Rewrite the Stars (Completed)

By priyapariyaar

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One of the hardest decision in life is to choose between love and family.... N Shiva has to make that decisi... More

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prologue
mission joote - churao/bachao!
who will win??
jeet gaya hum!!!!!
shadi ki baat
planing
rumours
new feelings
ride
mission vicky!!!!
plan successful or flop??
care in the first step in love
tujhe kabse meri chinta hone lagi??
checking chemistry
fever!!!
dream !!
ignore
anniversary
celebration
closer
shiva with other girl
realising my feeling
shiva ko bachana
kya chal raha hai??
what am i feeling??
its 'IT' what i m thinking??
is it love???
yes i m in love
confession
ShiVi ❤
godhbharai
truth or dare
shadi ki baat
pandya parivaar ki bahu??
raavi outbrust
saathi rey thoda thehar ja
humari adhuri kahani
tujhe kitna chaahein lage hum
REWRITE THE STARS
pehle pyaar ka pehla gham
duniya yeh jeeti gayi, dil har gaya
ranjha
Dev-raavi ki shadi ho gayi 🥺😭
sara jag chad ke bas tenu hi hai chuneya
shadi nahi karna
iktara
epilogue
new story

Am I in LOVE????

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Shiva pov

Yeh mami ki behan ka bhi kuch pata nahi chalta !!!! 😩

2 days have been passed since that incident, after that neither did I saw her nor did she came home or store... I know meine bohot galat kiya hai, n I m guilty but yeh baat hi nahi suna chahti.... Bohot try kiya ki usse maafi mangu, calls n text thak bhi kiya lekin nahi madam ko toh mujhe ignore hi karna hai 😫

Krish - bohot maza aane wala hai!!! (Excitingly)

Dev - aa yaar finally after so many years hum sab kahi ghumne jaane wale hai!!! (Excitingly)

Dhara - tum sab ne packing toh kar liya na???

Dev - ha bhabhi!!!!!

Gautam- dhara meine hardik se baat kar liya hai.... Bol diya hai ki hum aadhe ghante mein nikal jayenge!!! (Smiling) ... Tum sab yaha ka dekh lo mein maa ko lekar aata hoon!!! (Smiling)

Dhara - theek hai

All were very excited to go to Ahmedabad... Actually hardik bhai chahte teh ki bhabhi ki godbharai unke ghar mein ho.... Bhabhi ki pregnancy ko abb 5 months ho gaye hai... I know godbharai jaldi ho rahi hai but hardik bhai bol rahe teh ki he had to go out of india for some month n even anita bhabhi will go with him... So before going they want to do something special for bhabhi n so they came out with this plan

Flashback (yesterday)

Shiva pov

As we came back from the store, we were very tired... Ajj store mein bohot kam tha.... Phir we freshen up n bhabhi serve us the dinner

Gautam - tum sab apna saman pack karna.... Humein kal Ahmedabad ke liye nikalna hai!!!

Dev n I look at each other confusingly

Dev - Ahmedabad???? (Confusingly)

Gautam- ha actually hardik chahta hai ki dhara ki godbharai uske ghar mein ho!!!

Dhara - bhai aur anita bhabhi kuch mahino ke liye bahar ja rahe hai.... Isliye woh chahte hai ki unke jaane se pehle meri godbharai ho jaye!!! (Excitingly)

Krish - isliye tum dono bhi apna saman pack kar lo... Meine toh sab packing kar di hai!!! (Excitingly)

Dhara - yeh toh subha se itna excited ho raha hai!!!! (Excitingly)

Shiva - woh sab tho theek hai... Pad store??? (Worried)

Gautam - meine kaka ko bol diya hai woh sab sambhal lenge!! So tum dono bhi packing start kardo!!! (Excitingly)

We nodded

Gautam - waise dhara tune mami ko bhi bol diya hai na!!!!

Dhara - ha gombi..... Meine raavi ko call kar diya tha.

Hearing her name gave me chills... I remember every words that she told me

Aur baata deti hoon ki meine yeh sab sirf isliye kiya kyunki mein tujhe jealous feel karwana chahti thi . .. Mujhe tujhe teri feelings realised karwana chahti thi because I LOVE YOU...

Yeh ladki na hi mera call pick kar rahi hai na hi message ka reply de rahi hai!!!

Gautam- kya bol rahi thi??

Dhara - bol rahi thi ki anita bhabhi ne already inform kar diya tha unhe... Aur bol rahi thi ki woh log waha pad chale jayenge !!! (Smiling)

Suman - akele akele kyu... Saath mein chalte hai na... Ek hi toh jagad jaana hai!!! (Thoughtfully)

Dhara - wahi toh meine bhi bol diya ki hum sab saath mein chalega... Mana kar rahi thi pad meine mami se baat kar li hai... Jal subha 8 baje hi nikal jayenge!!! (Smiling)

Suman - theek hai toh gombi Tu kal ek mini bus arrange kar de!!!

Gautam - ji maa abhi karta hoon!! (Smiling)

Yeh chipkali bhi na ek moka nahi chodti mujhe ignore karne ka.... Pad kal kaise bachegi.... Kal toh baat karke rahunga... Aur maafi bhi maunga!!!!

Flashback end

Krish- chalo chalo bus bhi aa gayi hai... Chalte hai!!! (Excitingly)

Gautam- 8 ghante ka safar hai... Tu aur maa.....(Worried)

Suman - mujhe toh koi problem nahi hai... Tu dhara se puch!!!

