manan story after talent hunt

By AnveshaTiwari

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hello people here I am with new story on manan. so this story starts after the talent hunt where dhruv asked... More

prologue
chapter 1
character sketch 1
character sketch 2
character sketch 3
chapter 2
chapter 3
birthday party outfits
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chpter 7
chapter 8
oberoi mansion pics 1
oberoi mansion pics 2
oberoi mansion pics 3
oberoi mansion pics 4
chapter 10
note

chapter 9

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By AnveshaTiwari

some people came inside the mansion and among them one person said in shocked voice 'fab5'

And everyone turn toward the voice and fab 5 are shocked to see the person in front of them

FAB4 : abhi and stood shocked

MAN: who are they rudy

RUDY:Aree om bhaiya ye musical band hai vo doll ne kaha tha aaj aa raha hai

OM: ohh acha (turning towards abhi ) abhi tujhe kya hua hai aise kyu dekh raha hai

ABHI: vo...mein...vo.. Tum log yaha kya kr rhe ho

RUDY: Aree bhai abhi toh bola mein ki ye doll ke vo musical band aap kaha khoo gye the muku toh yhi pe hai

ISH: (twisting his ears) muku nhi mukti bhabhi okk ot Tu yaha kya kr raha hai tujhe hotel nhi jana

RUDY: aaahhh maa sorry ab nhi bolu ga muku lekin mera ear toh chodo

ISH: thik hai and leaves his ear

OM: nice to meet you guys

FAB 5 :(coming out of shock) same here

CAB: (hugging him) hii abhi long time man

ABHI: (hugging him back) hi cabir kaisa hali tu
CAB: breaks the hug mein toh humesha ki tarah fit n fine hu bs tu bada change ho gya hai i mean looking handsome

ABHI: Aree vo toh mein bachpan se hu bs tujhe aaj pta chala hai vaise ye teri madhubala kaha hai yoo navya

NAV: hum yaha hein abhi hugs him vaise tum yaha kya kr rhe ho

RUDY: haa mein bhi vhi puchne wala tha aap yaha pe kya kr rhe ho aapko ko toh hotel mein hona chahiye aur aap yaha ho aur om bhai aap ko office mein mein dad ko btau
OM &ABHI : hawwww

ISH: again twisting his  ear dad ke chamche Tu yaha kya kr raha hai tujhe hotel nhi jana ya aaj phir se tu chuti le raha hai

RUDY:  ouucchh  Aree maa kya aap baat baat pe mere pyaare se ear ko twist kr deti ho(and caress his ear) aur vaise bhi aap ki pyaari princess ka kaam krne gaya  tha nhi toh mujhe maar dalti aapko meri tarif krni chaiye aur aap chilarhi ho  ( pouting) very bad

ISH: accha tarif (turning towards mukti) muku isbaar ye kon si car laya

MUK:(GIGGLES) Aree whi latest car jo doll ne abhi hi kharidi

OM: vo rudy baba ab toh tu gaya tujhe koi aur car pad and nhi aayi

RUDY: (back hugs anika and gauri) toh mein kya kru vaise bhi toh kabhi kabhi mukha milta hai unki car chalane ka varna jb vo yaha hoti hai toh chune bhi nhi deti apni car huhhh kadooss aur vaise mein khi nhi gya vo meri di mein usse permission leke chlai hai aur agar vo gussa hoti bhi hai car ko leke ke toh bs mujhe bs apne Fire Brigade se madad leni pade gi bs right baabz

ANI&GAU: right

BHAV: ohh god kabhi kabhi mujhe doubt hota hai tum tum rudy hi hona khi khumb ke mele mein bichdre hue uske bhai toh nhi ho (turning towards ishita) mom khi rudy ka koi twins toh nhi tha na maa

MOM: pta nhi lekin mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hai tum chita mt kro hum dhod lege apne rudy ko

RUDY: (whine) momm mein nhi aap se baat kr raha

OM: chal drama bnd kr

MAN: hii abhi and were going to hug abhi but abhi move backward

ABHI: hello Mr. Malhotra  (shakes hand with him and all except fab 5 were shocked to see abhi like this because he never behaved with anyone and everyone notice this but chuck the thought and abhi to notice so thought to change the topic)    rudy vaise ye rahege kaha pe

RUDY: bhai ye loge doll ke music client ke liye jo villa hai vaha pe rahege pr abhi doll hai nhi naa toh jb tk vo nhi aati tb tk ye log yhi rahege

ISH: Aree pr ye loge yaha pe bhi toh rhe skte hai na i mean ye saare toh mukti ke friends hai na aur abhi bhi janta hai inhe

ABHI: nooooo(everyone looks towards him) mtlb aapko pta hai na babygirl doesn't like mix professional and personal relationship phir bhi aap

