab.

Rajveer: or nahi to kya, hamesha iske pichhe pade rehte ho tum dono.

Gunny: dekh Raj tum dono me patience hoga lekin hamare me nahi he samja to har bar ki tarah use defend karne ki koi jarurat nahi he.

Rajveer: me kisi ko defend nahi kar raha Gunny lekin tuje pata he na ke jab bhi ye bat nikalti he sab se jyada taklif Shivi ko hi hoti he fir kyu bat badha rahe ho.

Naveen: seriously Raj bat ham badha rahe he. Hamare simple se savaal ka agar vo sidha sidha javaab de degi to ye bat idhar hi khatam ho jayegi.

Gunny: chhod na Naveen ham bat hi kyu kar rahe he kyuki har bar ki tarah in dono ko to Shivi ka hi sath dena hota he.

With that four of them started arguing and fight with each other. It's Rajveer/ Abhimanyu Vs Naveen/Gunny. Everyone else did not understand what was happening. But Shivi's condition was worst because abhi bohot kuchh chal raha tha uske dimag me. She was sad kyuki uske friends usse naraz he, she was irritated because ye charo ese hi kab se lad rahe he. She was frustrated and angry also, she became emotional and crying because vo abhi bohot hi helpless feel kar rahi thi kyuki vo nato inhe ese gussa hote dekh sakti he nahi inhe sach bata sakti he. But now she just frustrated so she shouted "sto....p just stop". There was complete silence for some time then she continue...

Shivi: (emotionally, sad, frustrated, angrily shouted on them) ho gaya tum sab ka ya fir or kuchh baki he. Bola tha na ke is bat ko mat nikalna lekin nahi har bar ki tarah is bar bhi vahi hua, apas me hi lad rahe ho tum charo. Kyu karte ho esa jab pata he ke me tum charo ko ese ladte nahi dekh sakti vo bhi meri vajah se or nahi tum logo ko bata sakti hu jo tum logo ko janna he, fir kyu nahi samajte meri majboori ko.

Before she continue further Gunny and Naveen were left from there. Shivangi also leave from there with some tears in her eyes. Other were in same condition, they don't know anything.

Naina: (looking toward Rajveer and Abhimanyu) sir ye sab kya tha or achanak Shivi ko kya ho gaya.

Abhimanyu: ham batate he. Hamne ap logo ko bataya tha ke ham charo pehli bar Shivi se kese mile the or tabhi Pooja apke man me ye savaal tha ke ek akeli ladki kese char ladko pe bharosa karke unhe apne hi ghar me rehne de sakti he to yahi savaal ham bhi tab se unnhe puchh rahe he lekin vo batana hi nahi chahti or sirf itna hi nahi unhone aj tak apni family ke bare me bhi kuchh nahi bataya he.

Rajveer: jab bhi uski family ke bare me puchha usne sirf itna hi kaha ke sahi time ane pe bata degi. Use pata tha ki ham army me he to ham uske family background ke bare me pata laga lenge to usne hame apni kasam deke rok dia or bola ke jab tak vo na bataye tab tak ham log uski family ke bare me janne ki koshish na kare. Or rahi bat abhi jo jagda hua uski to har bar jab bhi ye bat nikalti he to esa hi hota he lekin tension mat lo subah tak tino thik ho jayenge. Abhi tum sab ko so jana chahie with that everyone leave from there.

In Shivangi's room.

Shivangi: (irritated) dekho Alekh abhi mera koi mood nahi he tumse behes karne ka so please abhi muje pareshan mat karna.

Alekh: khali pili mere pe kyu chadh rahi he. Me to sirf dekhne aya tha ke tu thik he ya nahi.

Shivangi: tumhe jan ke kya karna he vese bhi tumne hi kaha tha ke tumhe koi farak nahi padta.

Alekh: me ese hi tereko pagal nahi kehta hu, tu sach me pagal he. Kisi or ka gussa muj pe kyu nikal rahi he.

