Elements of Fire

By Nimarna

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Would the story of the Mahabharat have taken a different course if Karna had stood up for Draupadi in the dic... More

Announcement: Covers
Announcement: Aesthetics
1. The Infamous Dice Game
2. Changes
3. Of Palace Elders
4. More than a Sutputra ?
5. Making Plans
6. The Wedding
7. New Beginnings
8. Maharani of Anga
9. Of Honour and Conscience
10. Overhearing Things
11. Unusual Behaviours
12. Subhadra Reasons
13. Upcoming Festivities
14. Karna Invites a Storm
15. An Incomplete Talk
16. Past and Present
17. Initiatives
18. A strange Feeling
19. Changes and Changing Courses
20. Stepping Out
21. Hibiscus
22. Words and Prayers
23. Checking Moods and Gifts
24. Crumpled Flowers
25. Ritual Fire
26. Mother's Healing Touch
27. Finding Ourselves
28. Some Untangling And New Depths
29. Anchor
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30. Unspoken And Heard
31. A Hidden Listener
32. A Decision
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33. Instructions
34. A Long Night -1
35. A Long Night-2
36. A Long Night-3
37. A Long Night- 4
38. A Long Night- 5
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39. Draupadi Resolves
40. Strange Coincidence-1
41. Strange Coincidence- 2
42. A Mute and Perplexed Spectator
43. A Talk
44. Reassuring Doubtfully
45. Getting Ready
46. Draupadi Decides to Act
47. Negotiations -1
48. Negotiations -2
49. Negotiations -3
50. Negotiations -4
51. Answering Responses
52. New Feelings -1
53. New Feelings -2
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54. In Light and Dark
55. Of Two Fire-Borns -1
56. Of Two Fire-Borns -2
57. Of Two Fire- Borns -3
58. Of Two Fire-Borns -4
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59. Of Two Fire-Borns -5
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60. Of Two Fire-Borns -6
61. His Daughter, Her Daughter
62. Conversing of the Future? -1
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63. Conversing of the Future? -2
64. Conversing of the Future? -3
65. Conversing of the Future? -4
66. Conversing of the Future? -5
67. Conversing of the Future? -6
68. Braiding Hairs and Thoughts
69. Putting To Sleep
70. Conditions?
71. Some Discomfiture and Laughter
72. Of Little Girls and Hidden Blushes
73. Of Weaving a Bangle
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74. Some Glance, Some See
75. Ruffling Thoughts- 1
76. Ruffling Thoughts -2
77. An Imperfection- 1
79. Yudhistira's Remorse -1
80. Yudhistira's Remorse -2
81. Yudhistira's Remorse -3
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78. An Imperfection- 2

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"Smile more Panchali, you can send Goddesses to shame with your smile" he said out of nowhere, cautiously bringing his hand closer to her slender waist encircled by a simple kamarbandh(waist band) preventing the uttariya(upper garment worn by women) from flying completely askew by the breeze serenading unknown tunes through the evening.

The mighty wielder of the bow was delighting in the soothingly intoxicating beauty of the evening as well as that of his wife, choosing to revel in the beauty of her perfections, his keen eyes now flitting on sudden impulses to her partially exposed midriff when they spotted an imperfection.

"You are being so magnanimous in your compliments Aarya" Draupadi spoke, her full lips quirking up ever so slightly.

"Truthful, Panchali" came the gentle response carried by his deep, masculine baritone, "Not magnanimous."

Her almond eyes now hosted a glint of mischief indulging in a cautious revel of her husband, preceding the hint of surprise subtly wrinkling at the center of her forehead when the subject of her gaze made no attempt to look up at her.

"How do I ascertain that?" she asked softly as the breezy calm of the evening was gradually breaking to some distant blowing of conch shells heralding the blessings of the divine before nightfall.

"My frankness, as you have witnessed yourself on countless occasions, has stimulated the displeasure of my courtiers. That crosses out any possibility of me indulging in falseful flattery with my own wife."

He did not allow their eyes a rendezvous while his knee well nigh touched the ground, while his warrior's hand now barged into the gay, lively dance that the evening breeze had partnered in with the red silk saree in the vicinity of her waist. He had not not anticipated the near instinctive pulling away on part of his wife, thwarted by a barricade of his hand, staying her in a firm yet gentle grip.

"What are you doing?"

It was not hard to miss the bewilderment dripping from Draupadi's voice, her cautious hand reaching down towards her husband's shoulder. Her chest rose and fell more visibly with the gradually warming breaths that fell against her lower abdomen preceding the contact of smooth fingers against her skin.

"Panchali.... What..."

It did not take his archer's eyes attuned to spotting details  to spot the disarranged cluster of half faded scarlet tracks running across the unblemished skin disappearing just as furtively as they had emerged. His breath hitched for a moment, his eyes widening simultaneously with realization.

Those were stretch marks.

Karna raised his head, an unhurried pace marking the motion. The deliberate inclination of his wife's head away from his but angled enough for her to steal discreet glances were enough to single out his one concern from the panoply of them that had raced through his mind in the few minutes that had passed.

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