Revealing Glances: Unsettling...

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[Ongoing] A collection of unsettling or unusual short stories. Some have monsters, some have humor, some draw... Lebih Banyak

Foreword
Heroes Suck
Behind the Scenes: Heroes Suck
Bootleg Meg
Behind the Scenes: Bootleg Meg
I Killed Time to Survive
Behind the Scenes: I Killed Time to Survive
Would You Rather
Behind the Scenes: Would You Rather
Friends Until the Break of Dawn
Behind the Scenes: Friends Until the Break of Dawn
Body, Abducted
Behind the Scenes: Body, Abducted
Remember
Behind the Scenes: Remember
Deserve
Behind the Scenes: Deserve
Incomprehensibility
Behind the Scenes: Incomprehensibility
The Basket Stripper
Preposterous Prank Gone Perilous
Behind the Scenes: Preposterous Prank Gone Perilous
Elevator Monster
Behind the Scenes: Elevator Monster
Tradition
Behind the Scenes: Tradition
Codes
Behind the Scenes: Codes
Move On
Behind the Scenes: Move On
Assumptions
Behind the Scenes: Assumptions
Blindsided
Behind the Scenes: Blindsided

Behind the Scenes: The Basket Stripper

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Oleh SkittishReflections

The idea for this story started out as a conversation with my siblings about horror characters like Pinhead, Eraserhead, Pyramid Head, Siren head, and other "heads" in movies, games, and creepypastas.

I mentioned that you could basically take any noun and add "head" to it to create a horror character, and they challenged me to think up a monster called Basket Head (possibly after glimpsing the waste paper basket by the desk).

On the fly, I said it would have a razor-wire basket for a head that would scoop up people, spin away their soft parts, and grind their bones. They liked the idea and convinced me to flesh it out (pun intended), so I did.

I tried to go for a classic creepypasta and nosleep style, where the main character writes out their experience right away without any dialogue or perfect grammar, almost like a campfire ghost story. This isn't my usual method, the only other time I attempted this was with Bootleg Meg, but I figured I'd give it another shot.

I added a campfire setting, a misunderstanding, and a sprinkle of conspiracy, and at the last minute, I changed the name from Basket Head to The Basket Stripper. I figured it sounded both silly yet horrifying when the reason for the name is known, and it wouldn't seem to leech off the names of other "heads". And as the cherry on top, I sketched it out like a hurried child would.

As for the location, I only chose the George Washington and Jefferson National Forest in Virginia because it was large enough to reasonably hide the Basket Stripper, and it was in the same state as DARPA, where research and development occurs for the military and beyond.

If you've read the story, let me know what you think. I’m always open to feedback, suggestions, and critique!

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