A Bright Star To Calm The Sto...

By Stellarstar15

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So this is a story I came up with on my own and at the same time not really. It's kinda like the Skypiea arc... More

A/N
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
A/N
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
A/N
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24

Chapter 10

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By Stellarstar15

Previously on One Piece...

"You called? Did you want something, Kamakiri of Shandora?"

"Eneru you bastard!"

"Do you forget who you're speaking to? I am God you know."

"A game..A GAME?!"

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"The Dive into Mae's Past! Mae's first meeting with God's Judgement?!"

Darkness..can't..stand.

Mae's vision slowly was regaining, slowly placing my hand on the ground. Last thing she remembered was being thrown into a cannon by her twin sister and shot up into the cloudy sky to never be seen again. The last thing she saw before disappearing into the clouds was the fight between her captain and some marines.

Mae looked up at the very tall trees above. 'Never seen trees this big..although..is this some kind of dream?' Mae slowly placed the palm of her hand on the ground, picking up some dirt "Huh..? Soil?" How is there soil in the sky..Am I in some kind of dream? "I cannot just stay here. I have to find my way..." Mae then slowly realized one thing..

Where could I go home?! Your own sister shot you out of a cannon for God's sake!! My captain, the crew..they're my family. I need to..

No. No time to get devastated now.

"It doesn't matter right now..what matters is that I need to get some place.." Mae begin her journey through the forest stumbling, not knowing the danger of this place of what Mae will soon be calling it home.

Mae is trespassing on God's land.

As Mae makes her journey across the Upper Yard,
She was of course chased by the weird lively big creatures of the sky but thankfully during her time down below the skies, she was quite the good runner.
"WHAT IN THE HELL IS WRONG WITH THIS PLACE?!" She'd scream and run to almost no end, thankfully she escaped barely with her life.

Meanwhile inside God's Shrine..

Eneru was sitting down on his couch like throne enjoying an apple, having a meeting with his priests, although he doesn't really find it entertaining because "God is not a fan of these meetings"


His entertainment is coming soon.

"Now boys, have there been any recent trespassers on God's land?" He'd stare in irritant at the priests waiting for a response.

"Hahaha! Well God, there was no trespassers as of this recent day Ahaha! I took care of them!" Satori laughed boasting about his accomplishment.

"Shush yourself, Satori." Shura spoke in annoyance by Satori's behavior. "Clearly you give yourself way too much credit, because I took care of one as well!"

"Always so cold, Mr.Ordeal of Strings!" Satori menacingly smiled at Shura.

Ohm adjusted his glasses and looked off from the two priests, visibly agitated. He wanted to see Holy again, his giant fluffy white dog.

Gedatsu bit his lips trouble minded, Ohm spoke out "Gedatsu, he can't hear you with you biting your lip" Gedatsu spoke out loud with shock written on his face. "AHH! SO CARELESS" Satori sighs in annoyance of the two "I just hope there's much more entertaining things to do."

Eneru laughed as he picked up another fruit and bit down on it. "Don't fret, soon the time will come when the Ark Maxim is fully ready for flight into the sky."

Eneru suddenly went quiet..hearing a scream of..a woman? Shura looked at Eneru with a bit of confusion "God, is there something troubling you?" He suddenly heard it too..all 4 of them had heard the screaming. They'd get in defense mode looking around.

Eneru laughed at how Gedatsu's sudden words brought up almost this mere coincidence. "My my..seems Gedatsu has had his prediction correct. Go attend to the intruder of my land."

The priests nodded then all of them rushed out of the door in a competition to see who can reach the girl first.

Yama 'Tch'ed at the priests then glanced at Eneru with a look of curiosity.
"Lord Eneru, who do you believe is out on your land trespassing?"

Eneru yawned, shrugging it off. He'd wave his hand dismissing Yama. "Who knows. For now leave me at my peace for now."

Yama nodded and bowed before walking off to attend to the divine warriors under his command.

Eneru slowly had a smile crept up on his face.
"It seems the intruder we're dealing with is no Skypiean..

But a dweller of the Blue Sea!!"

Mae stopped by a random tree to catch a breath.
"D-Damn it..why is every creature so big? I must be in some dream..maybe I just have to wake myself up!" Mae is in denial, so Mae pinched her arm which hurt for about a second. This isn't a dream after all..
"No no no.. this can't really be happening to me!!" Mae began to panic. She's slowly going hungry and thirsty..and cold.
"I'll survive...somehow I will survive." She'd continue walking but not before going back into hiding from a giant snake slithering around the forest. She held her breath hoping the snake wouldn't hear. The snake eventually slithered off and she began walking once again.

