Rewrite the Stars (Completed)

By priyapariyaar

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One of the hardest decision in life is to choose between love and family.... N Shiva has to make that decisi... More

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prologue
mission joote - churao/bachao!
who will win??
jeet gaya hum!!!!!
shadi ki baat
planing
rumours
new feelings
ride
mission vicky!!!!
plan successful or flop??
care in the first step in love
tujhe kabse meri chinta hone lagi??
checking chemistry
fever!!!
dream !!
ignore
anniversary
celebration
closer
shiva with other girl
realising my feeling
shiva ko bachana
kya chal raha hai??
what am i feeling??
its 'IT' what i m thinking??
is it love???
Am I in LOVE????
yes i m in love
confession
ShiVi ❤
godhbharai
truth or dare
shadi ki baat
pandya parivaar ki bahu??
raavi outbrust
saathi rey thoda thehar ja
tujhe kitna chaahein lage hum
REWRITE THE STARS
pehle pyaar ka pehla gham
duniya yeh jeeti gayi, dil har gaya
ranjha
Dev-raavi ki shadi ho gayi 🥺😭
sara jag chad ke bas tenu hi hai chuneya
shadi nahi karna
iktara
epilogue
new story

humari adhuri kahani

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By priyapariyaar

Double update!!!!!!!!! 🤗🤗                     

Pass aaye
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam na hui
Ek adhuri sir hamari kahani rahi
Aasmaan ko zameen, yeh zaroori nahi

Jaa mile ..... Jaa mile
Ishq sacha wahi
Jisko milti nahi manzilein... Manzilein

Rang the noor tha
Jab kareeb Tu tha
Ek jaanat sa tha, yeh jahaan
Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chod gaya tu kahaan

Humari adhuri kahani
Humari adhuri kahani

Humari adhuri kahani
Humari adhuri kahani

If this song was made for someone, then it will surely be for raavi...

How can love be so cruel, especially with the girl who believe in love more than any other... What did she did to get this much pain??

The girl who has given all her love to a boy, that today she was even ready to leave him for his happiness ....

Raavi closed her eyes remembering her beautiful memories with Shiva....

Is Shiva ko raavi bahane lagi hai
Aaj se tu meri aur mein tera ..... Shiva sirf aur sirf tera hai

Raavi mein bass yeh bolna chahta hoon ki mujhe tujhe apna banana hai pure haq se...... Tujhse pyaar karna hai sabke samne ..... Tujhe apne dil mein toh jagad de diya hai abb tujhe apne ghar main aur room main jagad dena hai.... Kya tu is Shiva ki guari banegi ??? Kya tu mujhse shadi karegi??

I love you raavi..... Tere bina rehna abb mumkin nahi hai !!!

Agar tujhe aaj kuch hota toh mein toh mar hi jate

Tujhe meri kasam tu dev se shadi karle...

Agar mera pyaar hi tujhe ban raha hai toh mein tujhe is rishte se azaad karta hoon!!!!

A long tears roll down her cheeks.....

Prafulla - raavi Tu ready nahi hui abhi thak???

Raavi pov

Masi enter my room... I quickly wiped my tears

Prafulla - yeh kya hai raavi.... Time dekh.... Tu abhi thak kyu ready nahi hui??? (Questioning)

Raavi - hmm.....

Prafulla- kya hua hai tujhe koi problem hai kya?? (Caressing my cheek)

🥺🥺

Raavi - nahi masi , mein theek hoon....!!! (Smiling)

Prafulla- pad........ (Someone interrupted)

Anokhi - masi hum aa gaye!!! (Excitingly)

Sai , reema n anokhi came

Prafulla- itna late koi aate hai kya?? (Pulling their eyes)

Anokhi- sorry masi!!!! (Chuckle)

Reema - raavi Tu ready kyu nahi hui?? (Suspiciously)

Raavi - woh mein....... (Sai interrupted)

Sai - hum aa gaye na tum usse ready karenge!!! (Smiling) .... Haina raavi?? (Concerned)

I nodded!!!

Prafulla- theek hai ready kar dena... Pad koi meri madat toh karo!!!

Reema - masi.... Hum kar dete hai !!! (Smiling)

Sai - reema, anokhi tum log masi ki madat kardo tab tak mein raavi ke pass bethi hoon!!! (Smiling)

Reema - theek hai !!!!

Prafulla - ready ho jana !!! (Smiling)

I nodded

Masi, anokhi n reema left

Sai immediately closed the door...

