MAKING HER MY QUEEN❤❣ (COMPL...

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Prolouge
Prolouge 2
Character sketch
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Suggestion🤔
Changes !
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
IMPORTANT
New entries
Last Update
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
TARGET
😻😻😻
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Next chapter ?
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
😻😻😻
suggestion
Chapter 21
❤⚡
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
New entries
Chapter 24
Thanks❤️
Chapter 25
😌🙏
Chapter 26
Rankings
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Important note
Chapter 35
Ranks❤️💫
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
😎🖤
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
please tell
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
poll
update?
Chapter 44.1 (18+)
Chapter 44.2 (18+)
What's this guys!
New book
Yes ❤️!
Chapter 45
Discontinued?
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Chapter 46
ANNOUNCEMENT
ANNOUNCEMENT 2
Chapter 47
❣️✨
Ranks ❤️
Ranks❤️
"HAPPY TEARS"
Happy Birthday to me
😍❤️
"THANKS"
ENOUGH!!!
HAPPINESS😍🥰
Chapter 48
REASON!!!
NOTE
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
SOMETHING NEW
New book
Epilogue 1
Epilogue 2
Epilogue 3

Chapter 16

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Nandini was continuously crying so her parents her appa somehow made her sit in car
In car also Nandini was crying continuously
Manik feels bad & give her his handkerchief
Nandini takea it & wipes her tears

Manik give her a water bottle
Nandini opens the cap but her nath (Nose pin)came in between

Nandini's Nath❤

Nandini's both hand was busy in one hand cap of bottle & in one hand the water bottle
Also car was in speed

Manik looked at her sighing she was about to close the water bottle
Manik holds her hands & nods in no
& Himself removes her nath (Nose pin)
Nandini looks at him....there breathes were mingling

Manik removed her nath & Nandini takes some sips of water
And closes the bottle & again wear her Nath
While Manik was looking at her

The car stops
Manik opens the gate & get out & goes to Nandini side opens the gate & forwarded his hand
Nandini looked at him & then at his hand
She gives him her hand & then gets out
Manik covers her face from veil
& holds her hand continuously
He stand at entrance with holding Nandini hand

Nyo takes the Aarti plate from a butler hand & did Aarti of them then place a Kalash full of rice
Nyo - Beta iss kalash ko apne daaye pair se gira ke andar aao
Nandini lifts her lehenga lil & pushes the kalash
After that Nyo puts a plate full of aalta in front of her & say dip you feet in this & come
Nandini lifting her lehenga dips her feets & start walking inside

Nyo looks at the footprints made by her smilingly
While Manik also walked behind her
Raj - Mukti take your bhabhi into your Bhai room & stay with her give her your clothes so she can change
Mukti nods
Manik - but dad
Raj slapped him tightly
Everyone gasps (Ladies)
Nandini keeps her both hand on her mouth
Raj - Not a word Manik Malhotra Not a word !
While Manik was feeling insulted obviously Raj slapped Manik in front of his BIWI
Raj - From starting I'm telling you take things slow & respect her....try to win her heart but no.....you had to use your power your money
Right? How can you be so cheap? You forced her to marry you? Uski lachaari ka istemaal kiya? Huh
Raj was going to slap him again but Nyonika holds his hand

Raj - Leave my hand Nyo....he deserve this
Nyo - Bass kijiye Raj ! Jawan beta h ! Shadi ho chuki hai iski....! Bahu aa gayi hai ghar me
Just then Raj look at Nandini
Who was looking down crying silently
Raj goes near her he knows she is in pain
Nandini looks at him....Raj keeps his hand on her head
Raj - Beta you are my daughter never feel like mukti & you are different okay ?
Nandini nods

Raj - I know yeh sab bahut jaldi ho gaya....tell me you want something?
Nandini looked at Raj and say - No nothing uncle
Manik - Why you dad I'm her husband I'll give her everything she wants
Nyo looked at Manik & slapped him
Nyo - Do you have any shame left in yourself or not?
Manik looked at Nyo shockingly

