Rewrite the Stars (Completed)

By priyapariyaar

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One of the hardest decision in life is to choose between love and family.... N Shiva has to make that decisi... More

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prologue
mission joote - churao/bachao!
who will win??
jeet gaya hum!!!!!
shadi ki baat
planing
rumours
new feelings
ride
mission vicky!!!!
plan successful or flop??
care in the first step in love
tujhe kabse meri chinta hone lagi??
checking chemistry
fever!!!
dream !!
ignore
anniversary
celebration
shiva with other girl
realising my feeling
shiva ko bachana
kya chal raha hai??
what am i feeling??
its 'IT' what i m thinking??
is it love???
Am I in LOVE????
yes i m in love
confession
ShiVi ❀
godhbharai
truth or dare
shadi ki baat
pandya parivaar ki bahu??
raavi outbrust
saathi rey thoda thehar ja
humari adhuri kahani
tujhe kitna chaahein lage hum
REWRITE THE STARS
pehle pyaar ka pehla gham
duniya yeh jeeti gayi, dil har gaya
ranjha
Dev-raavi ki shadi ho gayi πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜­
sara jag chad ke bas tenu hi hai chuneya
shadi nahi karna
iktara
epilogue
new story

closer

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Raavi pov

Raavi - chalo abb couple dance ki bari hai... Chalo chalo masi maa, masa paa ek dusre ke saath dance karo!!! (Excitingly)

Before anyone could react I hold both their hands n took them in the center

Raavi - krish ek acha sa romantic gaana play kar!!! (Excitingly)

Krish- sure sure!!! (Smirking)

Prafulla - aa krish rukh waha pad..... Aur yeh kya hai raavi ,dance??? (Shockingly)

Jagat - ha raavi yeh dance wance mujhse nahi hoga.... Waise bhi tere kehne pad hum bahar toh gaye na!!!! (Nervously)

Raavi- masa paa , masi maa ajj app logo ki anniversary hai... Ek dance toh banta hi hai na!!! (Excitingly)

Jagat - raavi.... (I interrupted)

Raavi- hai na suman kaki mein theek bol rahi hoon na?? (Excitingly)

Suman - ha!!!!! Bilkul!!! (Chuckle) jab raavi itna bol rahi hai toh karlo na dance!!! (Smiling)

Prafulla- suman behan app bhi!!! (Surprise)

Gautam- mama, mami karlo na!!! (Smiling)

Dhara - ha ha..... Krish tu gaana baja!!! (Excitingly)

Krish play the song

Then mama paa and masi maa dance... They were very awkward!!!

🤭🤭

So I pull dhara di n gombi in the center.... N they too started doing dance 

Dance chemistry!!!! 😳

I remember that I was checking my chemistry with Shiva....

Yeh acha time hai pad I know yeh bhootnath kabhi nahi manega!!! 😩 Par try karne mein kya jaata hai!!! 😁

I went near him

Raavi- chal ajj tera din acha bana deti hoon..... Tu bhi kya yaad rakhega.... Ki somnath ki sabse sundar ladki ke saath dance karne ka chance mil raha hai.... Chal dance karte hai!!! (Excitingly)

Shiva - dance woh bhi tujhe... Seriously , tujhe yeh galat fehmi kabse hone lagi ki mein tere sath kabhi dance bhi karunga (irritatingly).... Chipkali kahi ki jaa yaha se!! (Rudely)

Kya sach mein mere aur Shiva ke bich kuch ho sakta hai.... Kabhi nahi!!!!😤 Woh kitna rude hai mujhe.... Yeh MISSION SHIVA drop karti hoon!!! 😤

I angrily look at him

Raavi - mein bhi tere saath dance karne ke liye maari nahi ja rahi!!! (Angrily)

I stood far away from him

Krish - dance kare?? (Smiling)

Krishu ki hai mera sabse acha dost!!! 😝

Raavi - chal..!!!! (Excitingly)

Krish stop the song.... Masi maa and masa paa stop dancing n look at us shyly

So cute!!!! 😍

Even gombi n dhara di stop their dance

Krish - app mein aur raavi dance karenge!!! (Excitingly)

Then krish play the song


Dev - yeh gaana!!! (Chuckle)

Krish - oi dev yeh mera aur raavi ka favorite song hai... Dont laugh!!