Dhara - tum ho na mera khayal rakhne ke liye toh bass!!!! (Smiling)

Suman - waise yeh jagat aur prafulla kaha reh gaye??? Bus bhi aa gayi hai!!! (Thoughtfully)

Jagat - hum yaha hai moti behan!!!!

Mama n mami enter, they came inside n greeted everyone.... But my eyes were searching for someone else

Yeh mami ki behan ki beti kaha hai?? 🤨

Dhara - mami raavi kaha hai???

Prafulla- woh dukan mein chips aur juice kharid rahi hai!!! (Smiling)

Suman- waise aaj kitni khushi ka din hai na kitni saal baad hum sab kahi ja rahe hai!!! (Excitingly)

Dhara - ha maa!!! (Excitingly)

All were talking

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Finally I saw her entering.... She look at me n we both share an intense eye lock.

My heart skipped a beat ..... 2 days, after 2 days I m seeing her.... My heart was filled with peace....

Krish- finally raavi bhi aa gayi!! (Excitingly)

She smile...

She is behaving odd.... Humesha toh itni bubbly aur cheerful rehti hai.... Kahi bahar jane ke news se hi itni excited ho jati hai toh phir aaj itni normal kaise behave kar rahi hai.... Where is her excitement????

Dev - kaise ho raavi.... Aur do din se kaha thi store mein meri help bhi karne nahi aayi?? (Smiling)..... Iss shiva ne kuch kaha tha kya uss din??

Raavi - nahi asi baat nahi hai... Kuch alone time chahiye tha mujhe so!!! (Smiling)

Fake smile 😒

Dev - kyu koi problem hai kya?? (Worried)

Raavi - nahi koi problem nahi hai!! (Smiling)

She is lying.... Her face was pale, her smile was fake and her eyes were swollen... Matlab woh bohot royi hai!!!!

I feel a sharp pain in my heart as I thought that I m the reason of her tears... She cried because of me...

Krishan - chalo chalo baatein bohot ho gaya abb jaldi bus mein bet jate hai

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As we enter the bus... Everyone took their sits.... Dhara bhabhi n gombi sit together, krish sat with maa, mama n mami sat together.... Dev n I took the last second row.... He sat in the right side n I left....

Dhara - raavi bet ja!!! (Smiling)

Krish- ya phir wahi stand karna ka maan hai!!! (Laughing)

I look at raavi.... Till now she haven't even talk with me

Kya itni duri aa gayi hai ki...... 😟

I saw her coming

Dev - raavi aa jao yaha beto (pointing beside him ) ... Meine ek nayi movie download ki hai saath mein dekhte hai!!! (Smiling)

Raavi look at him n smile.... Then she look at me, I could see pain in her tears

Kitna hurt kiya hai meine!!!!!

I was feeling so bad.... What have I done!!! Raavi was looking at ne with watery eyes

Raavi - nahi dev tum dekh lo.... Mein last mein beti hoon!!! (Smiling)

Dev - bohot achi movie hai raavi!!! (Smiling)

Raavi - nahi dev... Agar baad mein maan kiya toh dekh lungi!!! (Smiling)

Raavi walk lifelessly towards the last row....

Iski khushi toh mein wapas lekar aaunga!!!

Raavi sat behind me .... I was happy that she didn't sat behind dev...

Raavi ne kaha tha ki woh mujhe jealous feel karwana chahti thi.... Aur mein feel bhi kar raha tha.... Woh keh rahi thi ki toh mujhe mere feelings realise karwana chahti thi... Toh kya mein sach mein usse pasand karne laga hoon , pasand ya phir pyaar??

Am I in LOVE??? 😳

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov

I sat down in my seat quietly.... I don't have the strength to talk to anyone...

I never thought that I will be like this.... Matlab I never thought that I will cry for a boy, I will helplessly seeking for a guy love n attention ... But no jab pyaar hi ase insan se kiya ho jisse meine kabhi iss feelings se kabhi socha bhi nahi tha toh expect bhi kar sakte hai ... Yes I helplessly love him n I can't stop it... Bohot pyaar karti hoon mein Shiva se.... He is my first love n I want him to be my perfect (last) love !!! Pad yeh Shiva ko toh koi matlab hi nahi hai meri feelings se.

I know he call me n text me but I m sure woh sab guilt mein kiya hai... Mein chahti hoon woh mujhe pyaar kare naki guilty feel kare!!!!

When anita di call us n told us about the plan .... Masi n masa paa were very happy but I..... I didn't knew how to react, M I ready to face Shiva right now??? Is this the right time??? .... But I have to.... I m raavi, Somnath ki sabse sundar n confident ladki!!!
I decided ki abb bohot royi mein Shiva ke liye abb aur nahi!!! I have to show him that I m happy without him!!! I have to be confident, I can't show him my weakness, I will not behave like a teenager nibbi who after heartbreak behave as if the world is over n love is poison.... No I should behave like an adult...

I took all the courage n went to pandya house as soon as I enter the first person I notice was Shiva.... Yes shiva.... We both share an intense eye lock.... But I broke it.... I have to behave normal but my eyes were not helping me since it was becoming watery...

Raavi Tu yeh kar sakti hai!!!!

As I enter the bus dev offer me a seat beside him... But I denied, because as soon as I dev offer me the seat I just look at Shiva.... N I could see that he looks hurt... N my poor heart can't see him hurt n so I denied... Moreover I need some peace... So I went to the last row n sat by the window seat just behind Shiva

Chahe kitna bhi Shiva se dur rehne ki koshish kar lu.... Lekin yeb dil hai ki manta nahi!!!!

It was long journey n I have a lot of time to think....

Raavi pov end

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