Rewrite the Stars (Completed)

By priyapariyaar

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One of the hardest decision in life is to choose between love and family.... N Shiva has to make that decisi... More

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prologue
mission joote - churao/bachao!
who will win??
jeet gaya hum!!!!!
shadi ki baat
planing
rumours
new feelings
ride
mission vicky!!!!
plan successful or flop??
care in the first step in love
tujhe kabse meri chinta hone lagi??
checking chemistry
fever!!!
dream !!
ignore
anniversary
celebration
closer
shiva with other girl
realising my feeling
shiva ko bachana
kya chal raha hai??
what am i feeling??
its 'IT' what i m thinking??
is it love???
Am I in LOVE????
yes i m in love
confession
ShiVi ❀
godhbharai
truth or dare
shadi ki baat
pandya parivaar ki bahu??
raavi outbrust
saathi rey thoda thehar ja
humari adhuri kahani
REWRITE THE STARS
pehle pyaar ka pehla gham
duniya yeh jeeti gayi, dil har gaya
ranjha
Dev-raavi ki shadi ho gayi πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜­
sara jag chad ke bas tenu hi hai chuneya
shadi nahi karna
iktara
epilogue
new story

tujhe kitna chaahein lage hum

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By priyapariyaar

Waqt ne hai kiya humpe kaisa sitam
Tum bhi bezaar ho barbaad hain hum
Jaane kis raaste mujhko le jayenge
Bedisha yeh mere dagmagate kadam
Saath deti parchaiyan
Aur meherbaan ho rahe gham

Tere bin abb na lenge ek bhi dum
Tujhe kitna chaahein lage hum
Tere saath ho jayenge khatam
Tujhe kitna chaahein lage hum
Tujhe kitna chaahein lage hum

Shiva jo kisi chiz se bhi nahi darta tha woh aaj daar raha hai, kyu?? Kyuki aaj uska pyaar, uski jaan usse dur ja rahi hai sirf aur sirf uski bewakoofi ke karan..

One of the hardest decision in life is to choose between love n family?? N Shiva had to make his decision n he choose his family over love.... Aur family ko choose bhi kyu nahi karta, for him his family is everything.... EVERYTHING.... Jab sab log usse  jungli, janwar, gawar, rakshak aur kya kya nahi bulate teh, he had his family who shower unconditional love to him , his family was there to support him , to care for him n to boost his confidence.... Toh phir aaj phir woh kaise selfish ho jata....

Shiva can be anything but selfish.....

Shiva pov

Mein jungli, janwar, gawar sab kuch ho sakta hoon lekin khudgarz nahi ho sakta... Mein selfish  nahi hoon.... Manta hoon mein raavi ko dard de raha hoon pad jo dard mein se raha hoon usse explain karna impossible hai!!!

Pehle pyaar kiske liye special nahi hota, mere liye bhi special hai infact bohot zyada special hai.... Woh pehla pehla realisation, confession, excitement, bass pyaar hi pyaar hota hai.....

When I got to know that dev also love her, dil toot gaya tha sach mein..... Never did I ever dream of this, but then maybe destiny wanted this... Maybe destiny didn't wanted us to become one... 💔🥺

Telling her to marry dev broke my heart, I know meine kud yeh heartbreak choose kiya hai ... Pad still I love her n i want the best for her.... N dev is best for her not me

If worst boyfriend ka award kisi ko mil na chahiye toh woh mein hoon..... Meine raavi ko mazboor kar diya to marry dev... I knew I was her weak point so i used myself to convinced her .... Kud se sharam aati hai ki mein yeh sab kyu kar raha hoon kyu usse itna hurt kar raha hoon... Why???

I know for many of u I will be wrong.... But how can I not choose someone who was with me from the beginning of my life... Dev is not just my bro but he is my best friends, my biggest supporter... Uski khushi ke liye I had to make this sacrifice... N my family they always wish to see Dev-Raavi together not Shiva-Raavi... Mein kaise unse keh do ki I love raavi n I will marry her.... How will I say that dev I m sorry brother but I love her I don't care Tu uske bina reh sakta hai ki nahi but I will marry her... How can I be the reason behind my brother's heartbreak... No I can't

Meine raavi ke saath bohot galat kiya hai.... Pad jo usse abhi dard de raha hai, I m sure future mein woh usse der sari khushiyaan de degi!!!!

