Rewrite the Stars (Completed)

By priyapariyaar

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One of the hardest decision in life is to choose between love and family.... N Shiva has to make that decisi... More

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prologue
mission joote - churao/bachao!
who will win??
jeet gaya hum!!!!!
shadi ki baat
planing
rumours
new feelings
ride
mission vicky!!!!
plan successful or flop??
care in the first step in love
tujhe kabse meri chinta hone lagi??
checking chemistry
fever!!!
dream !!
ignore
anniversary
celebration
closer
shiva with other girl
realising my feeling
shiva ko bachana
kya chal raha hai??
what am i feeling??
its 'IT' what i m thinking??
is it love???
Am I in LOVE????
yes i m in love
confession
ShiVi โค
godhbharai
truth or dare
shadi ki baat
pandya parivaar ki bahu??
raavi outbrust
saathi rey thoda thehar ja
humari adhuri kahani
tujhe kitna chaahein lage hum
REWRITE THE STARS
pehle pyaar ka pehla gham
duniya yeh jeeti gayi, dil har gaya
ranjha
Dev-raavi ki shadi ho gayi ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿ˜ญ
sara jag chad ke bas tenu hi hai chuneya
shadi nahi karna
epilogue
new story

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By priyapariyaar

Shiva pov

Everyone left us alone....

Raavi didn't even look at me.... She simply turn back...

My heart was paining seeing her...

Raavi ne sach hi kaha hai ki meine usse sirf aur sirf dard diya hai........ Itna bara gadhera kaise ho sakta hoon mein.... Yeh ladki mere liye apni puri life kurbaan kar rahi thi aur meine kya kiya... Phir se usse hurt karne wala tha... Phir se Chod kar jana wala tha... Raavi bilkul theek bol rahi hai ki mujhe bhaagne ke alawa kuch nahi aata... Pad aab aur nahi raavi mein apni galti correct karunga..... Bohot hurt kiya hai na meine tujhe.... Abb tujhe duniya baar hi khushiyaan dene ki zimmedaari meri!!!!!

As I come out of my  thoughts.... I heard her crying...

Raavi - shiva...... Chala... Ja.... Yaha.... Se!!!! (Sobbing)

My heart pain seeing her in this state...

I went near her..... N gave her a back hug ...

Shiva - nahi jaunga!!!! (Softly)

Raavi kept sobbing..... We both needed each other..... We both needed to comfort each other.... We stay in that position for few minutes completely silent .... Closing our eyes n drowning in that moment

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Shiva - I.. M... Sorry !!! (Softly)

Tears started rolling down my cheeks

Shiva - I m really sorry..... Mein janta hoon meine tujhe bohot zyada hurt kiya hai... Tera dil dukhaya hai, tujhe rulaya hai.... But mera vishwas kar raavi tujhe chot dekar mujhe khushi nahi hui.... Mujhe tujh se bhi zyada dard hua hai jab jab meine tujhe apne se dur kiya.... Jab jab tujhe ignore kiya, jab jab tujhe rulaya hai... Mein bhi roya hoon (broken voice) .... I know meri baaton mein vishwas karna bohot hard hai... Meine tujhe choda tha, tujhse apna rishta thoda tha... Tere itne kehne ke baat bhi teri baat nahi mani....  Mera koi reason mere actions justified nahi kar sakte.....I m really sorry..... Please mujhe maaf karde.... Please!!!!!! (Crying)

I completely broke down n continue crying.....

Raavi - shiva tu aisa kyu karta hai!!!! (Broken voice)

Raavi took a deep breath

Raavi - tu aisa kyu karta hai.... Kyu pehle itna chot deta hai aur phir maafi mang leta hai !!! (Hurt) .....

She look back n our eyes met ....

Raavi - shiva chod mujhe !!!!

Shiva - nahi!!!!

I back hug her more tightly

Raavi - shiva meine kaha na ki chod!!! (Sternly)

Shiva - nahi raavi....!!!! (Broken voice)

She look at me in disbelief

Raavi - jab mat chod bolti hoon tab Tu chod deta hai aur jab chodne ko bolu tho kyu nahi chodta  !!!! (Crying)

I broke the hug n made her face me n cupped her cheeks

Shiva - pehle chod kar bohot bari galti kar di thi pad abb nahi.... Abb mein tujhe apne aap se dur nahi jane dunga...!!! (Wipping her tears)

She look at me..... Tears were rolling down her cheeks...

