Ok I'm so happy with your reply... I actually didn't expected you ppl would reply and I'm so happy that u guys did ... So yes I'm gonna start the sequel of MANAN-MAFIA'S STAR on my bday 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉..
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So now without getting late read the letter and before you go in lemme say you this isn't complete letter... I have completed only half.. but I thought I should give you till I wrote so here you go and yeah I didn't wrote the other half... So aapki curiousity sirf badegi...
Anyways HAPPY READING...
And it read : {guys this the first time i'm writing an emotional letter that too on my own.. i don't know how its going to be turn out.. before letters were completely from google except some lines and i know all of you know that but this letter is completely on my own.. im trying to write a raw and a pure
feeling of mother's love to a daughter.. except the quotes, everything from the letter is by me.. if you find any mistakes , please bear with them.. and hope you have a happy time and please do leave your reviews down coz i'm gonna use this OWN LETTERS THiNG in my other 2 stories.. not same letter,but my raw letters.and yeah.. im saying before only.. no one should copy this how it may be...and you ppl can leave advices if you find something that needs improvement and i will be happy by that..}The letter is read by rishab
Happy 21st birthday baby.. i can't believe you turned 21 this fast.. i know i'm not with you now nahi tho you might not b reading this letter.. if you are reading this letter, then that means i'm not with you. But don't worry me and your dad are always with you blessing you kids.. hope all my kids are together. i know you are our strong girl , stronger than earlier.. we know and we trust you. Hope you , rishab and cabir are together and happy.. me and your dad r proud of you three. hope you made good friends.. i know i have mentioned in last letter of your birthday that i'm gonna share something with you and a request too which will change your life completely... But before that i want to share how me and your dad met and the friendshhips i have.. i'm gonna share my best experiences with you today as your birthday gift because i want my kids to know how their parents were there and how the friendships are there in our generations.. and along with this letter i'm gonna give you some clues and it will b like a game.. and at the end of the game you will get something precious which is a MOST PRiCELESS POSSESSiON of me , ur dad and my bestest friends.. this puzzles and all has both good and bad.. but precisely bad more , but i want you to only acquire good things.. and if you didn't find good things , then that doesn't mean this letters doesn't have good things but you didn't find them perfectly.. always remember EVERY BAD THiNG HAS A GOOD THiNG iNSiDE iT , YOU JUST NEED TO FiND THAT OUT .. coz for example , there is a clock which doesn't work and is stuck at the same time and it can't even be repaired.. i know this is a bad thing.. but if you try finding good thing in it , you will see that in 24 hours it shows correct time 2 tims.. isn't it a good thing.. try always finding good things in everything...
ok one thing i wanna ask did you loved someone? if no , then no one could me more happier than me and your dad..
[ all gasped at this as she loved manik..rishab didn't felt like reading after this line..but gathering strength cabir took the letter from rishab and continued reading the letter and navya held his other hand giving the required support and cabir can't be more grateful for her support as it means alot]
if yes, then love only if you understand that it's your true love because even raman and me had done love marriage and we know the value of love and we trust you and we hope you choose a correct person.. Love can't be forced or changed.. so if you love someone then it's ok.. if you really loved someone
then it means you have read by another letter right...so, if you love someone , then i also i would request something baby doll and hope you can do that for your mom and dad....
{nandu- anything for you both except my love.. she said making all smile and manik sighed in relief}
ok so first mein apna friendship k baare mein bolungi..
you know we used to be three best friends.. Me, Nyonika , Anitha..
