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Happy mother's Day to all the girls Nd women...if u ask me y girls..then lemme say u I'm an elder sister to my chotusa brother..Nd if parents went out or something we would take care of our siblings like our own kids.. even though my bro is hell annoying Nd irritating.. bandha tho humara hi hai right..so happy mother's Day to all the sissos too..Nd boys mumma ko bol do I LOVE U MOM ...THANK U FOR BEING THE BEST MOM TO ME ND HAPPY MOTHERS DAY..they do alot for u right..from ur dresses to make u food Nd helping u in studies to make u sleep.. atleast aaj k din tho boldo thank u Nd love u....ok anyways...
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Happy reading ppl..
13th day , 4th day after album deal..7th may..
NavNI woke up early Nd made breakfast while boys slowly started coming down..
All settled on dining table and served themselves..
Nandu- ok so kal Sunday his right..wts the plan..
Navya- shopping chale...
Cabir looked at her with wide eyes and nandu made a bad face...
Nandu- shopping kyu..
Navya- aise hi...
Cabir- but navya we should discuss about company Nd new house too right..Nd we should practice for album too...album k baad jayenge...
Navya pouted but Nodded...
Nandu- ok pehle let's practice these 4 sings perfectly Nd uske baad hi let's write 5th song..Nd rishu jaldi khalo u should go to clg too right...
Rishab nodded..even rishab has half day on Saturday....
After that all went to their works Nd were being happy in Thier small bubble only if they know something disastrous is waiting for them in a week....
After work they came back had dinner Nd were in living room..
Nandu- waise wts the result of YouTube channel..
Abhi- it's good..I guess we need to upload another song too..we can get money after monetisation....
Nandu Nodded..
Manik- but let's do that after our first album...
All Nodded...
Nandu yawned Nd manik saw this..
Manik- let's sleep guys...I'm sleepy..good night....abhi come...
He said Nd all dispersed except nanbir..
Cabir- nanhi..
She looked at him..
Cabir- I hope u wanna share something...
Nandu- hot choclate hojaye..
He nodded..hot chocolate means sharing things they wanna say to eachother looking at the night sky ..in the presence of their parents....
He went to terrace taking 2 thin blankets..
After ten mins she came up with a tray of 2 cups of hot chocolate 🍫...
She handed him one Nd had one for herself..
He drank 2 sips..
Cabir- bolo..
Nandu sighed..she knows she should say him first.. infact it was her who wanna share it Nd she is getting nervous now...he looked at her and took her in a Side hug Nd pecked her head...
Cabir- don't worry..marunga Nahi...max daantunga...
He said playfully Nd she glared at him making him chuckle..
Cabir- I'm ur bhai nanhi..I won't say anything...
Nandu- but now I want u to say something..
He looked at her confused..she took a deep breath before saying anything..
Nandu- listen to me completely..uske baad hi Kuch bolna...
He nodded understanding what she wanna speak..
Nandu- I love manik bhai..I didn't know how it happened but yes I love him...I don't know hell I didn't even thought that in such a span of short time he came this close to me that his tears broke my heart nd his smiles filled my heart....the frowns on his head made my heart go tensed Nd the relief face made my heart do summersaults..as it sounds as filmy but without my knowledge he started ruling my heart bhai....I don't know what the things I feel for him but what I know is I can't live without him bhai...I love him...u remember when we were small mumma used to say that there will b a prince charming who will come into my Life Nd will rule my heart without my knowledge...I didn't expect that will come true atleast this soon..but miracles happen right...i don't know whether it is fats or slow..but what I know is I love him Bhai...more than anything else I need him...
She said Nd he looked at her with wide eyes...he knows she loves him ..but he didn't expect her to love him this deep..the twinkle in her eyes..it's same like his mother's eyes twinkled when she was with their dad or talking about him.... cabir smiled ...she looked at him expecting him to say something...yes or no..or anything that could help her..