I hold her hand n made her sit on the bed..... I kneel down.... I wiped her tears n entangled our fingers

Shiva - raavi I know  meri yeh bewakoofi ka koi justification nahi hai.. Mein chahe kitne bhi reasons de do lekin sach nahi badlega ki meine tujhe hurt kiya hai... Tere vishwas ke saath khela hai... Tujhe pehle shadi ka wada kiya aur phir rishta thod diya... Tune sahi bola meine tujhe maar diya tah.... Mein world ka worst boyfriend hoon.... Mujhe tere Sare ilzaam  manzoor hai !!! Manta hoon bohot rulaya hai meine tujhe..... I m sorry.... Please maaf karde

Tears started falling down.... Raavi wiped my tears

Shiva - bohot bura hoon na mein?? (Softly)

She cutely nodded

Shiva - bohot hurt kiya hai na meine tujhe?? (Softly)

She nodded

Shiva - tu jo bhi saza degi mujhe manzoor hai  !!!!

I look straight into her eyes..... We both shared an intense eye lock

Shiva - I know meine kaafi promise thode hai... Aur sayad aap Tu mujh par believe bhi nahi karegi.... Pad mein tujhe abhi isse time wada karta you will be my first priority as my family is..... Aur abb mein tujhe kabhi hurt nahi karunga... !!!

Raavi - mujhe gale laga sakta hai !!!! (Softly)

I immediately hug her..... She started crying ...... My tears too fell down....

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Raavi - (breaking the hug) shiva !!!! (Softly)

I tuck her hairs behind her ears.....

Raavi - I m sorry!!!! (Softly)

I looked at her

Raavi - mein apne dard mein itni kho gayi ki mujhe tera dard dikha hi nahi.... Ki tu bhi utna hi dard se suffer kar raha hai jis dard se mein kar rahi hoon... I m also sorry.... (Holding her ears)

She was looking so cute..... Her pout.... Oh gosh!!! I just wish to kiss it!!!

I gave her a small peck..... She hug me!!!

Shiva - I love you!!!!

Raavi - I love you more!!!!

Shiva - aap toh shadi karegi

Raavi - aur koi option hai mere pass!!

I chuckle n broke the hug

Shiva - bilkul nahi!!!! (Chuckle)

Raavi - chal theek hai... Tu bhi kya yaad rakhega.....!! (Laughing)

Shiva - acha ji!!! (Teasingly)

Raavi - of course..... Somnath ki sabse sundar ladki se jo shadi hone wali hai!!! (Teasingly)

Shiva - tujhe toh mein!!! (Playfully)

Raavi started running around the room n I was cashing her

Shiva - chipkali rukh!!! (Playfully)

Raavi - pakar ke dikha bhoothnath!!! (Playfully)

She was climbing the bed, running here n there.... N I was just trying to catch her.... Finally I give up..... N sat down on bed.... she too got tired n sat down..... We both were breathing heavily.....

We look at each other  n fall down laughing.... Thank God bed was soft nahi toh aaj kamar toot jani thi!!!

We both entangled our fingers ... We were just quiet n were enjoying each other comfort

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Raavi - agar next time aisa kiya toh danda pandya se mar dungi!!!! (Smirking)

(This line for my friend Dynamitelife because danda pandya toh unka hai 😉😉)

Shiva - next time toh tu meri biwi nan jayegi.... Aur chipakti rahegi.... Kaise chutkara milega mujhe!!! (Dramatically)

She hit my chest

Shiva - ouch!!!! Dheere se!! (Rubbing my chest)

Raavi - chutkara ki toh baad hi mat kar.... Chutkara toh mil ne se nahi raha.... Pad hai chipak sakti hoon!!! (Smiling)

She gave me a side hug.... I held her waist protectively

Shiva - so mrs raavi Shiva pandya chale mandap mein shadi karne ke liye !!! (Smirking)

She blushes

Raavi - ha chal!!! (Blushing)

We both stood n went down holding hands

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov

As we reach down stairs.... All look at us shockingly... All the family members came to us

Suman- inka chehra dekhkar toh aisa lagta hai ki sula ho gayi hai!!...kyu ho gayi na !!!!(Teasingly)

We shyly nodded

Dhara - raavi......(with watery eyes)

Suman maa interrupted her

Suman -  oi bhagodi ki beti... Aaj ke liye itna drama theek hai.... Tera drama kal continue karna!!! (Sarcastically)

We all laugh.. Dhara di nodded

Suman - already bohot drama ho chuka hai.... Abb bass mujhe shanti se yeh shadi chahiye!!!