Shivangi: (raised her voice with irritation) muje pagal bolana bandh karo tum or muje pata he tum bhi yaha jagda karne hi aye ho.

Alekh: (now he also irritated) me kyu jagda karunga. Me to sirf tuje dekhne aya tha.

Shivangi: (shouted) tumhe kya he, tumhe......tumhe jagda karna he to chupchap jagda karo or jao yaha se.

Alekh: (he also shouted) chupchap jagda kese ho sakta he.

Shivangi: vo bhi me hi batau.

Alekh: behes karna bekar he tumhare sath.

Shivangi: to kyu kar rahe ho.

Both were fighting like a children. Sherry came there while both were fighting.

Sherry: ab ap dono ese bachho ke jese kyu jagda kar rahe ho.

Alekh: is pagal se hi puchh...... with that he leave.

Sherry: (looking toward Shivangi) ye sab kya tha.

Shivangi: kuchh nahi ek yahi baki tha aj ke din muje pareshan karne ke lie vahi karne aya tha.

Sherry: (with smile) nahi dii vo sach me apko dekhne aye the. Or vese bhi Alekh bhai apko ese hi pareshan thodi karenge pyar jo karte he apse.

Shivangi: (completely in shocked) ye tum kya bol rahi ho.

Sherry: dii itna shocked mat hoie, muje pata he ap unse pyar karte ho actually jab ham bhabhas ke ghar pe the tab mene apki or Alekh bhai ki bate sun li thi kyuki ap jaha khade reh ke bate kar rahe the uske upar vale room me hi thi me or jab Alekh bhai vaha se gaye uske bad mene apko dekha tha rote hue to muje samaj a gaya tha ke ap unse pyar karte ho or kahi na kahi vo bhi apse pyar karte he lekin pata nahi kyu accept nahi karte he.

Shivangi: ab agar tumhe sab pata hi he to promise karo ke jab tak me na kahu ye bat kisiko bhi pata nahi chalni chahie. Or tum batao ke yaha kyu ayi thi.

Sherry: vo Rajveer bhai ne bheja he, bola he ke aj rat apko akele na rehne du. or ab ap bataie ke apke or Alekh bhai ke bich me kya problem he.

Shivangi: vo muje pagal bolta he na lekin sabse bada pagal to vahi he. Vo apne past se bahar hi nahi ana chahta. Or fir jab ham sath me posted the tab esa kuchh hua tha ke uske bad vo mujse dur hi rehta he, vo samajta hi nahi ke usme uski koi galti thi hi nahi...... with that both were talk to each other.

Other side Naina was thinking something very deeply that she did not know when Rajveer came to her room. Rajveer also just observe her for some time then he going toward her.

Rajveer: kya soch rahi ho.

Naina: (came out of her thought) ap kab aye.

Rajveer: abhi aya jab tum mere bare me soch rahi thi.

Naina: (raised her eye brows) apko kisne kaha ke me apke hi bare me soch rahi thi.

Rajveer: (wrap his arm around her waist and pull her to him) ab agar Naina Rajveer ke bare me nahi sochegi to or kiske bareme sochegi.

Naina: (wrap her arm around his nack) apko ese dialogue marna kisne sikhaya, Or vese bhi ap yaha kya kar rahe ho.

Rajveer: me yaha kya karuga Naina. Tumse hi milne aya hu.

Naina: nahi mera matlab he ke bhaiya apse naraz he to muje laga ap bhaiya ke sath honge.

Rajveer: (ruffling her hair) use hi manane gaya tha leki har bar ki tarah room lock kar ke betha he or use mana hi raha tha ke doc vaha a gaye or unhone kaha ke vo Naveen ko sambhal legi so dono ko vaha akela chhod ke a gaya tumhare pas.

Naina: chalo ye bhi sahi he usi bahane dono sath me time spent kar payenge. Lekin gunny ka kya, vo bhi bohot gusse me the.