Cabir- I accept ur relation nanhi...u know y...
She nodded in no..
Cabir- ur eyes r just like mumma..same...even the twinkle in ur eyes when u r talking about him is like when she is talking about dad..Nd I know it's him....he is perfect for u...but remember...he suffered alot in his life....he don't even know how to smile heartfully... I witnessed him suffering Nd crying...I want u to take care of him Nd make him smile..his smile should reach his eyes...
She nodded understanding...she smiled..he patted her cheek softly smilingly..
Cabir- ab jaake sojao..kal baat karenge....
She nodded Nd took the cups Nd that tray Nd went down while cabir went to his room to sleep...she kept them in the kitchen and sat on the slab reminding about the say when she understood she loves him ....the day of recording....
FLASHBACK...
WHEN THEY CAME BACK FROM THE COMPANY AFTER BRAGGING THE DEAL ND MANIK WAS SILENT ND ALL WENT TO THEIR JOBS..NANDU FIRST WENT TO HER CHACHA CHACHI ROOM..THAT IS RISHAB PARENTS ROOM.. SHE WENT INSIDE AFTER UNLOCKING THE DOOR ND OPENED THE CUPBOARD...
Ok so don't get confused...actually the cupboard which cabir opened is different Nd which nandu opened is different..nandu mostly follows Alok while cabir follows shanno.. she opened aloks cupboard Nd took out a box where there is a letter...shanno once said nandu that if she feels confused regarding her feelings Nd she can't explain it then she should open that box ...so now nandu is opening that box..
She liked at the box Nd was confused...anyways she opened her box...
Nandu's POV..
I don't know whether this box can help me or not..but I want this to help me clarifying my feelings.. mumma i hope u r seeing me Nd helping me..I want u Nd dada to b proud of me..hope I meet ur expectations ...ok nandu cool....ok open it..
(She opened the box Nd too out the letter form the envelope Nd started reading it..the lines which r underlined r the lines from letter..Nd this dark cursive is her pov Nd her feelings .. hope u ppl aren't confused...)
Dear Barbie doll..
If u r reading this letter then it means u r confused about ur feelings regarding someone Nd thinking that someone to b the one in ur life...u know ur dad's Nd mine is love marriage...so if u agree to my points , then it means u r in love Nd never let that person go fr ur life...mumma Nd dadda loves u baby..
I don't know when my eyes started watering..just thinking about my parents brought water in my eyes..their live is sacred...that's why even after their death they r together...donon ek hi saath chale gaye...love u mumma dada..I miss u both so much..how much I wished u to b there with me Nd encourage me in every step I take in my life...I wanted dad to make me learn riding bicycle...save me from mummas scoldings...helping me to make pranks on bhai....how much I wanted mumma to make my favourite food Nd make me Bhai Nd dad eat together...jab mumma sabko ek hi saath mein khilati thi...I wanted to rest my head in her lap Nd forget the world Nd my problems Nd sleep peacefully..how much I wanna hug dada Nd say that I love him... I wanted dad to support me in every step I take... learning scooty..learning car...making food Nd feeding him... making his head rest in my lap..I miss u both..alot... How much I wanted dad to explain if I didn't understand something Nd mumma feeding me dahi cheeni whenever I go for an exam or interview..I miss u both so much Nd I love u too..alot..
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1.if u think u r in love then the tears in their eyes prick ur heart..u want to wipe their tears Nd make them smile..
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Yes..I don't want manik to cry .I so wanna wipe his tears Nd replace it with a smile whatever it may take for it...
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2. Whatsoever it may happen u can't bear a scratch on them ...u wanna kill the person who ever harms him..u want him to be with u always Nd safe too..
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Yes ..I never want anyone to harm him Nd kill the person who ever harms him...a scratch on him..I will set the whole world on fire... I want to be safe Nd happy.. humesha..