I look at masi maa n masa paa

Suman - raavi beta unke kyu dekh rahi hai.... Unhe koi problem nahi hai.... Kyu jagat tujhe koi problem hai!!! (Masa nodded no) aur prafulla tujhe koi problem hai Shiva ko apna damat banane mein?? (Teasingly)

Masi came near me n took me for a side hug

Prafulla- mujhe bass meri beti ki khushiyaan chahiye..... Aur uski khushi Shiva mein hain..... Mujhe koi problem nahi hai!!! (Smiling)

Shiva - soch reh mami damat banuga tera.... Chalega tujhe!!! (Sarcastically)

Prafulla - chal jayega... Agar Tu damat banega toh mein bhi toh saas banugi na... Chalega tujhe!!! (Sarcastically)

Both look each other n roll their eyes.... We all laugh looking at them

Masi aur Shiva kabhi nahi badal sakte!! 🤭

All were very happy..... They all came n hug us....

Suman - toh phir abb kisko bhi problem nahi hai na!!!

All nodded no ..... Shiva n me were looking at dev

Dev - maa ne kya bola ki abb koi drama nahi chahiye.... Aap tum dono mujhe aisa dekhna ban karo.... Mein bohot khush hoon!!! (Happily)

We both smile.... Thought he knew that he was hurt but still he was trying to be happy for us n we were happy

Suman - toh phir abb shadi kara dete hai!!! (Excitingly)

Dhara - maa.....

Suman - aap kya hua??? (Irritatingly)

Dhara - raavi aur Shiva ko taiyaar toh karne dijiye.... Yeh dono ka chehra dekhiye ro ro kar kya haal bana diya hai!!! (Chuckle)

Suman maa look at us....

Suman - ha tu theek bol rahi hai.... Pad kya karu... Mujhe itni khushi ho rahi hai ki mein wait hi nahi kar sakti.... Mera Shiva ghar bahu lekar aa raha hai!!! (Excitingly)

Shiva n i look at maa n smile.... She looks too excited.... More excited than even us

Jagat - anita tu raavi ko jakar ready kar de

Gautam - tu humare saath chal!!! (Smiling)

Anita di took me to the room n Shiva went with gombi n others..

Anokhi, sai, reema n Anita di were continuously teasing me.... N I was blushing like anything

Finally mein aaj meri shadi hai!!!!!!

I was getting very excited to start a new life with Shiva.... Finally I will be marrying him.... Finally hum dono ek honge... I was really excited

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov

Finally aaj hum ek honge!!!!

I was excitingly waiting for raavi in the mandap.... I just couldn't believe that I was getting married with her.... Like seriously we were getting married..... This was something no one has expected.... Two dushman getting married.... It sounded filmy but our love story was actually filmy ... Pehle heroine ko pyaar hua... Pad hero ko nahi hua.... Aur jab hero ko pyaar hua tab hero ke bhai ko bhi pyaar ho gayi... Phir kya sacrifice phase hua... Dil toota dard hua.... Aur phir achanak se shadi ke din sab ko pata chal gaya aur shadi hero n heroine ho gayi..... Filmy!!!! Bilkul jaise raavi ko pasand hai..... But I m sure aap usse filmy story pasand nahi hai  🤭🤭

As I came out of my thoughts..... I saw her coming.....

My heart skipped a beat.... She looks gorgeous..... Finally abb woh shiva ki dulhan lag rahi hai.... I just couldn't take off my eyes from her

All were teasing me like hell... But my eyes were stick on her

She came n sat beside me 

Raavi - kaisi lag rahi hoon !!! (Excitingly)

Shiva - pataka (winking)

Raavi - Shiva..... !!! (Blushing)

Shiva - aur nahi toh kya.... Pataka dikh rahi hai tu aaj!!! (Teasingly)

Raavi - tu bhi na!!! (Blushing)

Krish - romance baat mein karna... Abhi shadi mein focus karo!!! (Teasingly)

We both blushed!!!!

Pandit ji started the puja

First was the varmala ,  pandit ji instructions us to stand up n put the varmala n so both of us stood up n put the varmala on each other...

Dev n krish pull me up

Dev - itni asani se nahi!!! (Laughing)

Krish -  raavi bhabhi how will u put now!!!! (Laughing)

Raavi made a cut pout .... I laugh at her....

