My kutti pattas(completed)

By nilasagi

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A fan fiction of Ashwin and Shivangi More

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my kutti pattas
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vanga pesalam
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Epilogue

28. pattas

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Sivaangi pov:

Naanga periya gate thaandi ulla ponom..

vaasala oru pakkam nell ah alaga rectangular shapela floorla kotti vechurkanga..

Innoru pakkam turmeric fingers ah naalanju aunties periya kalula kuchi vechu kotti grind pannitu irunthanga.. Semma vaasam..paaa..

Elarum ashwin ah paartha odane avunga velaiya vitutu vanthutanga..

" thambi padipulaa mudichutu vanthutingalaa"

" enna ipdi ilaichu poitinga.. "

" yaaru ivunga..unga kuda padichavungala "

" ayya nenga varenu solli thaan nattu kozhi adika sonnaraah. Unga perai solli naamalum saptu tha poga porom "

Aww.. Avungalam enna azhaga pesranga.. Nijama oruthanga namma mela unmaiyana pasam vechurukangala illaiyanu avunga pesrathe veche sollalam..

Apothaan mami vanthanga " ennangadi..velai nerathula pechu.. Poi velaiya paarunga.. Saaapadu nerathula vanthu pesikonga .. "

Avunga pesa arambichathum elam pathari adichitu oditanga.. Ennai parthathum sirichavunga ashwina paarthu morachitu ulla vanganu sollitu poitanga..

Ashwinukum maamikum sandaiyaah.. Ennava irukum..

Nanga moonu perum ulla ponom..

Mamanar phonela yaar kitayo pesitu iruntharu.. Engala paarthathum phone cut pannitu

" adade..vanga vanga.. Ukkarunga " nu anga iruntha sofava kaati kai kaamichanga.. Actually avara paarthale ashwin soldra maari oru payam kalantha mariyathai vanthruthu..

Enga anne ennamo nijamave thangachi vetuku first time vara maari pavyama irukaru.. Oruvelai ennai maari avarum payapadraro..

Naanum annanum sofala ukkanthutom.. Aana paarunga ashwin kaiya katitu kanakku pillai maari pinnadi ninnutu irukaan..

Ohh..appa munnadi paiyan ukkara kuda maatanla..

Maami engaluku buttermilk kondu vanthu kuduthanga.. Naanum annanum ore gulpla adichitom..
Pawam en aaluku athum tharla..

Apothaan therinjathu sir kuda en mamanarum mamiyum innum pesalainu.. Even trainla kuda engala pathrama kutitu vara solli order thaan pannanga.  Aana normal ah pesla.. Ennavaa irukum..

" sivaamma.. Naa anaike phonela sonna maari unnai en paiyan snegithanoda thangachinu tha elar kitayum solli iruken.. Nee tha namma kudumbathoda marumaganu thatha paatiya thavira vera yaarkum sollala..
Unaku ethum varutham illai thana ma ? "

Konjam varutham thaan.. Aana avarkita epdi veliya solluven.
Neenga ipdi ennai emathuvinganu ninaikave illa mamanare.. Aanalum neenga ennai kupdra vitham supera iruku..

Ivanum kupdrane etho paiyan maari siva sivanu..mm. Avan dictionary la antha chellam vellam.arakilo vairam athelam illa pola..tastless fellow..

Madam sivaangi..neenga soldrathulaye avanuku taste illaingratha mattum othukiren..

Yeppa ella vetukulla ponga.. Ipo mazhai veluthu vanga poguthu..yenna en mv en pecha first time sarinnu solliruku.. Eee..

Romba santhosapadatha.. Avanuku taste irunthaa unna poi life partnera choose panni irupaanaa.. Tasteless fellow..

Sari sari malai varaathu. ellarum veliya vaanga..

" appa epo irunthaalum theriya thanapa poguthu..ivathan marumaganu soldrathaala enna vara poguthu.. "

En face sogamaana tha paarthutu ashwiney avungappa kitaye kelvi kekraan.. Nalla theritta ashwiney..

Avan ketathuku valakam pola mamanar avana morachu paakka apdiye vaaya moodikittan..eeee.. Unnai poi maaritanu nambune ashwiney..
Kastam kastam romba kastam..

" sivaammaa. Intha gramam innum antha alavuku munnerala..naanum evlo muyarchi senju paarthum avunga kootula irunthu velivara yosikranga.. Sari athaan namma paiyan padika veliya anuppi vechu avan nalla velaiku ponaa ivanglum maaruvanganu ninaichen ma..

Ipo ivan padippu mudiyara munnadiye anga oru ponna virumbi kalyanam pannika poraanganu therinjaa kandipaa yaarum avunga pasangala padika  townuku anupa matanga.

Naa ithu varaikum elarukum nalla utharanama than en paiyana valarthirunthen.. Avanukum intha visayamelam theriyum.. Aaana.. "

Avar sentence complete pannatiyum ennala purinjika mudinjathu..

