VISHWAS KI DORI SE BANDHE DO...

By rajveer9_11

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It is new angle of Rajveer Naina story Alag kahani More

CHARECTERS
Title Track
PROLOUGE
PART 1
PART 2
PART 3
PART 4
PART 5
PART 6
PART 7
PART 8
PART 9
PART 10
PART 11
PART 12
PART 13
PART 14
PART 15
PART 16
PART 17
PART 18
PART 19
PART 21
PART 22
PART 23
PART 24
PART 25
PART 26
PART 27
PART 28
PART 29
PART 30

PART 20

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Rajveer (himself): kya abhi kuch der pehle jo Maine suna,

Vo sach hai....?

Kya Naina ne mujhe VEER kehke bulaya......?

Agar ye sach hai toh kya Naina hi meri Nia hai....?

Lekin ye kaise ho sakta hai.....?

Kya mujhe abhi Naina se iss baare me puchna chahiye.....??

Agar main galat hua toh......

Lekin main meri Nia ko pehchaan ne me kaise galati kar sakta hu.......???

He was travelling in his own confused world fighting between his mind & heart when suddenly his trance got broken by Naina

Naina: Tum kya soch rahe ho........?

Utho vaha se aur dhire se yaha aao .

Tumhe bohot chot lagi hai

Main tumhe first aid aur Dawai dono de deti hu, varna septic ya infection ho sakta hai.

She helps Raj in getting up and brought him near fire where she has made bed like something with grass.

Then she made him sit & started applying anti septic cream on all his wounds very attentively & carefully as if hurting Rajveer unnecessarily would be the biggest crime in the whole world.

While here Raj was just staring her with the blank face and without blinking his eyes.

He also observed that she has come with full preparations as she had all the necessary first aid kit items, medicines etc & she has also brought some ready made packets of food with her.

She even cleaned his bullet wound and applied medicine over it as bullet slightly touched his shoulder & left , so nothing serious.

After finishing first aid, she said,

Naina: Ab tum thoda sa ye khalo, baad me main tumhe pain-killers de dungi toh tumhe achcha lagega aur dard bhi thoda  kam ho jaayega.

Ruko main abhi tumhe khana khilati hu.

She took the food packet & about to feed him when Rajveer stopped her

Naina: kya hua, tumhe kahi bhi dard ho raha hai kya....?

She asked  with voice full of concern which warmed Raj's heart very much.

Raj: tumne mujhe kuch der pehle kya keh kar bulaya tha?

Naina (understanding his point about what he is speaking but instead of answering his question she thought do something mischievous): kya keh ke bulaya tha matlab, vahi jo hamesha se bulati aayi hu.

Kyu tumhe kuch aur sunayi diya kya....?

Ab vo sab chodo aur khana khao, phir tumhe medicines bhi leni hai..

Raj(not convinced yet): kya tumne sach me........

Naina (cutting him in between and smiling inwardly): ha baba,

Ab tum ye lo

She then feeds him with her hands & Rajveer couldn't deny to her now, so he was silently eating from her hands .

He was feeling very special because he don't remember when someone fed him with their hands as he was always alone through out life and now seeing Naina feeding him with so much care & concern in her eyes was evoking new emotions in him which were unknown to him also.

But on other hand he was continuously thinking about his Nia also.

Naina (while feeling): vaise ek baat bolun...........

Raj( absent mindedly ): hmmm....

Naina: Army intelligence ke training me toh officers ko yahi sikhaya jaata haina ki koi awaaz ko ek baar sunle to usne kya kaha aur voice kya tha , ye sab kuch koi neend me bhi puche toh use yaad karke dauharana aur pehchaan na chahiye na Veer.......

Kya maine sahi kaha Veer .........

Rajveer didn't understand what Naina was saying for a moment and he was trying to register what Naina said.

As soon as her words got sinked, his eyes opened wide in shock and only one word got escaped from his mouth.

Raj: "NIA"............

Naina: smirkingly hmmm.......

So finally Veer ne apni Nia ko aur the great agent TIGER ne apni SHERNI ko pehchaan hi liya.............!!!

