My kutti pattas(completed)

By nilasagi

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A fan fiction of Ashwin and Shivangi More

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Epilogue

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By nilasagi

Ashwin pov :

Naa sonnenlanga en shiva oru devathainu.. Ava iruka idame santhosam mattum thaan iurkum.. Evlo kastama situationalum avakita share panna adutha second, kastamna   ennanu kekra alavuku namma mood ah change pannra maayakari ava..

Sila samayam ava kulanthaiya naa kulanthaiyanu enake doubt varum. Antha alavuku ennai thanguva..
Sila samayam ennai paithyam pidika vaikra alavuku ennai torture pannuvaa..
Avala yaralum kanikave mudiyathu..

Elarkum purinja aana oru sollula adaka mudiyatha puthir ava.. Ava en lifela varama irunthrunthaa en life ivlo santhosama irunthrukumaana? Naa ilainu thaan soluven..

Epovum ava enkudaye irukanum.... Ennoda ovvoru nodiyum avaloda spend pannanum.. Engita ava chellama sandai podanum.. Aduthu avale antha cute ahna expression oda ennai samathanam pannanum.. Intha maari kutti kutti aasainga avala paakum pothelam thonikitte thaan irukum..
Inum 5 naala ava ooruku poiduvaanu ninaichale enaku paithiyam pidikara maari iruku..

Avala paakama ennala 10 days epdi iruka mudiyum.. Pesama avalayum leave mudiyara varai ingaye thanga sollidalamanu kuda yosichu paarthuten.. Humm. Onnum velaiku agaala..

Naa sonnamaari enaku vasiyam thaan vechitta intha maaya manthrikari.. Unmaiya naa intha maarila naa yosichathu kuda illainga.. Enna apdiye ava style ku maathittaa..

Naa avala vilayattu pillainu ninaicha ore secondla enakum en ammavukum iruntha misunderstanding ah sari pannittaaa..

Enakum ammavukum ipo irukra problemnaa athu antha Nakul thaan..
apdiye avan enga amma saayal.. Actually perimmavum ammavukum ore saayal thaan.. Athunala thaan avanum athe maari irukaan..
Genius madam soldra maarilaam avana naanga thathu kudukalainga.

. Avanuku irukara ketta puthina, nallatho kettatho engita irukarathathaan avan adaiya ninaipan.. Chinna vayasula irunthe avan apdi thaan..

Suresh uncle engita apo nalla palagunathala avarkitayum ennai thittu vaanga vaikra maari than ethavathu pannuvan..

Amma kitayum naa adikamale avana adichenu solli sandaiya mooti viduvaan.. Ammavukum apdiye avungala urichu vecha maari irukarathala avanmela thani paasam..

Even appa kita nalla per vanganumnu  crores la donation thanthu medical sheet vaangi doctorku padikrenu scene pottan.. Appavuku naa doctor padikanumnu aasainu therinjukitte apdi pannan..
Avan thaan romba nalla paiyanu elarum paaratanumam..

Ithanaikum naa avana  ethiriya kuda ninaichathilla...

Ipo avan paarvai shiva mela pattiruku.. Anaiku amma mattum varama poi irunthaa avan kannai nondi irupen.. Thappichitan porukki..

Avanaku apdi enna kevalamana puthiyo enai suthi irukavungalm avanathaan prefer pannanumnu aasai padran..

Avan easya amma paasam kaati ammava vena emaathalam.. Aana en shivava apdi ematha mudiyathu..

Avan shivava ennai satharana ponnunu ninaichutana..Avanoda Doctor ngra scenelayum avanoda richness yum kaati emartha..

Naanga rendu perum meet pannale kandipa athu sandaila thaan mudiyum.. Easya ennai trigger panni nalavanu per eduthutu poiruvaan.. Aana intha time naa avana jeika vida porathu illa..

En shiva solli kudutha maari en urimaiya naan thaan kapathanum..epovum avan vanthutana naa orama othungi poiduven.. But intha time naa vittu kuduka porathu illa..   en amma kitta avana naaa nerungave vidala..

Ivanukum shivaniya payapaduthna maarithaan ini seiyanum pola..

Veera paandi pov: ( surprise)

Elarkum vanakkam pa.. Naan thaan veerapaandi... Enai pathi arimugam thevai illainu ninaikren..yenna en marumagale elathayum solli irupaanu ninaikren.

Ennoda santhosam ellame en kudumbam thaan.. En appa amma maari thaan naanum en manaiviyum otrumaiya santhosama vazhanumnu aasai pattu en mathiya kai pidichen..

Ipo varaikum avala santhosama paarthukanumnu thaan naa paadu padren.. Avala maari oru appavi ponna naa parthathe illa.. Yaaru enna sonnalum nambirvaa..ava kita irukara nallathum athuthaan..kettathum athu thaan..

Mathi enaku entha koraiyum vechathu illa.. En appa ammavukum avalukum ithuvarai entha sandaiyum vanthathu illa.. Aana sandai varathu ennamo enakum avunga ammavukum thaan..

Epdi maamiyar marumaga sandaikulla naama mooka nulaika koodathoo athe maari thaan ammavum pillaikum naduvula naama poga kudathu.. Athai naa niraya thadavai unarnthuruken..

Ennoda 25 varusa kalyana vazhkaila enakum avalukm sandai varathunaa athuku kaaranam avunga ammava naa thitranala thaan..
Sandaina periya sandai ilanga..ava chinnatha mugam vaadiruva..