MUK: (mukti understands why abhi was saying this)haa maa abhi thik khe raha hai aur vaise bhi vo villa kitna acha hai

RUDY: aapko kaise pta aapko toh maine abhi office mein btaya tha
MUK: Arre.. Vo.. Mein... Haaa doll ne khud design kiya hai na toh definitely accha hi hoga

OM: hmm maa i guess ye shi khe rhe hai aur vaise bhi vo jagha hills pe bni hai toh  bahut peaceful hai toh ye music acche se bna kr galdi complete kr lege phir yaha aa gayge na rehne thik hai naa

ALIA: woww done I am so excited

MUK: Uninterestingly looks towards alia and then says okk

And by mukti this gesture alia feel bad and curses nandini because it's all happening bcuse of her(she thought)

OM: okk mein chalta hu mujhe hotel mein kuch kaam hai rudy tu bhi chal mere saath

RUDY: okk and they left

ANI: chalo mein aur gauri ja ke dinner ki preparation dekh lete hai chal gauri

BHAV: bhabhi mein bhi aati hu bs change kr ke
ANI: okk chalo
ABHI: mom mein bhi room mein jaa raha hu vo shivay bhai se kuch important baat krni hai

ISH: thik hai mein bhi iss ravan kumar Or doll se baat kr ke aati hu aur ramu kaka(shouts) kaka aap inlogo ko guest room dikha digiye thik hai

Ramu : ji mam

and she also left and now there is only fab 5

RAMU: chaliye

MUK: guys rum log kaka ke saath gao vo mujhe kuch kaam hai mera n baad mein milti hu tum logo se aur haa agar kissi bhi cheez ki garurat ho to feel free okk

And she also left

RAMU: chaliye aapke room dikha deta hu

CAB: okk chaliye and also left

IN A MUKBHI ROOM

mukti enters and saw abhi sitting on couch with his face cover with hands

She goes and sit besides abhi and asked him what happened

ABHI:mukti why all this is so complicated
MUK: kya complicate hua hai abhi
ABHI:manik yaha hai yrr aur tum puch rhi complicate kya hai
MUK: ha toh mani.. (Then reality hits her) ohh sits ye toh yaad hi nhi aaya mujhe ab kya kre

ABHI: pta nhi i mean mein nhi chahta ki meri sister phir se pain feel kre
MUK: hmm talent hunt ke baad vo kitna weak ho gyi thi
ABHI:haa aur iske liye maine kuch socha and gets up from couch

MUK: she also gets up and her hand on his shoulder and ask ..... Kya socha hai

ABHI: yhi ki mein un dono ko door rakhu ga haa and turns to face mukti agar vo log milege hi nhi toh phir problem solved
MUK: she thinks for few minutes and then speak abhi come sit and made him sit and holds his hand abhi mujhe pta kya lagta hai ki hume na ye decision nandini pe chod dena chahiye she is mature enough to choose what she want or what not...
ABHI: ek second kya decision kya want kya bol rhi ho dekho seedhe seedhe bolo Mujhe kuch samaj nhi aa raha
MUK: manik aur nandini.... Mein unki baat kr rhi hu mein chahti hu ki ye decision nandini ka hona chahiye whether she wants to forgive him or not
ABHI: what!!! Have you lost it mtlb mein tum se khe raha hu ki unko alag rakhna chaiye aur tum alag hi baat kr rhi ho
MUK: abhi listen to me carefully okk.....main Sirf tum se itna khe rhi hu ki let them meet , let them know ke they are so close yet so far I mean listen Okk... Is album complete krne ke liye humare paas 6 months hai aur yhi six months hum unhe dete hai apni problem solve krne ke liye aur ye mein isliye nhi khe rhi ki mein manik ki dost hu ya nandini ki bhabhi mein ye anya manvik ke liye khe rhi hu because they wanted father's warmth I know hum sb unhe kitna bhi pamper kre but still they want there father aaj vo log chote hai toh thoda distraction se maan jate pr kl jb vo schl jayge tb jb vo bade hoge tb tb jab vo humse puchege ke unke dad kaha hai tb hum kya jawab dege bolo and also they have the right to know that who is their father plse abhi lets leave it on manik nandini whether they want to stay together Or not hum kuch nhi karte hai jaisa chalta hai vaisa hi chalne do okk

ABHI: he listen everything carefully hmm u are right lets go with the flow Okk now chalo dinner ready ho gya hoga aur vaise bhi 2 din baad nandu aa rhi hai
MUK: okk chalo says with similes and drags him downstairs , fab 4 also arrive at the same time

Then everyone has their dinner and left
For room

That's it now I am tired Okk i know this chapter is boring for me to right u all know why because I am desperate to make NSO's entry agar mera bs chalta nal then to i will just skip all these things and directly made our nandu entry but can't but.....

I will do it in next update so tb tk take care bye see you











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