The Mist Of My Heart

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While trying to find the 7 lost Lords and save Narnia from evil with the help of King Edmund and Queen Lucy... MΓ‘s

The Mist Of My Heart.
The Lone Islands.
New Friends?
Dufflepuds?
Bad dreams
A Golden Lord?
A dragon?
The Blue Star
Liliandil.
Fears
Final goodbye.

Reunited.

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I ran over to Gael and picked her up before running to the other side of the boat, safely handing her over to her father.

Suddenly, Eustace appeared behind the sea serpent,  breathing fire onto it and attacking him. I saw Reep stabbing the serpent with his sword while shouting "for Narnia!" just before he got flung onto the boat and grabbing a rope to keep himself up.

"Eustace, hang on!" Reep cried just as the serpent grabbed a hold of Eustace and slammed him into a nearby rock.

As the creature rounded on him, Eustace blew fire in his face, making it cry out in pain.

"Out, creature!" The Lord yelled while throwing his sword at Eustace.

"The sword! The sword!"

"Eustace!" Me and Lucy yelled, worried for her young cousin.  "No, come back!" She yelled just as Eustace took off.

"We're all doomed! Doomed!" Rhoop yelled. "Turn this ship about!" He said while pushing people out of the way to get the the ship's wheel.

"Stop him! Someone stop him!"

As I was near the top of the ship, I walked up to the Lord and gently tapped his shoulder. As he tuned around, I punched him hard in the face, knocking him out. "Finally, I thought he would never shut up" I said while examining my hand that will definitely bruise later.

Turning around, I saw that the crew was looking at me, shock evident on their faces.
"What?" I said, faking innocence with a shrug of my shoulders.

"Raft crew, to your rowing positions! Oars at double speed! Drinian commanded.

In the distance, Eustace landed on a beach roughly, trying to reach the sword that was embedded into his shoulder.

The sea serpent jumped onto the boat, breaking half a chunk of the one side.

"Gael, come on!" Lucy yelled, tugging at Gael and getting her to safety.

The serpent wrapped itself around the ship, tipping it to one side. I grabbed on to the edge of the ship as tightly as I could to stop me from sliding about.

"Ed! Ed!" Cas yelled from the wheel of the ship. "We ram the serpent— smash him onto the rocks."

"Steer her to port! I'll keep it on the prow!"

While Ed was distracting the serpent with his torch, I took out my bow and arrows and Lucy had Susan's while we aimed.  The serpent bit into the front of the ship, right where Edmund was.

"No!"

"Edmund!"

Royally pissed off that the slimy creature nearly killed the boy I view as a brother, i aimed my arrows right for it. Lucy managed to shoot the creature in the eye while I put an arrow right through his mouth.

"Brace yourselves!" Caspian yelled as the creature got rammed into the rocks.

Over on a sunny beach, Eustace opened his eyes and saw a magnificent lion in-front of him. He started to scratch his stomach, trying to get rid of the sword when he saw the lion scratch the sand.

He felt the lions claw marks on his stomach, making him groan and look down. He started glowing as a strange forced lifted him into the air, turning him back into a boy.

"Move!" Capstan yelled at Edmund as he pushed him out of the way of the serpents attack. Grabbing his sword, Caspian cut off one of the creatures tentacles and watched as it turned to dust.
"We can beat this" He said while looking over at Ed.

Eustace woke up, touching his stomach as he realised he was a boy again. He got up and grabbed the sword, looking at it in wonder.

"We have to get it closer" Edmund said while looking at the serpent.

"All hands on the main deck!"

"Ready the harpoons!"

"I want everybody up here!" Drinian yelled as Edmund started to climb up a rope.


Eustace was running across the island with the last of the Lord's sword in hand, determined to reach Aslan's table before it was too late.


"Ready?"

"Aye, sir!"

"Now!" Caspian yelled as the crew all threw spears with rope attached to the end of them at the serpent.

"Bring its head down!" Caspian ordered.


Eustace arrived at Aslan's table and saw that the 6 swords were glowing bright blue and rattling loudly.


Edmund made it to the top of the ship, getting ready to kill the serpent.

"Heave!" Caspian yelled

Eustace was just about to place the seventh sword down when the green mist surrounded him, pulling him away from the table.

"Edmund" the white witch whispered. "What are you trying to prove, Edmund? That you're a man?-"

Eustace was swinging the sword around the mist, trying to get the the table.


"- i can make you that. I can make you my king. Just take my hand-"

The serpent managed to break free from the restraints and was fighting against the men.

Eustace finally managed to fight off the mist, putting the seventh sword down on Aslan's table.

"- just give in" The white witch finished.

Edmunds sword started glowing bright blue as he plunged it through the serpents mouth. Blue lightning bolts surrounded the serpent as it slowly started sinking deep into the ocean.

Thunder was rumbling as light began to shine through the mist, breaking the spell.

"The spell... it's lifting" Lucy said as she stared up at the sky. "Edmund, Caspian, Eden, look!"


Back on the island where Eustace was, the Lords that were once under a spell started to wake up.


"Narnians! Narnians!" Caspian yelled while the crew was cheering and applauding.

"Mummy!" "Helaine!" Gael and her father yelled as they spotted her mother and his wife.
Gael then jumped into the water, shortly followed by Rhince as they went towards the boats with the lost Narnians.

"Ready to see your sister?" Caspian asked as he came to stand next to me, holding my hand. I just nodded in response to his question as I was looking out to the boats in hope to find Malia.

"Help them get on deck" Caspian told the crew members.

"We did it, I knew we would" Lucy said from beside me and Caspian, making me smile.

"It wasn't just us though"

"You mean..."

"Hey! Hey! I'm down here, Lucy, Eden! Over here! Hey Lucy, I'm in the water! Eden!"

"Eustace!" Lucy yelled out in surprise as she, Ed, Caspian and I made our way over to the side of the boat.

"I'm a boy again, I'm a boy!"

"Eustace! I see your wings have been clipped!" Reep laughed as he launched himself into the water.

"Where sky and water meet, where the waves grow ever sweet" Reep sang as he drank a bit of water from his hand. "It is sweet, it's sweet!  Look, look!" He said while pointing out to an Island in the distance.

"Aslan's country" Caspian said. "We must be close"

"Well we've come this far" Edmund said back.

I was about to laugh before I heard a very familiar voice calling my name.
"Eden? Eden!"

I turned around to see that Malia was standing on the ship, soaking wet with a huge smile on her face.

"Malia? Oh my fuck you're here!" I yelled as I ran to her, giving her a bone crushing hug. I kissed the top of her head repeatedly and pulled back, cupping her cheeks. " I'm so glad you're okay, oh my Aslan I've missed you so much" I whispered while resting my forehead against hers.

Looking over my shoulder, I saw that Cas, Ed and Lu were all looking at me with big smiles on their faces. I held Malia's hand as I dragged her over, introducing them to each other, the smile never leaving my face.

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