Today is her engagement.... N the irony is that everything is done by me, the decorations, the catering sab meine arrange kiya hai.. Kyu?? Kyuki she wanted it.... She knew that doing all this is gonna break my heart pad jo meine uske saath kiya hai na woh in sab se toh kam hi hai.... My heart was beating very fast.... My heard was filled with fear, my whole body was numb.... Ek baar sagai ho jayegi phir she will officially be dev's fiancee ... Once dev put the ring on her finger she will no longer be mine....  I won't be able to claimed her as mine 🥺

As I saw her coming..... My heart skipped a beat she looks so beautiful in her lehenga ..... Bilkul beauty queen dikh rahi thi

But then I realised that nahi woh mere liye nahi dev ke liye ready hui hai.... It just felt like someone has just stab a knife right on my heart... N that someone was me myself

I took a deep breath as she came n stood beside dev.... Raavi n I were just staring a painful eye lock ....

I m sorry raavi... Tujhe abhi mein galat lag raha hunga pad mein yeh jo bhi kar raha hoon it's all for ur betterment 🥺🥺

Dhara - bohot pyaari lag rahi hai raavi!! (Caressing her cheek)

Raavi - thank u di!!! (Smiling)

Then raavi took blessings from maa

Suman - bohot sundar dikh rahi hai... Bhagwan kare teri yeh muskurat aise hi banai rahe!!! (Caressing her hair)

Raavi smile

Krish - dev Tu bhi kuch bol.... Raavi bhabhi kaise lag rahi hai!!! (Teasingly)

Dev - raavi Tum bohot sundar lag rahi hoon  !!! (Smiling)

Raavi - thank u dev (smiling) ... Aur tum bhi bohot handsome dikh rahe ho !!! (Looking at me)

Dev blushes

💔💔

All were talking n sharing laugher..... It was getting hard for me to see all teasing dev n raavi.... So I decided to leave

Gautam- Shiva.... Kaha ja raha hai???

Shiva - woh... Gombi.... Mein khaana dekh kar aata hoon!!!!

Gautam - woh koi aur dekh lega.... Tu yahi reh engagement start hone wali hai!!!

I just nodded

Shiva ❤ - Tujhe pata tha ki yeh sab bohot hard hone wala hai phir bhi tune yeh choose kiya tho phir abb kyu bhaag raha hai..... Agar itna hi pyaar tha toh phir jane diya... Kyu???

I didn't knew what to do.... I was just numb

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Gautam - abb engagement ka time ho gaya!!!! (Smiling)

Bhabhi handed dev the ring n anita handed raavi the ring

I step down the stage , it was getting hard for me to stay there .... My heart was breaking with every second

Mein yeh sab nahi dekh sakta.... This is not possible for me 🥺

I was gonna leave but then

Dev - Shiva... Kaha ja raha hai???

I turn....

Shiva - kahi nahi bass aise hi...!!!

Dev smile..... Raavi stare at me

Krish- chalo now exchange rings!!! (Excitingly)

Raavi look at the ring n then me

Her eyes were getting watery

Her eyes were clearly telling me that she doesn't want to

Raavi 👀 - Shiva please rok de please!!!!! 🥺🥺

I look at her

Raavi 👀- mein tujhse pyaar karti hoon.. Tere bina nahi reh sakti.... Please rok de please!!!! 🥺🥺

Her eyes were pleading me to stop the engagement .... For a moment I just wanted to stop it but then as I look at dev... He seems very happy... He was smiling like anything.... N our family, they all look so happy

I took a deep breath n look down

Jagat- raavi ring toh pehna!!! (Smiling)

Raavi put the ring on dev's finger looking at me

All clap 👏👏

A long tear roll down my cheek... I quickly wiped it

Dhara - chal dev abb raavi ko ring pehna !!!! (Excitingly)

My heart was gonna poop out....

Dev forwarded his hand

Raavi stood there like a statue ,she was not giving her hand to dev .... She was just looking at me .... All look at her worried

Prafulla- raavi dev ko haath de !!!

Raavi forwarded her hand....

All were shocked!!!!!

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Prafulla - raavi yeh teri ring finger mein kya hua hai... Yeh bandage kyu hai?? (Worried)

Anita - subha toh nahi thi phir abb !! (Worried)

Raavi - chot lag gayi hai!!! (Looking at me)

All got tens.... My heart was paining, already meine usse itni chot de diya hai abb yeh chot 🥺🥺

Dhara - matlab???

