Ishqedaar ✔

By fabulistic_fictions

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Manzil ek thi dono ko...Raah alag ban gaye Ishqedaari ne mazboor aisa kiya...ke apne Ishqedarriyaan ke ye Ish... More

Copyright
Cover
Fixed?
Suicide
Ruined
Truth
Separation?
Broken Souls
Special Wish
Meet?
Thank You!❤️
Together
Getting Close
Back to Mumbai?
Nostalgic
Forgiven
Preeta's Doubt
Protective
Akshay's Real Face
Preeran ❤️
Kareena's Step
Karan's Anger
Making Her Smile
Proof
Thank You ❤️
Exposed
His Happiness
Mood Swings
This is Special
Sneak For Spice
Shopping
Mehendi
Thank You ❤️
Baby Shower
Blessed
With the Baby
Missing
Devasted
Passing Time
Leap
Tara sees Preeta
Action Time
Meeting her
Confrontation
No More Tears
Captured ~ Epilogue
Gratitude ~ Q/A

Jealous Luthra

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By fabulistic_fictions

One day before mehendi function,

Preeran room,

Preeta(food stuffed in mouth) - aahaha....Karan aur nahi khaana na...bas hogya!

Karan - bas thora sa aur hai babydoll...khaalo na!

Preeta made a crybaby face and ate the bite,

Karan(wipes her mouth) - very good!ab tum baitho mai aata hu...phir neeche chalenge!

Preeta nodded,he was about to go but she pulled him back,he raised his eyebrows,she took out the chocolate from his pocket and left his hand,he chuckled,

Karan - mtlb tumhe har kuch der me ek chocolate chahiye hi chahiye!

Preeta nodded while cutely eating the chocolate,he chuckled and left,

Later he took her with him downstairs,

Rakhi - aaja Preeta puttar aaram se baith!

Preeta - Shristi kaha hai?

Avni - Shristi Sammy ke saath bahar gayi...bol rahi thi ki kisi friend ko receive krne jaa rahi hai!

Preeta(confused) - konsa friend aa raha hai iska?(shrugs her shoulders)

Bell rang,Girish opened the door, Shrismeer were standing there,

Shristi - di...di kaha hai?

Preeta - yahi hu baba!kya hua?aur kise receive krne gayi thi tu?

Shristi - aapke liye ek surprise hai di!aap utho jldi se...par aaram se!

Preeta chuckled and stood holding her baby bump,

Shristi - ab mur jaao!

Preeta - mur jaau?kyu?

Shristi - are muro na di!

Preeta(chuckles) - fine!(turned)

Karan noticed Sameer standing with an annoyed face,he went towards him,

Karan - tujhe kya hua hai?aise muh fulaa kar kyu khara hai?

Sameer(frowns) - aapka bhi muh kuch minutes me aisa hi hojaayega...ruk jaao thora!

Karan looked at him confused,

Shristi - so ready di...1....2....and....3...(shouts)

Suddenly a boy came inside running,he ran and hugged Preeta from back,she stumbled a bit,but he held her properly,

Karan widens his eyes,Sameer looks at him,

"Preeeeeeeeeeeeeee"

Preeta(shocked) - Rohit!

She turned and looked at him who was seeing her with a wide smile,

Preeta - Omg Rohit tum!I mean....(hugs him happily, Shristi too joins the hug)

Rohit - oye anaconda hat na...abhi mai apni Pree ko hug kar raha hu na!tu jaa!

Karan looked at him furiously hearing "apni pree" ,he narrowed his eyes looking at them,

Shristi - yaar ab to anaconda mat bulaa...you chotu kong!

Rohit(breaks the hug) - kon chotu kong oye? Rohit Sehgal hai mera naam!

Preeta(hits his head) - Rohit Sehgal jo har ladki pe jaata hai pighal!nahi?

Rohit(puts hand around her neck) - ab ye baat to shi hai....(looks at her) Preetu papitu!

Preeta(hits him) - stop calling me that!

Karan who was now annoyed went towards them and stood in front of Preeta,Rohit looked at him being confused,

Karan(side hugged Preeta) - Mrs Luthra...ab jara aap hum sab ko bhi (glaring him) inn mahasay se milwaayengi!

Preeta - ha ha...ye Rohit hai...mere aur Shristi ka college friend...actually best friend...aur Rohit ye hai....

Rohit - your husband!I know..I mean everyone knows...(forwards his hand) hello Mr husband....Mr Best Friend aapse milkar khush hua!

Karan looks at him weirdly and shook hand with him,

Everyone greets him,

Rohit - waise Pree..tu bari hot hogyi hai pehle se...lekin ek baat bata....tujhe to mai aisehi Preetu papitu bulaata tha..par tu to sachme...

Preeta(glaring him) - ayye...don't you dare to complete that...ab pregnant hu to weight badhega hi na!!

Rohit - oh yes...congratulations Pree....(leans to hug her but Karan came in between and hugged him)

Preeta looked at him confused,

Rohit - ahaa....congratulations Karan!you gonna be dad soon!

Karan(breaking the hug) - Thank you!

Rohit(again leans to hug Preeta) - aur tujhe bhi....(Karan pulled Preeta back)

Karan - Preeta ki taraf se bhi Thank you!abbb...babydoll...ab tumhe rest karna chahiye I guess!chale room me?

Preeta - par Karan...Rohit abhi aaya hai...mujhe usse baat karni hai!

Karan was about to say but....

