Rewrite the Stars (Completed)

By priyapariyaar

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One of the hardest decision in life is to choose between love and family.... N Shiva has to make that decisi... More

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prologue
mission joote - churao/bachao!
who will win??
jeet gaya hum!!!!!
shadi ki baat
planing
rumours
new feelings
ride
mission vicky!!!!
plan successful or flop??
care in the first step in love
tujhe kabse meri chinta hone lagi??
checking chemistry
fever!!!
dream !!
anniversary
celebration
closer
shiva with other girl
realising my feeling
shiva ko bachana
kya chal raha hai??
what am i feeling??
its 'IT' what i m thinking??
is it love???
Am I in LOVE????
yes i m in love
confession
ShiVi ❀
godhbharai
truth or dare
shadi ki baat
pandya parivaar ki bahu??
raavi outbrust
saathi rey thoda thehar ja
humari adhuri kahani
tujhe kitna chaahein lage hum
REWRITE THE STARS
pehle pyaar ka pehla gham
duniya yeh jeeti gayi, dil har gaya
ranjha
Dev-raavi ki shadi ho gayi πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜­
sara jag chad ke bas tenu hi hai chuneya
shadi nahi karna
iktara
epilogue
new story

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By priyapariyaar

Raavi pov

Isse pehle ki Shiva mujhe dekh le..... Bhaag na hoga!!!! 😬

I start walking faster, I quickly cross Pandya Store n buy the jalebi....

Bass app ek baar cross kardu.... Uske baat toh aram hi aram hai!!!! 😬

I start walking more faster .... Bt then my hand bag was heavy!!!

Raavi!!!!!!

I gasped..... I turn back n was relief...

Raavi- dev tum!!!! (Smiling)

Then I went inside the store

Dev - kya yaar ajj kal toh dikhai bhi nahi deti.... Kya humse naraz ho kya??

Raavi- nahi nahi... Asi baat nahi hai!!! (Smiling) ..... Woh tum toh jante hi ho masi ko.... Cooking classes de rahi hai mujhe!!! (Sadly)

Dev - oo...... Yeh sab kya hai?? (Looking at my bag)

Raavi- oo yeh.... Actually kal masi aur masa paa ki anniversary hai... Isliye masi masa paa ki favorite gajar ka halwa banane wali hai, ussi ka saman lene aayi thi... Aur masa paa ko ramesh kaka ki dukan ki jalebi khani thi isliye lene aa gayi!!! (Smiling)

Dev - kal mama aur mami ki anniversary hai??? (Surprise)

Raavi- ha!!! (Smiling)

Waise gajar toh le liya hai..... Butter aur nuts yaha se hi le leti hoon!!!

Raavi- dev butter aur nuts do na!!!

Dev - Shiva andar se nuts ke packets lekar aa toh!!! (Shouting)

Kya!!!! Yeh bhoothnath yaha kya kar raha hai ....... 😬

🧠- oi pagal ladki.... Shiva yaha nahi hoga toh kaha hoga!!! (Sarcastically)

❤- Tu thodi der ke liye chup bethega (angrily).... Woh already tension mein ha..... Aur tu usse aur tension kar raha hai!!! (Concerned)

🧠- ha abb ismein bhi meri galti (sarcastically)

❤- Of course!!! (Smiling)

Dev - yeh lo butter!!! (Smiling)

Dev voice brought me back to sense!!

I smile n was taking the butter....

Shiva - yeh nuts.....

Shiva stop talking as he saw me..... He was surprised to witness me there!!!

Shiva - aa mami ki behan ki beti.... Tu yaha???

Dev - woh kal mama aur mami ki anniversary hai... Isliye kuch saman lene aayi hai!!! (Smiling)

I smile at dev

He was looking at me with weird expression.... I couldn't figure out!!!

Abb iske dimag mein kya chal raha hai!! 🤔

Shiva hand me the nuts.... N when back to the store room!!!

Abb isse kya hogaya!!!!🤔..... I thought I was the one ignoring me but yeh toh mujhe hi ignore kar raha hai!!! 😒

I was leaving.... But then it started raining heavily !!!!!

