My kutti pattas(completed)

By nilasagi

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A fan fiction of Ashwin and Shivangi More

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my kutti pattas
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vanga pesalam
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Epilogue

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Shivaangi pov:

" ethu avan comedy panranama..athuku nee sirikriya .. Avan ennai vida nalla comedy pannuvaana "

Eee..ithu ashwin kekala..pinnadi vanthu ninna en anne tha kettaru..
Ohh comedy avar department la..athaan kobam aaytaroo..

" pugazhanna " naa paawama face vechum kuda rendu perum face reactiona maathala..

Naama romba overaa poitamoo..

" pappa nee avan kuda pesa kudathu "

Ithe dialogue ah ashwiney solli irunthaa avana konjam verupetha vera ethachum senjurkalam.. Sonnathu en annan..
Athu mattumillama poyum poyum antha thagara dappa thalaiyanukaga en annava pagachika mudiyumaa..

" ashwinuuhh "

Shappa ivan pera ithai vida yaarum kevalama kupida mudiyathu..

" yeppa ashwinuuh..ammachi vanthu ivlo neram aache..ennai vanthu paakanumnu thonucha . yen gandhi ithaan nee pillai valakura latchanamaa? "

Ashwin ah maami pavama paakavum ivanum konjama siricha maari face ah vechitu
" ammachi.. Nallarkingala.. "

Nu formalituku kettan..

" epdipa nallarka mudiyum.. Unnaiye nambitu unnai thalai mela thooki vechu kondaduna suresh ah un kootalingalukga kaayapaduthitiye pa..

Avan chinna vayasula irunthu unaku ennenna panni irupaan.. "

Yen ipo avar pannathu maranthuduchaama..
Avanum antha maari thaan paathan..

" avan appan thappu panna kuda shivani kutti oru thappum pannaliye pa..
shivani kutti unnai ninaichu epdi elachu poita theriyuma? "

Shivani yaaru suresh uncle yaarunu theryama irunthaa naa kuda ivunga sugar coating wordsla urugirpen..

" ammachi.. Palasa yaarum maatha mudiyathu.. Neenga sonna maari suresh uncle thaan enaku music solli thantharu.. Naa avara en manasula usantha idathila than vechirnthen.. Aana avar en muthugula thana kuthunaru..

Itho inga nikarangale ivunga rendu perum illaina inaiku naa unga munnadi ivlo santhosama ninnurka mudiyathu..

Pothum ammachi neenga ammava paaka epovena enga vetuku varlam..aana shivani pathiyo illa unga paiyana pathi pesratha irunthaa neenga epovum engita pesa venam "

Nallavelai.. Ivan inga vantha pinnadi kobapadama naaykutti maari pammikittu irunthaan.. Enake ivan namma aaluthananu doubt vanthchu.. Ipo okk. Athe moraikra urrang uttan  mugam vanthuduchu..

" ashwin en amma kita ipdi thaan pesuviya.. "

Maami vitta alugara stageku poiduvanga pola.. Dont wry maami..naa vanthuten..

" ashwiney unga ammachikitta sorry kelu..ethuku nee ipo voice uyarthura.. Maami feel panrangala "

Na avan kita porumaiya pesa try pannen..

Avan en face paarthathum normal aga try panraan..
Avan mattenu thalai aatunaan..naa avana kelunu kannalaye miratunen..
mami avanuku support pannama poitanganu feel panran pola..

Naa kadasiya en puppy eyes ah vechu ketathum

" sorry ammachi " nu sollitu takkunu avan roomku poitan.. Annavum avan pinnadiye poitanga..

Ayoo ennai thaniya vituttu poitangale..

'Nee thana serial la vara maari sanda podanumnu aasai patta..nalla enjoy pannu'

Ithuvera apo apo nammala torure pannauthu..

" paathiya gandhi ipo vantha antha ponna pecha kekaran..aana un pechaiyo en pechayo mathikrana paaru.. Ipdiye pona un nilamai avlo thaan "

Adiyaathi.. Ennanga ore nimisathula en mamiya enaku ethirave maathiduvanga pola.. Athu thappache..

" maami koviluku poitu vanthathula irunthu yaarum sapdala.. Naa vena elarkum coffee kondu varaava "

Maami ennai paarunga maami..enaku help panrenu sollunga maami please..

