Rewrite the Stars (Completed)

By priyapariyaar

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One of the hardest decision in life is to choose between love and family.... N Shiva has to make that decisi... More

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prologue
mission joote - churao/bachao!
who will win??
jeet gaya hum!!!!!
shadi ki baat
planing
rumours
new feelings
ride
mission vicky!!!!
plan successful or flop??
care in the first step in love
tujhe kabse meri chinta hone lagi??
checking chemistry
fever!!!
dream !!
ignore
anniversary
celebration
closer
shiva with other girl
realising my feeling
shiva ko bachana
what am i feeling??
its 'IT' what i m thinking??
is it love???
Am I in LOVE????
yes i m in love
confession
ShiVi ❤
godhbharai
truth or dare
shadi ki baat
pandya parivaar ki bahu??
raavi outbrust
saathi rey thoda thehar ja
humari adhuri kahani
tujhe kitna chaahein lage hum
REWRITE THE STARS
pehle pyaar ka pehla gham
duniya yeh jeeti gayi, dil har gaya
ranjha
Dev-raavi ki shadi ho gayi 🥺😭
sara jag chad ke bas tenu hi hai chuneya
shadi nahi karna
iktara
epilogue
new story

kya chal raha hai??

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By priyapariyaar

Since many of you wanted me to update this one today so i m updating this......

N ya aage padh kar please mujhe maarna mat 😅😅.... Apne writer pad bharosa karna.... Mein bhi shivi hi chahti hoon

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In pandya niwas.... All were having their dinner.... They all were talking n laughing

Krish - pad gombi apne kyu shiva ko hi bhejna hai .... Dev ko bhi bhejo na.... Phir mein ghar mein akela enjoy karunga!!! (Excitingly)

Dev - agar mein chala jaunga toh tujhe dukan sambhalna padega.... Kar payega Tu akele!!! (Raising his eye brows)

Krish thought for some time

Krish - nahi nahi bhai yeh humse na ho payega (dramatically).... Tu ghar mein hi bet, shiva sab sambhal lega!!!! (Panicking)

Dhara - krish kitna bakwas karta hai na tu.... Abb chup chap khaana kha!!!

Krish nodded

Gautam - shiva Tu kal subha ke 7 ko nikal jaana!!! (Smiling)

Shiva slightly nodded

Dhara - Shiva kuch kuwa hai kya tu do din se itna ghum shum rehne laga hai.... Koyi problem hai kya??? (Worries)

All start at Shiva

Shiva pov

Abb kaise bolu ki bohot bari problem hai.... Woh chipkali mujhse pyaar karti hai!!!!

Gautam - shiva.....

Gombi voice brought me to reality

Gautam - Kaha khoy gaya??? (Concerned) ..... Sab theek toh hai na... Tujhe rajkot nahi jaana kya??? (Worried)

I nodded no

Shiva - nahi gombi , sab theek hai... Aur mein rajkot jaunga.... Waha pad naye suppliers se bhi toh milna hai na!!! (Giving a small smile)

Gautam - sure na..... Agar koyi problem  hai toh mein dev ko bhej dunga... Lekin Tu toh janta hai dev iss kam mein acha nahi hai!!!

Dev- ha Shiva agar mein gaya toh kam bigaad dunga!!!! (Looking down feeling embarrassed)

Shiva - it's k.... Mein jaunga!!! (Smiling)

Dhara - oh shit!!!!!

we all turn to bhabhi

Gautam - kya huwa dhara ?? (Panicking)

Krish - app theek toh ho na?? (Worried)

Dev - doctor ko call karu!!! (Worried)

Shiva - kuch chahiye??? (Worried)

Dhara - mein theek ho..... Tum log shaant ho jao!!!.....  Woh actually raavi ne call kiya, phone silent mein hone ke karan call utta nahi payi!!! (Smiling)

My heart skipped a beat hearing her name!!!!

RAAVI!!!!

