Rewrite the Stars (Completed)

By priyapariyaar

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One of the hardest decision in life is to choose between love and family.... N Shiva has to make that decisi... More

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prologue
mission joote - churao/bachao!
who will win??
jeet gaya hum!!!!!
shadi ki baat
planing
rumours
new feelings
ride
mission vicky!!!!
plan successful or flop??
care in the first step in love
tujhe kabse meri chinta hone lagi??
checking chemistry
fever!!!
dream !!
ignore
anniversary
celebration
closer
shiva with other girl
realising my feeling
shiva ko bachana
kya chal raha hai??
what am i feeling??
its 'IT' what i m thinking??
is it love???
Am I in LOVE????
yes i m in love
confession
ShiVi ❤
godhbharai
truth or dare
pandya parivaar ki bahu??
raavi outbrust
saathi rey thoda thehar ja
humari adhuri kahani
tujhe kitna chaahein lage hum
REWRITE THE STARS
pehle pyaar ka pehla gham
duniya yeh jeeti gayi, dil har gaya
ranjha
Dev-raavi ki shadi ho gayi 🥺😭
sara jag chad ke bas tenu hi hai chuneya
shadi nahi karna
iktara
epilogue
new story

shadi ki baat

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By priyapariyaar

Raavi pov

Yeh bhootnath kaha reh gaya???

It's going to be a month that we have return somnath.... All this days, my life is just beautiful... In fact very beautiful....

Shiva has been such an ideal boyfriend.... So ideal that he can't stay without irritating me😒.... Meine socha tha ki ek baar hum boyfriend girlfriend ho jayenge toh he will be like those loving doving boyfriend jo mujhe ghumne le jayenge, movie dikhane le jaye... Hum dono shopping karenge,dinner date mein jayenge bohot sari baatein karenge ......Pad nahi mein bhul gayi thi woh shiva hai...Shiva !!!!!!

Woh ek mauka nahi choda mujhe pareshan karne mein, mujhe gussa dilane mein aur mujhe daant khilane main..... Pad jo bhi kaho he is the best.... His love is extreme..... Actually he is extreme , jab nafrat karta tha tab bhi extreme tha aur uska pyaar bhi extreme hai... Life is full of surprises.... Uske sath relationship mein hokar I have learn that Shiva is a true gem... Woh na coconut ki tara hai... Bahar se karak aur andar se naram ... Bilkul bacha hai mera Shiva, bacho ke jaise maasoom hai, jo dil mein hai wahi jubaan pad hai .... Ha sirf ek hi problem hai gussa jaldi aa jata hai....

In our relationship he is the mature one n I m the childish ..... Woh mujhe samajhta hai, mera khayal rakhta hai, mujhe sambhalta hai.... Uske dekhkar mujhe meri dad ki feeling aati hai.... Like it says na that a girl try to see her father in her love.... Pad mujhe toh try bhi nahi karna pade.... Because shiva ne already woh kar diya jo sayad mere dad mere liye karte

Whenever he is with me I feel secure, I feel protected... Mujhe kisi ka bhi daar nahi lagta... Like recently vicky.. Wahi reema ka ex, woh jail se chut gaya tha... So usne phir se mujhe attack karne ki try ki jab mein dhara di ke saath shopping kar rahi thi.... But thankfully Shiva tha mere saath aur usne vicky ko dekh liya phir kya....  Bohot mara Shiva ne vicky ko... Last time se bhi zyada.... Pad phir dhara di ne at last Shiva ko rok liya

Flashback

(Raavi pov)

I was very frightened by that incident... Vicky was literally gonna kill me but thankfully Shiva tha waha pad

As I was looking at the window.... I saw Shiva climbing the pipe n coming towards me

Mera romeo!!!!! 😍😍

At first I thought he was an illusion but then

Shiva - oi chipkali haath de apna!!!

