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Jhope is a CBI officer.. who was so energetic, hopeful and courageous .. he had a Girlfriend...but all a sudd... More

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Lesson 1
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L - 19 💜
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L - 23 (M)
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L - 33 (M ¹⁸±)
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Final Chapter
Epilogue
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second book
Second book

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Georgetta...
Grasp your shirt and pull you to the wall ...

I stared at you with a drastic feeling..
I can hear your heart beat... It's rapid fast... And your ears are turning red..
I just moved closer to you... And whisper in a seduce tone ..
"Purathe nalla mazhaya.. I feel really cold ... Can you turn me hot like summer , like a criminal under cover😉"....

And moves away from you .
Dhee ee dialogue ee FF add cheytha eangane irikkum?.
Eanna vaa vote and comment. 

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At college
Time 11:36 am Interwell.

Monie : Daaa nee ithe eangotta?
Hobi : Yoonjiye kannane...
Jacks : pinneyum theri vilikan povano?
Hobi : ningale ivide ninna mathi njn poyi nokkitte varam...
Monie : Venda njangalum varam...

Avare vanne 3rd year classintte purathe ninnu ..
Hobi : Da Monie... Just oru sorry poreda?
Monie : ohh dharalam.. avale Ippo ninnode it's okay mone pokkone parayum... Onne poda ...
Hobi : pinne eandha cheya??
Jack : poyi oru umma koduke..
Hobi : ehhh??
Jack : ahh chumma oranam koduke
Monie : eandhine adutha Case indakkano?
Jack : ohh appo Nammade chekkane umma vecha preshanamilla.. avale umma vechale annale preshanam?
Ithe evidathe nyayam? Bada hobi nammake case kodukam
Hobi : onne poda ..

Appozhane Momo (twice) chechi classine irangi vanne..
Hobi : ahh chechi ee yoonji ?
Momo. : Yoonji?
Hobi : aa yoonji chechiye kandayirunno?
Momo : aaa Eanike ariyilla... Inne njn kandilla ..
Hobi : ahh sheri chechi...
And she wolk away..

Hobi : inni inne vannittile??
Monie : nee libraryile nokkiyo?
Hobi : illa avide illa.. sign kandilla..
Monie : eanna canteenile kanum..
Hobi : eanna ningale ivide nikke .. njn poyitte varam..
And he runs to Canteen ...
Jack : alla Ivane eandhina sorry parayune?
Monie : kuttabhodham..

And he rans to Canteen...
Avide chennapo Kai chettane avide nikkune...
Hobi : Kaichettaaaa..
Kai : ehhh?? Eannada...
Hobi runs to Kai...
Kai : eannada? Nee odiyo? Inna chaya kudike..
Hobi : mhm Venda... Avale kando? (Breath high)
Kai : aree??
Hobi : Yoonjiyee...
Kai : illada...
Hobi : inne kandayirunno?
Kai : eyyy illada... D.O ne kandillalo?
Hobi : D.O ?? 🙄🧐
Kai : ah-sggs ahh I mean D.O scooter... Dio scooter ille? Jaisontte athe ..
Hobi : ayine Jaison chettane bullet alle ullathe?
Kai : avane Puthiya scooter eduthe...
Hobi : eppo?
Kai : ine ravile 10 inum 10:15 idake...ahh nalla muhurtham...
Hobi : Athe rahukalathine munbo athe kazhinjo?
Kai : ayoo rahu kazhinje... *Gulp* nee chaya kudike ..
Hobi : ohh Venda njn povaa...

And he ran back to NamSon...
Avide chennapo Namjoon Jinnode samsarichonde irikkune..
Hobi looks away...
And wolk to Jackson ...
Hobiye kandapo Jinnie onne avane nokki.. he is too tired..
Jacks : nee kando?
Hobi : povam?
Monie : ahh povame. .. eanna sheri bye..
Hobi : Venda nee kurache kazhinje Vanna mathi...
Monie : eyyy njangake prethyekiche onnum parayanilla... Alla Nee kando?
Jinnie : Areee?
Hobi : illa .... Jacksa vaa povam..
Jinnie : Hobi..
Hobi turns to Jinnie ...
Monie : ehh?

Jinnie : nee okay alle?
Hobi : *looks away hesitantly*.
Jinnie : Hobi eanike ninnode onne samsarikanam..
Monie : Ehh?? eandhine?
Jacks : Nee Inge vaa Monie ... Nammake ivide scene illa..
Monie : eandhe scene illane?
Jacks : ahh pinne parayam..

