Naruto the Broken (Banish Fan...

By 0Ronin0

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What if Naruto didn't have anyone. Not Iruka, not the Hokage, not Jiraiya, but only a fox that was as lonely... More

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29

Chapter 10

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By 0Ronin0

Fucking mornings, I hate them with a passion but some mornings are great and you will see why

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I was wakeup find the loving feeling of a tent since we have been on the move looking for the 6 tails and jinchūriki for a few weeks now and with him being a missingnin it has been a pain in the ass but as I was thinking of ways to find him I felt something move on my chest as I pulled up the blanket I saw a someone familiar

"Well shit and how the hell did she get in here with out me knowing" I said to myself as Yugito looked with a me with lust in my eyes as it sent shivers down my spine

"Well hello Naru-kun~" Yugito said as let's say moved her hand to a place as I grabbed her hand from reaction as she looked slightly hurt

"Sorry Yugi-chan I want to wait and it really was just one of my reflexes since some women at the leaf where let's say not in the right mind" I said with a sad smile and look away from her as she sat up and sat in my lap and kissed me on the cheek

"Hey don't worry Naruto it was my fault I let Nibi influence me so sorry about that and if you wanna we can talk about it" She said as I smile at her kindness and how she would be so damn cute when she was worrying about me

"Don't worry about it Yugi-chan I'm ok but we should probably get out of bed before Fuu rips down the tent and see us like this and I will have to hear for the rest of my life" I said with Kurama's foxy grin on as Yugito laughed as we got up as I change into my new clothes I got at the village we passed which was a white under shirt with a light gray trench coat (like ibikis) and normal Anbu pants and with black steel toes boots with his swords on either side of his hips but as they were walking out of there tent Fuu walk around the corner

"Hey Naruto-nii" Fuu said with a bright smile but if your Naruto then you know it wasn't a real smile but just seeing his 'little sister' just make him smile knowing that she is some what ok since she is out of her hell hole of a village

"Hey Fuu/ Hey Little sis" Me and Yugito said in unison as it make me smile but she blushed

"Ohhhh am I interrupting something~" Fuu said with her pervert face and yes she was somewhat a pervert but I know it was just other way for her to deal with her pass

"N-o" Yugito stuttered out as her elbowed me in the side hard as fuck for your information

"Ahw- but yea no your not Fuu and stop thinking what your thinking little sis" I said as she dropped it

"Well anything on-" Fuu was saying as an explosion went off making a giant puff cloud of dust ripple throughout the forest as we all looked at each other and nodded and ran towards the explosion

"Fuck" I said to myself as I hold up my hand telling them to stop as we looked over the battle field to see two man with cloaks with red clouds on it standing over a body as I just cussed myself for forgetting about these mother fuckers as I told them to stay back as I jump down in front of them

"Well well look like I got the ohh so famous Sasori of the Red Sand and The Mad Bomber Deidara but I would like you to take your foot off of 6 there" I said as Deidara got visibly mad and Sasori or I guess his puppet stayed calm

"Why you I will show you true art" Deidara yelled

"How do you know our names" Sasori said in a calm manner

"Oh that's easy, why wouldn't the 'pray' not know his hunters and for hunters your not going to be able to get your pray this time" I said as Deidara went on about how "art is an explosion" and so on but Sasori on the other hand was just looking at me trying to figure me out

"So your an other jinchūriki of the nine tails we heard about from Itachi huh" Sasori said as I nodded but then Taiyo jumped out of his finding spot in my coat and went to his full size which was as big as his dad now as leaned on him with my arms crossed

"Well that doesn't really matter, what does is how you will died and well it easy to see how it will happen since one Deidara over there is week to lightning and you Sasori well close places is your week spot" I said as this made Sasori grin and made Deidara talk more about his 'art'

"Well looks like my 'weekness' is not a problem since we are in a open field" Sasori said as this made Deidara grin but I just laughed at them which made them look at he like I was crazy

"Oh is that what you think we'll let me just show you some of my power" I said as chakra shot around us in at giant square covering the hole clearing as I just smiled telling out my Kill Intent aiming at them as they took a step back

