Hello everyone this is an edited version of chapter 1 I'll be editing the first few chapters of the book turning it into third person view and changing a bit of the chapter's
And also I have AO3 so if you want to follow me they're my username is "Itzcrystall 0816" I'm just basically moving my books they're
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After the seductive rose was broken Bryan finally got control over his body again, he immediately went and apologize for the things he didn't did and explained it wasn't him and wasn't in control of his body
Of course they didn't listened to anything he said or wasn't convinced it wasn't him, and this lead to all of them agreeing to punish him for what he did, the only people who actually believe him are his sister Bri, and two of they're friends Xylo and Kay
Bryan went running to his cabin as Jakey move out of it and started crying on his bed, of course he didn't forget to close and lock the door not wanting everyone see him or at least the people who forgive him
"I should have known that if I took the seductive rose from that person I would turn evil" Bryan said crying more on his bed as he stuff himself in the pillow "it's all my fault" Bryan added and started repeating the words
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Bri was outside Bryan's cabin in front of it, as she followed him earlier wanting to comfort her little brother, as Bri was about to touch the knob she heard Bryan that hurted her heart
"it's all my fault"
"his blaming even it isn't his fault" Bri whispered to herself hurt seeing her little brother like this
Bri stop reaching for the knob and decided to knock instead "Bryan are you okay in their?" Bri asked in a concerned tone
Of course she already he isn't and just wanted to know if he will say he isn't
"yeah I'm fine......." Bryan said trying his best to sound his not crying even Bri already heard him "I'm not fine" Bryan mumbled the last part
Of course Bri heard it but didn't want to continue seeing her little brother need sometime alone, that's why she left as tears slowly fall down her cheek hurt to see her brother blame himself
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Later on Bryan was called by the oracle to go to the camp fire, and he of course already know why as Bryan heard the others he was going to get punish for the things "he" did
Bryan stopped crying and wipe the remaining tears away and left his cabin and started going to the location where the oracle told him to go
When he arrived everyone was glaring daggers of anger, hatred, and disgusted at him, the only ones who weren't are his sister and his two friends, that's why he went they're and sat beside them
Soon the oracle have arrived and went straight to Bryan everyone stayed quiet and watch as what punishment Bryan will get for what he did
"Bryan Aphrodite for breaking the rules, almost destroying camp, and releasing the titans your punishment will be sending you to another dimension without your memories and magic, and taking away your wings for what you have done" the oracle stated
Everyone was shock to say the least, they weren't expecting Bryan's punishment to be this they thought it would just be him getting expelled and no longer allowed to be back, but not something like this
"b-but it wasn't me it was the seductive rose I didn't do all those things I was controlled!" Bryan tried to convince the oracle, everyone could hear how scared Bryan was
With just a blink of an eye Bryan was thrown to the ground by the oracle using they're magic then summoned a grim reaper looking person, who raised they're scythe and directly aim for Bryan's wings
The only thing was heard though out the camp was Bryan's screaming pain of agony as his wings where ripped off from him, as everyone was stunned at they're seat horrified at the sight of Bryan, but the most horrified ones to see Bryan like that are his sister and two friends
Bryan's back covered in blood along with the remaining of his wings and of course his both pair of white beautiful wings that are now soaked in the shade of red in front of him, he once have lost his wings again but maybe this time it's permanently gone
Bryan was losing consciousness do to blood lost and started to fell sleepy, as ge did he felt himself flouting of course he knew that it was the oracle as they summoned a portal and throw him the last thing he heard was his sister shouting along the line of
"Bryan! Wait don't throw him!!" but of course she was to late
Bryan smiled and whispered "don't worry sis I will miss you......."
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Bri cried loudly as she stand at where once the portal was where her brother was thrown, she blame herself as she didn't made it to catching him and have lost a family member and a brother
She soon felt arms hugging her and it was Xylo, Bri turned around and hug him back tightly as she cried in Xylo's chest, as he tried to calm her down from crying
Kay was of course angry and just ready to murder anyone, she slammed her hands at the table and stand up looking at every camper who agreed to punish Bryan
"look at what you all did!!" Kay shouted angrily "except letting Bryan explain himself all of you decided to just punish him!!" Kay added angrily
No ine bothered to talk or stand up and just let Kay continue as guilt started to form in them
"he was being controlled by the stupid sword and he tried to snap and take control over his body but he couldn't!!" Kay shouted more still angry
"all of you should be ashamed because neither any of you know what will happen next and only know his going to get punish!!" Kay added
After Kay shouted at the campers no one dared to speak as they either don't know what to say or have nothing to say at all, the only thing was heard is Bri's crying for her brother, Xylo trying to calm Bri down, and Kay anger
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As for Bryan he have fainted before knowing what dimension he ended up at he didn't have his clothes and was replaced with something else, and the remaining parts of his wings are gone
A couple walking by the street found Bryan laying on the ground, they immediately went they're and check him out they felt bad and angry at to what happened to Bryan that's why they decided to adopt
Soon when Bryan woke up he saw two people looking at him worriedly and happy, he was of course confused as he didn't know any of the two the woman started to speak
"hey they're hunny we found you at the side of the street" the woman said "do you know anything?" the woman asked
Bryan was of course didn't know anything so he shook his head and said a quiet "no"
The couple nodded and started to leave the room and discuss, leaving Bryan alone with his thoughts
'where am I?'