Then krish n I start dancing.... We are like this chahe jo bhi function ho yeh gaane mein dance toh karna hi...

Hum thodi na couple dance karenge... Hum toh garba karenge!!!!! 😁😅

We were dancing when suddenly my I twist my leg n was gonna fall down..... I closed my eyes...... But someone hold my hand n save me from falling..... I open my eyes n saw dev holding n hand... He carefully pull me up!!

Dev - are u fine?? (Concerned)

I nodded


Someone play the song.... I turn to see dhara di looking at us and smiling.

Dhara - abb sab dance kar hi rahe hai toh tum dono bhi dance karlo!!! (Smiling)

We both nodded n smile

N we start dancing

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov

I saw raavi was falling down, before I could go n save her... Dev save her since he was standing near her.... I felt something!!!

Yeh kya ho raha hai.... Tujhe toh khush hona chahiye ki woh bach gayi... Phir tujhe itna kyu bura lag raha hai ki dev ne usse bachaya tune nahi😫.... Tu na Shiva sach mein ghadhera hota ja raha hai!!!!! 😒

As I came out of my thoughts, I saw dev  n raavi dancing.... This boils my blood... What are they doing ?? Why are they dancing??

I was feeling the anger inside me.... Any moment I can just go n pull them apart from each other...

Pehle toh mujhse puch rahi thi aur abb dekho mere bina hi dance kar rahi hai!!! 😒

So now basically there are dancing too close.... I just couldn't tolerate it n I start walking towards the center.... When that chipkali collide with me n before she could fall I hold her waist ..... She gasped.... N I smirk

Dev back off.... I pull her up n hold her hand n start dancing with her..... Everybody look at me shockingly, but I don't care

Dance karna tha na toh phir dance kar!!! 😏

The song was still going... The moment I dance with her, something inside me was flying..... Kya bolte hai oo ha butterflies were flying in my stomach.... I look at her..... N I can definitely tell that she too was feeling the same feeling as me, as I saw her blushing like anything!!!!

Yeh mujhe kya ro raha hai.... Kyu mein iss mani ki behan ki beti ke kareeb kicha ja raha hoon!!! 🤨🤔

We both were lost in each other eyes....The song ended n we stood far apart

Krish spoke breaking the awkward

Krish - wah yaar!!!!! Kya dance karte hoon..... Ekdam professional ke tara!!! (Excitingly)

All smile

Dev - sach mein yaar... Humein toh kabhi pata bhi nahi tha ki humara Shiva bhi itna acha dance karta hai!! (Smiling)

Dhara - ha!!! (Teasingly)

All were teasing me like anything

O God!!!!!! 😬

Raavi - chalo chalo bohot huwa app aur bhi surprises hai!!! (Excitingly)

Prafulla - aur bhi!!!! (Surprisingly)

Jagat- aur kitne surprises hai???

Raavi- bass abb sirf 2 !!!! .... Aao aao!!! (Smiling)

Then  she took all of them in the dinning table....

Abb kya surprise hai...!!! Yeh ladki bhi na bilkul bacho ki tara hai☺.... Pata nahi bari kab hogi??? 😬

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov

As Shiva touch my waist... I feel something... I gasped .... Shiver run through my spine

Yeh kya ho raha hai!!!!!

Then Shiva shock me by holding my hand n dancing with me... Was it a dream??? Was it really Shiva???

As we were dancing... I could feel the hotness between us... We were not that cosy but still the dance for me was a bit romantic.... I never thought that dancing with Shiva will ever be romantic.... But dare I denied that I didn't like the dance... I definitely love the dance n I could feel the sparking chemistry between us!!!

After the dance... I took everyone to the  dinning table n told them to sit n then I went inside the kitchen  to bring the food...