"WHAT THE HELL" yelled Deidara

"WHAT DID YOU DO" Sasori yelled with him

"Well you see I made one of my own jutsu's that is control my me and I add my father seal at I pin point my chakra which makes me one able to teleport anywhere in this place and don't try to blow it up because it will not work so you one tell me everything you know about the organization your in and let me get 6 tails or you dead so pick" I said as Taiyo got ready for anything

"I WILL BLOW THIS PLACE TO BITS" Deidara yelled again as he make his bomb and thrown it at the chakra wall as a giant puff smoke and a ear deafening sound of the explosion as the smoke disappeared to show it slightly cracked as I cussed myself for not making sure this jutsu would be battle ready

"HAH SO MUCH FOR IT BRING SENSIBLE" yelled Deidara again as Sasori looked shock but was happy that they have a chance

"Yell damn but it doesn't matter" I said as I disappeared as Sasori and Deidara looked around for me

"Umm down here" I said as they looked quickly here 6 was at as they saw me as I grabbed Deidara foot on my chest and flipped him back as here flipped at landed on his foot as Sasori tailed was whipped at me as I jumped up and side kicked it making it crashing onto the ground and I flashed and appeared again behind Sasori quickly slamming my fist into the back of his puppet and grabbing his red hair and pulling him out of it as I was seeing his shocked face as he went flying back and landing on his feet

"Ok Taiyo go after Deidara and be careful with his bombs" I yelled out as Taiyo nodded and flashed in front of the mad bomber

"You know it's been a long time since anyone has been able to made me go all out" Said Sasori as I chuckled

"Well then let's dance then" I said as me and Sasori dropped down into our stances as Sasori pulled out a puppet with dark black hair with brown cloak as the puppet shot iron sand at me as I started to flash passed the attacks

"You will not escape this attack" Sasori yelled as his puppet followed his face signs

"Iron Sand Technique" Sasori yelled as the puppet mouth open as Iron Sand shot out spreading everywhere and catching my feet as I was trying to pull them out

"Looks like your done and so much for all that talk" Sasori said as I my chakra flared

"I am really getting tied of that damn mouth of your" I yelled back

"To bad that I also know about the two over there" Sasori said as he pointed to Fuu and Yugito

"When your dead I am going to go over then kidnapped them since they are also jinchūriki and then k-i-l-l  t-h-e-m" Sasori said the last part slowly and with a dark smile as my long hair start to form 9 looking tails

"OH IS THAT SO WELL THEN I GOING TO SHOW YOU WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU SAY SOMETHING TO A MONSTER" I said with a deep blood hungry voice as 3 tails waved behind me with dark red chakra as I could feel the fear coming from Sasori

"I didn't-" Sasori tried to say I I didn't care to hear his voice as I flashed in front of him and back handed slapped him as he hit the chakra wall as it shattered like glass as he land making a giant crater as he was trying to sit up as I flashed in front of him again cocked my fist bad and punched him over and over and over again in the face as I put my hand over his 'heart' thing

"Your going to talk or say goodbye to everything in this world" I said as he looked at me with fear and told me everything he new about the Akatsuki

"Thanks but-" I said as I cut myself off as I shoved my hand through his heart "I don't care"  I finished him off as I could see his eyes go cold

"Well I guess I should put him in a seal and the other puppet he used since I think Gaara brother would like the present" I said as I put Sasori and the other puppet into a storage seal

"Now to help-" I said as I was cut off again as I saw Taiyo coming out of my Jutsu dragging Deidara body with his tail as I just sweat dropped

"That was fun Naru" Taiyo said as I sealed Deidara body thinking it would be a good bargaining chip with the rock village in the future

"Yea it was but can you go get 6 over there" I said as he nodded and ran and grabbed 6 as we mad back up with Fuu and Yugito and told them what happened as Yugito looked over my body to made sure I didn't have any bad injuries but all I really had was some deep cuts from the Iron Sand but we all walked back to the camp and was waiting for 6 to wake up

Chapter end
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Well damn I need to be putting more chapter on this fanfiction but sorry if the fighting is shit I am not great at writing those but if you got any suggestions to make it better PLEASE TELL ME lol but yea bye

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