Isn't she the cutest!!!!!

Hardik bhai n gombi pull raavi up

Hardik - itni aasani se nahi...!!! (Laughing)

Gombi - hum hai na raavi ke saath !!! (Chuckle)

Krish - gombi aap raavi bhabhi ke side!!! (Surprise)

Gautam - ha bhai hoon mein uska (chuckle)

Hardik - aur mein jiju!! (Smiling)

Shiva - gombi aap mere bhai nahi ho kya!!! (Emotionally)

Raavi - hai na tere do bhai (looking at dev and krish) ... Gombi mein bare bhai hai!!! Haina gombi??(Smiling)

Gombi nodded

Dhara - Shiva chod na.... Chal abb tum varmala ki rasam karo !! (Smiling)

we nodded put varmala on each other

N then pandit ji chanted some mantra

Pandit - abb  kanyadaan ke liye aage aaye!!!

Then mama n mami came .... They were emotional

Jagat - apni jaan de raha hoon  ..... Usko sambhal ke rakhna!!! (Emotionally)

Prafulla- pata hai... Lekin phir nhi bol rahi hoon raavi ko duniya baar ka pyaar dena!!! (Caring our cheeks)

I nodded

N then anita di came to do the gathbandhan

Anita - bhagwaan tum dono ki khushiyaan aise hi banai rakhe!!! (Smiling)

We smile

N then we both stood for saat phere .... I gave her my hand n she hold it.... With  every phera I promise myself that I will give raavi all the love n care that she  deserves.... I will never ever leave her.... Will never make her cry.... Life mein kitni problem aaye pad uska saath mein kabhi nahi chodunga!!! I PROMISE TO LOVE HER FOREVER N EVER!!!

After completing the phera..... We sat down n now it was time for the last but most important ritual

pandit ji gave the mangalsutra

Pandit - kanya ko mangalsutra pehnaye

I took the mangalsutra n put it in her neck..... While I was putting the mangalsutra raavi was looking at me with so much love... Her eyes were watery so were mine!!!!

Then pandit ji handed me the sindoor

As I put the sindoor she closes her eyes n some sindoor fell on her nose

Suman - iska matlab humara shiva raavi se bohot pyaar karta hai!!! (Smiling)

All smile...... Raavi open her eyes n look at me.... I could see thousands of emotions in her eyes.... We both didn't care about the people we kept looking at each other eyes

Pandit - aaj se aap dono pati aur patni ho gaye hai..... Abb baro ko ashirwaad lijiye!!!

Then we both stood up n took blessing of everyone

Finally now we were officially husband n wife......  We officially became #ShiVi .

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov

All the post marriage rituals were completed... Dhara  di told me to rest in the room

As I enter the room.... I felt so good.... I actually feel like I have the authority over this room n also the owner of this room.... I chuckle remembering my initials days when I actually design this room according to my taste... Because I knew that this was gonna be mine one day.... N today was the day.... Kitni pagal thi na mein!!! 🤭🤭

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I was standing near the window , I heard the door open.... I knew shiva has enter..... He came n gave me a back hug


Raavi - aa gaya tu!!! (Smiling)

Shiva - ha finally krish aur maa ka teasing session katam ho gaya!!! (Smiling)

I chuckle ..... N look at the sky

Shiva - kya soch rahi hai???

Shiva kiss my shoulders .... I closed my eyes feeling his lips

Raavi - dekh na itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi hum dono mil gaye... Iska matlab kya hai pata hai??(Smiling)

Shiva - ki Tu aur mein made for each other hai!!! (Smiling)

I broke the hug n look at him

Raavi - aur tujhe laga ki Tu mere liye perfect nahi hai....!!! (Making a pout)

Shiva kiss my pout  ..... I  was  shocked... I shyly look at him

Shiva - bola na ki gadhera hoon.!!! (Whispering in my ears)

Shiva hot breath was making me go down on my knees

Raavi - Shiva.... Woh...!!! (Nervously)

Shiva - woh kya??? (Smirking)

Raavi - woh... Woh....

Shiva was distracting me by kissing my forehead, my eyes... My nose... My cheeks....

Oh gosh....!!!!! This boy 🙈

Shiva - ha bol mein sun raha hoon!!! (Teasingly)

Raavi - woh.... Woh!!!! (Nervously)

Shiva - I love you!!!! (Whispering in my ears)

I smile

Raavi - I love u too!!! (Smiling)

I tightly hug him......