Sai - yeh sab kya hai raavi??? ... Mein two week ke liye mama ke ghar kya chali gaye.... Yeh sab kya ho gaya hai ??? (Shockingly)

I just kept put my head down

Sai - Tu toh Shiva se pyaar karti thi na aur tum dono tho relationship mein teh.....toh yeh kya hai !!!! (Shockingly)

🥺🥺

Sai - tune mujhse kaha tha ki mein yeh baat kisi ko na batao ,meine nahi bataya even reema aur anokhi thak ko bhi nahi  bataya.... Tune ne toh bola tha ki after ur 1st month anniversary u will tell them..... Tho phir yeh kya hai.... Why didn't u told anyone !!!! (Disbelief)

I kept quiet

Sai - abb kuch bolegi bhi..!!! (Frustrated)

She pull up my chin

Sai - tu ro kyu rahi hai?? (Shocked) ...... Raavi dekh koi problem hai kya bol mujhe... Kuch hua hai kya?? (Cupping my cheek)

I immediately hug her n cry

Sai - raavi tu mujhe daara rahi hai... Please bol kya hua hai?? (Scared)

Raavi - Shiva.......left .....me ... (Sobbing)

Sai - kya???? (Shocked)

Raavi - usne humara rishta thod diya....!!! (Crying)

Sai - raavi.......!!! (Emotionally)

She kept on Caressing my hair....

I was crying my heart out..... The tears which I hide for so many days were finally finding it's way....

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Sai hand me the  water .... I drank it

Sai - abb bata kya hua hai

Raavi - humara 1 month complete hone se pehle Shiva proposed me for marriage..... (She gave me a shocking expression).... I was very happy, n meine accept bhi kar liya because u know I always wanted to marry him!! (She nodded) ... Phir do din ke liye woh rajkot chala gaya.... He didn't even inform me.... I was hurt.... Phir 2 din baad, he came..... Actually full pandya parivaar came in my house, mujhe laga ki woh log Shiva ka rishta lekar aaye hai so when dhara di ask me I told yes, but then pata chala ki woh dev ka rishta.... (I started crying)

Sai - (hugging me) it's k!!! (Consoling)

Raavi - (breaking the hug) n then  ....................................

I told her everything from starting  to ending ... Sai got shocked

Sai - what the hell??? Shiva yeh kaise kar sakta hai.... How can he take decision for u??? How can he be unfair with u??? He can't force u????(Angrily) ....Isliye tu yeh sab kar rahi hai , mein tujhe yeh sab karne nahi dungi.... Mein abhi masi se baat karne ja rahi hoon!!

Sai angrily stood up n was leaving but I held her wrist

Raavi - tujhe meri kasam tu yeh baat kisi se nahi kahegi !!!! (Crying)

She look at me shockingly.....

Never did I ever thought that mein yeh kasam kisi se dungi!!!

Sai - raavi......!!! (Shocked)

Raavi - (holding her hand) please tu yeh baat kisi ne share nahi karegi... Please!!!! (Crying)

Sai- lekin tu kyu nahi chahti ki mein yeh baat kisi se bolu!!! (Shockingly) Raavi teri life spoil jo jayegi agar aaj hum chup bethe toh!!! (Caressing my shoulder)

Raavi - maybe my fate wanted this!!! (Crying)

Sai- please ha raavi tu aisi toh bilkul nahi hai ki kismat ka khel hai types.... U believe in making ur won destiny!!

Raavi - abb aur try nahi kar sakti... Bohot baar try kiya hai .. Aur bohot baar dil toota hai.... Rishta do logo se hota hai, aur mere rishte mein toh Shiva hai hi nahi sirf mein hoon..... Meine bohot try kiya hai ki mein yeh rishta bacha saku lekin Shiva ,woh toh yeh rishta thod na chahta hai.....Tu please yeh baat nahi bolegi kisiko bhi!! (With watery eyes)

Sai - pad raavi........ (I interrupted)

Raavi - please mere liye!!!!! (With watery eyes)

She just nodded.... N gave me a warm hug me .

Anokhi n reema enter

Anokhi - u guys are forgetting us!!!

Telling this they both came n gave me a big hug!!!!

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As I reach , everyone were present there... Full pandya family, masi masa paa, anita di jiju n some neighbours!!!

All look so happy n excited!!!!

N then finally after  10 days I met his eyes!!!!!

Shiva!!!!!!!! 🥺💔

Stopping my tears was really difficult... But I need to show that I m happy n so I was smiling.. But only I knew the storm that was going in my heart... The pain that I was suffering....

N then I saw him standing there standing, fully dress up n giving me a big smile....

N then I read the banner

Dev - raavi ENGAGEMENT!!!!

💔💔

Prafulla - chalo chalo......

Masi held my shoulder softly n we started walking..

With every step I was looking at Shiva, who was standing right beside dev....