Gautam - waise raavi ajj kal  kuch zyada hi busy nahi hoti.... Do din se bhi nahi aayi na??? (Thoughtfully)

Krish - ha meine bhi usse babli di ki engagement ke baad dekha hi nahi!!! (Thoughtfully)

Dev - pata nahi uss din woh ase hi chali gayi .... Humse baat bhi nahi kiya!!!!! Aur do din se na hi ghar na hi store aayi hai!!! (Worried)

Dhara - pata nahi  kya chal raha hai iske dimag mein!!! (Concerned)

Gautam - dhara Tu chinta mat kar, woh raavi hai agar koyi problem huwi hoti toh sabse pehle tujhe hi toh batati hai na!!! (Smiling)

Dhara nodded

Sab itna acha chal raha tha phir achanak se yeh sab kyu!!!! . . . .. Upar se mujhe 1 week ke liye rajkot bhi jaana hai, suppliers se milne ke liye aur naye Branch ki planing karne ke liye.... I need to keep my mind fresh but yeh chipkali mujhe sukoon se rehne de tab na!!!!

All got busy in other topics.... Thought I was present their physical but mentally I was with raavi!!!!

Yeh kya kar rahi hai chipkali!!!!

Flashback (2 days before)

(Shiva)

I was shock with her confession..... What the hell is she talking???.... Wait a minute is she doing a prank or something ??? Or she is doing all this to irritate me??? ..... Then congratulations, I m irritated

Shiva - yeh kya bakwas kar rahi hai.... Pagal toh nahi ho gayi hai??? (Shockingly)

Raavi - Shiva Tu bhi kya kya bolta  hai.... I love you!!!!! (Excitingly)

Telling this she gave me a hug.... I stood their surprise..... What m I suppose to do now hug her back??? No no that I will never..... Or push her back??? Nahi that is more worst!!!!

Shiva - raavi!!! (Softly)

I should be as calm as I can be this chipkali is making me insane

Raavi  broke the hug!!!

Shiva - agar yeh koi prank hai na toh tu jeet gayi. !!! (Calmly)

She gave me a confusing look

Shiva - tu yeh sab mujhe irritate karne ke liye  kar rahi hai na.... Toh congrats mein irritate ho raha hoon!! (Irritatingly)

Raavi  look at me angry.....

Now what ??? Is she going to kill me now 😩

Then suddenly she smile widely

Yeh ladki sach mein pagal hai!!!!! 😖

Raavi - k I know tu confuse ho raha hai na ki achanak se somnath ki sabse sundar ladki tujhe kaise pyaar kar sakti hai!!! (Chuckle) .... Yeh pyaar hai Shiva, yeh toh kabhi bhi ho sakta hai.... Aur mujhe hogaya hai tujhe!!! (Smiling widely) .... Shiva pata hi nahi chala ki kab dushmani nibhate nibhate pyaar ho gaya.... Pyaar karne lagi hoon  baatein pyaar karti hoon (smiling) .... Shiva I love you, Somnath ki sabse sundar ladki tujhe pyaar karti hai!!! (Exciting shouting)

She look at me with twinkling eyes!!!!!

No this can't happen .... Woh mujhse sach mein pyaar nahi kar sakti..... How can she love me???

Raavi - abb tu bhi bol!!! (Excitingly)

I look at her shockingly

Raavi - tu bhi bol ki tu bhi mujhe kitna pyaar karta hai!!! (Shyly)

Now what should I do.... She was giving me a loving look.... I took a deep breath

Shiva - raavi!!! (Softly)

Raavi - ha!!! (Blushing)

Shiva - mein.... Mein... Woh mein!!! (Nervously)

Raavi - oi Bhootnath kitna saal legayega .... Jaldi bol.... Kitna nervous ho raha hai, ase mamlo mein ladke proposed karte hai aur ladkiya sharmati hai lekin humare case mein toh mein ladka hoon aur tu ladki!!! (Chuckle) .... Abb sharmana ban kar aur chal bol!!! (Excitingly)

I turn back!!!! I don't have the guts to meet her eyes!!!

Shiva - mein... Mein tujhe pyaar nahi karta !!!! (Nervously)

There was pin drop silent.....!!!!!

