I read it and it was really good. There were some grammatical errors, but I understand that ;). I just have a small suggestion that you should try to make the chapters a little longer, so that the readers have more to read and more reasons to read the rest of your book or your other books. But other than that, I really liked the book and want you to continue writing it! (P.S. I'm Calum Hood all the way, but I'm starting to like Michael more because of your book!)
Story Reviews
By BeccaAnneHood
Story reviews in one book. •WARNING• May include spoilers. Read at your own risk. More