Rajveer: gaya tha uske pas bhi lekin chauhan ne kaha ke vo use dekh lega or muje yaha bhej dia taki ham dono thoda time spent kar sake.

Naina: vo sab thik he lekin Shivi.......

Rajveer: (just leave her with little irritation) ye kya he Naina, me yaha tumhare sath time bitane aya hu or tum ho jise muje chhod ke sab ki fikar he.

Naina: ap gussa kyu ho rahe ho. Muje fikar ho rahi thi sab ki.

Rajveer: (puffy face) vahi to keh raha hu ke mere alava sab ke bare me soch lo bas.

Naina: (with smile) apko pata he ap kitne cute lag rahe ho ese gusse me. But he doesn't answer anything so she continue... Achchha thik he me kisi or ke bare me ab nahi puchhungi lekin ap please ese gussa mat hoie.

Rajveer: thik he me gussa nahi hota lekin pehle batao ke jab me kamre me aya tab kya soch rahi thi.

Naina: apse hi milne ke bare me soch rahi thi.

Rajveer: (with victory smile) dekha mene kaha tha na ke tum mere hi bare me soch rahi thi.

Naina: ha apke hi bare me soch rahi thi. Muje pata he ke mene kabhi pehle apke or apki family ke bare me janne ki koshish nahi ki lekin ab me sab kuchh janna chahti hu apke or apki family ke bare me. Me chahti hu ke ap apne life ke sare achhe or bure vakht ke bare me muje bataie.

Rajveer: me bhi tumhe mere bare me or meri family ke bare me sab batana chahta hu lekin yaha nahi kisi khas jagah pe jake bataunga chalogi na mere sath.

Naina: apke sath to me kahi bhi chal sakti hu....

Rajveer and Naina were standing outside a room. Rajveer was emotionally just looking at the closed room. Naina was observing him and she got confused that why Rajveer suddenly became emotional but she did not ask anything and just open the door. Both were entered in the room. it's biggest room in the mansion.

Naina: (looking all over the room) ye konsi jagah he, bohot hi beautiful he. Ise dekh kar to esa nahi lagata ke ye kisika personal room hoga.

But Rajveer did not answer so Naina looked back at him. Rajveer was standing in the center of the room and looking at the whole room with lots of emotion and some tears in his eyes. Seeing Rajveer in such condition, Naina went to him and grabbed hid both hand.

Naina: (lovingly) muje nahi pata ke is jagah se apki konsi yade judi hui he lekin jo bhi ho please mujse share kijie. Me apko ese bilkul bhi nahi dekh sakti to jo bhi bat he please muje bataie.

Rajveer: ye jagah sirf mere lie nahi lekin hamari puri family ke lie bohot important he. Is jagah se bohot sari yade judi hui he. ( then he took Naina to a big photo frame) Naina meet my parents

Avantika Singh Shekhawat (Rajveer's mother)

Virendra Singh Shekhawat (Rajveer's father)

vikram Singh Shekhawat (Rajveer's chhote papa)

Ragini Singh Shekhawat (Rajveer's chhoti maa)

