Rewrite the Stars (Completed)

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One of the hardest decision in life is to choose between love and family.... N Shiva has to make that decisi... More

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prologue
mission joote - churao/bachao!
who will win??
shadi ki baat
planing
rumours
new feelings
ride
mission vicky!!!!
plan successful or flop??
care in the first step in love
tujhe kabse meri chinta hone lagi??
checking chemistry
fever!!!
dream !!
ignore
anniversary
celebration
closer
shiva with other girl
realising my feeling
shiva ko bachana
kya chal raha hai??
what am i feeling??
its 'IT' what i m thinking??
is it love???
Am I in LOVE????
yes i m in love
confession
ShiVi ❤
godhbharai
truth or dare
shadi ki baat
pandya parivaar ki bahu??
raavi outbrust
saathi rey thoda thehar ja
humari adhuri kahani
tujhe kitna chaahein lage hum
REWRITE THE STARS
pehle pyaar ka pehla gham
duniya yeh jeeti gayi, dil har gaya
ranjha
Dev-raavi ki shadi ho gayi 🥺😭
sara jag chad ke bas tenu hi hai chuneya
shadi nahi karna
iktara
epilogue
new story

jeet gaya hum!!!!!

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Shiva pov.

I was staring chipkali..... She was busy eating food with family

Abb isse joote kaise wapas loon!!!!! 🤔

Dev came to me laughing...

Dev- Tu bhi na kaha krish ki bato mein akar joote raavi ke room mein chupa diya!!! (Laughing)

Krish who was eating Jalebi look at dev...

Krish - wah!!! Galti koyi aur kare aur dosh kisi aur ko de (sarcastically)........ Dekh dev yeh joote raavi ke kamre mein chupane ka idea Shiva ka tha.... Mera nahi isliye mujhe dosh mat de!!!! (Annoyed)

I angrily glared at him....

Shiva - agar Tu chup nahi beta (sit) na toh ...... (Warning)

Krish - chota hoon an isliye sab mujhe hi daate hai !!!! (Making a pout)

Dev- krish kitni nautanki karta hai na tu....!!!! (Hitting on his head)

Krish - tum dono se toh mujhe baat hi nahi karna.... Mein ja raha hoon (irritated)

Then krish went from there

Acha hi huwa chala gaya..... Gadhera kahi ka!!!!!! 😒

Raavi- kya huwa Shiva???? (Innocently)

Yeh gadheri phir se aa gayi!!! 😒🙄

I turn at her....

Shiva - kya hai??? (Irritated)

Raavi- itna irritated kyu ho raha hai... Mein toh bass tujhe khaana khane ke liye bura rahi thi!!!!

Shiva - kyu..... Teri shadi hai kya?? (Frustrated)

Raavi- nahi, meri di ki shadi hai..... Aur ha meri shadi ki tu chinta maat kar!!! (Annoyed)

Shiva - tujhe sach mein lagta hai ki mein teri chinta karunga!! (Sarcastically)

Raavi- nahi Shiva ji, mere itne bhi bure din nahi aaye hi app meri chinta karo (sarcastically) ...... Woh toh dhara di tum dono ko khaane ke liye bula rahi thi (irritated)

Then she look at dev...

Raavi- dev tum to aa jao dhara di bula rahi hai... (Smiling)

Dev- ha tum chalo ...... Hum aate hai!!! (Smiling)

She gave him a big smile to dev and angrily glared at me n was leaving!!!

Shiva - Mujhe yeh ladki bilkul pasand nahi hai.. (Whispering in dev ears)

She stop n turn back...

Raavi- aur mujhe bhi tu bilkul pasand nahi hai (annoyed) ..... Aur ha ek aur baat bet jeetne ka sapna bhul ja because woh toh mein jeetne wali hoon (smirking)

Telling she went..

Shiva - mami ki behan ki beti!!! (Murmuring)

Dev - Tu raavi se itni nafrat kyu karta hai (frown) ..... Achi toh hai woh!!! (Smiling)

Shiva - tujhe achi lagti hogi.... Mujhe nahi!!! (Irritated)

Dev- par Shiva...... ( I interrupted)

Shiva - agar Tu uski wakalat karne wala hai toh mein ja raha hoon!!! (Angrily)

Telling this I walk.... Dev follow me

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Raavi and i were continuously glaring each other while eating the food....