Ha ha barish bhi abhi hona tha..... Aur umbrella bhi ajj hi nahi lana tha!!! 🤦‍♀️

Raavi- - umbrella bhi nahi lekar aayi!! (Murmuring)

Dev - raavi  agar umbrella nahi layi toh thodi der yaha par hi bet jao !!! (Smiling)

I didn't have any other option..... N so I  sat beside dev in the cash counter!!

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Time was passing but then it was raining heavy.... I call n inform masi that I will be late.... At first she told that she will come with the umbrella... But since it was raining heavily I simply denied!!!

Dev was busy attending the customer.
We didnt even had time to talk......There were many people in the store n so I also help him attending some customers..... He told that Shiva was busying checking the new stocks in the store room!!!

Shiva - dev zara idar toh aana!!! (Shouting)

But there were many people

Dev - raavi tum please ek baar jakar dekh lo na!!! (Requesting)

Raavi- mein.... (Shock)

Dev - yaha bohot customer hai.... So please tum usse dekh aao... Tab thak mein inhe handle karta hoon!!! (Requesting)

I stood here statue ....... What am I supposed to do now!!!!

Abb mein kya karu.... Agar jakar kuch ulta sidha bol ya fir kar diya toh!!! 😨

I was scared with my own thoughts...

Shiva - dev jaldi aa na!!!! (Shouting)

Dev look at me with twinkling eyes.... N so I had to go

Raavi kuch bhi ulta sidha mat bolna ya karna ... Warna bohot embarrassed hogi tu!!!!! 😨😬

Raavi- pov end

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Shiva pov

Yeh mami ki behan ki beti apne app ko samajhti kya hai!!!! 😤

I was very irritated !!!!

As soon as I saw her standing in the store.... I was so happy.... Finally after 2 days I m meeting her.... I was gonna thank her.. But then I saw dev and raavi were holding hands.... I was frustrated ...... I thought that she came for me.... But no woh toh dev se milne ke liye aayi hai!!!

Shiva.... Us chipkali ke bare mein sochna ban kar....... Aur yeh dev bhi kaha reh gaya!!! 😒

I was very irritated y is this duffer late.... I had call him for 2 times but then no reply..... I was once again going to call him but then I heard some footsteps...

Aa gaya!!!! 🙄

Finally I heard the footsteps coming close to me.... Without looking at dev I told him

Shiva - waha par ek bottle ka stock rakha hai.... Idar la toh!! (Rudely)

Dev didn't reply..... I was so much engrossed that I didn't even realised someone sitting beside me!!!

Shiva - tel ki 4 bottle hai waha par zara lekar aana!!!

Itna heavy..... Mujhse nahi hoga!!!!

I turn to see raavi looking at me

Wasn't she supposed to go home!!! 🤨

Shiva - Tu yaha par kya kar rahi hai?? Ghar nahi jana kya?? (Concerned)

Raavi smile

Raavi- bahar bohot barish ho rahi hai.... Isliye nahi ja pa rahi hoon!!!

Shiva - okay...... Toh phir tu idar kyu aayi hai..... Bahar bet (sit)na dev ke saath!!! (Angrily)

Raavi- beti (sitting) hi thi lekin tune bula liya!!!! (Annoyed)

Shiva - meine dev ko bulaya tha..... Tu dev hai kya??? (Angrily)

Raavi- nahi (angrily)..... Dev customers ko attend kar raha hai... Isliye mein yaha par aayi teri madat karne ke liye!! (Rudely)

Meri madat!!!! 😳

Shiva - lekin kyu??? (Curiously)

Raavi- kyu matlab tune bulaya na!!!

Shiva - ha ha.....

She smile

This smile is killing me!!! 😬

Shiva - 4  tel ke bottle toh uthaya nahi jata aur chali meri madat karne!!!! (Sarcastically)

Raavi- dekh shiva Tu na mu ban rakh.... Itna bhari hai yeh!! (Making a pout)

Doesn't she look cute!!!! 🙄

Shiva - mein karta hoon.... Tu yeh hisab kar!!!

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Raavi- lo ho gaya!!! (Smiling)

I nodded!!!!

Raavi stare at me...... Me too I was staring her..... We share an intense eye lock!!!!!

Dev - raavi.... Mami ka miss call hai!!! (Shouting)

Raavi- aa rahi hoon!!! (Without breaking the eye lock )

Raavi- abb teri tabiyat kaisi hai?? (Concerned)

She was looking very concerned.... Par kyu??