'why can't I remember anything?'
'why do I only remember my name?'
'how long was I been in that street?'
'why those my back hurt a lot?'
Bryan thoughts was interrupted by the door opening revealing a girl who have blonde hair and wearing a mix of blue and white stripe shirt and black shorts with hazel brown eyes
"who are you?" Bryan asked looking at the girl
"I'm Crystall" the girl who now name Crystall said "and who may you be?" Crystall asked
"I'm Bryan" Bryan said Crystall nodded
"do you know what happened to you?" Crystall asked sitting on the bed
"not really I don't remember anything at all and the only thing I remember is my name" Bryan said looking sad now Crystall nodded then put her hand on his hand
"hey it's okay I can help you if you want!" Crystall happily said ""you could stay here with me and my parents we could help you and they could adopt you!" Crystall added Bryan smiled and nodded
Soon the door opened revealing the couple and who are Crystall's parents, that what Bryan thought
"I see you already met him sweetie" the woman said looking at her daughter
"yeah I did!" Crystall shouted happily "more can we adopt Bryan?" Crystall asked the couple chuckled
"actually sweetie we where planning to asked him that if he wanted us to adopt him" the man said
"r-really?" Bryan asked having wide eyes
"of course hunny if your okay with that" the woman said
Bryan nodded agreeing to be adopted as he also wanted to feel what to have a parent as he don't know what it feel
The couple was happy with Bryan's answer but the most happy one is Crystall as she's hugging Bryan saying
"where siblings now and will forever be siblings and will stay together forever!"
Bryan thought he was finally gonna have a loving family and he was happy he got to meet them
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As the sun was shining bright in the sky Bryan woke up from it and rub his eyes and fix his bed, then stretch a bit and went to the bathroom to take a shower
Once his finish he put on his signature gray shirt, his red jacket, his black pants, then brush his teeth and comb his hair, and went straight out of his room to go to the kitchen
Where he saw his sister cooking breakfast for him and her before he leave to go to the theme park and before she start her work
"hey big sis!" Bryan said happily then sit on a chair
"oh hey little bro!" Crystall said startling a little as she didn't notice Bryan entering the kitchen
"what's for breakfast big sis?" Bryan asked as Crystall just finished with cooking
"bacon, eggs, and pancakes for breakfast little bro" Crystall placing the plates on the table and taking her sit
Both soon started to eat and at the same time Bryan was going deep on his thoughts
'what will happen if they found out that I traveled to different dimensions?'
'and that me and my sister got strange powers when we return back'
'they also don't know I have a sister so what will they think if they found out I do have a sister?'
'I know Ersa, Davis, and Jon are the only ones who knew but what will they think?'
Bryan was so deep in his thoughts that he just completely black out everything in his surroundings
"Bryan"
"Bryan~"
"Bryan are you okay?"
"huh?" Bryan finally snap out of his thoughts
"you okay they're Bryan?" Crystall asked worriedly for her little brother
"yeah I'm fine" Bryan said reassuring Crystall with a smile
"your still thinking if those animatronics you called friends find out that you went to different dimensions before and the only ones who knew are Ersa, Davis, and Jon" Crystall said basically everything on Bryan's mind Bryan sigh
"I'm just worried...." Bryan trailed off "what will happen if they found out? They might get angry at me" Bryan added frowning
"hey don't worry they'll understand why, and that the government might come after us and used us as a weapon or experiment on us" Crystall said trying to cheer Bryan up
"thanks big sis" Bryan said smiling at Crystall
"they're you go" Crystall said smiling also "now go before your animatronics worry about you" Crystall added
Bryan nodded and putted his plate on the sink went off to the door and wear his shoes and went to the boss stop, even if he owned a car he still somewhat prefer taking the bus instead, and went to start another at Freddy land