𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐂𝐫𝐲𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐥 𝐒𝐧𝐨�...

By JeonJmini

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❄︎The two of us are already far apart Even though we are meant to be one Now the paint that colors us And the... More

❄︎𝚆𝚎𝚕𝚌𝚘𝚖𝚎❄︎
❄︎𝚁𝚞𝚕𝚎𝚜 𝙵𝚘𝚛 𝙿𝚊𝚛𝚝𝚒𝚌𝚒𝚙𝚊𝚗𝚝𝚜❄︎
❄︎𝚁𝚞𝚕𝚎𝚜 𝙵𝚘𝚛 𝙹𝚞𝚍𝚐𝚎𝚜❄︎
❄︎𝙲𝚊𝚝𝚎𝚐𝚘𝚛𝚒𝚎𝚜❄︎
❄︎𝙵𝚘𝚛𝚖𝚜❄︎
✵Promotion 1✵
✵Promotion 2✵
✵Promotion 3✵
❄︎𝙿𝚛𝚒𝚣𝚎𝚜❄︎
❄︎𝙾𝚏𝚏𝚒𝚌𝚒𝚊𝚕 𝙻𝚒𝚜𝚝❄︎
❄︎𝙹𝚞𝚍𝚐𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝙲𝚛𝚒𝚝𝚎𝚛𝚒𝚊❄︎
✵ Promotion 4✵
✵ Promotion 5✵
✵ Promotion 6✵
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❄︎ Kim Seokjin Judging❄︎
❄︎ Min Yoongi Judging❄︎
❄︎ Jung Hoseok Judging❄︎
❄︎ Kim Namjoon Judging❄︎
❄︎ Park Jimin Judging❄︎
❄︎ Kim Taehyung Judging❄︎
❄︎ Jeon Jungkook Judging❄︎
❄︎ Ships Judging❄︎
❄︎ OT7 Judging❄︎
❄︎ OneShot Judging❄︎
✫ Notice✫
❄︎ Notice 2❄︎
✵ Notice 3✵
✵ Promotion✵
❄︎ Kim Namjoon Winners❄︎
✵ Promotion✵
❄︎Ships Winners❄︎
★ Notice★
❄︎OT7 winners❄︎
Notice
❄︎ OneShot winners❄︎
❄︎Kim Taehyung Winners❄︎
❄︎ Jung Hoseok Winners❄︎
❄︎ Min Yoongi Winners❄︎
❄︎ Jeon Jungkook Winners❄︎
❄︎Kim Seokjin Winners❄︎
Thank you
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❄︎Park Jimin Winners❄︎

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By JeonJmini

Our Mochi's results are out. Oops...Kind of slip my hand at clicked that hot photo up there.(He's staring at our souls) Ok enough nonsense let's get to business. Now,now Don't be sad or disappointed if you didn't make it to winners ok. Everyone has a good story and let's try to develop our books with the reviews^^

The third place winner is...


































You Are My First Snow by Purpleworld14.


Judge; 01Btsarmy.

Book Title: You are my first

snow

Category/Genre: PJM

Title: 5/5

Cover: 5/5

Description: 5/10

Grammar and writing style: 18/20 Sense/emotions:

10/10

Plot:8/10

Explanations: 18/20

Blurb:9/10

Structure and vocabulary.

7/10

A short review: This story is of a girl who run away

from her house.... It is a emotional AU....

Total score: 85/100

Congratulations sweetie 🥳💐🎊

Now the second place winner goes to...

























White Rose by MaknaeVickookie.

Judge;01Btsarmy

Book Title: White Rose Category/Genre: PJM

Title: 5/5

Cover: 5/5

Description: 9/10

Grammar and writing style: 18/20 Sense/emotions:10/

10 Structure and vocabulary:

Plot: 9/10

Explanations: 17/20

Blurb: 7/10

7/10

Total score: 87/100

Oh yes, there's another winner..

His Dominant love byJellycuddles19_.

Book Title: His Dominant

Love

Category/Genre:PJM

Title: 5/5

Cover: 5/5 Description: 10/10

Grammar and writing style:

18/20 Sense/emotions:

8/10

Plot:9/10

Explanations: 15/20

Blurb: 10/10 Structure and vocabulary:

7/10

A short review: This story is of two step sisters....The lead characters sister is getting married to Park Jimin... But cheats him on the wedding day...

Total score:87/100

Congratulations to you too 🎊🥳💐

Now the grand winner of this category is...





















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Ethereal by Juliander2.


Judge :areziaj_13.

- Science fiction /Action.

This site is indeed eyecatching. Looking up of new words, phrases. In first glance readers find it attractive. So, I really appreciate that this book is completed. Many books have simple,less attractive words but I liked this book

Cover-5/5

The cover is really good and beautiful in a glance but just a little bit of change and  it'll be perfect.

3 Description 9/10

→The description is perfectly written, but she can do a little change, as in avoid little questions. And can give one sentence which can make readers read the book and get impressed. Overall I can say this description Caught the  reader's attention very easily. So beautifully organized the words.

Grammar / Working style - 19/20

There was not even a single mistake.
The writer showed the story as of everything that was happening is real, while reacting you can make out how much perfectly the writer ward to express her feelings, plot is indeed perfect.

Explanation: 19/20

I don't really know what to say, I mean, when I started reading thought it might go boring but without stopping I read to chapter 18. The explanation was amazing I can't write or express how proved and to really 1.amazing inter. say for Juliander2

Blurb 10/10

The way the made every charater burst with emotion and we way she made the readers involue can appreciated.

Structure

/Vocabulary :- 9/10. The words  were very new and she was really good with her vocabulary & indeed sharp and their structure of her story.

A short review— OK so, I am really happy to tell that this author (@Juliander)is really a wonderful author , I really appreciate her hard work. And I wanna seep that, girl you are doing really wery well, keep up the spirit and the wote for her book. And read the story again. cause why not keep going and your are really an amazing person

95/100 - Congratulations!

-Areziak Joxph

Congratulations love 🥳🎊💐 You've done an amazing job.

Remember the special award? Yeah we chose one...No not one but two because of their writing skills deserve more ^^

Heart by zyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy and  Aurora byMochi_archer. Congratulations to both of you..

Winners pm me to claim their prizes and others pm me to get their reviews.

Thank you for our lovely judgesareziaj_13 ,01Btsarmy. And MochiSaysLachimolala. They work so hard and well. *Big appulse and cheers*

Hope we'll meet again in future awards. Till then,stay safe


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