Finally I got my happiness.... Finally we rewrote the stars..... We rewrote our stars!!!

Raavi pov end

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Two souls were mending.... But what about the one soul... Shiva aur raavi ko toh apna pyaar mil gaya.... Love was lucky for them ... But what about dev.... Was love so cruel with him??

Dev pov

Life gave me a pain which was unbearable for me..... The girl whom I loved was now my sister - in law..... How can love be so cruel with me?? Why do I had to loved raavi when she was not in my fate??

I can't blame any one than me..... Shiva was gonna sacrifice his love for me.... N raavi was gonna sacrifice her entire life for her love!!!!!  Do I even had the right to blame anyone?? No na!!!!! It was a love triangle.... Aur love triangle mein third angle ka humesha dil toota hai... N I was the third angle in their love story

Chahe kitna bhi strong kyu na dikha do dard toh mujhe bhi hua tha jab Shiva aur raavi ki shadi ho rahi thi.... Dil toh mera bhi toota jab Shiva ne raavi ko mangalsutra aur sindoor pehnaya.... Dard toh mujhe bhi hua tha unke Sare rasam dekh raha tha .... Mein bohot khush tha ki mere bhai ko uska pyaar mil gaya.... Shiva ne mere liye bohot kiya hai, usse khush dekhkar mein bhi bohot khush tha... Pad raavi... Jab bhi raavi ke aur dekhta tha... Dil mera toot jata tha.... Un dono ko saath dekhkar dard hota tha....

Bohot try kiya pad nahi hua.... Isliye mein gombi ko bol diya ki mein aaj raat hi rajkot jaunga..... Jo ticket Shiva ne kud ke liye booked kiya tah.... Woh ticket sayad meri kismat mein tha...

No one in the family stopped me.... Meine unhe saaf saaf bol diya tah ki I wanted some peace..... Raavi n Shiva don't know about this , I didn't want them to feel guilty.... N so when both of them went to their room.... I told everyone about this....

N so here I m in bus station waiting for the bus.....

A long tear roll down my cheeks

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As I was talking with bhabhi..... Someone came running n hit me

I turn around..... And saw a girl heavily breathing....

She was in her wedding lehenga .. She was sobbing!!!!

I look at her for a moment.....

Dev- bhabhi mein baad mein call karta hoon

I cut the call

N took out my water bottle n offered to her

She took the bottle n drunk the water in one go....

I looked at her with wide eyes.... Seems like she has really run alot

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After drinking the water.... She calm herself .... She gave me the bottle

Girl - thank u!!! (Smiling)

Her smile was cute....

Girl- hi!!! (Smiling)

Dev - hello!!!! (Smiling)

There was awkward silent for some minutes.... I broke the silent

Dev - yeh sab..... (Nervously)

Girl - kya??? (Suspiciously)

Dev - shadi ka lehenga!!!!! (Nervously)

Girl - oo... Yeh.... Woh shadi se bhaag kar aayi hoon na isliye!!! (Chuckle)

I gasped.....

Run away bride!!!!

I was shocked.... I never expected that I will face this type of accident.... Since it was the first time... I was getting curious

Dev - shadi se kyu bhaag gayi??? (Curiously)

She look at me with wide eyes

Oh dev.... Akal kya ghas charne gayi hai kya.... Ek stranger se itna personal sawal kyu puch raha hai!!!!! Idiot!!!!

The girl sat down on the bench.... She look beside ... Pointing to sit down.... I sat down

Girl - suru se shuruwat karte hai (smiling) ....

She forwarded her hand.... We shake hands

Girl - Hi my name is rishita!!! (Smiling)

Nice name

Dev - Hi I m dev!!! (Smiling)

Rishita - so tum soch rahe hoon na ki mein yaha aise shadi ke lehenge mein kya kar rahi hoon... Aur apne shadi se kyu bhaagi!!! (Smiling)

I Curiously nodded

Rishita - so basically mere dad meri shadi forcefully apne business partner ke bete ke saath karwana chahte teh.... Pad mein uss ladke se pyaar nahi karti.... Abb tum hi kaho kya aisi shadi karni chahiye jismein pyaar na ho aur sirf compromise ho!!!

I nodded no

This was exactly gonna happen if aaj meri shadi ho jati!!!!