"Seriously what the hell is wrong with this forest?!" She'd kick the ground in frustration.

The priests rushed their way into Upper Yard. Each one visibly pissed at the other. To them, this is a game, a competition..to kill the girl.

"Hah ha! Ha ha! Just try to catch up with me! You three know that I will beat you!" Just as he speaks those words, Shura and his bird flew straight past him with his lance ready in hand. Satori gasped in surprise
"You're a joke Satori! And nothing more!" Shura shouted at Satori, laughing soon after but not before almost crashing into a tree. Ohm on the other hand on the ground below is riding his pet Holy.
"GO HOLY! GO!" Holy barked going faster. She's a good dog.

Mae came to a halt hearing..giant steps?
"NOT ANOTHER GIANT CREATURE IS IT?!" She suddenly stopped speaking hearing the sound of..laughter?

"I FOUND HER! Ha ha haaa!" Satori grinned staring down at Mae. Shura and the rest of the priests caught up staring down at their target.

"What..the.." Are these..people with wings? Oh no..DID I DIE AND GO TO HEAVEN?! I'M DEAD!!

"So..a Blue Sea dweller dares to trespass on God's land?" Shura pointed his lance sword down at Mae.

"God's..land?" Mae looked in confusion but it quickly subsided into panic as she put her hands up.
"I-I swear I don't know what you're all talking about! What do you mean Blue Sea dweller?! Am I dead?!"

Satori began laughing at her believing she was dead and went to Heaven.
"You are not dead! What a foolish girl! You, my dear lady, are trespassing on God's land otherwise known as the Upper Yard!" He'd float down, sitting on a spherical like cloud.

So..Mae you're not dead, thank god. But right now you have to get a way out of this so called "Upper Yard" She'd begin to back away.

"And where the hell are you going?!" Gedatsu spoke from behind her being bumped into. He'd bite his lip.

"I'm in real trouble.." She'd mumble.

Out of her panic instincts she shoved Gedatsu and began to run. The chase now begins.

"QUICK YOU IDIOT SHURA! USE YOUR STRINGS!" Shura nodded no at Satori. He had an idea.
"No reason to panic Satori, I have an idea. How about we give her..3 minutes exactly to run. 3 minutes will go fast besides I already placed strings in the direction she's heading." Shura chuckled. Gedatsu looked at Shura then placed his hands on his face giving a shocked face
"So impressive!" He'd shout out loud.

"So the chase begins..let's be ready to strike by the time those 3 minutes are up." Ohm spoke in a calm matter.

"Imagine all the chaos would be stirring if God Eneru got involved in the chase! Ha ha haa!" Satori laughed in how this plan will succeed, That is the Ordeal of Strings after all.

Meanwhile..

Mae ran deeper and deeper into the forest..no sense of direction. Where is a different land?! How can she get out?
"W-Who the hell are those guys! Are they some kind of assassins after me?!" It doesn't matter..just get out of this forest!! Mae suddenly stopped running..it's as if..her whole body came to a stop.
"I'm..stuck?! Why can't I move my body?!" She'd begin struggling. No movement was successful.

Shura came up from behind a tree, chuckling at the sight of Mae struggling to get out of his ordeal of string.
"Enjoying your new strings? It's best you kept your mouth shut, filthy blue sea dweller." Shura smirked at Mae.

"Listen I don't know who the hell you are! Let me go!!" Mae spat in his face in disobedience. She's not going down without a fight.

"Why you little—" Shura was about to strike Mae with his lance sword until a voice spoke out from up above. Not Satori again..

"Haha! Looks like you're stuck! It's too bad you didn't get to see the Ordeal of my Spheres!" Satori laughed, dancing on a sphere cloud.

Eventually the rest of the priests came forward, glaring menacingly at Mae. They were ready for this kill.

"It's time to face God's judgment." Ohm grabbed her by the shoulder. An iron cloud suddenly came out of thin air, slashing Mae's shoulder as she screamed in pain. How can cloud be hard as iron?!

A sudden booming voice came from above and a laugh.
"God's judgement hm? Well, I believe I'll be taking that over for now boys." Eneru glanced down at Mae with a smug look..and the eyes of..
A God.

"Welcome to God's judgment."


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Next time on One Piece..

"Consider this as a gift of 'God's Mercy'?"

"Ah, you're awake."

"Do not fear, for God has taken mercy on you."

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"Mae's New Status! Eneru is in Love?!"

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