This voice brought me back to reality

Raavi - Shiva Tu yaha itni raat ko kya kar raha hai??  Agar masi ya phir kisi ne dekh liya toh bara wala kaan ho jayega!!! (Worried)... Tu ja yaha se!!! (Scared)

Shiva - raavi!!! Haath de apna... Warna mein niche gir jaunga!!!! Jaldi de!!! (Annoyed)

Raavi - mein tujhe koi haath waath nahi dene wali.... Tu ja yaha se!!! (Irritatingly)

Shiva - sach mein... Agar mein gir gaya na toh mein sidha mami ko bol dunga ki tune mujhe raat ko apne kamre mein bula rahi thi !!! (Smirking)

Is he my boyfriend??? Or my dushman?? 😒😒

Raavi - Tu mujhe blackmail kar raha hai...!! (Irritatingly)

Shiva - agar blackmail hi sahi toh ha mein tujhe blackmail kar raha hoon  ... Abb jaldi haath de!!! (Irritatingly)

Raavi - nahi dene wali!!!

Shiva - sach mein!!!! (Warning)

Raavi - ha!!!

Shiva - ok toh phir (smirking)... Mami!!! (Screaming)

Raavi - Shiva kya kar raha hai... Masi utt jayegi!!! (Worried)

Shiva - toh phir haath de... Mujhe upar aana hai!!!

Then i gave him my hand n pull him up.... Gosh!!!! He is so strong... Meri toh sari strength hi chali gayi in pulling him

Shiva came inside the room

Raavi - Tu kyu aaya hai???

Shiva - apne girlfriend ko milne aaya hoon... Kyu koi problem hai kya?? (Smirking)

Oh gosh!!! Whenever he call me his girl!!! I get butterflies😅 🥰

I blush like anything!!!

Raavi - (hugging him) Shiva tu bhi na!!! (Blushing)

Shiva - (caring my hair) are u fine??? (Softly)

Yes that's y I love him so much!!!!
He sees the pain in my eyes while others believe the smile on my face 🥺

Raavi - (hugging him more tightly) pehle nahi thi pad abb ho gayi hoon!!! (Smiling)

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Shiva was silent for some times

Isse kya hua 🤔

I broke the hug n look at him... He was crying

It broke my heart to see him crying

I immediately cupped his cheeks

Raavi - kya hua Shiva?? Tu ro kyu raha hai?? (Concerned)

Shiva - raavi woh aaj jo bhi hua.....  Mein bohot daar gaya tha... Jab vicky ne tere gardan mein chakoo rakha ... Mujhe bohot daar lag raha tha..
Mein daar gaya ki mein tujhe kho na du!!! (With teary eyes)

Tears roll down his cheeks...

His tears was tearing my heart

Raavi - Shiva jab tu hai mere saath toh mujhe bhala kya kuch ho sakta hai kya?? (Softly)

He look at me

Raavi - jab tu mere saath hota hai na mujhe kisi bhi chiz ki fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai... I know ki jab thak tu mere saath hai tu mujhe kuch bhi hone nahi dega..!! (Smiling)

Shiva - itna vishwas hai mujhe pad!!! (Softly)

Raavi - kuch se bhi zyada!!! (Smiling)

Shiva - raavi tu please abb se aisa kuch bhi mat karna ki teri jaan ko katra ho....!! (Fearfully)

I look at him

Shiva - promise kar ki abb se koi bhi problem ho toh tu mujhse share karegi !!!! ... Abb yeh sirf teri jaan nahi hai, abb teri jaan meri hai!!! (Softly)

Raavi - promise!!!! (Smiling)

He took me for another hug

Flashback end

Since then Shiva has always been around me.... Me too I was enjoying his attention 🥰

Yeh bhootnath bohot late kar raha hai!!! 😠

I m waiting for him since one hour.... Mujhe usse kuch important discuss karna hai... Masi maa mere liye ladke dun rahi hai for shadi.... Meine usne kitni baar bola hai ki i dont wanna marry ... But woh toh zid hi kar rahi hai... In fact she is talking with pandit ji to find a groom for me

I am getting frustrated day by day!!!!

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov

Aaj toh paka gaya!!!! 😅

I saw the chipkali standing facing her back.... I know meine aaj bohot late kiya hai.... Abb yeh volcano ke jaise blust hogi

It gonna be one month that we both are together.... Life has been beautiful... Chipkali ke aane ke baad my life took a complete u - turn... She has change my life for good.... She has put colors in my life.... Jab bhi uske saath hota hoon khush hota hoon, hasta hoon.... Usne mujhe life ek naye way se live karna sikaya hai... To live life to the fullest... To find happiness in small things ... To enjoy every moment....  She is like an angel in my life....

