Rewrite the Stars (Completed)

By priyapariyaar

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One of the hardest decision in life is to choose between love and family.... N Shiva has to make that decisi... More

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prologue
mission joote - churao/bachao!
who will win??
jeet gaya hum!!!!!
shadi ki baat
planing
rumours
new feelings
ride
mission vicky!!!!
plan successful or flop??
care in the first step in love
tujhe kabse meri chinta hone lagi??
checking chemistry
fever!!!
dream !!
ignore
anniversary
celebration
closer
shiva with other girl
realising my feeling
shiva ko bachana
kya chal raha hai??
what am i feeling??
its 'IT' what i m thinking??
is it love???
Am I in LOVE????
yes i m in love
confession
ShiVi ❀
godhbharai
truth or dare
shadi ki baat
pandya parivaar ki bahu??
raavi outbrust
saathi rey thoda thehar ja
humari adhuri kahani
tujhe kitna chaahein lage hum
REWRITE THE STARS
pehle pyaar ka pehla gham
duniya yeh jeeti gayi, dil har gaya
ranjha
Dev-raavi ki shadi ho gayi πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜­
sara jag chad ke bas tenu hi hai chuneya
iktara
epilogue
new story

shadi nahi karna

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By priyapariyaar

Raavi pov

I didn't knew how to react.... Everything was so sudden.... I never thought ki aisa kuch ho jayega... Anokhi will read the letter n give it to dev... I though aaj sab katam ho jayega pad nahi.......

I was very shocked to even react .... My world was completely up side down.....The only  person whom I needed right now was with me.... I was in his embrace... Hugging him tightly.... Abb mein usse kahi nahi jane dungi...!!!

I was feeling relief in his embrace... I didn't want to leave him.... But then sab log aa gaye teh... I half heartedly broke the hug

Prafulla - raavi..... (With watery eyes)

Masi maa hug me tightly!!!!

She didn't speak anything... She was just hugging me..... Masa paa caresses my hair

Jagat - itna sab kuch ho gaya aur tune apne masa paa ko bhi nahi kaha!!! (Broken voice)

I broke my hug with masi n hug masa paa n started crying

Masa - itna kuch kud akele sehti rahi !! (Guiltily)

I didn't reply..... I just wanted to be silent... I just wanted the comfort !!!!

Masa paa n masi maa were comforting me.... Caressing my hair n cheeks

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Dev - raavi

Dev came near me

Dev - I m really sorry... I know yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai... Meine tumse bina puche yeh shadi fix karwayi.... Tumari feeling janne ki bhi koshish nahi ki....Shiva ne tumhe mere karan choda... Tum dono ko itna kuch sehna pade becoz of me ... I m very sorry but trust me mujhe in  sab ka koi idea nahi tha... Agar mujhe pata hota ki tum dono date kar rahe hoon mein tum dono ke bich kabhi nahi aata... Pad unintentionally bhi mein tum dono ke bich aa gaya.... I m really sorry!!!! (Guiltily)

I was just staring at him.... No words were forming in my mouth.... I know ismein dev ki koi galti nahi hai.... But still the heart break that I have suffered all this passed days were very painful.. N somehow or the other dev was the main reason.... I just nodded to him

Prafulla - humein bhi maaf karde raavi... Tujhe humne ek baar bhi nahi pucha ki tu kya chahti hai... Ki tu yeh rishte se khush hai ki nahi.... Humein maaf karde!!! (Crying)

I just wiped her eyes

Raavi - apki galti nahi hai masi maa!!! (Softly)

Jagat - nahi raavi galti humari hai... Humein tujhse puchna chahiye tha... Mein apni behan ke saath rishta jodne ki khushi mein itna kho gaya ki mein tera udas chehra hi nahi dekha!!! (Guilty)

I nodded a no

Dhara - sabse bari galti meri hai raavi... Meine socha ki tu dev se pyaar karti hai isliye hum yaha rishta lekar aa gaye.... Mein teri bari behan teri di hone ke baad bhi teri dil ki baat nahi samajh saki... Mujhe tujhse baat karni chahiye thi... Tere dil ka haal janna chahiye tha lekin meine woh bhi nahi kiya.... Directly conclusion mein aa gayi ki tu dev se pyaar karti hai... I m sorry... Maaf karde apne dhara di ko please!!! (Crying)

I wiped her tears

Raavi - dhara di please mat ro please.... Galti aap logo ki nahi hai...!!! (Softly)

I was feeling a little better now

All gave me a guilty look.... But i was just looking at that one face....

