BALVEER RETURNS FANFIC

By the_lazy_pen

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Balveer Returns ?
VIVI MEETS DEBU
THE SECRER HELPER
FREIND OR FOE ?
Debs Past Revealed
THE UNKNOWN HELPER
DEBU - VIVAN REUNITES
ARRIVAL OF RANI PARI
RANI PARI IN DANGER
Shivputra vs jwala
THE LAST WAR OF JWALA
DHOKHA YA SAJIS : (MULTIUPDATE )
ALL HEROES IN LIFE STAKE (MULTIUPDATE )
P.S
CHARACTER/PLACE SKETCH
THE TATWA YANTRA ...
COMEBACK OF BALVEER
ENTRY OF TANYA .
THE RAKSHAK NIYUKTI
THE BONDING STARTS ( SHIVANYA )
DEBU GONE MISSING
THE WRONG DECISION
NOT APART YET CANT BE TOGETHER
PROBLEMS STARTS
REVEALING SECRETS AND THE ATTACK ON FAIRY REALM
THE BETRAYAL OR MISBELIEF ?
THE UNBELIEVABLE LOSS
THE LEGACY TO BE MADE ........
THE MEETUP - IS THIS THE TRUTH ?
DARKNESS RISES
WRITERS TALK
Dharti par khatra
AWAKENING OF SHAURYA
SAVIOURS IN ACTION
STAGING - THE FINAL BATTLE
NAYA ARAMBH - BVR SEASON 3
RESTORING ORDER FROM CHAOS
THE NEW BEGINNING
AUTHOR'S NOTE :
BALVEER SEASON 3

DEBU AND GANG AT BHARAT NAGAR

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By the_lazy_pen

RECAP : A CAR STOPS AT BHARAT NAGAR .

AB AAGE :

DEV'S POWER GIVING CEREMONY WAS DONE AND THEY HAV RETURNED TO BHARAT NAGAR . EVERYONE MEMORY WAS WIPED ABOUT DEVS DEATH AND WAS REPLACED WITH A MEMORY OF DEV GOING TO PUNE FOR JOB .

A CAR STOPS AT BHARAT NAGAR .
EVERYONE TURNS TO SEE THE CAR . IT WAS AN LUXURY CAR

THE CAR 🔝🔝

4 people place there legs on the floor together . And then come out of the car together. Everyone was shocked to see it was debu and the gang.

They were looking so cool that everyone was looking at them .
The gang walks towards bharat nagar residents .

Gang : Namaste uncle aunty ,
Debu : namast maa.

All of them touch the feet of bharat nagar residents and take there blessings .

The gang and there costume 🔝🔝

KARUNA : DEBU ( HUGS HIM ) KAISE HO BETA ?

DEBU : MAIN ACHA HU MA AAPSAB KAISE HO ?

KARUNA :HAM SAB V THIK HAI BAS MISS KIYA TUMHE .

DEBU : MAINE V AAPSAB KO MISS KIYA 🥰. WAISE YEH MERE DOST HAI PUNE MEIN HAMSAB EK HI SATH REHTE THE . AB YEHLOG V YAHA SHIFT HOGAYE .

KARUNA : YEH TOH ACHI BAT HAI PAR AAPLOG KAHA RAHOGE ?

SID : ABHI KE LIYE TOH KAHI HOTEL MEIN AND THEN YAHA KAHI GHAR DEKH KAR BHAI KO SHIFT KARWA DENGE.

KARUNA : ARE HOTEL KYU AAPSAB MERE GHAR CHALIYE , VIVAN BAG LO INSE .

SHIV :NAHI NAHI AUNTY ITS OK . AAPKO TAKLIF NAHI DENA CHAHTE HAM.

KARUNA : ARE NAHI CHALIYE (TAKES BAG AND TAKE THEM WITH HER )

DEBU : WAH AB MAJA AAYEGA 😁.

SHIV :BHAIYA EK BAT PUCHU ?

DEBU : HA BOLO ?

SHIV : KARUNA AUNTY SUBAH LATE UTHNE PE DATENGI TOH NAHI NA 🤪.

THE GANG LAUGHS AND THEN GOES IN THE HOUSE.

THE PLACEMENT OF THE LUGGAGE WAS DONE IN A ROOM NEAR DEV AND VIVANS AND BED WERE SETUP IN VIVANS ROOM .

AT AFTERNOON :

KARUNA : BACHO KHANE AJAO ..

EVERYONE : AAYE AUNTY / MAA.

THEY COME DOWN FOR LUNCH .

KARUNA : WAISE MAINE TUM SAB KA NAME NAHI PUCHA THA ...

SID : ARE SORRY HAM V BATANA BHUL GAYE 😅. BTW IM SIDHARTH OBEROI . CALLED AS SID.

VEER : IM VEER OBEROI .

SHIV : SHIVPUT.... ( BITES HIS TONGUE )

KARUNA : KYA ?

SHIV : UMM .... ( DEBU FAKES COUGH )

DEBU :AHEM AHEM ..... MA PANI... AHEM .... PASS KIJIYE...