we three are thickest friends.. me and nyonika are best friends at our early age.. We are like soul sisters and were the same till she left her last breath.. we met when we were 9 yrs.. she saved me when someone bullied me in school and from then our friendship bloomed and shone so brightly... And she made me strong from then .. she used to be with me in every step i take and same goes with me.. we use to support eachother.. I'm an orphan so i went to school because theprincipal was kind and she found me a bright girl so through her i joined that scool and met nyonika.. me and nyonika are of same class and same bench too.. Many girls used to be jealous of our friendship.. we both were bright students.. top 3 mein hum donon zaroor rehte the... once, nyonika's mother saw me and she felt a connection with me.. she used to take care of me just like nyonika nd nyonika's dad was sometimes more fond of me than her.. they adopted me and we were legally sisters from
then.. they adopted me but i didn't changed my surname as they didn't want to take my real identity.. I used to call them mom-dad too... me , a girl who lost hope in family and who used to cry daily at nights to make myself sleep, who never smiled and didn't felt any affection , nyonika came as a ray of light in my darkest days and I would never forget that day in my life....the pain of not having parents is something that can never be filled.. i always used to think why my parents abandoned me and left me just like that and never turned back.. i used to cry so much for not having parents when i see a mom loving her daughter making her hair and her father kissing her forehead affectionately and when i see a sister droppig her sibling to school kissing her cheeks..but when i saw nyonika's no our parents, everything changed... sometimes not sometimes , often I even forget that I'm their adopted daughter.. they were upper middle class people and everything was so happy and we used to be
always smiling.. when we were in second year intermediate that is we are 19 yrs old then.. on our last exam day , our principal called us to congratulate us as we were
always bright students from starting and she wished we would pass intermediate with flying colours.. mom dad said , they wil come and pick us from school and we will be going on a trip as our exams are completed and we will be having holidays.. I was dad's girl and she is mumma's girl..always.. we were so excited for the trip and we came out of school to have snacks we took the snacks and were going back to school and we had bags on our bag..we saw mom and dad standing on the opposite side.. they gestured us to wait and they will come to us and we accepted that..
but at that particular moment , the thing happened infront of us was enough to
dry the blood in our veins.. I still shiver at the thought.. Mom dad were lying there in the pool of blood right infront of us... A car came so rashly and it crashed them and crossed off.. they didn't even waited to see what happened to our parents.. we immediately rushed to them to see them... i was shocked.. no moment was there.. nyonika went to school and called principal ma'am who called ambulance and ambulance came after half an hour.. I took out hand keys and kept it on thier heads where more bleeding is happening.. it took half an hour till we reached hospital from the time the accident happened and maa was wincing in pain and dad was saying he loves both of us and they will be okay.. till they took mom dad on stretcher , both of them stopped speaking and i thought they are unconscious due to blood loss.. nyonika was crying but i didn't cried.. not even single tear.. i was scared.. i don't know howthey would be.. NYONIKA got scared seeing me like that.. after ten mins doctor came out and said " if you have got them half an hour before, they may got saved.. but it's too late.. they are dead" and i lost my breath..
i felt my blood was being sucked.. before i could reply nyonika fell unconscious and i didn't know what to do.. it was too much for me to take in.. i already lost my parents and i can't lose nyonika.. I can't handle loosing one more person and i decided to be strong for her.. i asked principal ma'am to be there and i went to home with the spare keys i had.. i got money which are required for paying to hospital and food for me and nyonika.. I didn't felt anything other than taking breaths amd thinkingb about nyonika's health.. i
again locked the door and took an auto to reach hospital.. i paid the bills and nyonika gained conscious.. she was crying like hell as she lost her parents.. I too lost my parents.. for the second time.. I seriously believed them like my parents and I asked nyonika to donate their organs.. she was shockedd ... but i said " atleast the people who got our parents organs , their families will be happy and we can feel that atleast our parents are alive " and she was happy at that thought.. we filled the forms of organ donation and after that we performed last rites..I know always boys should perform last rits but our parents brought us up so strong just like boys.. they used to say that we are boys for them.. both boys and girls..and I understood that's the time to be strong .. for HER...After performing all the rituals and went home , we saw some people at the front door waiting for us and we were confused .. 3 men and 3 women.. I still don't
exactly remembered who they were but nyonika does.. actually they were mom dad's ffriends from whom dad took some money for needs and its a bit high amount.. as mom dad are dead, these men are scared