Hobi  : eanike onnum samsarikanilla..
Jinnie : eanike samsarikanam eanna paranje... Nee ketta mathi...
Monie : dd Jinnie Venda... Please ...
Jacks : da Monie nee Inge pore ..
Hobi : eanikke onnum kekkenda...
Jinnie : Hobi, ithe eathra nalanortha
Nee eanne ingane avoid cheyan povune?
Hobi : Nee eannengillum eanneyoo avaleyo mind cheythitte indo?
Monie : eavale? Ningale randum onne nirthe...
Jacks : Daa Monie nee Inge vaada... Avare eandhengillum ayikotte..
Jinnie : Hobi njn parayune onne manasilake mone...
Monie : eathe mone?!
Hobi : eanike onnum kekkenda... Nintte  aa friend YOONJI koode po...
Jinnie : Hobi please... Eanode ninake athrake verupano hobi? Njan Nintte Jinniyalleda?
Monie : *nintte jinniyo?* (Suspicious) .
Jacks : Monie bada mone Canteenile povam..
Hobi : ee paranja Jinnie eannengillum Hobine kuriche anuveshittundo??
Jinnie : Hobi njn ninne kuriche eannum ammanode chodhikkuvayirunnu.....
Monie : eathe amma??
Jacks : eantte mathave eanne rekshikane..
Hobi : Ohh velya upakaram.. njn pova bye..
Jinnie grab his hand ..
Monie : 😲🤨🤨🤨🧐😠
Jacks : ishoye eantte athmavine kootayirikane ...
Hobi : Eantte kayine vide ... Eantte methe thodunne eanike istamalla..
Jinnie : Nintte swandham chechi alleda njan... Please onne parayune kekke...
Monie : ahh chech😲-- che what??
Jacks : ahh chechi...
Monie looks at Jackson...Jackson nodded...

Hobi : Jinnie mathiyedi.. njn maduthe  Ithe eallam konde.. nee eanne itteche poyathe alle??
Jinnie : Hobi Njan allalo ammachiyum appachanum paranjittale? alle?
Hobi : ninne thiriche vilichathe alle? Nee vanillalo? You only need your friends... Nintte aa Yoonji alle ninake veluthe? Athe konde alle??
Jinnie : Hobi nee vicharikuna polle alla ...
Hobi : Vendadi... Eanike inni onnum kekkenda... Nokke anne nee poyapo eanike nalla vishamam indayirunnu... Athilum vishamam inde nee eanne oru relative mathram akkipo... But it's okay.. after all nee mathramallalo eanike pengale ayittulathe? Eanike avale mathii
Jinnie : avale eannengillum suicide cheyane nokkitte indo??
Hobi : 🤨🤨??
Jinnie : Avale eannengillum arengillum bullied cheythitte indo?? Paraa...
Hobi : 🙄🙄
Jinnie : avale eannengillum vittine matti nirthitte indo?? Avale eannengillum arengillum manapoorvam upadhravichitte indo?? Eanna eanne ithellam cheythitte indee... Njn anubhavichathintte 10 ile 1 avale anubhavichitte indo??
Hobi : 😶
Jinnie : evide? Eallarkkum avaravarude nyayangale alle?? Puramene nokkiya Australia wow ... Great avide poyi kazhinja eallam set.. settle life styles... Alle?? Nintte chechi avide eangana jeevichene ariyuvo??
Aa kanda English kare full nintte chechiye thattikalichapo nee ee paranja Yoonjiyile , avale indayirunollu eanne onne nokkane...
Hobi : 🤨🤨??
Jinnie : chodhikanum parayanum arumillathavare arkkum eandhe venne cheyalo? Avide hostelile Nintte chechine eathra thavana misuse cheyan nokkiyene ariyuvo? Annum nee ee paranja Yoonjiye indayirunolu..  eanike .... Njan ithoke viliche ninnode parayane ayirunno hobi? Athe njn ithoke marache vechu... avalde koode ayirunnu time spent cheythe... Ninake onnum eantte vishamam paranja manasilavilla... Chelle... Poyi nintte aniyathide koode irike... Onne nee ortho hobi nee ee paranja Yoonji illayirunegill oru 5 varsham munbe Nammade kudumba kalarayile eantte suicide cheytha eantte body irunene---
Hobi Hugged her...
Jinnie hide her face on his shoulder and starts to cry...
Hobi hugs her tightly... And kiss her head...