KARUNA :HA YE LO ..... (PASSES WATER ) THIK HO ?

DEVU : HA ...

KARUNA :(FACING SHIV ) KYA NAM BOLA TUMNE ?

SHIV : SHIV OBEROI 😁 .

KARUNA :OHH TUM TEENO BROTHERS HO ?

SID : NAHI TEENO NAHI SIRF MAIN AUR SHIV . VEER HAMARA FREIND HAI SAME TITLE HAI USKA JUST 😅. HA BUT BROTHER SE KAM NAHI HAI.

SHIV : YEP HE IS OUR BROTHER FROM ANOTHER MOTHER . 😁

Debu : Wah shiv kya dialogue mara . (Pats shiv )

Shiv :Thanks bhaiya . Waise hame room dekhne chalna chahiye .

Veer : Ha fir teri shifting v toh karwani hai 🤔.

Sid :Ha chalo khana khatam karo chalte hai.

Everyone finishes there food and goes out to search a room. Debu gets a text on his mobile.

Text : Dabbu mujhe tumse kuch bat karni hai abhi ajao jaldi . ( its from ananya )

Debu : Umm ... guys ...tumlog ghar dekho main ata kuch kam hai ...

Shiv : Kuch kam hai ya kisiko aapse kam hai (teasing tone ).

Sid and abhi : ( laughing ) jao jao ...bhabi ke pas 🤣.

Debu :Kya kaha tumne .... main batata hu ruko .....

Shiv : oops... lagta hai abhi bhagna padega ... ( everyone runs laughing )

Debu :Tumlogo ko bataunga akar wait karo .

Deb goes to his old house where he had  came to live earlier  with the fairies .....

Debu : uhm....yaha light kyu  nahi hai .... anu kaha ho ? ( he struggles to swith on the light )

Debu switches on the light his face was mistakenly near and ananya gets scared seeing debu suddenly near  her face she was about to fall while debu catches her. They have a eyelock.

Parallel time : shiv , sid ,veer were roaming suddenly they hear a scream and goes to the direction when they sneak through the window they see debu and ananya .
In the eyelock position .

Shiv : woah debanya 😁 (giggles pressing his mouth )

Sid: wait inke maje lete (winks ti shiv and veer )

All take out  there mobile and opens there music app.

Sid: 1...2...3... now...

The trio  press the play button together and the song starts playing in full volume in all three mobiles.

Song :

Hone laga tumse pyar
Hone laga besumar
Hone laga .....

It was when debanya realises there position and breaks the eyelock .

Deb : uhmmm....guys....accident tha ... (scratches his neck awkardly )

Ananya : haa....woh main slip kargayi thi ..... trust me .....

Shiv : Are comeon bhaiya bhabhi aap par hame beleive hai (teasing tone)

Debanya : kya bola ( in unison )

Sid :woah unison .....(winks to shiv and veer )

Trio starts singing the song

Hone laga tumse pyar (  in teasing tone)

Debu : tumlogo ko toh main .... ( the trio runs from there )

Ananya :oh hello ( debu turns towards her )

Debu :hello (shakes her hand )

Ananya :Yeh kya bhabhi ha ? Kya bol rakha hai apne dosto ko ?

Debu : Kuch bhi toh nahi bola aur agar bola v toh problem hi kya hai ?

Ananya : you ....

Debu : me.....

Ananya : what the heck ? ................funny

Debu : waise mujhe yaha kyu bulaya tha ?

Ananya : Tum yeh batao veerlok mein mere mind ko read kaise kiya ?

Debu : woh..............uhmmm
......woh maine aise hi boldiya tha jaise mujhe tum dekh rahi thi isliye....

Ananya :  acha ? Toh tum mera mind read kar sakte ho 🤨.

Debu : Ha bilkul ruko abhi read karta ....

Anananya : Ok karo 😏.

Debu : uhmm ruko (starts staring her face ) uhmmm......

Ananya : are bologe v ? Ya uhmm uhmm karte rahoge ?

Debu :kya bolu ..? Tumhare pas mind hi nahi hai....

Ananya : you ....

Debu : me...

Ananya : ruko batati main ...... (starts beating him ) batao nahi hai mind merepas... bolo....

Debu :Are sorry sorry .... (catches her hands and then stares in her eyes )

Ananya stops struggling when she sees he is staring her eyes . Debu brings his face near her cheeks and then whispers in her ears

Debu : (whispers in her ears ) dimag hai bhut khali hai. 🤣🤣 ( runs away )

Ananya : you dabbu.....

Debu : (shouts while running ) me..

To know what happens next .. where is kaal and whats kaals plan , how will kaal be killed keep reading.

Thanks for reading

This is

The lazy pen

Signing off ( property ke papers nahi 🤣)

Peace

AND BTW ALOT OF THANKS FOR 1K+ READS .
ALOT OF THANKS GUYS AND JINHONR ABHI TAK NAHI PADHA COMEONE LAZY PEOPLE PADHLO 🤪.
AND QUESTIONS COMMENT KARO CHALO Q/A KARTE 😁
CYA IN NEXT PART BYE....

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