Raavi - actually mere dressing table pad blade rakhi thi, so jab mein makeup kar rahi uss time haath blade mein lag gaya aur mujhe yeh chot lag gayi thi!!! (Hurt)

Suman - tob pehle kyu nahi bataya?? Aap sagai kaise hoga??(Tens)

Raavi - abhi andhe ghante pehle hi laga hai... Sorry pad sab kuch already ready ho chuka tha isliye mein aise hi aa gayi... Pad it's k, mein abhi bandage nikal deti hoon!!! (Smiling)

Raavi was gonna open her bandage but dev hold her hand

Dev - raavi rukho...!!!

Raavi stopped that n look at him

Dev - it's k.... Bandage mat kholo warna antiseptic ho jayega....!!! (Concerned)

Gautam - toh phir sagai??? (Tens)

Suman - sagai toh postpone nahi kar sakte!!!

Prafulla- toh phir kya karenge??? (Tens)

All thought for some time

Raavi - dev tum mere right hand mein pehna do.... Aur jab chot theek ho jayegi tab left pehna dena!!! (Excitingly)

Dev smile..... All took a relief breath

Dev put the ring on her right hand ring finger....

All were very happy.... But I knew the real reason.... I knew that she did all this knowingly.... Usne kud woh chot diya hai so that woh engagement hone na de!!!

This girl 🥺🥺

All clap for the couple

Krish announced a couple dance....

Dev n raavi took the center stage n were dancing...

My heart was burning seeing them together.... No this is not happening....

I left the hall

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Shiva - what the hell ??? (Shocked)

I was just attending my call arrangement, when I felt someone pulling me inside the room .....

Shiva - raavi Tu??? (Shocked)

Raavi look at me angrily

Raavi - Tu kyu nahi aaya mujhe ready karne ke liye?? (Angrily)

Shiva - meine bola tha ki mein nahi aane wala!!!! (Sternly)

She angrily grab my collar

Raavi - Shiva meine tujhe bola tha ki mein shadi tabhi karungi jab tu sab chiz kud arrange karega toh phir tu kyu nahi aaya!! (Angrily)

Shiva - meine bhi tujhe bola tha ki tu mujhe woh locket de de pad tune bhi nahi diya!! (Angrily)

Raavi - ha kyuki woh tune mujhe diya tha... Woh promise locket hai Shiva!!! (Angrily)

Ha meine uss din (jab woh dev se shadi karne ke liye maan gayi thi) raavi se locket manga tha pad usse mujhe nahi diya

Shiva - konsa promise ha... Teri sagai ho gayi hai... Kuch din baad teri aur dev ki shadi ho jayegi phir tu meri bha..... (Angrily)..... Bhabhi ban jayegi!!! (Broken)

I was broken 💔

Raavi- toh meine bhi uss din kaha tha ki shadi hone wali hai hui nahi hai.... Jab mujhe lagega ki meri shadi sach mein dev se ho jayegi tab mein yeh locket tujhe kud wapas de dungi .... I clearly told u that I won't give up on us so easily.... Aur rahi baad engagement ki toh meri engagement abhi thak nahi hui hai.... Ring na pehni zaroor hai pad na right hand mein jiska koi value nahi hai... Engagement tab hoti jab ring left hand mein pehnata naki right mein!!! (Angrily)

I angrily grab her shoulder

Shiva - isliye tune kud ko hurt kiya tha na.... Tune jaan bhuk kar kud ko chot diya hai na ?? How can u do that??(Angrily)

Raavi - nahi bilkul nahi.... Mein teri tara nahi hoon ki kud ko chot do... I m not weak like u, mujhe kud ka point rakhna aata hai... Yeh sab coincidently hua hai pad acha hi hua yeh chot mujhe lag gayi!!!! (Angrily)

I was gonna argue but then krish call me

Shiva- hello...... K k mein aa raha hoon!!!

Krish was telling that everyone were looking for us...

I left her shoulder...

She look at me angrily

Shiva - sab humein dun rahe hai....

Telling this i left the room

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All enjoyed the engagement.... All were talking, laughing .

The engagement was successful completed!!!

Shiva pov end

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Actually I thought I won't update today since meri tabiyat Theek nahi hai but then I had a lot of free time... I was just resting n feeling bored so I wrote this one.... Hope u all love it!!! Shower love to this chapter

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