But I am very disappointed with you Veer....

Raj: kyun.....??

Naina: aur nahi toh kya....

Mujhe tumhe kitne saare clues dene pade aur tumne kitna saara time liya mujhe pehchaan ne ke liye....

Raj: Nia, matlab tum sach me meri Nia ho.....

Naina: Ye lo...

Yeh toh wahi baat hogayi na ki Raat bhar Ramayan sun ne ke baad Bhola ne guru ji se pucha ki 'guriji Ram Seeta ke kya lagta tha..?'

Raj: oh god...oh god....

Mujhe meri Nia mil gayi.....

I am very happy today,

Aakhir hamari mulaqaat ho hi gayi....

He jumped from his bed & hugged Naina with very much force that Naina had to hold the rock beside her to balance....

He was hugging her tightly f he was just mumbling 'Nia I missed you.... I am very much happy to see to you'.

While saying all this he was crushing her more into himself and he didn't even realise when tears started falling from his eyes unknowingly...

Here Naina was also very much that she got her VEER & RAJVEER in one person who supported her always, stood by her side always & most importantly trusted her always.....

Naina was also reciprocating the hug with same intensity as Rajveer.

Suddenly accidentally Naina touched Raj's bullet wound because of which Raj gave a very loud pain & he hissed in pain...

Seeing him in pain, Naina got panicked like hell.....

Naina: sorry....Veer...

I'm so sorry Veer......

Mujhe........ pata........ nahi..... kaise.....

Oh shit.....

Khoon bhi beh raha hai....

Veer kya tumhe bohut dard ho raha hai.......???

She immediately started bandaging his wound with utmost care & concern in his eyes...

Tears were falling from her eyes unknown to her but Rajveer noticed those tears.....

Raj was though in very much pain, was feeling very much overwhelmed to see someone caring for him & crying for him....

In his whole lonely life, he never had anyone who would care for him and cry for him.....

Seeing the concern for him in his Nia's eyes, Rajveer was feeling as if he finally belonged to someone whom he can call his home.....

Naina: dard kuch kam hua kya Veer...??

Raj: smiles Mujhe toh kabhi dard hua hi nahi kabhi bhi....

Kyunki tumhe pata nahi hai kya ki

"KABHI MARD KO DARD NAHI HOTA"

Main toh bas aise hi kar raha tha ki ye dekhne ke liye ki kya tumhe thodi si bhi rona aata hai ya nahi...

Kyunki tumne hi kaha tha na ki SHERNI kabhi roti nahi hai...

Par tum..... tum toh balti bhar bhar ke ro rahi thi.....

He winks at her and laughs his lungs out.....

Seeing him smiling...

Naina also smiles and but still she fakes her anger in front of him.....  and hits him slightly taking care of not hurting any of his wounds....

Naina: Veer tum bhi na.....

Main abhi tumhe chod diya kyunki tumhe chot lagi hui hai...

Jab tum puri tarah se thik ho jaoge, na to toh Main tumse har baat ka badla lungi....

Huh...bade aaye mard ko dard nahi hota kahike......

Aur kya keh rahe the...

Main ro rahi thi...

Bilkul nahi.... Main kabhi nahi roti..

Ankh me kuch chala gaya hoga...Isliye ankh se paani aagaya hoga....

Raj smiles at her cute explanation

Naina: vo sab chodo aur ye lo medicine khao tum.....

She feeds him medicine & makes him lay on the bed of grass...

Raj: Nia tumne khana nahi aaya.....??

Naina: Maine to Suriji ke haath ke 5 aaloo ke parathe thoos ke aayi hu...

Bhala main kyu khana khaye bagair rahu....

Tum vo sab chodo aur so jao...

Tumhe rest ki zaroorat hai.......

Raj understood that Naina has not eaten anything & she will not accept also.......

He wanted to talk with her so many things and make her eat also but because of high dose of medicine sleep overtook him & he jumped into a deep slumber with smile intact on his face due to the presence of his Nia beside him.....

While Naina kept looking at Raj's face whole night with satisfied expressions on her face....

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