Naagin 5

By Peeyuwrites

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its continuation of naagin 5 story from episode 18 when there is sindoor and mangalsutra moment between veer... More

THE START ๐Ÿ
conspiracy against veer?๐Ÿฆ…
VEER'S LOVEโค๏ธ
will bani kill veer?
KARVA CHAUTH ๐Ÿฅฐ
Will bani save veer from Jai ๐Ÿ”ช?
Veer recalls everything?๐Ÿฅ€
โค๏ธVaniโค๏ธ
Who's Here ๐Ÿคซ
The new Team๐Ÿ๐Ÿฆ…
Bani is intoxicated๐Ÿถ
Will veer save bani?โบ๏ธ
BROKEN ๐Ÿ’”
Veer feels guilty ๐Ÿฅบ
Disrememberance ๐Ÿƒ
Veer to go closer ๐Ÿ’ฎ
Bani gives a schockerโšก
Wedding Drama ๐Ÿ”†
Revelation ๐Ÿ’
The new Raaz ๐Ÿ”ฎ
The new old one๐Ÿ
what is zara upto ๐Ÿค”
Zara spills her beans ๐Ÿ
Betrayal or survival?๐Ÿ’Ž
Schocker โœณ๏ธ
New palns
Date gone wrong ๐Ÿ”ฅ
will veer survive ๐Ÿ’”
Veer's Plan๐Ÿ”ฐ
Is chandrakala dead?๐Ÿ’Ž
New guest ๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐Ÿฆฑ
War is on๐Ÿ‘Š
What Bani likes ๐Ÿ™ƒ
Bani gets to the truth๐Ÿ‘๏ธ
OMG.....๐Ÿ˜ณ
PRECAP
Bachke tu Rehna re..๐Ÿคซ
Veer to rescue ๐Ÿฆ…
The Consummation ๐ŸŒน
Jai's suspicion ๐ŸŒš
Bani to know past truth๐Ÿ”˜
Fierce Bani ๐Ÿ”ฅ
Revenge Drama ๐Ÿ๐Ÿฆ…
And it is...๐Ÿฅ€

Veer bursts out ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿ˜ 

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By Peeyuwrites

Continued....

Statue-toh...kiski jaan dav oe lagaogi
Bani- apni!
Statue- kya tum taiyaar ho
Bani- han! Mein taiyaar hu
(Bani goes, holds veer's hand and lies besides him🥀💔)
(Suddenly some lights come from that statue and spells out on veer... reviving him!....here as bani fells down,veer gets up)
Veer-bani...bani! Bani kaha hai...
(He looks around)
Veer- mein yaha kaise aya...bani...
(He sees bani was lying beside him)
Veer- bani! Bani...bani utho...utho bani kya hua...yeh sab....
Statue- keemat hai
Veer- kon? Kaisi keemat
Statue- jaan na hane ki keemat...jaan ke badle jaan
Veer- nhi..nhi nhi....aisa nhi ho sakta.. bani...bani! Kyu kiya tumne! Mujse keh rahi thi ki mat jao....aur ab khud... khud karo toh sahi mein karu toh galat 🥺
Kyu kar rahi ho! Bani...😢
Veer- mein janta hu yeh sab kisne kiya hai...aur hi bhi kon sakta hai uske alava😠😡
(Veer picks up bani and take sher to Singhania mansion)

Veer- chandrakala! Bahaar niklo maarkaat! Bahaar aao!
(Everybody assembles)
Balwant- kya hu chilla kyu raha hai?
Veer- kaha hai voh maarkaat! Bahar niakko usse
Balwant- veer...maaa hai voh teri
Veer- my foot!
Chandrakala- kya hua veer kya kiya meien
Veer- (goes closer to her and grabs her neck) kya kiya? Marne ki koshish ki hai meri bani ko
Chandrakala- yeh kya keh rahe ho tum meine aisa kuch nhi kiya
Veer- kiya tumne! Muje marne ke liye gunde bhijvaye fir meri jaan bachane ke liye bani ne....
Balwant- voh jo kuch bhi ho muje koi fark nhi padta...yeh naagin jiye ya mare!
Veer- ok... alright dad aapko koi fark nhi padta ok....lekin ek baat yaad rakhna agar meri bani ko kuch bhi hua...toh yaha maujud har ek jane ko aur iss ghar ko....aag laga dunga😠!
(He goes away with bani to his room)
Balwant-pagal ho gya hai! Dimaag kharaab ho gaya hai iska!

In veer's room;
Veer- chalo...ab aur kitne der tak aise alsiyon ki tarah padi rahogi tum! Utho fatafat!
Suna nhi tumne....meine kaha utho! Kya keh rahi thi...Jai ke paas chali jaungi...hmm?...itni himmat tumhari? Muje pata hai...dar ke mare uth nahi rahi ho na...ki mein tumhari class lunga sahi hai...thik hai...nhi lunga koi class ab toh uth jao....🥺
Huh... dekho.... tumhare sote hi itne ladkiyon ke message ana shuru ho gye.. agar tum mere 5 gin ne par nhi uthi na toh mein in mein se kisi ke saath date pe chala jaunga.....😢 1...2....tume koi fark nhi padta kya?3....4...aur...5!
(He throws his phone in anger)
Kyu sata rahi ho...uth bhi Jao ab...pls🥺
(And he finally bursts out and sits on the ground besides bani 💔🥀)

Bgm: note; hear this bgm till end to feel the moment deeply

(Suddenly tapish enters)
Tapish-veer...
Veer- tapish bhai... aap?
Tapish- veer yeh dekh yeh...iss kitab mein bani ko thik karne ka ilaaj likha hai...
Veer- kya?!
Tapish- yeh ..samudr ke gehrai ka paani agar hum bani ko pilade toh voh Amrit ki tarah kaam karega...
Veer- han...toh mein abhi leke aaya hu
Tapish- veer veer tu kaise jayega...tu ek cheel hai! Aur cheel pani mein nhi tair sakte!
Veer- idc bhai! Bani ke liye kuch bhi!
(He goes from there)

At yeh sea;
Veer- bani....tumhare liye iss samudr mein kya...aag ki nadi mein bhi kudne ko taiyaar hu.... Bas muje sakti dena...
(He jumps in sea...he swims deeper and deeper and reached the middle of sea, he takes that water in a container and comes back)

At house;
Veer- yeh... paani....
Tapish- tu le aya...
Jai- yeh kaise laya tum
Veer- voh sab mayine nhi rakhta yeh bani ko pilana hai abhi
(Veer opens the bottle and drops some in bani's mouth, as bani drinks that water she revives....)
Bani- (coughs) veer....
(As bani gets up veer goes out from there)
Bani- veer...veer kaha hai
Tapish- abhi toh yahi tah....
Jai-bani tum thik hona
Bani- mein thik hu veer kaha hai
(Bani also goes out from there...)
Bani- veer...veer!..veer tum thik ho
(He goes and hugs him 💕💕)
Veer- chodo
Bani- kya hua...
Veer- kya hua?....yeh sab kya tah!
Bani- kya?
Veer- yeh aise apni jaan...ko....aise bachana chahti thi muje!
Bani- par veer
Veer- kya veer! Agar tum mujse pyaar karti toh aisi harkat kabhi nhi karti bani!...
Bani- mein bas tumhe...
Veer- (He holds her cheeks)
par ainda ais amat karna...!🥺 Yaad rakhna mere liye tumse zada zaroori aur kuch nhi 💕
Bani- hmm..💕
(They both hug each other 🥰🥰)
Bgm 👇

To be continued.....

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