Flashback

(10 days back)

(Raavi pov)

I run to pandya niwas.... All kinds of negative thoughts were running in my mind !!!!

Tears were rolling down.... But I didn't care, I need to see Shiva!!!!!

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As I reach pandya niwas, I saw the doctor leaving.... Krish was dropping  him

Krish - raavi Tu yaha??

Raavi - Shiva kaha hai!!!! (Panicking)

Krish - woh apne room......

I didn't let him complete his words, I ran to shiva..... I heard him saying something

Krish - woh theek hai abb!! (Shouting)

As I reach his room, my heart skipped a beat... I saw Shiva .... Our eyes met.... We share a painful eye lock

Dhara - raavi  Tu aagayi!!! (Smiling)

Then maa, gombi n dev turn to see me.... But then I saw Shiva leg.... His leg was covered in bandage

Shiva!!!!!

I shouted n run towards him

Raavi - Shiva tu theek toh haina??? Yeh  chot kaise lagi??? (Panicking)

I look at him, he was not even uttering a word....

Raavi - bol na chot kaise lagi??? (Worried)

Dev - raavi.......

I turn around n saw everyone looking at me shockingly.....

It was an awkward moment

Dhara - chahe tum dono kitna bhi lad lo pad ek dusre ko takleef mein nahi dekh sakte haina!!! (Smiling)

Gautam - yeh kaisa rishta hai tum dono ka.... Mujhe toh kuch samajh mein hi nahi aata!!! (Smiling)

Suman - yeh dono tho aise hi hai ladte bhi hai pad ek dusre ki fikar bhi karte hai!!! (Smiling)

All smile at us..... I kept looking at his leg...

Dhara - yeh ladka na bohot laparwah hota ja raha hai.... Dekh na bike chalate chalate gir gaya!!! (Scolding)

I look at Shiva....

He was avoiding eye contact...

Raavi - dhara di tension ki toh baat nahi hai na?? (Worried)

Dhara - bass leg mein chot aayi hai, leg fracture ho gaya hai  so yeh bandage!!! (Emotional)

Shiva - bhabhi mein theek hoon

Gautam - kya theek hai doctor ne tujhe 5 days rest lene ka kaha hai.... Complete bed rest !!!! (Concerned)

Shiva - pad gombi.....

Suman - abb tu rest lega.... Bass baat katam!!! (Sternly)

Dev - mein dukan jata hoon.... Dukan mein kaka akele hai!!!

Gautam - rukh dev mein bhi aata hoon

Dev - pad bhabhi.....

Raavi - mein hoon na di ka khayal rakhne ke liye!!!

Dhara - ja dev meri devrani hai na!!! (Teasingly)

It break my heart 💔

Suman - ha abb meri choti bahu hai na (proudly) ....yeh apni saas, jethani , devar ka khayal rakhegi!!! (Smiling)

Devar 💔💔

Shiva n I look at each other n share a painful eye lock

Gautam - theek hai maa tho hum chale hai (smiling).... Dhyan rakhna Shiva!!! (Concerned)

Dev - dhyan rakhna Shiva...... Sabka khayal rakhna raavi!!! (Smiling)

I awkwardly smile n nodded

Then they left

Dhara - chaliye maa, mein bhi apko kamre mein chod deti hoon...... Aap bhi aaram kariye!!! (Smiling)

Suman - theek hai.... Shiva dhyan rakhna!!! (Concerned)

Dhara - raavi mein maa ko kamre mein chod kar aati hoon.... Tu Shiva ke pass bet (sit) .... (Smiling)

I nodded

Telling this they left.....

We both kept on looking at each other

Pata nahi Shiva tu yeh kyu kar raha hai ?? Y are u hurting urself n me??

I broke the silent

Raavi - yeh kaise hua?? (With watery eyes)

Shiva - bike se gir gaya!!! (Softly)

I softly touch his leg

Shiva - ahh!!!! (Painfully)

Tears roll down my cheeks

Raavi - tera dhyan kidhar tha Shiva??? Tu itna laparwah toh nahi tha phir??? (Silently crying)

..................

Raavi - doctor ne aur kuch bhi bola ya phir sirf 5 days bed rest lene ko???

.................

Raavi - teri medicine kaha hai???

................

Raavi - Shiva mein kuch puch rahi hoon.... Tu jawab kyu nahi de raha??? (Angrily)

Shiva - mujhe baad nahi karni!!!! (Coldly)

Raavi - Shiva please........

Shiva - mujhe rest karna hai!!!! (Coldly)

Why is he doing this???

Raavi - Shiva....... (Dhara di interrupted)

Dhara - Shiva tujhe kuch chahiye???

