Coral Awards 2021 (CLOSED)

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Winners

🥇First Place🥇

Royal(ties) by alphaholic

🥈Second Place🥈

A love worth waiting for by thatzaynlover

🥉Third Place🥉

The Burden of us by MiniMoxx

The beauty of Florence by happysnowfeet

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Scores

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1. The Burden of us: MiniMoxx

Title - 9
Cover - 8
Blurb - 9
Grammar - 13
Originality - 7
Writing style - 14
Plot - 14
Character development - 9
Overall enjoyment - 3

Total - 89/100

Review - I really enjoyed reading this book and the author has described the character's feelings very well and the plot is also great. I like the romantic plot and the slight family mystery behind it. and the flashbacks are also amazing. the grammar is good and the description/ blurb is eyecatching.

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2. Devils heartless beauty: EloperElf

Title - 9
Cover - 6
Blurb - 9
Grammar - 12
Originality - 8
Writing style - 12
Plot - 13
Character development - 9
Overall enjoyment - 3

Total - 81/100

Review - I like the concept and the characters of the book. the characters are unique and have some mystery to them that makes the story interesting well as the plot is well written, the blurb as well is good.

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3. The girl who rose: sahimakhatoon

Title - 9
Cover - 7
Blurb - 8
Grammar - 12
Originality - 9
Writing style - 12
Plot - 13
Character development - 9
Overall enjoyment - 3

Total - 82/100

Review - the concept is amazing and I like the unique concept of this story but I feel like it can be described better. I like how there are strong characters in the story and how the protagonist doesn't give up on her goal and I feel like the writing can be better and the storyline is good.

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4. Love letters to my scarlet: Anusara12

Title - 10
Cover - 9
Blurb - 9
Grammar - 14
Originality - 8
Writing style - 13
Plot - 14
Character development - 8
Overall enjoyment - 3

Total - 88/100

Review - I like the way the story is written - in the way of letters. The characters are relatable and the letters keep the interests piqued. there is also a lot of mystery in those letters that keep things interesting and the book is well written and the plot is going smoothly.

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5. A love worth waiting for: thatzaynlover

Title - 9
Cover - 9
Blurb - 10
Grammar - 14
Originality - 8
Writing style - 14
Plot - 14
Character development - 8
Overall enjoyment - 4

Total - 90/100

Review - I like the fact that the story is relatable and how you've described their feelings and love the plot. the pace of the story is good and the writing style or description of the author is good and the events in the plot are well written I overall like this book.

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6. Royal(ties) : alphaholic

Title - 9
Cover - 10
Blurb - 9
Grammar - 15
Originality - 9
Writing style - 14
Plot - 14
Character development - 8
Overall enjoyment - 4

Total - 94/100

Review - I absolutely love the writing style of the author and how the events in the story are well described, the plot of the story is also very good and what the characters are feeling are described well and seem realistic and I love the powerful protagonist.

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7. Damsel in distress - an Indian story: Devashilpaasha

Title - 8
Cover - 7
Blurb - 6
Grammar - 11
Originality - 9
Writing style - 12
Plot - 13
Character development - 9
Overall enjoyment - 3

Total - 78/100

Review - the story is not quite unique and the writing style and description of the characters and their feeling also the activities in the book could be written better. the plot is good but can be better written and the feelings of the characters are not very clear.

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8. Mesalliance: writer_vidhya

Title - 10
Cover - 8
Blurb - 7
Grammar - 13
Originality - 7
Writing style - 13
Plot - 13
Character development - 8
Overall enjoyment - 3

Total - 80/100

Review - the writing and description are good and the concept and plot of the story are also good. The plot of the story is going at the right place and I liked it. there could be more original and unique ideas in the story to make it more interesting.

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9. Destiny in darkness - on way of construction: dwarkaratna

Title - 7
Cover - 5
Blurb - 5
Grammar - 12
Originality - 8
Writing style - 13
Plot - 12
Character development - 7
Overall enjoyment - 1

Total - 70/100

Review - The idea is unique and the plot is also going well, description of the character's feelings and actions should be enhanced. but the blurb could be longer and more clear and easier to understand, the plot is okay, and also the characters. I'm going, to be honest, and say I'm not sure I understood the plot very well, it should be easier to understand and not confuse the readers.

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10. The beauty of Florence: happysnowfeet

Title - 8
Cover - 9
Blurb - 9
Grammar - 13
Originality - 12
Writing style - 13
Plot - 14
Character development - 8
Overall enjoyment - 3

Total - 89/100

Review - I love the idea behind the story and the plot is going at the right pace and the characters are described nicely. I like the description of the character and how the activities of the story are described well as well as the writing style of the author.

