BALVEER RETURNS FANFIC

By the_lazy_pen

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BALVEER RETURNS FAN FICTION _____________________________________ Log kehte hai bure insan mar sakte hai pa... More

Balveer Returns ?
VIVI MEETS DEBU
THE SECRER HELPER
FREIND OR FOE ?
Debs Past Revealed
THE UNKNOWN HELPER
DEBU - VIVAN REUNITES
ARRIVAL OF RANI PARI
RANI PARI IN DANGER
Shivputra vs jwala
THE LAST WAR OF JWALA
DHOKHA YA SAJIS : (MULTIUPDATE )
ALL HEROES IN LIFE STAKE (MULTIUPDATE )
P.S
CHARACTER/PLACE SKETCH
THE TATWA YANTRA ...
COMEBACK OF BALVEER
DEBU AND GANG AT BHARAT NAGAR
ENTRY OF TANYA .
THE RAKSHAK NIYUKTI
THE BONDING STARTS ( SHIVANYA )
DEBU GONE MISSING
THE WRONG DECISION
NOT APART YET CANT BE TOGETHER
PROBLEMS STARTS
REVEALING SECRETS AND THE ATTACK ON FAIRY REALM
THE UNBELIEVABLE LOSS
THE LEGACY TO BE MADE ........
THE MEETUP - IS THIS THE TRUTH ?
DARKNESS RISES
WRITERS TALK
Dharti par khatra
AWAKENING OF SHAURYA
SAVIOURS IN ACTION
STAGING - THE FINAL BATTLE
NAYA ARAMBH - BVR SEASON 3
RESTORING ORDER FROM CHAOS
THE NEW BEGINNING
AUTHOR'S NOTE :
BALVEER SEASON 3

THE BETRAYAL OR MISBELIEF ?

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DEAR MITRO AUR MITRANIYON RECAP DALNE NAHI WALA MAIN JAKAR PURQNA CHAPPY PADHO AGAR YAD NAHI TOH . AUR HA SORRY FOR LATE UPDATES .

AB FORMALITY HOGAYI TOH EK AUR BAT FOLLOW @MISSION_CME_JEE AND @THE_ENGINEERING_CORPS AND SPECIALY @MUNDA_KUKAD_KAMAL_DA ON INSTA . AB STORY KI BARI

TOH CHALIYE SURU KARTE HAI BINA KISI BAK......LOLI KE .

DEBU : MUJHE TUMSE YEH UMEED NAHI THI ( SEES HIS HAND )

P.S DEBU HAVE ALREADY TELEPORTED R.P TO SHAURYA ( TIDE SE DHULA HUA BUDHA SHER ) FOR TREATMENT .
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A meme by @munda_kukad_kamal_da liked it so added.😅.
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Tanya : Bhaiya ap thik toh hai ? Aur woh kaun tha ?

Debu :Ek gaddar jise hamne apna mana ( making angry faceb) .

Shiv :kaun bhaiya ?

Debu faces to shiv .

Debu : Kya pucha ?

Shiv : Kaun tha woh ?

Debu : Kaun tha woh ? Kaun tha woh ? ( slaps shiv ) Tujhse yeh umeed nahi thi shiv.

Tanya : Shiv ? Yeh toh behosh tha na ?

Debu :Ha par isne us ray burai ke rakhwale ray ko bachaya .

Everyone : kya ?

Vivan : bhaiya aapko mistak hua hoga .

Debu : Ha VIVAN ho sakta hai but yeh dekho ( shows his hands it have a blue mark of trident ) .

Ananya : DEBU tumhe chot lagi isse Shiv ka kya connection?

Debu : Connection yeh hai ki trident shiv ka hai.

Tanya :Bhaiya shiv aisa nahi kar sakta .

Shiv : Bas bhut hua . Debu bhaiya sahi hai .

Tanya : kya ?

Shiv :ha aur maine hi bachaya ray ko jante hue ki woh burai ka rakhwala hai.

Flashback :

Shiv falls on ground due to attack of ray. Debu and ray starts fighting suddenly debu shoots killing curses to ray in anger . Shiv gets up and in a swift forms an 🕉 infront of ray . As you know 🕉 is symbol of mahakal so it stops the killer curse . And shiv then teleports ray to shinkai ...

Fb ends ..
Debu : Ab yeh bata ki aisa kyu kiya tune ?

Shiv : Kyunki main use marne nahi de sakta tha .

Debu :Aur ab main tujhe hame aur dhikha dene nahi de sakta .

Tanya :Maine apne life mein pehli bar kisi par bharosha kiya aur betrayal? ( slaps shiv with teary eyes ) .

VIVAN : BHUT HUA SHIVPUTRA AB TUMHARI POWERS KE BHI KABIL NAHI HO TUM.

TANYA: ISLIYE MAIN KHUD TUMSE POWERS CHINUNGI.

SHIV : TANU SUNO..

DEBU : MAIN BALVEER DHARTI KA RAKHWALA SHIVPUTRA SE MERE DWARA DI GAYI USKI SARE VARDAN AUE SHAKTIYA WAPAS LETA HU .

SHIV FALLS ON HIS KNEES IN PAIN .

TANYA : MAIN RAJKUMARI PARI RANI PARI KI BETI HONE KE NATE SHIVPUTRA SE USKA NAM AUR USKI RAKSHAK PAD KO CHINTI HU.

SHIV :EK MIN MAIN BHI RANI PARI KA PUTRA HU ISLIYE TUM MUJHSE NAHI CHIN SAKTI MERA NAM YA PAD.

DEBU : PUTRA ? MUH BOLE BETE THE SHIV JO AB NAHI HO DHOKHE BAJ .

SHIV :BHAIYA.....

TANYA :HAMME SE KISI SE BHI RISHTE MAT BANAO SHIV JAB NIBHANA BURAI KE SATH HAI TOH . ( TAKES HIS RAKSHAK POWERS AND SHIVPUTRA NAME ).

SHIVPUTRA TURNS TO HIS ORIGINAL DEVIL FORM . THE WORLD NOW FORGETS SHIV PUTRA AND KNOWS HIM BY THE NAME RAVANA AS THE BOON IS NO MORE .

RAVAN : MERI BAT EK BAR SUNIYE ....

DEBU :KYA SUNE Ravan ek asur par dobara bharosha kare kabhi nahi .

DEBU PUSHES RAVANA IN A PORTAL WHO FALLS OUT OF PARILOK IN KAILASH PARVAT .

SHIVAY :DEV BAT TOH SUNLETA EK BAR .....

TANYA : HAME KISI BHI ASUR KI BAT NAHI MANNI JAO YAHA SE ...

VEER :SHIVAY CHAL.

SHIVAY : BHAI.......

DEBU TELEPORTS SHIVAY AND VEER OUT OF PARILOK.

THE TEAM LIGHT GETS DIVIDED .

Thats all fot today aur likhne ka mood nahi

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