Love You Till Eternity βœ“

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Based on Karwachauth Track 2020 where Karan finds out that Preeta kept fast for him last year. Will Preeta be... MΓ‘s

Karwachauth 2020
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Karwachauth 2020 πŸ₯° (Ch 1)
Sweet Moments πŸ₯° (Ch 2)
Romance babydoll 😘 (Ch 3)
I Miss you ❀ (Ch 4)
Chudail got insulted πŸ˜‚ (Ch 5)
Manali (Ch 6)
Thank You ❀
Dance with me 😍 (Ch 7)
Chudail In Jail πŸ˜‚ (Ch 8)
Preeran ❀ (Ch 9)
Shopping πŸ›οΈπŸ’Έ (Ch 10)
Jaago (Ch 11)
Haldi (Ch 12)
Heart broken πŸ’”πŸ’” (Ch 14)
Exposed πŸ₯³ (Ch 15)
Preeta's plan 😏 (Ch 16)
Breakdown πŸ˜­πŸ’” (Ch 17)
DheeShra ❀
Bold Preeta πŸ”₯😎 (Ch 18)
Karan πŸ˜­πŸ’” (Ch 19)
Rose Day 🌹 (Ch 20)
Propose Day 🌹 (Ch 21)
Chocolate Day 🍫 (Ch 22)
Teddy Day 🧸 (Ch 23)
Promise Day πŸ₯° (Ch 24)
Hug Day πŸ₯° (Ch 25)
Kiss Day 😘 (Ch 26)
Valentines Day 😍 (Ch 27)
Preeta's plan πŸ˜‰ (Ch 28)
Jealousy 😎 (Ch 29)
Roka πŸ™„ (Ch 30)
Bakra got Insulted πŸπŸ˜‚ (Ch 31)
Are You Jealous πŸ˜‰ (Ch 32)
Engagement πŸ’ (Ch 33)
Broken πŸ’” (Ch 34)
Preeran πŸ’” (Ch 35)
Preeran 😍 (Ch 36)
Teasings πŸ₯°πŸ˜œ (Ch 37)
Holi Hai 😍 (Ch 38)
Mahesh's plan 😎 (Ch 39)
Preeran romance ❀ (Ch 40)
Control Karan πŸ˜‚ (Ch 41)
Preeta loves Karan ❀ (Ch 42)
Planned Act 🧐 (Ch 43)
Care ❀ (Ch 44)
Romance 😍❀ (Ch 45)
Kissi Wissi 😍 (Ch 46)
Preeran 🀧 (Ch 47)
Confession πŸ₯° (Ch 48)
Beach Date 😍πŸ₯° (Ch 49)
Becoming one 😘 (Ch 50)
Preeran ❀ (Ch 51)
Exposed πŸ₯³ (Ch 52)
Let's do Romance 😍❀ (Ch 53)
DheeShra BTS ❀
Cravings πŸ˜‰ (Ch 54)
Mr. and Mrs. Luthra 😍 (Ch 55)
Preeran 😘 (Ch 56)
Nok - Jhok 😍 (Ch 57)
Baby Shower 😍 (Ch 58)
It's a Girl πŸ˜‡ (Ch 59)
Love You Till Eternity ❀ (Ch 60)
Thank you ❀

Betrayal πŸ’” (Ch 13)

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The scene starts from the hall.

In Luthra House

Preeta was very much tensed as to what will happen next, she was not worried for her but for Kritika. Preeta tried each and everything she can do to save Kritika's life. Preeta thinks that Kritika's love towards Akshay was strong that's why she didn't believed to what she said against him. It's isn't her fault.

Her thoughts were broken by Kareena. All guests had already left.

Kareena - You middle class Preeta Arora... Tum samajti kya ho apne aapko... Tum meri beti ki zindagi kharab karna chahti thi... Dekha tumne Akshay ne kese usko sabke saamne dubara propose kiya.... (Preeta looked at her) Tum ye jo planning kar rhi thi woh sab fail ho gayi....

Preeta - Haan, sab fail... I failed... Ki mein Kritika ki shaadi rok nhi paayi.... I really failed at this...

Karan was confused why Preeta thinks that Akshay is not the right guy.

Screen shifts to Akshay's car

Kritika was smiling that she finally married to the love of her life. She started dreaming about their future life. Thinking how Akshay proposed her the second time in front of each and every person present in the hall.
Her thoughts were broken when the car stopped abruptly in the middle of isolated and deserted road. No vehicle was passing that road.

Akshay (little anger) - Kritika abhi ke abhi gaadi se niklo bahar....

Kritika (totally confused) - Kyu Akshay jii... Abhi toh ghar aane ko der hai....

Akshay (smirking) - Mujhe tumhe ye batana hai ki mein kya feel karta hu tumhare baare mein...

Kritika (blushing) - Thik hai....

They both came out of the car and were standing on the middle of deserted road.

Kritika - Meine socha nhi tha Akshay jii.. Ki aap mujhe phir se sabke saamne propose karenge... Mujhe ab lag raha hai ki I am so lucky to have you in my life. Akshay jii... Sab ke saamne toh meine bola nhi lekin ab bolti hu ki I love you too.

(I feel so much sorry for Kritika rn 🥺)

Akshay - Tum sach mein bohot bholi ho Kritika.... (Smiling) koi itna bhola kese ho sakta hai... (Kritika was totally confused)... confused ho gayi ho.... Achha mein batata hu... Mein tumse koi pyaar vyaar nhi karta hu... Ye shaadi meine sirf paison ke liye ki hai....

Kritika - Akshay jii aap aisa mazak dubra kabhi mat karna.... Mujhe patah hai aap mazak kar rhe hai....