Rishita - meine dad ko kitna kaha ki I don't wanna get married pad dad hai ki maan hi nahi rahe teh... Isliye mein bhaag gayi....!!!!

I look at her for some second  ..... Not knowing what to say

Rishita - tum bhi shadi se bhaag gaye ho kya!!! (Chuckle)

I was shocked .... What is she telling

I realised that I was still in sherwani

Rishita - ya phir dulhan meri Tara bhaag gayi!! (Laughing)

I become sad remembering that moment..... My eyes became watery

Rishita - sorry sorry.... Mujhe yeh nahi bolna chahiye tha.... I m really sorry!!! (Guilty)... Tum please mat ro please!!! (Pleading) .... Kya hua??

Dev -  kuch nahi!!! (Wiping my tears)

Rishita - kuch toh hua hai.... U know sometimes na stranger understand u better then ur close one.... Batao mujhe...  Dekho meine bhi tumhe trust karke bataya na..... Share karne se aram milta hai..... Aur Who knows I might help u !!! (Smiling)

At first I didn't wanted to open up but then it was getting very hard....  N so I told her everything

Dev - so hua yeh ki............

I told her everything.... From the starting till ending... As I was sharing her, we both were in tears..... After finishing.... She gave me a hug

Rishita - u are very strong!!!! (Softly)

I was now at relief.... Atleast I share my pain with someone... Thought we didn't knew each other but till her presence was giving me comfort

Rishita - ek baat batao.... U did a right thing by leaving..... Unhe bhi guilty feel nahi hoga aur tumhe bhi dard nahi hoga.... !!! (Smiling)

I smile back

Rishita - waise kaha ja rahe hoon??

Dev - rajkot.... Store ke kam se!!! Aur tum batao.... Tum kaha jaungi abb??

Rishita - mein thode din ke liye apne friends ke saath rahungi phir aage dekhte hai!!!

Dev - agar tumare papa ko pata chal gaya toh!!! (Worried)

Rishita - u dont worry... Mere friends abhi aate hi honge..... Uske baad hum somnath se chale jayenge!! (Smiling)

Suddenly a jeep came....

Rishita - lo aayege mere friends!!! (Excitingly)

Girl 1- rish!!!!! (Smiling)

Rishita went n hug them..... They  exchange some hugs n laugher.... I just kept looking at them

Boy 1- yeh ladka kon hai rish!!!

Rishita - yeh.... (Looking at me) ... Yeh Mr stranger!!! (Smiling)

Girl 1- mr stranger!!! (Confused)

Girl 2- guys baatein katma karo.... Rish humein nikal na hoga before tere dad aaya pad aa jaye!!! (Fearfully)

Rishita - oo.. Ya!!!

Rishita  took her bag

Rishita - hi mr stranger nice to meet u....  (Smiling)

Then she suddenly hug me... I was shocked

Rishita - u are very strong!!! (Whispering )

I smile

Rishita - (breaking) agar kismat mein hua toh hum dubara zaroor milenge... Bye!!! (Smiling)

Dev - bye!! (Smiling)

All her friends n she waved at me.... I waved them too

Rishita - take care mr stranger!! (Excitingly)

N then left

Run away bride!!!

Soon my bus came n I sat inside....

Dev pov end

The journey started from can we rewrite the stars ??? n ended with rewrote the stars

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That's it.... The end

Finally done with this one too.....

Finally abb thoda light feel hi raha hai... I m so happy that this is ending 😅😂

I have to write an epilogue which I will publish on Saturday

So the reason behind this story is... One day I was just washing the dishes and listening to rewrite the stars song aur yeh love triangle ka idea mere dimag mein aa gaya.... Funny na... But true... Meine yeh plan nahi kiya bass bartan dho rahi thi tab achanak se idea aa gaya toh phir kya shivi ke upar likh diya .... 🤭🤣🤣... Aur naam bhi Rewrite the stars Hi likh diya

I hope u all like this one too.... Aur bohot sara pyaar dene ke liye dil se thank u..... Ur votes n ur comments keep encouraging me to come up  with better tracks or better story line

N ya I m taking a break from writing..... Honestly le bhi sakti hoon aur nahi bhi... Abhi kuch fix nahi hain... One of my friend have already suggested me a plot.... Let see how it works

But mujhe abb likhna nahi padhna hai.... So please guys if there are shivi writers who are reading this ff please stories likho please.... Aur ha mujhe tag karna... Mujhe naye stories milte hi nahi 🙃🙃

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