"Athumattum illama en marumaga mela enaku nambikai iruku.. Avungallla oruthiyaa unnai easya ethupanga..

Intha veerapandi marumaga maari than namakum marumaga venumnu aasai paduvanga..

Aana athuku konja naal aaganum avlothaan ma "

Ayoo..mamanar enmela ivlo namabikai vechurukaare.. Lub you mamanare..Apo naama vaaluthanatha mootai katti vechutu nalla pillainu peru edukanum..

Intha ashwiney paiyanuku arive illainga.. Padika anupunaa enna velai pannitu irukaan paarunga.. Mamanar pawam.. Ivanukaga athaiyum poruthikittanga..

Ohh. Apo collegela neenga enna panninga..unga appa ammala pawam illaiyaa..

Che..ithai vechutu oru heroine dialogue pesa mudiyuthaa..

" dei veera.. Pothumda..pethikita engalayum pesa vidu.. Vantha odane arambichitan advise panna.. Neee vaada kannu"

Ipo theriyuthu mamanarukum ashwineykum antha dimple yaar kita irunthu vanthathunu.. Paatti so cute..
Thatha kudavum thaa..

Aana mami mattum engita avlova pesala.. Epdi pesuvanga..avunga thambikuda ashwiney enakaga thaana sandai pottaan..athunala kuda irukalam..

Naama porathukulla ashwiney mamanar oda serthu vechitu thaan poganum..

Ashwin pov:

Naa college padika varathuku munnadiye entha ponnu kitayum pesa kudathunu  solli thaan anupunanga..

Ipovum avungaluku naa sivava love pannatho ava intha vetu marumagala varatho thappa therila..naa love pannathu thaan avungaluku pidikala..

Avunga paiyan avunga pechai meeritanganu thaan enmela kobama irukanga..
Athai kobamnu kuda solla mudiyathu.. Varuthamnu sollalam..

Aana matha ponnunga maari sivava ennala easya kadaka mudiyalanu
Naa epdi avungakita puriya vaipen..

Kandipa en decision thappilai nu avungale purinjikitangana enmela irukara antha varuthamum kaanama poidum.. Athuku engita irkara ore vazhi en shiva thaan..

Naa nijama soldren enga appa engita kuda ivlo cool ah pesnathe illa.. Avala avaruku pudichiruka nala thaan en muthugula thol innum apdiye iruku..

Naa mattum shivani maari ponnai virumbi irunthaa inneram enaku 16vathu naal kaariyam aagirukum..

Aana ella pugazhum intha pugazh en machan illa, credits.. Ella creditsm en shivaku thaan poganum.. Ava mattum ilaina avar kandipa ennai cine fieldkulla vitrukave maataru.. Intha lovekum ok solli iruka maataru..

Ipo avakita pesnum pola iruku..aana madam en thatha paati kuda jollya sirichu pesitu irkaa.. Ivlo periya uruvam inga nikkarane yaarachum kandukrangalaa..

" ammadi sivaangi enaku pombala pullaina romba pidikum..aana paaru enakum ore paiyan thaan..avanukum paiyan thaan.. Nallavelai nee vantha.. Un pechai phonela ketathume epoda nerla pakanumnu ninaichute iruntheen..unnaku enna venumnu solluda..nane senju tharen.. "

Ava athukum sirichite eee nu thalai aataraa....

" sivuu dear..ava kidakkara old graany...centiya pesi uyira viduvaa.. Vaa naan unaku intha village ah suthi kataren .. "

Ava ithukum ava style ah kai thatitu
" pugazhaanna.  Naama nalaiku oora suthi paaka polaam.. Aathula fish pidichu vailayadalam. "

"Paapa athuku thaana vanthrukom naama ..jaamaiklam vidu "

Thathuvum avunga rendu perum sernthu hifi pottukaranga..

Apo naa enna panrathaam ..first en appa..ipo thatha paatti..elarum ennai naala vechu seiranga..

" ashwiney.. Paati intha saree koduthanga epdi iruku..naalaiku koviluku pogumpothu ithathan katta poren.. Enaku epdi iruku..

Ava antha cute smileoda sollumpothu ivlo neram iruntha ennoda sadness ellam poiduchu..

Kandipa ava naa thaniya nikkarenu thaan engita vanthu pesraanu ava kannula enakana concernlaye theriyuthu..

Already antha hugke appakita nalla vangunen..ipovum antha maari nadanthuchunaa ennai sivavala kuda kaapatha mudiyathu..

" sareela ipo ethuku .. Vaasala kooti vidraka "

Naa ennai distract panrathuku avala kindal pannen..

" che. Po ashwiney..ungita poi ketten paaru.. Naa en mamanarkitaye ketukaren.. "

Ava apdi sollitu ponathum en mandaiya nane sevuthula muttikanum pola irunthchu.. Avale engita pesa vanthaa..athai naane keduthiten..

To be continued..

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