thinking we wouldn't pay back their amount... we sighed and nyonika went inside the house to get money and we found the amount we need to pay is quite big and we don't have that much amount in our hands
then.. But we couldn't even ask them to wait as even they need money at that instance..we were scared.. Everything came upon at one time only and we were too young to face these kinda things.. so we sold our
house and paid them money.. and we have fair amount .. But we can't just spend our amount just like that as we are still young and we should even save for future.. so we both packed our things tto leave the place
and join a girls hostel as it will be cost efficient and college b dekhlenge.. But at that time our principal ma'am came and recommended a college for us .. S.P.A.C.E. college.. It is famous for it's richness.. and we being top students got it through scholarships... i was relieved.. but college will start after two months and two months khaali baithna humari bas k baat nahi thi.. so we once sat and discussed what to do and what to become in future... I wanted to become a doctor and build a hospital so that everyone can get nice treatment freely as people won't suffer.. the moment doctor said "thodi der pehle laate tho ye donon bach jaate"... and at that moment I was on a fix to become a doctor in which stream maybe.. but after parents died and house got sold i understood we couldn't afoord that.. so even i joined S.P.A.C.E. college.. nyonika wanna
be an industrialist .. so we took business management .. we thought of arranging tutions as we were free and we thought it would be better if we take an apartment and we can get kids from apartment for our
teaching.. so we looked around the college so that we don't even need charges .. we took penthouse in an apartment which is just a ten mins walk to the college.. after discussing and searching for 2 days , nyonika decided she will say tutions for school kids in and around our apartment and i will give home tutions for 3 kids who aren't comfortable with many kids around them.. as the college is only till 1, we can continue with tutions and as me and nyonika are nice cooks, we thought of supplying cakes and cupcakes for a bakery.. 2 months passes like this.. until this time, we accepted the harsh reality of our parents are no more.. I was a little traumatic but nyonika stood for me and i was back to chirpy and bubbly mode by this 2 months.. the first day of college.. when we stood at the entrance , we literally had goosebumps.. It's like fresh air hit us.. something was positive about here.. and here we met Anitha.. Anitha roy.. we instantly clicked for some reason.. she is also in the same stream... But not a bright student.. we helped her and she tried and was in 70% in exams...in the same class , we met your dad and his best friend raj malhotra.. I had a crush on your dad but ur dad even started loving me already.. i know raj loved nyonika.. and even they got clicked.. and we five people were bestest friends.. all the college admired us for our friendship.. we five used to rule the college... raj was like brother to me.. the time was going smoothly.. one year passed..
and in second year raman proposed me on valentine's day.. in our classroom.. i was the most happiest.. but i rejected his proposal.. Thinking why, then me and nyonika were earning money sufficiently for our needs and he belongs to upper middle class family.. his parents didn't liked me and i know that.. so i rejected him coz i don't want him to feel parentless.. i know how it feels and i didn't want him to go through the same.. Raman was confused as he knows i love him but i rejected him.. Raj didn't know what to do.. to take care of his friend or help his sister, that is me to understand his love.. Nyonika understood my dilemma and tried to talk to me but i rejected or dodged it everytime....in those three months Raman was always careful as he thought I may do something wrong to myself and trying to bring us close , NYONIKA fell for Raj and I know that even though she didn't say me but I was waiting for her to say me but she didn't said so I thought she need some time to prepare herself... Anitha was happy as I rejected Raman i don't understand why.. after three months when holidays were going on raj took me to a place where everything was decorated...... decorated as same as the day when raman proposed me... I was confused and shocked...I asked NYONIKA to accompany me and she said she will come too ..Anitha went to her parents as holidays were there.. or that's what we thought.. he proposed me again and this time he cleared each of my insecurity with one one letter.. he gave me one letter and asked me to read it.. i was shocked to read.. he poured his feelings along with writing the insecurities i have and cleared each of it... he said he will talk to his parents and make them accept me.. i accepted his proposal this time and his happiness knew no bounds. i was happy seeing him happy I shared this to nyonika and she was more than happy..next day Anitha came back and the day Raman proposed was last day of our holidays.. I expressed my happiness to anitha and now anitha was sad.. THat confused me.. but she put a fake facade and started being happy and i thought some problem is going on in her house.. But I didn't knew she would be damaging our house..
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