Dhara - yeh tum dono se phir se ladaee kiya hai kya??? (Frown)

Krish - bhabhi app bhi na (frown)..... Agar Shiva aur raavi ek dusre se ladaee karna ban kar diya toh somnath mein parlay aa jayega !!! (Laughing)

So funny!!!! 😒

Ajj toh krish ko mujhse koyi nahi bacha sakta!!!! 😡

We all glare him....

Krish - kya huwa..... Meine kuch galat bola kya??? (Innocently)

Gautam- kitna bolta hai na tu..... Chup chap se khaana kha (strictly)

Krish nodded!!!!

Dhara - aur tum dono kyu lad rahe ho??? Let me guess paka koyi serious reason nahi hoga right???? (Sarcastically)

Dev - app bilkul theek bol rahe hoon bhabhi....... Yeh dono hardik bhai ke joote ke liye lad rahe hai!!!!

Dhara bhabhi hit her forehead....

Dhara - tum dono ka kya hoga!!!!

Raavi- dhara di app hi batao.... Mein anita di ki behan hoon aur shadi ki rasam lke anusaar mujhe hardik jiju ke joote churana chahiye na aur joote ke badle paise maagna chahiye, right??

Bhabhi nodded....

Shiva - par hum is chipkali ko kyu paise de...... Woh hardik bhai ke joote aur paise hai ..... Hum woh is chipkali ko dekar kyu waste kare!!! (Frustrated)

Chipkali look me in disbelief....

Raavi- dekha dhara di yeh mujhe mera haq chin raha hai..... Isse bolo ki woh mere raaste mein maat aaye!!!!

Shiva - bhabhi ko kya bol rahi hai, Mujhe bol na.... Aur hai raaste mein tu aati hai mere mein nahi!! (Rudely)

Raavi- dekha dhara di yeh kaise baat kar raha hai mujhe.... Sochiye agar apke samne ase baat karta hai... Woh pit piche toh kitna rude se baat karta hai!!! (Emotion)

Nautanki kahi ki..... Jab usse pata chalta hai ki woh harne wali hai.... Toh emotional blackmail karti hai!!! Chipkali!!!! 😒😤

Shiva - aa gadheri chup ha..... Yeh tera innocent chehre hai na iske piche ka sach sirf mein jaanta hoon.... Chudail kahi ki!!!! (Irritated)

Raavi- bhooth....... (Bhabhi interrupted)

Dhara - chup bilkul chup.... Tum dono ek dusre se kam nahi ho, jab dekho sirf ladaee..... Agar ek aur word kaha na toh..... (Frustrated) ...... Aur raavi Tu bhi itni innocent nahi hai Shiva ke samne, sach kehta hai shiva chudail ban jaati hai tu uske samne (raavi frown while I smirk) ..... Aur tu Shiva hasna ban kar..... Tu bhi kam nahi hai, jab dekho raavi se ladta rehta hai.... Tu bhi bhootnath ban jaata hai iske samna ( I frown raavi smile) ..... Tum dono na jitne innocent dikhate hoon na mera samne ase bilkul nahi ho!!! (Annoyed)

Krish started laughing!!!

Dhara - aur gadhere hasna ban kar warna daant thod dungi!!! (Angrily)

Krish - meine kya kiya!!!! (Innocent)

Dhara - gombi Mujhe yaha se le jao.... Yeh log mujhe pagal kar denge!!! (Annoyed)

Gautam- chal Tu......

Then gombi carefully hold bhabhi n went...

Raavi- dhara di ko kya hogaya?? (Confusingly)

Dev- pregnancy mood swings!!!!

Raavi- hmm.....

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov....

After having the food..... We did some dance n all..... It was a joyous time for all of us...

Jagat - chal raavi abb hardik ke joote dede!!! (Smiling)

Raavi- nahi masa paa..... Pehle hum deal karenge.... Right girls??? (Smirking)

Sai and anokhi - yes!!!

Then we all took our sit..... Me , anokhi n sai sit on the floor while all sat on the chairs..... Shiva was looking at me from a distance...

Raavi- so as mein jeet gayi hoon tho!!!! (Smirking)

I told as loud as I can so that Shiva will heard it.... He frown..!!!!

