Rewrite the Stars (Completed)

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One of the hardest decision in life is to choose between love and family.... N Shiva has to make that decisi... Daha Fazla

Start
prologue
mission joote - churao/bachao!
who will win??
jeet gaya hum!!!!!
shadi ki baat
planing
rumours
new feelings
ride
mission vicky!!!!
plan successful or flop??
care in the first step in love
tujhe kabse meri chinta hone lagi??
checking chemistry
fever!!!
dream !!
ignore
anniversary
celebration
closer
shiva with other girl
realising my feeling
shiva ko bachana
kya chal raha hai??
what am i feeling??
its 'IT' what i m thinking??
is it love???
Am I in LOVE????
yes i m in love
confession
ShiVi ❤
godhbharai
truth or dare
shadi ki baat
pandya parivaar ki bahu??
raavi outbrust
saathi rey thoda thehar ja
humari adhuri kahani
tujhe kitna chaahein lage hum
REWRITE THE STARS
pehle pyaar ka pehla gham
duniya yeh jeeti gayi, dil har gaya
Dev-raavi ki shadi ho gayi 🥺😭
sara jag chad ke bas tenu hi hai chuneya
shadi nahi karna
iktara
epilogue
new story

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Ready with one more emotional chapter 🙃.... I know from the last few chapters my update are very emotional but please bear with me 🙃... N hope tissues are ready 😶😅

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If there will ever be an award for the saddest dulhan in the world... Raavi will win with no doubts

Today is the biggest day of her life...... Her wedding day , but here she is crying.... Crying on her fate... Crying on her stars.... The only question she has is... CAN SHE REWRITE THE STARS????

Not only was she emotionally hurt but her physical health was also worsen .... Her eyes were swollen because of continuously crying, her face was pale... There was no smile on her lips.... She looks like a broken doll n to add to this ,yesterday she felt sick n then she didn't sleep yesterday because of which she looks very weak

Raavi pov

A long tear roll down my cheeks remembering yesterday incident.... Never did I thought I will be this much broken on my wedding day

Sabhi ladki ke bohot sare sapna hote hai apni shadi ko lekar...... Kaisa sab kuch perfect hona chahiye.... Starting from her bridal lehenge to every small detail like best decorations, best jewelleries, best makeup, best catering, family -friends ki blessings.... N I have everything..... Sab kuch perfect hai jaisa mujhe chahiye tha sirf ladke 🥺.... The most important thing is missing in my wedding... N that's LOVE 💔

Ha wahi LOVE jisne mujhe dukh diya hai.... Rulaya hai

Prafulla - raavi chal hum tujhe ready kar dete hai!!!! (Excitingly)

Masi along with anita di, sai, anokhi n reema came to ready me

I look at them n smile

Anita di took out the lehenga from the wardrobe....

Anita - dekh toh raavi kitna khubsurat hai na!!!! (Smiling)

Raavi - hmm.....

Anokhi - kya hua raavi tu itni pale kyu dikh rahi hai.... Teri excitement kaha gayi... Aaj teri shadi hone wali hai... Thodi toh excitement dikha!!! (Excitingly)

Anita - pata nahi kal se itni upset hai.... Aur pucho toh bata thi bhi nahi hai... Bass kehti hai ki shadi ki nervousness hai!!!! (Worried)

Prafulla - upar se kal raat ko bimar pad gayi thi isliye iski health itni karab ho gayi hai  !!!! (Worried)

Sai - agar raavi ki health itni hi karab hai toh shadi cancel....... (Nervously)

I look up at sai ... All look at her shockingly

Anokhi - sai tu bhi na shadi kaise cancel  kar sakte hai, sab ready ho chuka hai na abb .... (Concerned)

Anita - ha anokhi theek bol rahi hai... Sab kuch ready ho gaya.... Aur shadi aise last moment mein cancel karna theek nahi hoga!!! (Concerned)

Prafulla - pata nahi kya theek hai aur kya nahi... Mujhe bass apni bachi ki chinta hai!!! (Caressing my cheek)

I look at masi

Raavi - masi mein bilkul theek hoon... Aap chinta mat karo!!

I gave them a small smile assuring them that I was fine

Reema - masi Anita di aap dono chinta mat karo... Hum hai na hum raavi ko ready kar denge.... Aap log niche guest ko attend karo!!! (Smiling)

Anokhi - ha reema theek bol rahi hai... Aap dono jao.. Hum hai na!! (Smiling)

Anita - theek hai.... Tum teeno isse ready kar denga!!!! (Smiling) .... Chalo fui!!!!

Masi look at me worried , I smile

Then Anita di took masi maa out

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The girl settle down

Reema - abb bata kya hua hai... Kyu itni tens hai??? (Worried)

Raavi - kuch nahi hua reema mein theek hoon.... Bass weakness feel ho rahi hai... !!! (Calmly)

Reema- r u sure??? (Suspiciously)

Raavi - yes meri maa mein bilkul theek hoon!!! (Smiling)

Anokhi - theek hai toh chal yeh lehenga pehn..... Tujhe ready bhi karna hai!!! (Smiling)..... I can't even believe aaj teri shadi hai!!! (Excitingly)

Mein bhi!!!!! 🥺

Anokhi gave me the dress....