Rajveer: Chhoti maa or chote papa ka beta yani ki mera ek chhota bhai bhi he jo ki army me captain he Rudra singh Shekhawat, pyar se ham sab use Rudi bulate he. Bohot pyar karta he mujse. Hamari puri family ek dusre se bohot pyar karte the. mom, dad or chhoti maa hamesha family business me busy rehte the or chhote papa army me the to kabhi kabhi hi ghar pe ate the to dadi ne ek rule banaya tha ke pure din kitna bhi kam kar lo lekin rat me sab logo ko sath me time spent karenge or isi lie dadi ke kehne pe ye pura room banaya gaya tha. Tabhi se ye room sab ke lie khas ban gaya he, Bohot sari yade judi hui he is room se sabke sath. Bohot happy family thi hamari lekin fir achanak se hi ek sath sab kuchh chhin gaya ham se. sabse pehle chhote papa hame chhod ke chale gaye fir mom dad ka accident or uske bad chhoti maa jo ki ye sadma bardas nahi kar pae. Kuchh hi samay me hamare parents ham se bohot dur ho gaye. Uske bad se mene is room me kadam tak nahi rakha tha. In sab ke bad dadi ne hi muje or Rudra ko sambhala tha or hamare business ko bhi. Fir mene army join ki jaha muje Naveen mila jisse mil ke laga muje meri family mil gayi fir Gunny, abhimanyu or...(he just stop for second then continue) in sab ke sath mene apni nayi zindagi ki shuruat ki lekin fir se vahi sab hua Naveen bhi chala gaya or uske bad se me kabhi bhi ghar vapis aya hi nahi kyuki usko begunah sabit karna hi meri zindagi ka maksad ban gaya tha. Uske bad Naveen ki begunahi sabit karte karte tum muje mili, tumse pyar karne laga, firse jine ki ummid jagi lekin tumse kuchh keh pau usse pehle hi tumse bhi alag hona pada. Ab to dar sa lagne laga he ki kahi fir se mere sath...... he could not speak further. His pain was visible in his voice. He was crying to remembering those painful memories.

Naina could not see Rajveer in such a condition so she just hugged him tightly and he also hugged her tightly and broke into tears. For him it's first time ke jab vo apne dil ki bat kisi ke sath share kar raha tha kyuki use pata he ke ab vo akela nahi he ab uske sath uski Naina he jo use sambhal legi. dusri taraf naina ke lie bohot mushkil ho raha tha uske Rajveer ko is halat me dekhna. Usne kabhi nahi socha tha ke Rajveer ne apni life me itna sab saha he. Vo Rajveer ka pain feel kar sakti thi kyuki kahi na kahi usne bhi is pain ko mehsus kia he jab uske bhaiya use chhod ke chale gaye. Vo bhi isi pain se gujar rahi thi jab Naveen chala gaya or fir jab Rajveer se milne ke bad firse zindagi jine ki ummid jagi to Rajveer bhi usse dur ho gaya to vo bohot achhe se samajm sakti thi Rajveer ke pain ko. Lekin ab vo kamjor nahi pad sakti kyuki use Rajveer ko sambhalna he.Itne sare dard ke bavjud jese Rajveer ne use academy me sambhala, support kia vese hi ab vo Rajveer ke sath reh ke uske dard ko kam karna chahti he. Ab vo Rajveer ko ek pal ke lie bhi akela chhod na nahi chahti he, hamesha uske sath reh ke uske dard ko kam karna chahti he.

After some time Naina just broke the hug and she saw that still tears flow from his eyes. Use pata tha ke use kuchh bhi kar ke Rajveer ko is dard se nikalna he, jiske lie vo kuchh bhi kar sakti he. So she just going close to him then hold his left side of cheek with her left hand then leaning in a little close to him.

she just whispered slowly, very lovingly, huskily with lots of emotion and love in his ear "RAJVEER...."

When he heard his name from her moth, he just stood there like a statue, his heart beats faster, his heart warms up with lots of happiness and love, his eyes shining, he just feel like he was in another world right now. His name sounds very beautiful from her mouth. Rajveer couldn't believe that Naina finally took his name. he was very happy. He just forgotten all his pain and sorrows. Then he slowly turn his face toward her, both were very close to each other.

Rajveer: (softly) please take my name again.

Naina: (looking directly into his eyes) Rajveer....

Rajveer just hug her tightly and she also hug him. After some time Naina just broak the hug and sat Rajveer on the sofa with his legs up on the sofa. Then she sat next to the rajveer herself with her head resting on his chest and pull her legs up on the sofa. Rajveer was understand what she wanted to do so he pulls her toward him and wraps his arms around her tightly.

Both just close their eyes to feel each other present..........

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Thanks for reading my story

Thanks for voting and comment and I hope you liked this update.

love from Barkha❤️

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