She is too innocent for this cruel world... Woh na ek bachi hai choti si bachi.... She thinks that everything is beautiful n good, she is pure .... I don't know why m I so lucky that I have her in my life.... We two are completely different... We never agree on anything, we always end up fighting but still at the end we too find peace in each other embrace!!!! 🥰

She has shower me so much love that abb toh daar bhi lagta hai ki will I be able to give her all the happiness that she deserves... Am I right choice for her???

Raavi - shiva!!! Tu aa gaya!!!

Raavi voice brought me back to reality... I saw her standing in front of me .... She look at me angrily

Volcano blust hone wali hai😬😬

Raavi - itni der pichle ek ghante se wait kar rahi hoon.... Humne toh 4:00 pm ko milne ka plan banaya tha na... Aur tu abb 5:05 pm ko aa raha hai!!! (Angrily)

Shiva - woh dukan main kaafi kam tha... Naya stock aaya hai tho usse hi rakhne mein der ho gayi!!! (Guilty)

I look at her with pleading eyes

Raavi - ek phone toh kar sakta tha na!!! (Frustrated)

Shiva - phone ki battery dead ko gayi thi!!!

Raavi - k k theek hai.... Agli baar se aisa mat karna!!!

Shiva - sure!!! (Smiling)... Waise tune mujhe ghat main kyu bulaya hai !!! (Thoughtfully)

Raavi - Shiva masi maa ne mere shadi ke liye ladka dunda hai!!!! (Worried)

I gasped.....I was shocked , what the hell is this!!!!!! Raavi ki shadi ... I was super angry on mami 😠

Shiva - yeh mami ne kasam kha li hai ki Shiva ko toh pareshan karna hi hai!!! (Angrily)

Raavi - Shiva tu yeh kya bol raha hai... Masi maa ko nahi pata hi tu aur mein saath main hai in fact kisi ko bhi nahi pata... Ek mahine hone wale hai humare rishte ko aur humne abhi thak kisi ko bhi nahi bataya hai... Abb hum kya karenge!!! (Worried)

Shiva - kya karenge matlab..... Of course tu jakar shadi ke liye mana kar de!!!

Raavi - tujhe lagta hai ki meine shadi ke liye mana nahi kiya kya!!! Of course meine mana kiya tha... Pad masi maa mujhe shadi ke liye force kar rahi hai... In fact unhone toh ek ladka bhi dun liya hai.... Aur woh ladka this week kabhi bhi mujhse milne aa sakta hai!!! (Scared) .... Abb tu hi bata mein kya karu?? ((Worried)

Shiva - kya karu matlab.... Abb mami be kaha hai toh mile na!!

She was shocked.... Her face fall  down

Raavi - tu pagal ho gaya hai kya??
(Angrily )

Shiva - tu na meri baat ko samjhi nahi.... Ladke se mil phir reject kar de... Mami bhi tujhe kuch nahi bolegi!!! (Kissing her cheek)

Raavi - tu na sach mein pagal ho gaya hai (frustrated)... Tujhe kya lagta hai ki mein ladke se milkar usse reject kar dungi toh masi shadi ki zid chodegi.. Bilkul bhi nahi Shiva... Agar meine ek baar ladke se mil liya toh masi mujhe shadi ke liye force karegi.... Woh itni asaani se har nahi manegi!!! (Worried)

Shiva - toh phir

Raavi - I think humein abb sabko bata dena chahiye humare rishte ke bare mein!!! (Calmly)

I look at her shockingly

Raavi - agar hum sabko bata denge toh yeh sari problem bhi katam ho jayegi !!! (Smiling) Phir ghar wale humari shadi kara denge (Excitingly)

I remain silent.... I didn't knew how to react ....

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Raavi - kya hua Shiva tu kuch kyu nahi bol raha... Tujhe mujhe shadi nahi karni kya??? (Scared)

Raavi was sounding scared... She has completely misunderstood my silent

Shiva- pagal.... Tujhe  shadi nahi karunga toh kise shadi karunga hai!!! (Sarcastically)

She look at me with watery eyes.... I wiped her tears that were rolling down

Shiva - mein toh bass yeh soch raha hoon  konsa hospital theek hoga!!!!