Shiva - abhi toh theek hai ... (She looks relief) ... Par tu us din kyu chali gayi???

Raavi- dhara di ne bataya nahi..... Masi ka call aa raha tha isliye chali gayi!!!!

Shiva - ek ghante bhi wait nahi kar payi..... Waise toh jab bhi mami tujhe kuch bolte hai.... Tu unki baat nahi sunti..... Toh uss din kyu maani (annoyed) .... Pareshan ho gayi thi kya mujhe??? (Sadly)

Raavi- nahi asi baat nahi hai.... Raat ho gayi thi isliye gayi nahi toh paka tere utne ke baad hi jati!!! (Innocently)

I smirk

Raavi - tu yeh sab chod aur bata aloo gobi ki sabji kaisi thi?? (Excitingly)

Bohot achi!!!! 😘

Shiva - bohot bakwas..... Kaisa khaana banati hai tu.... Ek dam tasteless!!! (Irritatingly)

Raavi- achi ji pehle toh maan pasand khaana bana do ...... Phir khaane ki tarif bhi nahi kiya.... Kaisa hai na tu??? (Dramatically)

I laugh at her expression

Shiva - aur kitni nautanki karti hai na tu!! (Laughing)

Raavi-  tu haste huwe bohot alag dikhta hai!!!! (Dreamily)

😳😳

I look at her shockingly

Raavi- (thinking) apne mu ko control nahi kar sakti thi kya???

Raavi- I mean .....insan dikh raha hai..... Warna toh mujhe laga ki tu patthar hai.... Ek dam heartless..... (Sarcastically)

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov

I couldn't proceed my sentence as Shiva hold my wrist n pull me closer!!!

Shiva - kya bol rahi hai???

His hot breath was giving me goosebumps!!!!

Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai.... Kyu mujhe humari proximity affect kar rahi hai.... Pehle toh nahi karti thi.... Toh phir anita di ke shadi ke din woh bed wala incident ke baat itna kyu affect kar raha hai!!!!!

Shiva continue to stare me.... I was getting nervous..... My hair was flying in the air.... Shiva tuck my hair behind my ears ..... I look up at him!!!

Shiva - tujhe kyu lagta hai ki mein heartless hoon.... Mere andar koyi emotions nahi hai!!!!!

Raavi- wo.... Woh..... Mera asa matlab... Na.. Nahi tha!!! (Nervously)

Shiva - kya mein sach mein heartless hoon??? (Hurt)

He was looking so upset..... But y????....y was my words affecting him so much.... In the past I have call him with more worst name like junglee, gawar n many more..... He was never affected by those then y now????

Matlab Shiva ko bhi kuch kuch ho raha hai.... Usse bhi meri baatein affect karti hai jaise mujhe!!!

Raavi- nahi Shiva mera asa matlab nahi tha.... Mein toh bass mazak kar rahi thi!!!!

We both remain silent .... Slowly we both started moving  our faces closer... We closed or eyes!!!

Dev - raavi mami ka call aa raha hai!!!! (Shouting)

We both gasped and move away from each other feeling embarrassed.... What were we going to do??? Kiss!!!!

I look at Shiva n found him looking everywhere but me

I walk out of the room

Shiva - raavi!!!!

I turn back

Shiva - thank u so much mera dhyan rakhne ke liye aur mera tantrums handle karne ke liye!!! (Smiling)

Telling this he turn back n continue with his work..... Leaving me all shock

Thank you aur woh bhi bhootnath😳.... Mer aasare ho raha hai!!! 😌

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As I was leaving Pandya store.... I bye dev n run home before this Shiva catches me.... Or I do something embarrassing!!

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov

Yeh kya karne ja raha tha tu..... Bhul gaya kya woh raavi hai raavi teri number 1 dushman.... Tu usse kiss.... Chi!!!!!

Yaar mein pareshan ho raha hoon mere new developing feelings se !!!!!

Shiva pov end

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That's it the end

Keep reading n bye

K guys in this story.... I will show the progression a little faster than my other stories..... So dont  think that how comes they love each other so fast...

This story is not about how will they fall in love..... This is all about what will happen what they fall in love!!!



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