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3. Even though if somethings hurt u Nd if it gives him happiness .u never ever feel sad to hurt urself..Nd u never want him to hurt..
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Yes ..it hurts to hurt him..if I should burn in the flame of his love..I'm happy to burn myself in the fire 🔥..
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4. U will do anything get his smile back..Jo tum Apne aapne mein b Soch Nahi sakti..vo tum uske liye karogi..
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Yes ..I have gave gifts..that too letters before Nd I have already planned gifts for him today...just to get his smile...but only if he knows .his smile means world to me..
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5. U will feel safe Nd secured with them..u will never feel uncomfortable with them..u will feel that no one can harm u if u r with them..
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Yes..after bhai , he made me feel secured..he has warmth of dada..he never made me feel uncomfortable...I know with him beside me , no on can harm me..
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6. He will encourage you the way we do...he would never let u feel alone.. he will always b ur back..he will never let u fall...u won't ever hesitate to share the deepest secrets of ur life...
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I still remember how he always makes me feel comfortable..Nd I'm always ready to share my secrets with him....Nd I know he will never let me fall...I know how he helps innocents...Nd if he loves me , the he would never let me feel alone or fall....**sigh**
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7.even though u never throw tantrums on anyone..u want to throw tantrums Nd b a baby to him ..h will enjoy getting pampered by him Nd Pampering him... Loved.. secured.. happy... pampered..smiles... sweet pain.. comfortable.. encouraged..u feel this all with him..
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Yes..yes..a hundred times yes...all these r correct...
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If these all r correct Nd accepted,then never let him go Barbie doll..if u feel all these then u r in love..true love happens only once..mujhe hua hai..now it's ur time to fall...keep smiling princess..mumma dada loves u..
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That's it...I understood..I love him..I love manik..thank u mumma...I love u too so much ...thank god I got my answer nahi tho I would get mad...
Nandu's POV ends...
She closed the letter Nd kept it back in the box Nd then in the cupboard and closed the Door Nd went to prepare the gifts for manik to get him back to his mood Nd made all the gifts..
Flashback ends...
She went back to her room Nd slept off smilingly...
Next day..
14th day ..5th day after album deal
8th may... Saturday..
All woke up early....had breakfast.. went to their work places Nd came back afternoon till 2.. manbir took time as they need to work a little more as the project is gonna end in a month or something...
Till 2 no one had lunch...all waited for manbir when they both came home..
Navya- huff..agaye.. chalo jaldi haath muh dholo...let's eat .I'm starving..
Rishab- pet mein chuhe daud rahe hai..
Maddy- koi nahi rishu..mein billi chodtha hun tere pet mein...vo chuhe ko khaa jayega Nd u won't feel hungry..
He said with the most innocent look Nd all laughed while rishab pouted..
Nandu- maddy..chup..manik nd bhai..go Nd freshen up..we all r Hungry..
Manik- y did u waited for us kha lete na..
Nandu- manik we r family...we can wait for an hour..koi baat nahi hai...but eating together is happiness..
She said Nd he smiled...both manbir went to their rooms and freshen up..oh yeah..abhi still didn't got job..so he was continuing the tutions of rishab..Nd he is teaching so well..new students joined too...Nd he was even helping rishab in his business management studies..
All had lunch silently as manbir were tired...
Cabir- navya khane k baad thoda massage kardo I will sleep for sometime..
She nodded blushing..manik was still looking lost...it didn't settled well with nandu...he looked at her in the same time..she smiled brightly while he returned a sad smile..she frowned Nd noted to ask him later....
After lunch manik didn't waited for anyone Nd directly ran to his room.. cabir raised his eyebrow while nandu blinked her eyes saying she will handle him...Nd she too went after lunch..
Cabir- abhi tum thode der plz yahi raho..
All looked at him curiously..
Cabir- ok ppl..it's creepy..stop looking at me like that..ok they both love eachother Nd both said to me Nd will say to eachother in a month or so.. as manik is upset nandu is handling him .so tum rishab k Saath raho..