Shiva!!!!

Gautam look at us n told

Gautam - shiva toh pagal hai ki... Pad Tu raavi atleast tujhe toh batana chahiye tha na!!! (Calmly)

Dhara - yeh Shiva toh hai ki gadhera... Parivaar ke liye apne khushi sacrifice karne ja raha tha.... Pad isse kon samjhaye ki iski khushi hi humari khushi hai!!!!

(Author pov - jhoothi kahi ki.... Agar pandya family ki khushi Shiva ki khushi hui hoti toh uss din parle aa jayega.... Woh toh dialogue required tha isliye likh diya)

I kept looking at shiva..... What the hell this idiot is not even speaking a word.... Abhi bhi mujhe hi bola padega 😒😒

Raavi - kaise batati dhara di, gombi is shiva ne mujhe kasam de diya tha ... Isne mujhe kaha ki agar meine kisko bata diya tho yeh somnath chod kar chala jayega aur kabhi wapas nahi aayega!!! Toh aap hi batao mein kya karti.... Pehle isne mujhe kaha ki mein shadi kar lu.... Isne mujhe apni kasam di... Aur jab meine mana kiya tho mujhse baat karna ban kar diya... Mujhe ignore karna start kar diya!!! (Broken voice)

All look at shiva with disbelief

Shiva - woh.... Mein.... Woh

Krish- isliye tu bhaag raha tha... Isliye tune gombi ko bol kar aaj ka hi ticket karwaya na!!!!

Krish spoke.... I was shocked... This was something I didn't knew.... Was he really leaving me ?? Was he breaking his one more promised ??

All were angrily looking at krish whereas I was looking at shiva with disbelief

Raavi - Tu... Somnath ....chod....kar....ja raha tha....!!!! (Shockingly)

I was broken..... He broke me yet again

I went towards him n held his collar.... N started crying

Raavi - Tu mujhe phir se chod kar ja raha tha shiva (crying) .... Tu... Tu mere saath aisa kaise kar sakta hai... Itna dard kaise de sakta hai!!! (Angrily crying) .... Meine humare rishte ki sachai kisiko nahi bataya kyuki mein nahi chahti thi ki tu Somnath se chala jaye.... Mujhe tere saath rehna tha idiot!!! (Angrily shouting) .... Tu itna heartless kaise ho sakta hai... Tu mujhe phir se chod kar ja raha tha... Tu phir se apna promise thod ne wala tah !!! (Crying)

I lost it.... He broke me ones again.... I just say yes to this wedding because I didn't want him  to leave me n go but this idiot was thinking of going . . . That too tonight itself .... I just wanted to kill him

Gautam - nahi raavi.. Woh toh rajkot ka kuch kam aa gaya isliye.... (Nervously)

I knew gombi was covering up for shiva . ... I m sure this idiot was on the verge of running

Raavi - gombi aap isse cover up mat karo... Mein janti hoon ki yeh bhaag ne wala tha... !!! (Angrily looking at shiva)

All look at me

Raavi - bhaagne ke alawa aata bhi kya hai isse!!! (Angrily)

I left his collar n sat down on the bed...