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11. Marvellous Mishap: Shaunatay

Title: 7/10
Cover: 7/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar: 13/15
Originality: 9/10
Writing Style: 14/15
Plot: 13/15
Character Development: 8/10
Overall enjoyment: 4/5

Total: 83/100

Review: Hello there! I want to say that, the first impression of the book, the cover, the title and the blurb needs to be more catchy. As a judge, I wanna give you a tip of adding some sort of filter after the whole cover is made to balance the environment of the different pictures we use. You have to improve your grammar much more. The details were amazing, just beyond amazing, I genuinely love it! Keep going, good luck!

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12. Falling in love: SakshiDwivedi384

Title: 8/10
Cover: 7/10
Blurb: 7/10
Grammar: 13/15
Originality: 7/10
Writing Style: 12/15
Plot: 13/15
Character Development: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 77/100

Review: Hii! I personally feel that the cover and blurb needs to be much more improved. Grammar, details, way of writing, characters, everything is craving for improvement. On the bright side, I really like the plot and it's a unique concept, just improve yourself a bit, give a touch up to your work and damn, you'll be proud of your story! Keep going, good luck!!

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13. Sold to Ace: ana_khann

Title: 8/10
Cover: 8/10
Blurb: 7/10
Grammar: 13/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing Style: 14/15
Plot: 12/15
Character Development: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 82/100

Review: Hello! I wanna say that, try making the title, the blurb and the cover more catchy. The grammar and details need to be improved too. The plot is awesome, the concept is amazing too, just a bit of finishing touch will work. A tip for you, make sure you edit your work just after you read it cause I found plenty of mistakes there. Keep going, good luck!

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14. The warmth of her spring sunshine: YllihSpice98

Title: 7/10
Cover: 7/10
Blurb: 9/10
Grammar: 14/15
Originality: 9/10
Writing Style: 14/15
Plot: 14/15
Character Development: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 4/5

Total: 87/100

Review: I wanna say that the cover and title needs to be more catchy. The cover, the picture you used is all okay and the same goes with the font, but the text's colour? The colour of the text wasn't appropriate. Moving on, I really like the book, the vibe which you served from the very first line of the very first chapter was just next level. Keep going, good luck!

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15. Catalyst: MoonDahliaWrites

Title: 8/10
Cover: 8/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar: 14/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing Style: 13/15
Plot: 12/15
Character Development: 8/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 82/100

Review: Hello there! I feel like the cover is kind of basic. The title and the blurb are so-so, neither bad nor good. The grammar was on point but what needs attention are the details, the writing style. I already know you are aware of it but still, you have to know how to divide chapters and not make them too long, not too short too. Keep going, good luck!

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16. In love with a player: Kajal0101

Title: 7/10
Cover: 7/10
Blurb: 7/10
Grammar: 12/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing Style: 13/15
Plot: 13/15
Character Development: 8/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 78/100

Review: Hello there! I wanna say that the cover and the title needs to be improved. The blurb, I saw some grammar mistakes there and would hope for improvement in grammar. The details are much more needed to make this story original. Keep going, good luck!

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17. Wreckage: TSAsimplicity1

Title: 8/10
Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 9/10
Grammar: 13/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing Style: 13/15
Plot: 13/15
Character Development: 8/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 84/100

Review: I really love the cover and the blurb, they were just amazing! The grammar and the details are cravings for improvement. Keep going, good luck!

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18. Cheap Cigarettes: electricblue85

Title: 9/10
Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar: 14/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing Style: 14/15
Plot: 13/15
Character Development: 8/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 83/100

Review: Ireally like the cover and the title. The cover is simple yet beautiful and the samegoes with the title, not any complicated word, but still beautiful. The grammar ison point too. A bit of improvement with details is needed. Keep going, goodluck!

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19. I am not going to die again: ChappygoChucky

Title: 8/10
Cover: 8/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar: 13/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing Style: 14/15
Plot: 13/15
Character Development: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 82/100

Review: Hello, I think that you should work more on your covers and characters, make them more interesting. The blurb is neither bad nor good, you can improve it. Keep going, good luck!

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20. The Warmth Of Affliction: XiaParihar

Title: 8/10
Cover: 7/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar: 13/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing Style: 12/15
Plot: 13/15
Character Development: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 79/100

Review: Hello there! I wanna say that the cover is alright but the text's colour was kind of weird. Moving on, the grammar can be improved and the same goes with details and writing style too. Hope you'll improve soon. Keep going, good luck!

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Don't be disheartened if you didn't receive the score you desired, life is all about learning and improving.
Good Luck for your future!

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