MAIN HOON NA

By rajveer9_11

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Its a short story regarding what happens when Major Bhargav reveals Naina's identity in front of everyone and... More

PART 1
PART 2
PART 3
PART 4
PART 5
PART 6
PART 7
PART 9
PART 10
REQUEST
NOTE
PART 11
PART 12
PART 13
PART 14
PART 15
PART 16
PART 17
PART 18
PART 19
PART 20
PART 21
PART 22
PART 23
PART 24

PART 8

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Gunny ( To Himself ): tu chahe laak bol le mere bhai...

Tujhe Naveen ki Gudiya se pyar hai bas ye baat Tujhe abhi ehsaas nahi hu....

Lekin tension ki koi baat nahi hai kyunki bohut jald Tujhe apni pyaar ka ehsaas ho jaayega.....

With that Gunny too left to complete his drill.

Later during the drill MC gave punishment of solitary confinement to Naveen without any mistake of his....

Seeing this Raj was about to show Nair his right place but Naveen stopped him and accepted his punishment.....

Though Rajveer didn't do anything then but he is very angry & upset with Naveen....

Raj: kyu Roka mujhe...?

Main kar raha tha na baat...?

Us MC ki Himmat kaise huye bina tumhari kisi galti ke tumhe punishment dene ki...??

Aur tu mahaan atma, agar tune mujhe nahi Roka hota toh vo saala sanki MC agle ek hafte tak nahi uth pata...

Bol kyun Roka mujhe...?

Naveen: ha bas Isliye Roka tujhe ki tu kuch gadbad na karde....

Kyunki tere gusse pe Tujhe koi kaabu nahi rehta....

Kyu karta hai yaar itna gussa...?

Itna gussa thik nahi hai.. Rajveer na tere liye aur nahi tere apnon ke liye...

Rajveer: chuckles Naveen tu bhul raha hai ki iss puri duniya mujhe mere apna kehne ke koi nahi hai...

Bas ek tu hi hai jise main apna keh sakta hu...

Aur agar tujhe koi chot pochaega to uski khair nahi....

Naveen: Isliye roka Tujhe kyunki jab baat meri aati hai to tut u rehta hi nahi,

Seedha mahakaal ban jaata hai...

Dekh aaj mujhe to punishment mil chuki hai, ab tu kuch karta toh tujhe bhi punishment mil jaati us nair se...

Aur main nahi chahata ab koi bhi gadbad ho...

Kyunki aaj bohut special raat hai...

Ab punishment ki wajah se main solitary confinement me rahunga raat ko...

Isliye tum meri jagah rehke baat ko sambhaloge samjha...

Raj: confused matlab karna kya hai..........??

Aur aisi kya speciaal baat hai aaj raat me jo itna keh raha mujhe....??

Saale kahi tera date-vate to nahi hai na kisike saath...??

Aisa hai toh main nahi jaanewala kahi par bhi... samjha na...

Naveen: hitting his own head

Abe gadhe hamesha to intelligent number 1 banta rehta hai lekin ladkiyon ke maamle me teri itni fat ti kyu hai...??

Raj: koi fat ti wat ti nahi hai meri unke saamne....

Naveen: ha ha bhai...!!!

Main jaanta hu aur to aur mujhse zyada or jaan bhi toh kon sakta hai...??

Raj: irritated his talks Abe batayega bhi ki baat kya hai ya phir aise hi bakwas karta rahega...

Naveen: ha ha batata hu...

Baat yeh hai ki kal meri Gudiya ka birthday hai...

Aur jab se Hume yaad hai hum har saal uske birthday ke din raat bhar baat karte hai aur ek pal ke liye bhi nahi sote....

Par is bar main toh usse baat kar nahi sakta kyunki mujhe punishment mili hai..... toh...

Raj was about to say something when Naveen interrupts him again....

Naveen: Nahi Raj main aisa kuch nahi karne wala. Main na to koi rule Todnewala hu aur naahi tumhe karne dene wala hu....

Isliye main chahata hu ki tum meri Gudiya se aaj raat baat karo...

Aur ha use ye mat batana ki mujhe punishment mili hai kyu ki vo tujhse bhi bohut badi wali pagaai hai...

Agar use pata chal gaya toh pata nahi kya kar baithegi....

Kabhi kabhi to mujhe lagta hai ki you guys are just made for each other...

Naveen Saïd this without even realising what he said but those words had wonderful effect on Rajveer which Raj himself didn't understand....

But he ignored the thoughts and concentrated on Naveen's talks...

Raj: Naveen Main kaise baat karunga tere Gudiya se aur mujhe toh ladkiyon se baate karna aata bhi nahi hai....

Aur main hi kyun, tu kisi or bol de na...

Jaise Gunny, Abhimanyu...

Naveen: kyunki main tujhpe pe Shayad apne aap se bhi zyada bharosa karta hu......

I trust you with my life Raj..

Isliye I trust you with my Gudiya also...

Raj felt very much overwhelmed by seeing the intensity of trust Naveen have in him....

And at that moment, Raj decided to cherish Naveen's trust in him through out his life....