Rohit - are koi ni Pree....tu room me jaa apne..mai peeche peeche aata hu na!

Karan(mind) - iski to...room me jaate hai andar se lock kar dunga aur bahar do not disturb ka board bhi laga dunga!huh!

Preeta - chale Karan!

Karan nodded and took her to their room,

Rohit - oye anaconda...mujhe mera room to dikha!

Shristi was about to go but Sameer pulled her back,

Sameer(glaring Rohit) - chalo Rohit mai tumhe tumhara room dikhaata hu!

Rohit nodded confusingly,

Rohit(murmurs) - ye dono Luthra bhai mujhe aise looks kyu de rahe hai?(looks at Rishab who was also glaring him) inki waali se to baat bhi nahi ki yaar!hadd hai!(follows Sameer)

Avni - tum kyu Rohit ko ghur rahe ho?

Rishab - andar se Karan Luthra 2.O waali feeling de raha hai wo...dur rehna usse!(left to room)

Avni - hadd hai!

Screen shifts to corridor,

Rohit was whistling and moving towards Preeran's room,

He was looking into phone,suddenly he bumped into someone,

He held her through waist preventing her from falling,she closed her eyes fearly,

He looked at her and was lost in her face,she slowly opened her eyes and saw him lost, both shared an eyelock,

He made her stand properly,

''Thank You"

Rohit - its fine!waise aap?

"Kritika Luthra"

Rohit - hi...Rohit...Pree ka....

Kritika - I know Preeta bhabhi ke college friend ho tum!

Rohit(flirtatiously) - kya baat hai...hamare aate hi aapne hamare baare me pata karna suru kardiya!

Kritika(widens her eyes) - what nonsense...Avni ne bataya tumhare baare me!

Rohit - ohh to aap unse mere baare me puch rahi thi!

Kritika - nahi wo...

Rohit - waise soch raha hu iss ghar ko ek aur khushi dedu...uncle aunty ko bolke do ke bajay teen mandap lagwade to?

Kritika(shocked) - what?are you....ughhh...(left from their hurriedly)

Rohit(shouts) - acha shaadi nahi to coffee date pe chal lo!(smiles sees her)

He turns and saw Sameer and Rishab standing there with there arms crossed,he gulps,

Rohit - aa...aap dono!

Sameer - hamara hi ghar hai!

Rishab - har kuch seconds me mil lenge!

Sameer - par tum kya kar rahe ho?

Rohit(confused) - mai....mai kya kar raha tha?haa...wo mai Pree ke room me jaa rha tha...jaau?

Sameer and Rishab moved to either sides giving him way,he looked at both of them being scared and then ran from there,

Preeran room,

Karan - babydoll ye waala toy dekho...I am sure princess ko ye bahot pasand aayega!

Preeta - hmm..tumne jo liya hai uske liye!

Karan - aur jab princess pehli baar ghar aayegi na...tab hum usse ye waali dress pehnaayenge...bilkul doll jaisi lagegi wo!

Preeta - hamari barbie doll!

Karan nodded smiling widely,

Karan - waise babydoll maine kuch realize kiya!

Preeta - kya?

Karan - yahi ki aaj subah se maine tumhe bas ek hi kiss kiya...ab mera man kar raha hai thore aur kisses karlu!

Preeta widens her eyes and looked at him,he smiled naughtily and leaned towards her,

She smiled,he was about to kiss her when Rohit barged into the room, both departed shockingly,

Karan(mind) - do not disturb ka idea cancel...carpenter ko bolke door ke bahar lakdi par keel thukwaa deta hu!aur uspe iss Rohit ki photo lagaakar red marker se not allowed here likh dunga! permanent solution ho jaayega!

Rohit - wassup people...lagta hai maine moment kharab kardiya...baadme aau?

Karan/Preeta - ha/nahi!

Preeta hits Karan,he frowns,

Rohit sat in front of them and saw the toys,

Rohit - preparations for the baby haa!

Preeta - amm...smjhlo princess ke liye!

Rohit - tum dono ko kaise pata girl hi hogi?

Preeta - amm confirm nahi hai par...Karan...Karan ko hamari pyaari se princess chahiye!bahot excited hai ye baby ko lekar!

Karan smiled and side hugged her,

Karan - aur mujhe yakeen hai meri princess hi hogi!

Rohit - haaye...kitne pyaare ho tum dono!waise jo aayega..ya aayegi...wo mujhe kya bulaayega?

Karan(immediately) - Maamu!

Preeta looked at Karan in disbelief sensing his jealousy,while Rohit chuckled,

Rohit - no way dude...chachu is okay!not maamu!

Karan glared him,while Preeta chuckled,

Trio talked for sometime,or I should say Rohit was flirting with Preeta and Karan was getting annoyed,

Rohit - acha mai chlta hu!good night guys!good night jaaneman!(left)

Preeta looked at Karan who was sitting with an angry pout,

Preeta - tumhe kya hua?

Karan - wo aise flirt kyu kar rha hai?

Preeta - flirt nahi Karan...wo aise hi baat karta hai!

Karan - but still....

Preeta - you don't need to get jealous...wo bas mera bahot acha dost hai...college ke time par usne meri bahot help bhi ki hai!so just treat him as your friend too!

Karan(frowns) - friend thik hai....lekin tumhare saath flirt nahi krega wo!

Preeta chuckles and hits his head,he looked at her annoyingly but then smiled.

To be continued.










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