Maddy- oh hello main Kaha jao..
Navya- uff..mein aaj avni k saath rahungi..Maddy tum rishu k saath hi raho...abhi u b with cabir..
She said Nd cabir made a bad face but nodded understanding the situation..
Here in manik's room..
Manik went Nd slept on bed on his stomach Nd a pillow below his head Nd another on his head..nandu slowly went Nd sat beside him...she tried to remove the pillow but he resisted..
Nandu- manik ..u will suffocate urself..stop it.. remove the pillow..
She said softly Nd he removed his pillow...he looked at her Nd her heart pricked... looking at the tears in his eyes ..she sat comfortably Nd slowly removed his tears ..he immediately kept his head in her lap and hugged her through her stomach...Nd started crying silently..nandu just ruffled his hair Nd is whispering sweet nothings in his ears Nd pecking his head time to time...he cried for half nd hour na slept off like that only due to crying...nandu tried to remove his hold only to get it tightened..she stopped Nd slowly ruffled his hair Nd slept like that only..all others too slept off in their rooms...
Now it's 5 ..manik slowly came out of his sleep Nd felt softness Nd warmth around him Nd snuggled more to it ..nandu's one hand on his back Nd other on his hair Nd his both hands around her waist...
Nd that broke her sleep..she is still in half sleep..so she is just ruffling his hair while his sleep broke...he slowly removed his hands Nd opened his eyes Nd they popped out of the sockets..he immediately sat on bed Nd nandu's sleep too broke completely..
He felt guilty of making her sleep like that Nd now definitely her back will pain..he knows that...she looked into his eyes Nd understood it..she just cupped his face and kissed his forehead..
Nandu- no need to feel guilty..I chose this..
She said Nd he smiled...
Manik- nandu vo actually..
He tried saying about his behaviour of crying Nd allbut she kept her palm on his lips .
Nandu- no need to share manik...if u feel comfortable then only share it..no need to make urself suffocated okay ..
She said Nd he smiled..she just ruffled his hair..
Nandu- come down I will prepare coffe Nd some snacks...
She said Nd he nodded and she went down..
He sat there smiling...can he ask for more better girl in his life..a big fat carbohydrated Noooo.. hahahha
Till he come down all came down Nd were talking to eachother..he just went Nd sat beside cabir while girls joined nandu in kitchen...
All were talking about cricket Nd videos but none talked about him being silent Nd he was comfortable till girls brought snacks Nd tea..
All had coffe Nd tea 🍵🍵 happily..now nandu can see his smile.
All had a good time Nd tried making him smile Nd Maddy rishabs banter made him laugh happily...
All had dinner Nd slept in their rooms peacefully...
Next day was Sunday..9th may...today all just practiced their 4 songs..
IKTARA..
JAISE TERA MAI..
HASI BAN GAYE..
ISHQ BULAVA..
at evening manik Said they will Start their business..but only after the project in their office completes..after their first recording , they thought of starting the company's construction..
All had dinner Nd manik was much better...
Daily they practiced the 4 sings Nd now they were perfect...
Today is Saturday.. 15th may...21st day..12 days after album deal.. evening..all were waiting for manik...
Actually cabir came early as he planned date..Nd manik said he will come by himself..but cabir have car keys to him Nd took a cab..
Now it's been 2 hrs than office time..
All were waiting for manik..nandu thought of searching for him as she is scared now..what if something happens to him..it is killing her...
Before she takes keys he entered the house with a expressionless face..his face was blank..nandu ran to him Nd hugged him tightly...
Nandu- where were u..do u know how scared we were..
She said but he didn't even hugged her back.....he just separated himself from her..
Manik- I AM LEAVING U ND THIS HOUSE .. FOREVER....
Nd all were shocked..no one knows what to say...
Cliffhanger...
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