" ocla vanthu thangi en ponnu sotha alikiringala.. Itha kuda en ponnukitta kettu than seiyanuma.. Poo.. Paala panai vellam sukka thatti pottu  kondu vaa "

Nane ipothaan coffee powder kum tea  thoolukum difference kandu pidika kathurken..ithula pana vellatha epdi kandu pidika..

Maami enaku help pannuvangala..avunga irukara nilamaiya paarthaa athuku chance illa pola..  Paati vera thoonga poitangale..

Sari bhagyam aunty kitta keka vendiyathu thaan..
Avunga ipo thana avunga vetuku ponanga.  Kadavule please en ashiwney oda ammachiku onnum aaga kudathu..

" hey shivangi..naa vena help pannava "

Dei poda...nane enaku pidikatha velaiya volunteer ah vaangi katti kitenu feelingla iruken.. Ivan vera..

" venA Mr.Nakul "

" hey nee en per solla venaam.. Morai padi naa unaku maama aganum.. Maama nu kupdu "

Naanu .. Unnai.. Maamanu.. Naa en ashwiney apdi kuptathilla.. Ithula ivana kupdanumaa..

Naa pesikitte epdiyo avunga sonna maariye elarkum coffee kalanthuten..

" Mr.Nakul enaku oru help pana mudiyumaa..please "

" hey ennapa please ellam podra.. Enna venumnu sollu "

" illa ithai kondu poi unga ammachiku kudukringala please "

Naa appaviya kekum pothu avan santhosama sirichite antha trayva eduthutu veliya ponan..

Naan annakum ashiwneykum serthu eduthtu avan roomku ponen..

Ivunga rendu perum room ah nadanthe alanthutu irunthanga..
Ennava iurkum..

" anna..ashwiney.. Coffee eduthukonga "

" nee yenda kondu vantha.. Nane vanthrupenla.. " anna engita ketute avarukum annakum serthu rendu cup eduthukittanga..

Avan ennai thaan paarthutu irunthaan.. Ethuku unaku aagatha velainu..
Enga naa nalla per vangirvanonu payapadrano..

Avan ennai paarthute cup ah vaangi kudichaan.. Avan mugathula navarasamum therinjathu..

Namma cofffee avlo taste ava iruku.. Illa kevalama irukaa.. Illaye paati sonna maarithana senjen..
Ethukum naama konjam taste pakalama.. Venaama ..

Anne coffeeya kudichutu ashwin sattai melaye thuppitanga.. Avlo kevalamava iruku..

" machaan " ayoo ivan vera tension modeku poiduvane..

Naa en kerchief eduthu avanuku thodachi vitten..

" mapla sorry da... Paapa kondu vathu kudathanala yosikama kudichten "

Annneee.. 😭😭

En face reaction paarthutu rendu perum sirika start pantanga..

Ivan vera intha coffeeya inum oru masathuku solli verupethuvane..

" anne nijama nalla illaya "

" shivaa.. Supera iruku da.. Nee vena kudichu paaren.. " avan avnoda coffeya en nose pakathula kondu vanthaan..

Uvvac. Milk smell.. Antha ammachi elam solluche intha milk smell poga ethum idea solluchaa.. Apothan naa antha dappa thalaiyan kuda pesikitte paal kaacha maranthutene enaku gyabagam vanthchu..

Apo antha ammachiyoda nilamai.. Naa ivunga rendu perayum kanduka vegama keela ponen..

Apo naa paarthathu coffela abisegam senjurntha antha dappa thalaiyan moonjiya thaan..

Hahaaaaa..haaaahaaa.. Avana pakka sema comedya irukupa..

" gandhi un marumagaluku oru coffee kudava poda theriyathu.. "

Antha kilavi sorry ammachi thitratha kuda thangikalam..aana voice ah thaan keka mudiyala..

Ivan vera antha dappa thalaiyana paarthutu sirika arambixhtane..

Yenda na unakaga ivlo siramapattuu iruken.. Nee enna ammachita maati vida try panriyaa?
Mamanare neenga enga poninga.. Neenga mattum irunthirunthaa enaku intha nilamai vanthrukuma?

Ayoo ivan vera siripa nippatama inum verupethrane!

To be continued..

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