Raavi - tum log jao mein kud ready ho jaungi!!!!

Reema- pagal hai kya teri shadi hai aaj.... Koi normal function nahi ki kud ready ho jayegi!!! (Annoyed) .. Tu ja hum yahi wait karte hai!!! (Smiling)

Raavi - almost sab chiz toh ho gayi hai.... Makeup aur hair ho gaya hai mera abb bass lehenga aur jewellers pehna hai jo mein kud kar sakti hoon  !!!

Sai - mazak mat kar raavi... Tu kud nahi kar payegi...!!!

Raavi - kar sakti hoon.... Please abb tum log jao!!!!

Anokhi - kyu koi aana wala hai kya!!! (Teasingly)

Pata nahi aayega ki bhi nahi!!!! 🥺

Anokhi - dev jiju toh  aane wale nahi??(Teasingly)

My heart broke listening to Dev's name.... Mera dil abb bhi kyu chahta hai ki Shiva aaye ... Kuch ghante baad shadi hai meri... Phir bhi mein Shiva ko nahi bula pa rahi hoon  ... Kyu!!!!

I m sure woh nahi aayega!!!! 💔

I look at sai for help

Sai - guys Chalo chalo raavi ko abb tease karna ban karo!!! (Sternly)

Reema n anokhi look at us suspiciously

Sai - niche bhi bohot sare kam hai... Chalo masi ki madat karne !!!

Reema - pad raavi!!! (Worried)

Sai - usne kaha na ki woh kud kar legi... Aur agar madat chahiye hogi toh woh humein bula legi... Chalo abb!!! (Sternly)

Sai just hold their hand n drag them out....

My heart pain..... Mujhe abhi bass akele rehna.... I need peace....

As soon as they left, I closed thr door

I just open my wardrobe n took out the locket...... I hold the locket near my heart n cry out my heart!!!!!

My tears were not stopping ..... I need to fresh up.... I took my towel n went inside the washroom to wash my face

After freshing up... I came out n wear my wedding lehenga...... As I was tieing my dori ..... I heard someone knocking at the window...

Abb yeh kon hai !!!!!

I had no clue what was happening.... N who the hell was knocking at the window..... Darwaja nahi dikha kya???

I quickly took a shawl n cover myself n then went to open the window....

As I open the window... I was shocked ..... I gasped

Shiva!!!!

Did he came for me??? Kya woh mujhe le jane ke liye aaya hai??? Did he realised his mistake??

I was very confused... I pull him up

Raavi - tu yaha???

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov

Mujhe bhi nahi pata mein yaha kya kar raha hoon

Today is the wedding day..... Subha se i m broken.... Ghar mein rehna toh jaise Namumkin sa ho gaya tha... Jaha dekho  bass dev - raavi ki hi baatein ho rahi thi which was breaking my heart into million pieces... I even went to my tree to get some peace but today even the tree was not comforting me ... I was destroy 🥺🥺😭

Finally I thought to go back to my comfort ... I knew I shouldn't go there, it will mess everything... But right now I needed her, I was in the verge of dying  n before dying I wanted to see her

I look at raavi.... She was waiting for my answer

Shiva - tune hi toh kaha tha na ki mein tujhe taiyaar karunga toh mein tujhe taiyaar karne aa gaya!!! (Nervously)

She look at me with her big big eyes!!!

She didn't told anything n simple removed her shawl....

She look beautiful in her wedding dress.... Maa theek bolti hai ki ek ladki apne shadi ke din sabse khubsurat dikhti hai... N she was indeed looking very pretty

She went n sat down before the mirror

I went towards her n started taking out the necklace from the box.... I look at the necklace n then her....

(Guys listen to this song n read this part.... It's really touchy)

I slowly put the necklace on her neck , my hand touch her collar bone.... She look up at the mirror.... We both share an intense mirror eye lock.... Next I took one more necklace n put it

I pick up the earing from the dressing table n put it in her ears..... During whole that proceed... My eyes didn't left the mirror, I was continuously staring at her thought the mirror

I pick up the mang tikka..... Phir meine usse mang tikka pehnaya.... Uske baad bindi.... I took the bangle n one by one put it in her hand .... We both were continuously looking at each other eyes... Pain was clearly visible in our eyes

After that I took pagal n kneel down.... Phir meine usse pagal pehnaya.... All the time she was just looking at me.... I stood up....

I softly grab her shoulder n make her stand up..... She turn n was looking at me....

I took the dupatta that was laying on the bed n then put it in her head....
Finally she was ready now

Abb woh actual dulhan dikh rahi thi with all the accessories .... I took a moment to look at her....