I came outside with the food n place them on the table

Prafulla- itna sara khaana.... Tune  akele banaya hai!!! (Surprise)

Raavi - of course meine hi banaya hai!!! (Smiling)

Dhara - waise kya kya banaya hai ?? (Excitingly)

Raavi- mein dikhati hoon!!!

Then I show them the dishes.... I made rice, puri, chapati , matar ki sabji n ya kheer . ... They all were surprise!!!

Suman - yeh sab banate huwe tujhe thakan nahi huwi kya?? (Surprise)

Raavi- kaki mein raavi hoon raavi mein multitasking karti hoon .. Asi choti choti batao se tired nahi hoti mein !!! (Proudly)

Jagat- pad phir bhi ajj meri beti na bohot mandat ki hai!!! (Smiling)

Dhara - ha woh toh hai ,humari raavi bohot manati hai!!! (Smiling)... Waise jab puri aur rice banaya toh phir yeh chapati kyu banaya?? (Thoughtfully)

Raavi - dhara di... Suman kaki aur masa paa ki health issues ke karan inhe itna  oily khaana nahi chahiye isliye!!! (Smiling)

Dhara - kitna dhyan rakhti hai na tu sabka!!! (Sweetly)

Raavi- apne parivaar ka hi toh rakh rahi hoon  na!!! (Smiling)

All were giving me a smile.... But someone caught my attention.... Shiva was looking at me n smiling ... He was looking proud of me.... But y??? Is he proud of me?? Is he developing feeling for me???

I serve everyone!!!

Prafulla- raavi Tu bhi bet ja.... Ajj tune kaafi manat hi hai!!! (Smiling)

I nodded n sat beside dhara di, opposite of Shiva.... Because that was the only sit left

All have the first bit

Krish - wah raavi!!!!! Kya khaana banaya hai.... Bohot tasty hai!!! (Smiling)

Dhara - sach mein kaafi achi hai!! (Smiling)

Gautam- love it!!!!

Jagat - bohot hi zyada acha hai!!! (Happily)

Suman- din pad din khaana acha banana sikh rahi hai meri bachi

Dev - it's really tasty

I waited for one more person compliment but he was busy eating

Bhukkar kahi ka!!! 🙄

Prafulla- dekha meri cooking classes dena ka decision bhi theek tha !! Abb dekhna future mein kam aayega (Smiling)

Suman -matlab?? (Confusingly)

Prafulla - ha... Abb shadi ke baad toh yeh sab kam aata hai na!!!! (Smiling)

Suman- kis ki shadi?? (Curiously)

Prafulla- humari raavi ki shadi!!! (Excitingly)

Some one cough!!!!

We all turn to see Shiva n dev both coughing

Dhara - kya huwa tum dono ko theek tho ho?? (Concerned)

I gave my water to Shiva.... He took it n drank it!!!! Dev too drank the water that krish gave him

Dhara - theek ho na?? (Concerned)

Both nodded

Suman - raavi ki shadi... Itni jaldi??

Raavi- ha dekho na Suman kaki masi meri shadi karne ki baat kar rahi hai!!! (Making a pout)

Prafulla- abhi abhi toh nahi but kabhi na kabhi toh shadi karni padegi na... Abb anita ki shadi ho gayi hai toh abb dusra number toh raavi ka hi hai na!! (Smiling)

Raavi- agar phir se meri shadi ki baat ki toh mein kisi se bhi baat nahi karungi!! (Making a pout)

Jagat - abb koyi meri beti ki shadi ki baat nahi karega!!!

Masa paa declare... I smile at him..!!!

Then we all had our dinner !

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All were sitting in the hall n chilling having the kheer!!!

Raavi - mein kuch lekar aati hoon!!!

Telling this I went towards my room...

I was searching something in my wardrobe when suddenly the light went.... I gasped feeling scared

Oo God !!! Light ko bhi abhi jaana tha... Mera phone kaha hai!!! 😨

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov

Raavi ki shadi!!!!

I gasped hearing this.... N then the food stuck in my neck n so I started coughing... Even dev was coughing
Raavi gave me her cup n I drink the water!!!