Jacks : ohhh senti scene .
Monie looks at Jackson and left the place ...
Jacks : daaa Monie... (And Jackson rans to Monie) eannada Pattiye?
Monie : ninake ariyayiruno? Jinnie Hobide chechi ayirunune?
Jacks : da athe pinne-
Monie : ariyayiruno illayoo?? (Fumming)
Jacks : *nodded*
Monie : Ohh appo eallarum koode arinjonde anale?
Jacks : daa nee vijarikana pole alla...
Monie grab his collar : Njan vicharichu nee okke eantte best friend ayirikkum eanne....
Jacks : daa nee eandhe orthonda?  Hobi--
Monie : Hobike ariyathilayiruno? Eanike avale istam annene? Ee nay*atte mone parayathilayiruno avale eantte pengale anne? Oru mathiri pengale kuttikodukuna paruapadi alle avane kaniche--
Jacks : Vidadeda my**... (Jacks release Monie's hand from his collar) nakkine eallilane paranje thonivasam parayaruthe... Hobi paranjitta.. njn ninode parayathe irunne.. nee arinjayirunegil ningale ithe eallam nirthuvayiruno?
Monie : Orapayitum nirthiyene... Swandham kuttukarantte kudumbathile keri premikkuna thendi allada njn ... But avane cheythathe...
Kutikodupe alle ?

Jackson grasp Monie's collar : Thandhayillatharam parayaruthe..
Monie : avane thandhayillatharam kanikkam athine kutte nikkane niyum ninake ithine eathra Kitti?...
Jackson hitted on Monie's cheek..
Jacks : nee ithe chodhiche vangichathada nattalillathavane...
Monie sniffs and hitted on Jackson's face...
Pinne angotteke adiyode adi...
Idi..

Avasanam Hobi odi vanne nokkipo randum almost theerare ayii...
Athe angana onne eangane eangillum onne onniche varumbo vere onne avide adiche piriyum...

Hobi : Daaaaa , Moniee maree... Jacksaaa nirthee... Mathi viddeda... Jacksa nirthee...
Kai odi vanne jacksone pidiche matti hobi monieyum..
Monie : Videda pulle... Eanne thotte povaruthe...
Hobi : da Monie ninake eannad--
Jacks : Avane vattada...
Hobi : Jacksa nee onne mindathe irike..
Hobi : da eannada ninake Pattiye Monie
Monie : poda my**,.. nee ithra chetta annoda na*i.. ivale ninte swandham pengale anne nee eannada marache veche??
Hobi : da Njan ninnode parayane Varuvay--
Monie : Poda pulle nintte oru parayipikale... Ivale ninte pengale anne parayuvayirunegil njn orikalum ivale keri premikilayirunnu... (Pointed to Jinnie)
Jinnie : M-monie nee?
Monie hesitantly looks at Jinnie...
Hobi : da Njan athe ninnode manapoorvam marache vechathe alla... Sahacharyam angane ayathe kon--
Monie : Poda ule... Avantte appantte oru sahacharyam... Nee cheytha paruapadike njangade nattile vereya parayune..
Jackson : Daaaa **re inni nee ivane vellathum paranja kollum njn ninne...
Monie : Poda na*I... Ithrayum nallum ninne okke annalo chunk annum paranje tholile kayitte nadanathe..

Athe ketta Hobi


Jackson (after fight)


Namjoon : Mathiyeda nintte okke sneham ... Inni eathra pere inde ninake okke chechimarum aniyathimarum ayitte kuttikodukane?
Jacks : Daaaa **-(&_++?..
Hitted on Namjoon again...
Hobi randineyum pinneyum pidiche matti...

Jacks : Kolluda my** ninnee...
Hobi : daa onne nirthe eanike maduthe .. please... And Kai control Jackson..
Monie : Ahhh njanum maduthe inni Ninake okke nintte vazhi eanike eantte vazhi... Ninake okke vendi kanda penne casile Agathe kidane eantte jeevitham nashipichavane anne njan... Inni onnineyum eantte kanmunbile kande povaruthe..... Eanike maduthe... Ee coursum ee nashicha collegum Ippo ningaleyum...njn povane
Hobi de heart : 💔💔💔
Same as Jackson

Ithe vare Namjoon Jinniye nokkittilla..
Jackson moves to Jinnie and hold her hand...
Jacks : Nee poyiko... Nee Karanam ivide arkkum oru vishamavumilla..
Pinne ivale...(looks at Jinnie)  Nee aree chathitta ingane kidane karayune Jinnie? Nee pedikenda ninne njn kettikoladdi..
Ee na*ike vakkine vilayilla ... Daaa Hobi ivale njan kettikolam... Jinnie ee mettavane ninake thanna vakke verum kallava ...
Monie : Daaaa...
Jacks *pulls Jinnie to him*...
Monie :

Kai : Daaaa onne nirthedaa...
Ninake onnum nanamile kunjupillere polle adi indakkan?
Mathi eanna kannane nikkuva eallaru
Classile poda..

Monie is still looking at the hold of Jackson over Jinnie..
And sighs and looks away ..
Meanwhile Jinnie looks at Monie with a broken heart...