Naveen continued speaking,

Naveen: Aur ha Tujhe ye 'kaise baat karna hai' and all ke baare me chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...

Kyunki ki meri Gudiya vo typical ladkiyonki tarah bilkul bhi nahi hai....

Isliye Aaram se jaa..

Ab main bhi chalta hu Nair ka punishment poora karne...

Naveen left and Rajveer stood there still rooted to his place with stunned expressions because he was going to speak to his Naveen's Gudiya...

He checked his watch and it was 9pm which means he still had time to prepare himself for speaking with her...

Because as said by Naveen, his Gudiya will call at 11:00 pm sneaking out from her academy because she is pursuing training for civils in Mussoorie....

He went to his room to take a small nap till 11:00 pm but couldn't bring himself to sleep even for a second...

With each passing second he was feeling nervousness , anxiety etc all at once.....

Finally watch showed 10 pm and he directly went towards the telephone.......

Still 1 hour was left for Naina's call but still he couldn't stay in his room...

So now he is here hiding from all...

As it was already light out and there were only orderlies from whom hiding is cake walk for Rajveer....

Finally Ghadi 11 baje aur phone ki Ghanti bhi Baji....

Aur Raj ne sirf ek his ghanti me phone uthaliya...

Naina: hello bhaiya.... Aapko pata hai aaj kya hua....

She was just blabbering when Rajveer interrupted

Raj: he...hello...!!!

Naina: hello kon?

Mere bhaiya kaha hai..??

Abhi mere bhaiya ko phone do...

Raj: hello Na... Naveen ki Gudiya ji ,

Actually vo Naveen na ek assignment me busy hai jisse aaj raat kisi bhi halat me complete karna bohut zaroori hai so...

Vo nahi aa paya.....

Isliye usne kaha ki Main aapse baat karu kyunki aaj ki raat neend nahi aati na...??

Aur vo.......

Raj Saïd all this very nervously while Naina was amused hearing Naveen's Gudiya from Rajveer....

He was fumbling but she found it really very cute...

Naina: relax...!!!

Take a deep breath....

Raj did as Saïd by Naina and relaxed himself...

Tum Mere Jay bhaiya ke Veeru hona.....??

Raj: ji nahi vo main ..... mera naam Cadet Ra...

But Naina cuts him in between and completes his sentence.....

Naina: Cadet Rajveer Singh Shikhawat....!!!

Raj: ji aapko kaise pata....??

Naina: vo kya hai na mere bhaiya hamesha tumhare hi baare me baat karte rehta hai aur jaise tum mujhse baate karte huye nervous ho rahe the usse hi mujhe pata chal gaya ki tum Bhaiya ke Raj ho.....

Kyunki bhaiya ne bataya tha ki unka Raj ladkiyon se baat karte waqt bohut sharmata hai aur tum vaise hi kar rahe the.....

Aur ek baat batao...

Tum nervous hoke bohut cute sound kar rahe the....

Raj was utterly embarrassed.... Hearing Naina's words and he felt a pleasant feeling listening to her...

She continues

Aur ek baat mera naam Naveen ki Gudiya nahi hai....

Mera naam Naina hai...

Raj: ji vo mujhe pata nahi tha kyunki Naveen hamesha aapko Gudiya hi kehta hai toh...

Naina: pata hai hamesha Gudiya kehte hai mujhe....

Aur tum ye aap aap kya laga Rakha hai,

Main tumse 50 saal badi nahi hu,

'Tum' kar ke baat nahi kar sakte...??

Raj: ji vo aap...

Naina: mujhse dosti karoge.....??

She asked out of the blue....

Raj: ji....

'Yes' escaped from his lips without even his permission...

Naina: bas to phir... ab tum mujhse singular me hi baat karoge...

Kyunki dostonke beech formalities nahi hoti...

Right...!!

Raj: Sahi kaha tumne...

Naina: ab aaye na line pe...

Aur tumhe pata hai....

Like that they continued speaking whole night without even realising that they are talking for the first time....

Neither of them felt that they are strangers to each other...

Since they knew almost everything about each other because of Naveen....

Raj completely forgot his shyness around girls....

He thought about Naveen's words & smiled to himself because Naveen was right as Naina is not like any typical girl....

Raj was feeling very free with Naina was he was being himself without any pretence.....

They kept on speaking & they didn't realise time since it was already 4:30 am and within 30 minutes morning drill alarm will ring....

Naina: bhaiya ko punishment mili haina...??

This came as a surprise for Raj...

Raj: tumhe kaise pata chala...??

Naina: kyunki aisa ho hi nahi sakta ki bhaiya mujhse kisi assignment ki wajah se na baat kare aur most importantly jab tum ne jhoot bola na to mujhe pata chal gaya....

Pata nahi kaise.....

Raj: smiling & staying silent for sometime Happy birthday .....

Abhi subah hogayi hai toh I think I should go...

He kept phone....

And kept walking towards his room with smiles intact on his face.....

Here Naina was also having that smile on her face.....

Raj was recalling the beautiful past memories when suddenly he came back to present by the loud scream by Naina.....

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Naina: Veeerrrrrrr...!!!

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