Life after talent hunt (Compl...

By Alfiya_alfu

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About my story
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CHAPTER:-31

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By Alfiya_alfu

Assalamualaikum my dear readers let's start with a new update

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Nandu left from there

Mnk-no nandini I know I did wrong but you can't leave me alone like this never he said and throwed vase which was beside him

Scene change
Nandini was coming from there wipping her tears when she bumped with navya

Nav-nandu

Nan- my name is nandini this made navya sad

Nav- nandu listen to me I know I did wrong not trusting you

Nan-come on navya why are you sorry you know what mujhe tumse gussa hona bhi nhi chahiye (eng:- I don't even need to get angry with you)
Because when my love doesn't trust me then why should expect it from you all and navya you know I am feeling right one thing which my mom used to say ki there are no one ours living God saying this she left navya was heartbroken

At manrav's side
They both were standing and looking at each other

Man- we need to dance

Aar-I know

Man- toh meri shakal Kya dekh Raha hai (eng:- then why are you seeing my face )

Aar- why are you shouting yaar

Man-seriously aaru if we both will just Stand then when will we start

Aar-yaa let's try

Man- but thik se don't you dare put your legs on my toes
He nodded

(Can you all imagine them in dancing on this song mujhe thik se express karna nhi aata 😅)

They both finished they heared a clap voice they turned and saw manik

Mnk- it's very amazing

Manrav- thank you Uncle

Mnk-waise were you both fighting or dancing
He heared a voice it was nandini

Nan- dono she comes near manrav

Nan-why aaru mannu haan fighting and dancing right

Man- momma nothing na we were just practicing

Aar- haan aur it was looking like fighting because we were practicing na aur Thora mushkil tha and you know dance is equally difficult to love he said Mannat and Nandu glared him

Mnk- yaa true love is very difficulty he said looking at nandu

Nan- accha you both first go and Change your clothes you both are sweating they both nodded and left

nandu was coming near him while he was taking steps back with confuse look he got hit to wall she comes more close his one track mind was thinking something else (samaj rahe ho 🙈)
But she just handed him something
It was his phone

Nan- you left your phone there

Mnk-phone (he raised his eyebrows) ya phone

Mnk(thinking)- really mere saare aarmano pe paani phid Gaya you never stop shocking me nandu

Nan- by the way once again stay away from my children saying this she left

Mnk- na na jaan na hi baccho se dur rahoga aur nahi tumse you will accept your love very soon ( he said last line with mischievous smile)
(Eng:- no no jaan I will not stay away from children's and from you too )
He smirks and left from there

(Going to see a naughty manik in upcoming chapters 😉)

Here at Terrace evening
Nandu was sitting Arya and Sona comes there

Arya- Choti she turned

Nan- Bhai Sona sit na they both sit beside her

Sona- are you okay

Nan-yaa Sona why are you asking

Arya-manik did he

Nan-Bhai Don't worry he is no one in my life
She was saying this but she also knew that she need him in her life (😢😢)

Arya-hmm okay what about that two shaitans

Nan-bhai they both are practicing much then more they both are fighting
All laughed
They were Sharing family moments

Scene change
Somewhere at dark place
He/she was sitting

Person- kuch bhi hojaya Mai manik ko kissi aur ka hone nahin doongi never
(Eng:- anything happens I will never let manik to be someone else never)
(Now it's confirmed that she is a girl but who is she )
Another man who was sitting infornt of her asked

Man-then what do you want from me

Girl-actually I want you to kill that nandini

Man-whatt never

Girl- ooh Soo lover boy is scared come on you were hidding your feelings for nandini from college time

Man-listen you u are crossing your limits right now

Girl- okay Chalo let's make a deal so deal is like this that manik will be mine and nandini will be yours

Man-deal after all we have done this much to separate them they both smirk

Scene change
At khurrana Mansion at night
Here all were sitting at dinning table unfortunately manik was beside nandini (ohh ye manik baba ne jaan buj ke kiya hai 😂)
They all were eating silently while manrav were making faces

Nan- mannu aaru why are both making faces

Man- momma our tummy is full

Aar- haan

Sona-haan full kyun nhi hoga chori chupe chocolates Jo khaye hai
(eng:-ya why can't tummy will full after all you both have eaten chocolates)
Both looked at Sona shockingly

Man-Mami aap hampe Nazar rak rahi thi
(Eng:- Mami were you keeping eye on us )

Aar-yes and Mami are you momma's chamchi (right hand)

Sona- oye don't call me chamchi manrav and Sona started arguing
Arya and nandu hits their forehead

Nan-stop trio stopped

Arya- aaru mannu what is this you both ate chocolate

Manrav-yes

Arya- good they both looked at him
Come on man chocolates hi khaye hain koyi keemti cheez nahin
(Eng:- you both have eaten chocolates not any precious thing )

They all sighed and started eating
While Manik slowly moved his hand on nandini's lap she looked at him with shock

Nan-manik what are you doing she whispered angrily

Mnk-nothing

Nan- take your hand

Mnk-no

Nan-why

Mnk-you know you look cute when you are irritated she frown and remove his hand From her lap

Nan- monster huh

Mnk- haaye thank you for saying this
Fortunately this all was unnoticed by everyone

They all finished eating

And left for there room

At manrav's room

Man-aaru manik Uncle is sweet na

Aar- yes you know mujhe na ek papa chahiye

Man- Mee too

Screen freeze at manrav
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END OF THIS CHAPTER

I hope you like it

Suggestion:- guys can you suggest me any female character to play a pysco lover role it should give feel
And also a male character for that man's role
Please help me 🥺

Don't bash me for making some villian I just did it for making it interesting and don't worry no Manan separation

Few words for manik

Few words for nandini

Few words for manrav

Few words for arya and Sona

Few words for man and girl
Comment down

Bye guys 😊
Take care ☺️


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