No one dare to utter a word... The situation was getting worst

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Suman kaki came near me

Suman - mein janti hoon ki shiva ne tujhe bohot dard diya hai.... Tera dil dukhaya hai .... (She hold my hand) pad dil toh shiva ka bhi dukha hoga na !!! (Calmly)

I look at her.... N then shiva... Shiva eyes were teary

Suman - shiva na apka maan sabke samne khol nahi pata.... Chahe kitna bhi dard mein kyu na ho... Apne parivaar ke liye humesha muskurata hai... Aur yeh baat tujhe better koi janta hai kya (calmly)

I nodded.... I knew shiva is a very reserved person.... He in an introvert!!! Woh sayad chahe kitni bari problem mein kyu na hi pad kabhi bhi humein  pata kar pareshan nahi karta

Suman - mein shiva ki side nahi le rahi raavi... Pad usne bhi toh bohot kuch saha hai na.. Apne aankhon ke samne apne pyaar ko kisi aur ka hote hue dekh kar kon nahi tootega.... Kise dard nahi hoga... Usne jab jab tujhe aur dev ko saath mein dekha hai.. Mein pure dave ke sath keh sakti hoon ki tab tab woh mara hoga.... Mein yeh bhi nahi keh rahi ki shiva sahi hai... Bilkul nahi, usne tujhe dard diya.... Tujhe yeh shadi karne ke liye mazboor kiya pad raavi.... Shiva bhi toota hai, usse bhi dard hua hai... Tum dono hi dard mein teh woh alak baat hai ki tu apna dard bayan kar rahi thi... Gusse mein hi sahi lekin tune shiva se apni narazgi batayi.... Pad shiva, mein janti hoon usne kuch nahi  kaha hoga.... Usne apna sara dard apne andar hi rakha hoga...!! (With watery eyes)

We all look at shiva ..... He put his head down.... Oh!!!! I so wanted to go n hug him but then......

Raavi - pad kaki usne mujhe chod diya tha... Meine bola ki hum ek baar aap logo se baat karke dekhte hai.. Lekin yeh nahi mana!! (Softly)

Suman - uss time shiva ko woh sahi laga hoga... !!! (Softly)

I was just blank out..... I didn't knew how to react ...

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Dhara - aap kya faisla hai tera raavi!!!!

After kaki kept her point.... Everybody started giving their opinions.... I was so done for the day... I told them that I needed some time to clear up my mind....

After that everyone kept quiet

Dhara - Tu shiva se shadi karegi na?? (Calmly)

Raavi - nahi!!!!

All look at me shockingly...... I m sure they didn't accept this answer.... Shiva too gave me a shockingly look

Prafulla - matlab??? (Worried)

Raavi - jo ladka mujhe aise chod sakta hai... Woh aage chodne mein bhi hichkichayega  nahi ...

My eyes become watery.... I control my tears n spoke

Raavi - Meine shiva ko kabhi force nahi kiya ki woh mujhe first priority mein rakhe... Meine yeh nahi kaha ki tu apne parivaar ko chode... I know usne jo bhi kiya parivaar ke liye.... Pad mera kya... Usne mere bare mein nahi socha ... I agree kaki ki shiva ne bhi suffer kiya hai... Pad agar woh chup nahi hota toh yeh sab nahi hota... Usne mujhe promise kiya ki shadi karega... Uske do din baad yeh usne rishta thod tha ... Mujhe baat thak bhi nahi karne diya... Kud hi rishta thod diya... Meine usse kitna kaha ki mein uske bina mar jaungi pad nahi... Isne meri baat nahi mani.... Mujhe jo hurt kiya hai na isne... Mein isse kabhi maaf nahi kar paungi....!!! (Crying) ... Agar aaj dev yeh letter nahi dekhta hota toh shadi toh ho gayi hoti na.... Aur phir teen zindagi barbaad jo jati!!

Dhara - raavi.......

Raavi - please di aap sab mujhe jo bhi kahoge... Mujhe dard hi hoga... Please!!!  (Crying)

All were looking at me with watery eyes

Raavi - mujhe thodi der akele rehna hai!!!

Prafulla - nahi!!!

Raavi - please!!! (Pleading)

They all look at each other n nodded..... All started leaving

Dhara - Shiva....!!!

Shiva - nahi bhabhi mein yahi rukunga!!!!!

I look at him shockingly

Abb kyu rukna chahta hai!!!!

Dhara di just nodded n left.

Raavi pov end

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