My heart skipped a beat

If earlier she was looking pretty , then now she was looking like a goddess.... Beautiful n elegant..... I just couldn't take off my eyes from her..... Everything was perfect but then the most important thing was missing from her face n that was a beautiful smile..... I knew she won't smile n I can't even force her now... Already I have hurt her alot.... ALOT.... N special after yesterday's incident I don't even have the rights to ask her anything

We both were having an intense eye lock.... Neither did she talk nor I...

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Raavi n I kept staring each other.... Suddenly. My phone rang.... I broke the eye lock n took out my phone... Bhabhi was calling me..... I should leave now.... Kuch ghanto mein raavi aur dev ki shadi hone wali hai... I should have control over my emotions.... I look at raavi for the last time.... 

As I was leaving something strike me... I went towards her dressing table n started searching for it......

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After sometime I found it.... I took it n went towards raavi.... Phir meine usse kala theeka laga diya.... I know it's filmy pad maa kehti hai ki khubsurat chiz ko jaldi nazar lag jati hai.... N raavi is looking breathtaking today n so I can't let any evil eyes land on her

Raavi look

(Harshitha260  , this time no emoji 😅..Because yeh unki real pic hai na 🤣 🤣)

Shiva - u are looking beautiful!!!!

This was the first sentence that I spoke after coming here..... I saw her eyes getting watery.... Before either of us breakdown ones again... I left

My heart was crying out.... But my lips choose to be silent

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov

I remain rooted in my position

He left again 🥺

As I saw him entering, there was a hope that he came to apologized me or probably to break this wedding but no.... He came for that conditions... I was broken ones more..... I didn't told anything n just sat down

He was making me ready.... In whole process I was just looking at him

How can he react so normal ?? How can he be so strong ?? How can he control his emotion to this extend??

U are looking beautiful!!!! That was the first thing which he told me since  yesterday

💔💔

As I was busying on my thoughts , someone knock on my door.... I went n open the door

Sai, reema n anokhi were standing there.... They look at me shockingly

Reema - Tu akele ready ho gayi?? (Shocked)

Raavi - ha!!!!

Anokhi - lekin kaise?? (Shocked)

Raavi - kaise matlab mere do haath hai... Mein kud ready ho sakti hoon!!! (Annoyed)

Sai gave me a suspicious look.... I avoided her eyes

Then the three came inside n started talking with each other

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As we were talking.... We heard the some sounds...

Sai - lagta hai baraat aa gayi !!!! (Smiling)

Anokhi n reema excitingly stood up

Reema - hum baraat dekhkar aate hai.... !!! (Excitingly)

Anokhi - ha aur joote churane ki planing bhi karte hai!!! (Laughing)

My heart was beating very fast.....

Anokhi - chal sai... Chalte hai!!! (Excitingly)

Sai - tum log jao mein yahi raavi ke pass beti hoon!!! (Smiling)

Reema - sai chal na.... Bohot maza aayega!! (Excitingly)

Reema n anokhi drag sai with them

Anokhi - hum baraat dekhkar aate hai!! (Excitingly)

I nodded.... All of them left

I went near my window n look down..... All look super excited n happy..... All were dancing together.... My heart was gonna poop out.... My eyes were searching for Shiva.... At first I didn't saw him...... Finally after some seconds I spotted him....


Shiva look

He was in standing in a corner.... He too looks broken.... Suddenly he look up n our eyes met.... A long tears roll down my cheek

I was continuously looking at the events taking place down ... Masi was doing dev's arti n then she welcome all the baraati inside the Hall...

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With every passing second my heart was beating super fast..... I realised that now nothing can happen.... 15 minutes mein var puja start ho jayegi... Phir dheere dheere shadi bhi ho jayegi..... My heart was filled with fear

I took out the locket from the wardrobe.... This locket was my biggest support but now I have to return it to Shiva

Jab mujhe sach mein lagega ki meri shadi dev se hogi tab mein kud tujhe yeh locket de dungi!!!!

I remembered my own words... I have to return it

I tear a paper n wrote something on it.... I put the locket n the letter inside a small box n nicely wrapped it

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Anokhi - raavi tune bulaya??

I was shocked to see anokhi.... I call sai to come in my room toh phir anokhi kya kar rahi hai

Raavi - sai kaha hai??

Anokhi- oo she is busy with some works so mein aa gayi... Bol kyu bulaya??

I don't have any option.... Mujhe yeh box anokhi ko hi dena padega...

Raavi - Tu yeh please Shiva ko de degi!!!

Anokhi - Shiva ko??? (Surprised)

Raavi - ha yeh uska saman hai.... Please de de!!! (Requesting)

Anokhi didn't ask much question.... She happily took the box n move out

Promise toot gaya Shiva!!!! 🥺

Raavi pov end

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Shiva receive the paper ..... He look at it.... N a long tear roll down his cheeks

I m sorry raavi.... Mein mera promise pura nahi kar paya!!!! 🥺

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That's it the end

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