Jackson Jinniye nokkitte Moniye nokkippo


Mark ithe eallam kandonde nikkune Jackson kannune...
Jackson onnum cheyan pattunilla...
Markine Jacksone pande istamane... athe parayane vendiyane avane ee kanda nale full oru sthalathe varavo eannum chodhiche purake nadanne...
                     But faith is against him..
Mark misunderstood him with Jinnie..

Eallathinum karanam Georgeattana..

Kai : Daa hobi Chelle... Classileke po..
Da Monie neeyum Jacksonum sick roomile poyi onne fresh Ave... Alle Venda randum avide kidane adi indakkiyalo? Daa Jacksaa nee eantte koode vaa... Jaisa nee aa Monieye Dressing room konde poyiko..

Jacks was still looking at Mark..
And she left the place with a last look at him...
Jinne D.O classileke konde poyi...
Kai : Daa vaada... njn clean cheythe tharam..
Jacks : Mhm.. Venda ..
Hobi looks at them both... Randum rande directionileke

Oru minutee
Alexa play "Kadal kattine Nenjil"

*Le Jackson


*Le Hobi


And *Le Monie


Unshahikabile... Breakup okke eandhe thyree... Friendship breakaya .. ohh chatha mathi... friendshipitte vale kettan kolluvo Love relationship? I stan for friendship... More than relationship...

Ee oru situation Felixum Jungkook um thamil ayirunalo?
Ohh intensity bhayangaram ayirikkum... The alpha king um mafia bossum

Ahh come back to our story...

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Jinnike classile irikane pattunilla cause Monide face full blood ayirunnu... Scars  (aa pic kittiyilla)
D.O : dd nee okay alle?
Jinnie : eanike ippo Moniye kannanam..
D.O : anake eanna nosse Anno? Nadakkilla classa...
Jinnie : Eanike poye pattu... And she got out the class without permission to dance.. I mean permission..

And she rans to dressing room...
Avide chennapo Jaison was cleaning Monie's fresh wound...
Monie : ahh pathiye..
Jaison : Vella avishyavum indayiruno?
Monie sighs and looks at the door way..and he saw her..
Jinnie with tearful eyes stares at Namjoon...
Jaison thirinje nokkipo Jinnie... And stood up... Cause senior da..

Jinnie wolk to him
Jinnie : nee poyiko njn nokkikolam
Jaison : Ahh chechi Inna.....
And he gave that medicine to her ..
Monie : Venda jaisonchettan cheytha mathi..
Jinnie : Jaisa nee poyiko... And he got out ee timile Jinnie poyi door lock cheythu...

Jinnie turns to Monie and moves near him.. And sat near him..
Jinnie took some cotton and dip it on dettol and starts to clean the wound..
Dettolinitte smell kittiyo Georgeatta?

Joonie hesitantly looks away..
Jinnie : anangathe irike...
Monie : Njan cheytholam.. Inge thanneke ... Chechi poyiko..
Jinnie : Monie--..
Monie : Chechi poyiko... I am sorry avane at least onne ariyichirunegil ningale Brotherum sisterum anne..
Njn orikalum ninne-- alla chechiye ingane.. I am sorry..
Jinnie : Appo Ninake eanne istamale?
Monie : chechi athe okke kazhinju... I am no--nee povano?
Jinnie cut off Monie..
Monie : ehh??
Jinnie : eanna drop out cheyune?
Monie : Mm.. nale kazhinje
Jinnie : mm..(still cleaning his wound) ...

Monie stares at Jinnie's face ...
Avake oru expressionumilla..
Monie : Mare... Njan cheytholam..
Jinnie Monide kayi thatti matti..
After cleaning his fresh wound ..
Jinnie cup his face..
Monie hesitantly looks away from her
Jinnie looks at Monie one last time..
Jinnie : good-bye.. I am gonna miss you.. and kissed on his forehead.
Monie : *he really wanna cry but... Ego .. ithrayum velya oru sathyam rehasyam marache vechile?*

At least Georgettane eangillum paranje kodukayirunnu...
Georgettan onne oucha vechirunegil onne alari karanjirunengil Monie unarnene...

Ippo eandhoru aswasam...
Namjin thalli pirichu..
Sope adiche pirichu .
Markson theche pirichu..
Inni aa English kariyeyum Georgeattaneyum... My next target...

Namjoon anne vayikitte collegine nere veetileke poyii
Avide ee chapter therne...

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Eangane inde??

Vote cheytho Georgettaa?
Eanike exams varuvane pinneyum ..
Njn savane povanee... Maduthe ee Jeevitham..  exam eazhuthi pottan eantte jeevitham veedum bakki...

Ahhh eanna sheri
Tata...

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