Raavi - hospital??? (Confusingly)

Shiva - ha...  Jab hum sabko humare rishte ke bare mein batayenge toh unhe heart attack bhi aa sakta hai... Isliye abhi se hospital dekhkar rakhna chahiye na!!! (Smirking)

She chuckle

Shiva - just imagine agar mami ko pata chale toh!!! (Laughing)

Raavi - Shiva tu bhi na!!!

I took out my locket.... N took her hand n put that in her hand

Raavi - yeh kya hai??? (Confusingly)

Raavi look at me shockingly as I put my head down

Shiva - raavi tujhe pata hai na ki mein yeh romantic chizo mein acha nahi hoon ... In fact kaafi bura hoon.... Pad tere saath reh kar mein kuch chize toh sikh gaya hoon ...

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov

Yeh Shiva kya bol raha hai....!!!

I was getting very confused with whatever he was telling .... Yeh sidhe sidhe baat kyu nahi kar sakta... Itna confuse kyu kar raha hai

As I look at him.... I saw him on his knees

I just couldn't proceed my thinking

Shiva - raavi tujhe humesha chahiye tha na ki mein tujhe aise knees mein proposed karu !!! (Softly)

I nodded

Raavi - ha pad Tu manta hi nahi hai... Tujhe toh yeh sab bakwas lagta hai na!!! (Irritatingly)

Shiva hold my hand

Shiva - dekh mujhe yeh romantic baatein  karna nahi aata ... Aur tujhe pata hai ki mujhe filter baatein karna nahi aata ... Jo dil mein hoon wohi zubaan pad

I nodded

Shiva - raavi mein bass yeh bol na chahta hoon ki mujhe tujhe apna banana hai pure haq se... Tujhse pyaar karna hai sabke sabme, tera haath pakadna hai sabke samne... Tujhe apne dil mein toh jagad de diya hai abb tujhe apne ghar mein aur room mein jagad dena hai... Kya tu iss Shiva ki gauri banegi ??.... Kya tu mujhe shadi karegi???

My heart skipped a beat.... I was shocked , surprise.....

Wife!!!! Shiva ki wife!!!!!!!

The moment I was waiting for so long was here.... Shiva proposed me for marriage... I was super happy... I wanted to shout, dance n tell the whole somnath that is raavi ko uska Shiva mil gaya...

I look at him n found him already looking at me... His stare was intense... I could see love , just pure love in his eyes

Shiva - abb bol dulhan banegi meri??

I nodded

Raavi - of course teri hi toh dulhan banungi!!! (Smiling)

I pull him up n hug him tightly

Raavi - thank u so much shiva meri life mein aane ke liye.... Tune mujhe zindagi baar ki khushiya de di hai!!! (Lovingly)

Shiva - tu ne mere zindagi savaal di hai raavi !!! (Smiling)

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Shiva broke the hug

Shiva - agar mujhe pata hota ki yeh sab hone wala hai toh mein ek ring lata ... Waise hi jaise teri romantic movie ke hero heroine ke liye late hai.... Pad woh sab chod.... Yeh locket mere dil ke bohot kareeb hai... Iss locket mein bholenaath ka trishul hai....Mein yeh locket tujhe as a promise de raha hoon ki meri shadi sirf aur sirf tujhse hogi.... Yeh locket humare pyaar ka symbol hai... Jab bhi tu yeh locket dekhegi na tujhe pata hoga ki tu mere life mein kya matter karti hai... That how much I love you n how much I value u!!! (Smiling)

This brought a smile on my face.... My Shiva.... I was overwhelmed with his love.... I was so touch with his word

Shiva - (holding my hand) tujhe pata hai na ki do din baat humari first month anniversary hai!!!

I nodded

Shiva - do din ke andar mein tere ghar rishta lekar aaunga... !!! (Smirking )

I look at her surprisingly

Shiva - mein aaj hi sabko bata dunga humare rishte ke bare mein...!!! (Smiling)

I just lovingly stare at him.... He took me for a hug

Raavi - I love you Shiva ❤

Shiva - I love you raavi ❤

Raavi pov end

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That's it the end

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Dhara - kya tu pandya parivaar ki  bahu banegi??

Raavi blush n nodded



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