Krish - tho kya??? (Curiously)

Raavi- toh lets make a deal..... Jiju app humein 6000 rupees de do aur joote le lo!! (Laughing)

Hardik - 6000 !!!! (Gasped)

Raavi- ha 2000 for sai , 2000 for anokhi and 2000 for me.... App apki teen sali hai amount bhi zayda hi hoga!!! (Chuckle)

Jagat - raavi itne zyada paise kyu maag rahi hai.... Thodi kam maag!!! (Smiling)

Raavi- nahi masa paa.... Yeh sali aur jiju ki baat hai app please kuch mat bolo (innocently)

Gautam- raavi bilkul theek bol rahi hai!!! (Smiling)

Hardik - gautam tum bhi!!! (Surprise)

Gautam- of course mein toh raavi ki team mein hoon.... Abb dost ka nuksaan ho raha hai mein toh bohot khush hoon.....!!! (Laughing)

Hardik- acha thik hai 3000 mein baat karte hai!!!

Anokhi, sai and raavi- nahi.... Bilkul nahi!!! (Shouting)

Raavi- 6000 final!!!!

Suman- hardik dede na..... Na phir kali pair (foot) jaana hai!! (Chuckle)

Raavi- app toh suman kaki bhi meri side hai.... Dedo jiju!!! (Laughing)

Hardik - dhara Tu kuch bol na!!!

Raavi- nahi dhara di kuch nahi bolegi.... Sabko pata hai ki mein di ki koyi baat mana nahi karti isliye dhara di iss mamle mein kuch nahi bolegi!!! (Innocently)

Shiva - koyi zaroorat nahi hai is chipkali ko paise dene ki!!! (Irritated)

Yeh Shiva ki toh.....!!!! 😤

Shiva - mein apke liye naye joote order kar diya hai.... Delivery boy aata hi hoga!!! (Smiling)

I stood up

Raavi- Shiva!!!!! (Shouting) ..... Tu phir se mein raaste mein aa raha hain.... Kaha na mere mamle se dur reh!!! (Irritated)

Shiva - kya mamla laga rakha hain..... Hardik bhai mere bhi kuch lagte hai na !!!! ( smiling)

Raavi- Tu yeh sab sirf mujhe pareshan karne ke liye bol raha hai na!!! (Irritated)..... Dekh shiva mein jeetne wali hoon na... Tu ase cheating nahi kar sakta!!! (Frustrated)

Prafulla - kya jeetne ki baat ho rahi hai??? (Suspiciously)

Raavi- masi woh sab baad mein baat karte hai...... Jiju jaldi se paise do aur joote le jao.....

Shiva - kaha na hardik bhai paise nahi denge.... Baat samajh mein nahi aata kya!!! (Angrily)

Raavi- nahi aata..... Thik hai hardik jiju joote toh naye pehan sakte hai.... Par jab thak woh humari demand puri nahi karenge..... Anita di bhi nahi jayegi!!! (Angrily)

All gasped.....

Prafulla- oi raavi Tu pagal jo gayi hai kya!!! (Fearfully)

Ha ho gayi hoon..... App baat bet ki nahi hai.... Abb baat meri ego ki hai.... Shiva ko toh hara kar hi manungi....!!!!! 😠

Suman - Shiva!!!dulha ko sali ki demand puri karni padti hai.... Isliye tu iss mein mat par....

Shiva face fall..... I was so happy that today my stars are with me!!!!

Suman kaki and gombi are on my team .... N Shiva never go against his maa decision..... So now I had an upper hand

Abb toh mera jeetna paka hai!!! 😆😆

Hardik - theek hai..... (Then he took out the money) .....

He was counting the notes..... Bt I dont care , I was just busy looking at Shiva losing face ....

Dik ko sukoon mila!!!! 😁😁

Shiva - pehle joote la... Phir paise milenge!! (Smirking)

Raavi- kyu??? Pehle paise de phir hum joote de denge!!!!

Shiva - nahi Pehle joote phir paise!!! .... Hum is chipkali ki sari baatein mani hai na.... Toh phir yeh ek baat kyu nahi maan sakti??(Smirking)

Suman - ha yeh bhi sahi hai..... Raavi beta ja aur joote lekar aa!!! (Smiling)

Mujhe Shiva par vishwas nahi hai!!!!

Bt then Suman kaki was telling this.... I can't denied her....

I smile at them n went to the room...

It's k waise bhi bet to mein hi jeeti hoon na!!!!

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I reach my room , open the lock and then they went towards my almirah..... I saw the shoes.....

I heard the door closed.... I gasped n turn back......I saw Shiva standing there ....

Abb yeh gadhera yaha kya kar raha hai!!! 🙄

Raavi- kya hai??? Joote la aa rahi thi na... Wait nahi kar sakta tha na (irritated)

Shiva - joote de mujhe!!!! (Rudely)

I gasped....