Enna panrathunga ennalayum thittama iruka mudiyarathu illaye..

Aanalum avalukaga avunga ammakita pesratheye vituten..

Enga appa amma ennai epdi valarthangalo athe maari en paiyanaiyum chellama valarkanumnu thaan aasai.. Aana naa avanuku epo chellam kudukarano apolam  en magan Ashwin konjam ellai meeriduraan.. Athunalayo ennavo avana naa adichu miratti thaan valarthunen..

Avan nalla padichu enga ooruke munnodiya irukanumnu thaan naa aasaipadren.athai vida enaku vera enna perumainga venum..

Naa avankita athatti pesrathalayo ennavo avan en amma appa kudathaan ottuthal athigam.. En paiyanu sollalainga avanuku niraya thiramaigal iruku.. Etha sonnalum takkunu purinjipan.

Aana enna yarkitayum sikrama pesi pazhaga maatan.. Avanuku ennai vida antha suresh payala thaan romba pidikum.. Enna irunthalum avan thai maaman..avankita ivan palagaratha ennala thaduka mudiyathu..

Irunthalum eno avan kuda ivana paakum pothelam avan mooka odachitu ivan en paiyanda nu sollanumnu thonum..

Naa avana mirattiye palagiten..avan enai parthu payanthe palagitan.. Aana enna nadanthalum engalukulla irukara anatha appa paiyan paasatha maatha mudiyathu..

Avanuku pidicha padippa thaan padika vechen.. Avan aasai pattathu ellam kidaikanumnu thaan avan aasai patta collegela padika en appavayum ethirthu padika vechen.. Avaruku avana velila vida manase illa..

En paiyan kita epovum naa soldrathu pombala pillainga kita mariyathiya nadanthukanumnu thaan.. Antha visayathula avana korai sollave mudiyathu..

Anaikum apdi thaan avanayum pakalamnu thaan avan padikara pattanathuku poi irunthom.  Aana anga avan oru ponna kadhalipaanu naa ninaichukuda paarthathilla..

Avanuku epdi patta ponnu pakanumnu ellam en manasula avlo kanavugal irunthathu.. Aana athuku valiye illama avane oru ponna thertheduthitan..

Ennala athaye thanga mudiyatha samayathula thaan avana suresh namba vechu emathunathu therinjathu.. En paiyana emathra alavuku vanthutanu avana koldra alavuku kobam vanthathu.. Aana apothan en maramandaiku orachathu naa en paiyankita manasu vittu pesi irunthaa avan ethuku ivankitalam uthavi keka poranu..

En paiyan aasaiye therinjikama ivlo naal iruntha naa oru nalla appave illama poi irukalam.iniyum apdi iruka kudathunu thaan avanoda ella aasaikum okk sonnen..

Shivangi ponna naa avan aasai pattathala matum ethukala.. Unmaiyave ava thangamana ponnu.. Vellanthiyana manasu..nane thedinaalum ipdi oru ponnu kidaichiruka mata..

Enga vetla naanum ore paiyan.. Enakum ore paiyan thaan.  Athunalayo ennavo enaku pombala pillaingana romba pidikum.. Thuru thrunu vetukula suthi varatha paathukite irukanum.. Alagana  pattu thuni vangi kuduthu alagu pakanum.. En maganu perumaiya kovil kulathuku kootitu poganum. Enakulla intha maari niraya aasaigal irunthchu.. Aana kadavul enaku antha kudupinaiya tharla.. Aana ithana varusathuku pinna kadavula paarthu thaan enaku magala en marumagala anupi vechrukarunu ninaikren.

Sikrama en paiyanuku kalyanam panni en marumagala vetuku kootitu poganumnu aasai..Aana ava en kannuku romba chinna ponna theriyara.. En suyanalathukaga sikrame kalyanam panna kudathula..
Athunala thaan leaveku avala azhachitu vanthu konja naal kooda vechukalamnu ninaichen..

Oru kuripita vayasuku piragu appa ponnukume oru idaiveli thevapadrapa marumaga kita urimaiya pazhagaratha ulagam ethukarathu illa.. Athunalaye naa shivama kitta konjam thalliye thaan pazhagunen.. Ava maari oru ponna paartha kandipa namakum ithe maari ponnu venumnu aasai padrathu sagajam thane..
Aana enaku antha kavalai illa..yenna avathaan ipo en marumagala enga kudaye iruka porale..

En paiyanoda kadhal visaythula en ammavum appavum kootu kalavaninganu therinjathula irunthu mathi ava paiyan mela kobama irunthaa..athu avaloda urimai.. Athula naa thalaiyida virumbala.. Aana athaiyum en marumaga sari senju vechatha ninaikum pothu romba perumaiya irunthuchu..

Mathi amma ipper patta ponna poi ennenamo pesitanga.. Athelam antha ponnu kettalaum en mathi kettu irunthaalum romba varutha patturpanga..

Athuku oru mudivu kattathan kovilla en marumagalukana idatha mathavangaluku katta vendiyatha pochu.. Oor nallarkanum. Ellar kitayum nalla per vanganum..aana athuku munnadi en kudumbamum nallarkanum..

To be continued..

( summa intha oru epiku thaapa mamanar vantharu...mathapadi epovum aashangi pov than .. Naalaiyoda naama collegeku poidalam..okk )

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