Akshay (angrily) - Koi mazak nhi chal rha hai yaha Kritika... Tumhe kya lagta hai mein mazak kar raha hu... Nhi.... Galat sochti ho tum.... Bohot galat.... Tumhe yaad hai bidaai se pehle meine tumhari mom se ye 50 lakh rupaye liye the jo ki car ki backseat mein hai... Meine unhe ye bola tha ki mujhe business mein invest karne ke liye chahiye... Jhooth bola tha meine.... (Kritika widened her eyes) haa.. Jhooth bola tha mujhe toh business mein loss ho raha hai... Isliye meine ye paise unse jhooth bol kar liye hai....

Kritika (still not believing) - Aap ye kya keh rahe hai Akshay jii... Jhooth bol karr.... Mazak band kijiye Akshay jii.... Mujhe... Mujhe...

Akshay (loudly) - Tumhe vishwas nhi ho raha hai.... Achha aur ek sach batata hu mera... Tumhari jo Preeta bhabhi hai na (Kritika looked at him shockingly).. Usne sahi bola tha.... Ki akshay achha ladka nhi hai.... Uski baat pe vishwas nhi tha... Meri baaton pe hai naa... Toh suno... Real mein meri 2-2 girlfriend hai ek hai Ruchika aur ek Megha... Aur Ruchika ke saath mera ek bachaa bhi hai 4 saal ka...

Kritika - Aapne mujhe dhoka diya... Aap mujhe itne dino se... Nhi... Nhi.... Itne saalo se dhoka de rahe the...

Akshay - Nhi... Nhi... Meine aisa kab bola mein dhoka de raha tha... Mein toh apna kaam kar raha tha... Lekin tumhari woh Preeta bhabhi pichhle dino se mera aur Megha ka pichha karti rehti thi... Meri itni saal ki mehnat par paani pherne ki koshish kar rhi thi... Usne jo dekha tha na... Jaago ki raat ko... Mujhe aur Ruchika ko hug karte hue... Sahi dekha tha... Meine hi Megha ko paise diye the cocktail party mein jhooth bolne ke liye... (Kritika was so shocked) Woh tumhari bhabhi toh haldi ke din bhi mujhe expose karne wali thi.... Lekin meine uska truck se accident karvana chaha lekin woh bach gyi... Par meine pendrive badal di.... Aaj bhi woh proof leke aayi lekin tumhari pagal.....

Kritika slapped him.

Akshay (laughing) - Kyu gussa aa rha hai... Mujhe toh bohot maza aa rha hai... Tumhari mom ne woh proof jala diye aur kuch nhi bigaad paayi woh mera....

The scene shifts to Luthra House

Kareena - Tum nhi badli na... Tum wohi ho cheap class... Dhokebaaz aur Chaalbaaz... (Preeta shuts her eyes tightly controlling her tears)

Mahilyn were smirking which was noticed by Shrishmeer.

Karan was silently standing not defending his love because he also thinks that she again tried to ruin their happiness.

Kareena (continuing) - Tumhare paas khushiyaan nhi aati toh iska matlab ye nhi ki tum dusro ki khushiyaan ujadti phiro... Mujhe toh tum pehle din se pasand nhi thi.... (Sarla was seeing Preeta continuously not reacting and Shrishti was angry on Kareena) aur tumhari ye badboli Shrishti.... Kesi giri hui hai ye....

Preeta interrupted and said angrily - Meri behen ke baarein mein ek shabd nhi Kareena bua... Mujhe jitna bolna ho boliye.. Meri behen ya mere parivaar ke khilaaf ek shabd nhi.... Aur aap mujhe keh rhi hai ki mein chaalbaaz hu... Areee aapka jo damad bana hai na abhi abhi Akshay woh chaalbaaz hai... Akshay ki sacchai aapko patah nhi isliye aap ye sab bol rahe hai...

Kareena - Tum mujhe mat bolo... Apne aap ko dekho.... Tum kitni dhokebaaz ho... Dekha nhi kese Akshay ne Kritika ko propose kiya abhi....

Preeta (in mind) - Saare proposal sacche nhi hote 🥺😢 (remembering Karan's proposal)
A lone tear escapes her eyes.

Kareena - Ab ye jhoothe aasun kyu baha rhi ho... Tum jesi ghatiya ladki humare parivaar ke liye thik nhi hai.... Isliye toh mein Karan ki shaadi Mahira se karanevaali thi.... Lekin tumne phirse humko dhoka diya....

The scene shifts to deserted road

Akshay - Ek advice doon tumhe toh apni jo Preeta bhabhi hai na... Unka vishwas kar liya karo... Tumhare aur tumhare parivaar ke liye achha rahega...

After saying this Akshay sat in the car and started leaving.

Kritika - Akshay jii, aap aise mujhe chhod ke nhi jaa sakte.... Mein kaha jaaungi... Mujhe apne saath le chaliye.... Mein aapko kuch nhi bolungi.... Ek kone mein padi rahungi.... Par please mujhe apne saath le jaayiye.... Mein wapas ghar nhi jaa sakti... Mujhe apne saath le chaliye....

Akshay smirked and left her in the middle of the lonely road.


Chapter over.

Precap - Double dhamaka 💥💥

Hope you liked this chapter.
Do comment on this chapter.

I know it was a bit emotional. Till now haven't seen that whole scene where Karan left Preeta because I don't think I have courage or guts to see that heart wrenching scene. But tried my best to potray the feelings of Preeta here.

Next few chapters are going to be a bit emotional and contains some family drama.

Will update soon.
Stay tuned.

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