After that I was feeling better but then her marriage thoughts were runing in my head

Yeh chipkali ki shadi , itni jaldi.... Yeh mami ki dimag mein kya kya chalta hai.... Itni jaldi shadi karni ki kya zaroorat hai...!!!!! 😤

After having the food.... We all were chilling in the hall having the kheer.... Raavi told that she will go to her room n so she went, I too went in  the kitchen to keep the bowl when suddenly the light went

Aya abb yeh light ko bhi abhi jaana tha!!!!

I was irritated.....Suddenly realisation hit me!!!

Oh shit!!!!! Raavi toh room mein akeli hai.... Aur toh aur usse toh andhere se  daar bhi lagta hai!!!!

I quickly run towards her room.... As I walk I collide with someone n before that person could fall down I hold her waist n prevented her from falling ....  I exactly knew who was the person all were down... So she was definitely....

Shiva !!!!

I heard her soft voice

Shiva - Tu theek toh hai na??? (Concerned)

Raavi - ha!!!

Then she slowly open her eyes n look at me...... We both were having an intense eye lock..... I broke the eye lock n pull her up!!!

Raavi - thank u!!! (Nervously)

Shiva - ha ha theek hai....!!! (Nervously)

Raavi- thank u!!!! (smiling)

Shiva - kitni baar thank u bolegi??? (Irritatingly)

Raavi - phele wala thank u mujhe abhi bachane ke liye aur yeh wala dev aur krish ko meri madat ke liye bhejne ke liye!!! (Smiling)

I look at her with wide eyes

Isse kaise pata???? 😳

Raavi- itni bhi bewakoof nahi hoon jitna tu samajhta hai.... Agar baat bracelet ki baat thi toh woh toh raat mein bhi de sakta tha.... Lekin tune zabardasti dev aur krish ko jaldi bheja na so that woh meri madat kar sake!!!! (Smiling) ... Waise gussa tho thi ki tu nahi aaya.... Lekin yeh indirect help ka idea bhi acha tha!!! (Happily)

Isse yeh pata nahi hona chahiye tha!!!😩

Shiva - meine koyi help..... (Raavi interrupted)

Raavi - I know tu accept toh karne wala nahi hai... Because teri image karab ho jayegi.... Pad phir bhi thank u so much......

She gave me a peek on my cheek

Raavi -  thank u (blushing)

Telling this she went leaving me shock... It couldn't believe what had happened right now.... She kiss me like seriously!!!! N the irony is that I m blushing like hell!!!!

Yeh ladki sach mein mujhe pagal kar degi!!!

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As I reach down the light came.... Raavi gave mama n mami gift....

After some time we too left for home as it was getting late ....

While leaving raavi was giving me a wide smile

Pagal ladki 🤦‍♂️

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Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai kyu itna ajip lak raha hai.... Jab raavi ki shadi ki baat suni tab bhi itna bura lag raha tha... Akir yeh sab kya ho raha hai!!!!
Par jo bhi hai acha hi huwa meine mami ke ghar jaane ke liye ha bol diya!!!! .... Today was indeed beautiful!!!

I closed my eyes blushing remembering everything!!!!!

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov

Yeh ajip feeling kyu ho rahi hai... Kyu itni blush kar rahi hoon... Aur ek minute tune shiva ko kiss kyu kiya...... Yeh kar ho raha hai??? Kayi mujhe Shiva se py....... Pata nahi!!!!!!

I hope kal ka din is question ka answer bhi laye!!!!

Raavi pov ned

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Raavi and Shiva feelings were becoming stronger for each other n there was a someone else too who's feeling was developing

Dev pov

Yeh mujhe kya ho raha tha.... Ajj mujhe raavi se itna attraction kyu feel ho raha tha.... Jab hum dono dance kare teh toh itna  acha kyu feel ho raha tha... Aur raavi ki shadi ki baat sunkar itna ajip kyu feel ho raha hai..... Itne sare sawal hai aur jawab ek bhi nahi!!!!

Dev pov end

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