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Raavi touch my shoulder ,I turn back

Raavi - tu mujhe pareshan karne ke liye yeh sab bol raha hai na ... Dekh Shiva please asa mat kar mere dil beta ja raha hai!!! (Scared) ..... Tu jhoot bol raha hai na!!!! (Fearfully)

I nodded no

Shiva - nahi raavi mein jhoot nahi bol raha!!! (Seriously)

She was shock n was silent

Raavi - jhoot phir se jhoot bol raha hai.... Tu bhi mujhe pyaar karta hai... Shiva atleast mujhe pareshan karne ke liye jhoot toh mat bol!!! (With watery eyes)

Shit!!!!!!

Shiva - raavi tu baat ko nahi samajh rahi!!!

Raavi - agar pyaar nahi karta toh itni fikar kyu hai tujhe, kyu teri saans aatak gayi thi jab vicky ne mujhe patthar se maara aur kyu tu jealous ho gaya jab dev mujhse dance kar raha tha.... Kyu tu mere kareeb aa raha hai, woh store room , phir masi ke ghar.... Aur toh aur kyu tune dev aur krish ko bheja meri madat karne ke liye.... Bol???? (With teary eyes)

Kyu??? Kyu kiya meine woh sab???

I didn't  have  any answer to her questions.... I myself don't know!!!

Shiva - nahi pata hai.... Bass itna pata hai ki mein tujhe pyaar nahi karta!!! (Screaming)

Raavi - jhoot... Mein believe hi nahi kar sakti!! (Screaming)

Shiva - tu believe kar ki nahi, I don't care.....!!!!! (Angrily)

She look at me hurtfully.....!!!!!

Raavi - Shiva!!!! (Hurt)

Shiva - meine bol diya ki mein tujhse pyaar nahi karta.... Abb manna ya na manna tere upar hai..... Thodi si parwa dikha diya toh sar pe bet rahi hai!!!! Tu na mami ki behan ki beti hai, tujhse nafrat ho sakti hai pyaar nahi!!! (Angrily)

She looks broken..... But I can't help her.... Jinta jaldi yeh baat samajh jayegi utna acha hai!!!!! Atleast hurt toh nahi hogi!!!!

She broke down n start crying..... I wanted to wipe her tears but then woh phir se galat way mein le legi.... I didn't wanted to give her false hope....

Shiva - yeh na do teen din ki zid hai... Do teen din katam toh yeh pyaar ka fitoor bhi udd jayega .!!!!

She look at me shockingly n then stood up n angrily hold my collar...

Raavi - tu mujhe reject kar sakta hai.... Lekin mere pyaar ko insult nahi kar sakta....  Mein tujhe pyaar karti hoon, yeh do teen din ka zid nahi hai!!!!! (Angrily)

Shiva - zid hi hai, dekh lena do teen din chehra nahi dekhegi na toh yeh zid bhi chali jayegi!!!! (Rudely)

Raavi - theek hai phir, mein teri chehra do - teen din thak nahi dekhungi aur phir dekte hai, ki yeh pyaar hai ki nahi!!! (Angrily)

She left my collar n left.....

Shiva - mein tujhe ghar drop kar deta hoon!!! (Shouting)

Raavi - mere pass mera pair hai!! (Coldly)

Then she left

Flashback end

It's been two days that this chipkali has not meet me... I don't know do she miss me Or not, but I definitely do..... Yesterday she got to know that I m leaving, bhabhi told her.... But still she didn't came to meet me

After having the dinner, i lay down on my cot.... Thinking about all this n slept!!!

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov

Tu asa kyu karta hai Shiva!!!!!

I was looking at his picture that i click during babli di engagement.... When he reject, I was hurt very hurt.... But then he insult my love by telling that it was just a 2-3 zid... Like seriously.... I  have cry all this 2 days for that idiot but no he doesn't even care....

Why can't he just see that how much I love him, this two days were very painful, I wanted to just go n hug her but no I can't... I have  to prove him!!!! I have to make him understand that my feelings are true and genuine!!!!!

Tomorrow he is going to rajkot for 1 week !!! This new broke my heart...

Yeh bhi bhoothnath dusre ladko ke jaise kyu nahi hai !!!!!!

Kyuki yehi chiz toh hain jo tujhe uske kareeb leja tha hai!!!! My heart whisper

I couldn't help but smile.... Yes his uniqueness is what attracts me towards him.... He is my bhoothnath only mine!!!!!!

Iss chipkali ko uska bhoothnath zaroor milega!!!! 😏

Raavi pov end

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