Now I get his plan.... He came here to take the shoes...

Raavi- toh yeh plan hai tere mujhe joote lekar jiju ko dega... Aur phir paise lega!!! (Annoyed)

Shiva - Tu toh bohot samajhdaar nikli.... Chal abb jaldi joote de!!! (Smirking)

Raavi - yeh joote toh nahi milenge!!!

Then I started running n Shiva was running after me...

Shiva - dekh chipkali pyaar se bol raha hoon joote dede!!!! (Annoyed)

Raavi- Shiva woh bhi pyaar... Woh bhi mujhse yeh toh impossible hai.... Mein nahi de rahi (laughing)

Shiva - joote de (annoyed)

Raavi- nahi dungi (laughing)

We were around the bed..... I got up in the bed.....

Raavi- dekh Shiva mein jeet gayi hoon na toh tu phir kyu cheating kar raha hai???? (Irritated)

Shiva - everything is fair in love and war..... Aur humari toh waise bhi war hai!!!

Then Shiva stood up the bed n hold my wrist...

Shiva - dede!!!

Then he try to take the shoe..... In that process we both fell on the bed..... I fell down on him....... We both look at each other with wide eyes....

We both were very close very very close that even air cannot pass through us ..... It was a very awkward moment.....

We both had a small eye lock..... I try to wake up.... Bt again in that process I fell down !!!! This time his lips touch my cheek....

It was a very new bt weird feeling..... I couldn't look at him.... We were completely in a mess.... Thank God that the door was closer or else people may think we are making out by our postion....

He tuck my hair behind my ears ..... I look at him..... We had a small eye lock...

Shiva - oi chipkali haat yaha se..... Kitni baari hai!! (Awkwardly)

I try to wake up..... Finally after trying for 2 time I got up.... N then him!!!

Raavi bhaag ja warna phir se..... (I touch my cheek) ... Bhaag ja!!!

While Shiva was cleaning his clothes.... I run out...

Raavi- oi bhootnath harne ke liye ready ho ja!!!

He look at me... I smirk n run!!!!

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As Shiva reach down I show him the money that I got after giving hardik jiju his shoes....

Raavi- bola tha na ki bet mat kar har jayega, lekin tujhe toh harne ka shauk tha..... Dekha raavi se jeetna itna asan nahi hai....!!!! ( I smirk)

Shiva - mein jeetne wala tha par woh sab......

He look at me awkwardly..... I gasped

Raavi- dekh shiva woh sab.... (Shiva interrupted)

Shiva - Mujhe uss bare mein kuch baat nahi karni!!! (Rudely)

Then he went n stood near gombi

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It was now the most difficult time.... The bidaai part....

Anita di stood in the door hugging masi n crying.... Masi n masa paa were crying...

Anita - fui apna khayal rakhna..... Aur fufa ji apni dawai time se lene!!!! (Crying)

Both masi n masa paa hug Anita di n cry

Prafulla-apna khayal rakhna!!!! (Crying)

Jagat- hardik apne beti de raha hoon ache se khayal rakhna iska!!! (Requesting)

Hardik - ji!!!

Anita di came n hug me..... We both cry...

Anita di is very close to me... Whenever masi n I had argument she was the peace maker ..... She always makes me happy... Cook my favorite food when I m angry or upset... Cover up all my mistake...

Anita - nahi mat ro... Rote huwe achi nahi dikhti (chuckle) ..... Raavi app is ghar ko tujhe hi samal na hoga.... Fui aur fufa ji ka khayal rakhna hoga aur kud ka bhi.... App tu bachi nahi rahi app tu bari ho gayi hai ...... Fui se zyada argument mat karna.... Aur fufa ka zyada faida mat utana (chuckle) ..... Khayal rakhna (crying)

I hug her....

Raavi- I love u.... Mein apko bohot zyada miss karungi (crying)

Then we drop her till the vehicle....

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I stood there watching her going in the car.....

Masi n all went inside....

I was crying...

Shiva - yeh rakh (giving me a handkerchief) .. Aur asu poch.. Rote huwi tu bilkul achi nahi lagti

I look at him with teary eyes

Shiva- chudail dikhti hai... Waise bhi chehra toh karab hai aur rote huwe aur karab ho jati hai..... Asu poch le warna koyi child dekhega na ro dega (laughing)

Raavi- shiva!!!!! (Frustrated)

Raavi pov end

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