Dhara di enter.... I quickly wiped my tears

Shiva - bhabhi mujhe thoda aaram karne hai!!!

Dhara - theek hai tu aaram kar kuch bhi chahiye toh mujhe bhula lena..... Raavi chal meri thodi help karde!!! (Smiling)

My heart was not ready to leave him.... But then dil mein pathar rakar I went with dhara di

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It was now 4 days since Shiva got that accident ..... In this four days I was just in pandya house .... I will come at morning n leave during evening.... I had to be there with me.... Usse meri zaroorat hai though woh mujhse baat nahi karta, mujhe ignore karta , usne mujhe chod diya hai 🥺.... But mein.... Meine toh usse nahi choda hai na... Mein usse abhi bhi pyaar karti hoon

In this four days Shiva bilkul badal gaya hai.... Woh mujhe ek word bhi nahi kehta, usse mera aas pass bhi rehna acha nahi lagta.... Meri di hui dawai thak bhi nahi leta.... Meri ek bhi madat nahi lena chahta..... Pad mein usse gussa nahi ho sakti especially at this time when he need me the most.... Or should I say when I need him the most

Everyone in pandya niwas think that I come to meet dev, they tease me like anything.... But the truth is mein sirf aur sirf Shiva ke liye aati hoon..... My whole attention is only on Shiva.... I don't care abhi log kya baat kar rahe hai... My only focus right now is Shiva

Dhara - raavi tu yeh khaana Shiva ko de degi... Mujhe gombi ke liye tiffin pack karna hai

Raavi - ji di !!!!

Though I know that Shiva doesn't like to be around me, but I never leave a chance to be around him

I happily took his plate n when towards his room

****************

As I reach his room , I saw him struggling to take the glass

I run towards him n kept the food on the table...

I immediately hold him

Raavi - Shiva tu yeh kya kar raha hai?? (Panicking)

I help him to lay down

Raavi - agar kuch chahiye tha toh mujhe bhula leta

He didn't reply as usual

I took the plate n sat in front of him

Raavi - chal mu khol aaj mein tujhe apne haatho se khaana khilaugi!!! (Smiling)

I make a morsel n took it near his mouth

Raavi - kha!!! (Smiling)

He keep on looking at me

Raavi - Shiva kha na!!!

...................

Raavi - dekh Shiva.... I know tu mujhse baat nahi kar raha hai, gussa hai pad mera gussa khaana pad toh mat nikal... Chal khaana kha le!!!! (Calmly)

....................

I was breaking..... Four days, from four days he is not talking with me.... 💔🥺

Raavi - Shiva aisa kya karu mein ki tu mujhse baat karle... Please bata abb mein toot rahi hoon... !!! (Crying)

Shiva - dev se shadi karle!!! (Coldly)

I look at him in disbelief...... Is he really ready to give up on me so easily ... Kya itna hi pyaar tha mere liye, kabhi na chodne wali baat jhoot thi kya.... I was angry, frustrated, irritated, annoyed, hurt, broken, my life was shattering

Raavi - Tu yahi chahta hai na ki mein dev se shadi kar lu!!!! (Coldly)

He nodded

Raavi - theek hai mein dev se shadi karungi...!!!!

He look at me

Raavi - tujhe mere pyaar ka saboot chahiye na tho theek hai mein woh saboot dungi.... Dev se shadi kar lungi.... Pad meri ek condition hai!!! (Coldly)

Shiva - kya???

Raavi - mere shadi ke Sare rasam mein tu mujhe taiyaar karega, sab kuch tu handle karega.... Decoration, catering, guest ko attend Karna sab kuch tu karega!!! (Coldly)

Shiva - ra...... (I interrupted)

Raavi - aur ek baat shadi karne ka matlab yeh nahi hai ki mein dev se kabhi pyaar karungi, because meine already ek baar pyaar kar liya hai... Aur uss pyaar ne mujhe thod diya hai!!!!(Coldly)

Shiva - tujhe dev se pyaar ho jayega!!! (Murmuring)

But it was loud enough for me

I gave him the food

Raavi - khaana khakar dawai le lena!!! (Coldly)

Telling this I was leaving

Raavi - Shiva tune mujhe majboor toh kar diya hai shadi karne ke liye pad ha aage kya hoga woh teri galti hai (coldly) ....... N ya  (I turn) congratulations for killing me!!!! (Broken)

Telling this I run away.....

I told everyone that I m ready n I wanted to do the wedding fast..... All were teasing me telling that I m getting too excited!!!!

Flashback end

I went n stand beside dev..... All were adorably looking at us.....

Mere kud ke pyaar ne mujhe zindagi bar ka dukh de diya hai 🥺💔

Raavi pov end

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