Nyo - Nandini will live in her house for some day
Manik widens his eyes listening this
Manik - Wait! Why'll she stay
Raj - Enough! Manik I said Enough!
Raj turns again toward Nandini
Raj - Tell me beta...you want to go to your parents home ?
Nandini was about to say something

Nyo - aise bhi she had to go tomorrow for pagfere rasam Naina jii told me
Raj looked at Nyo
Nyo continued - So Nandini will stay there for some days.... I need time to accept all these Aise bhi raat me jana I don't think accha lagega inke relatives bhi hai aaye huye
Nandini looked at her & then at Raj & Nods cutely
Nyonika caresses Nandini cheeks

Nyo - Mukti...Take your bhabhi upstairs
Mukti nods & say - Chaliye bhabhi
Nandini goes with her
Manik looked at her retiring figure & after she disappears
He looked at his parents
He goes towards his Dad...Raj glares at him
Manik - Dad maine bahut kosish ki khud ko rokne ki but main nahi rok paya khud ko dad she got engaged with Pranay.... main k...kya karta dad(His lips wobbled)
Main apne pyaar ke haatho mazboor tha dad....Mujhe jald se jald bass Shaadi karni thi

Raj sighed - Tumne galti ki Manik.....
Manik - I know dad & I
Raj - Listen to me first (shouted)
Manik looked Down immediately
Raj - Win her heart....win her love.....I should never see her crying due to you! You understand?
Manik nods
Raj - Khotta (shouted) & left for his room
Manik looked at him
Nyo also left behind Raj

While Manik sighed & leaves for his room
He knocked on the door Mukti opened the door
He hears a tch sound & saw Nandini trying to open something on her waist  sighingly she leaves that with a jerk

Mukti - Bhai aapse ho jaayega....come & drags Manik holding his hand
While Manik looks at Nandini
Her hair was open he looked at the frown at her face as she was busy in removing her kamarband

He kept looking at her hairs
Mukti- Bhai dekhiye na....Bhabhi ka kamarband khul hi nahi raha
Manik comes out of trance listening her & then say - You go....Main dekhta hu (Nandini widened her eyes realizing he'll open her kamarband)
Mukti - Ha Bhai aap hi dekhoge na & runs fastely
Manik - Mukti ki bacchi & runs toward her but Mukti goes in her room & closes the door
Manik also closes his room door

Now Nandini heartbeat become very fast
Manik goes near the dressing table he removes his Sehra & keep it on dressing table
& then bends on his knees to look at her waist

Nandini looked at him bending down & say - Mr. Malhotra it's fine I can manage (goes 2 steps back)
Manik looked at her & say - Manik
Nandini frowned (& pulls Nandini with her waist)
Manik - Call me Manik....Nandini -Manik said looking at her
And he made her turn holding her waist lightly.....

Nandini turned.... Manik slightly removed her hair but as he was on his knees he can't fully slide her hair & understanding him she gathered all her hair & kept it on her shoulder

Manik looked at her face in the mirror she was removing her earrings
Manik tried but it didn't opened he in last thought to use his teeth
He goes very close to her his teeth almost touched her waist

Nandini closed her eyes....
Manik intentionally takes her skin showing it is unintentionally one more time bites her looking at her
Nandini was closing her eyes tightly clutching the dressing table with both her palms
He one more time does that & kamarband get opened it was about to when Manik hand goes to her front he holds it from front

His palm touched her front waist fully
Nandini opened her eyes & looked at her waist which has his palm in which he is holding her kamarband she removes his hand lightly
Manik also gets up & give her kamarband
Nandini takes it & put it on dressing table
She has removed all the jewelry
Though her marriage was sudden but her mom give her everything

She looked at the Dressing table & then start keeping her all jeweleries in a box
Except her Mangalsutra & her wedding bangles (chuda)

She then looked at herself then she realized that Mukti forget to give her clothes
Seeing her in thought
Manik asked - What happened ? Any problem?
Nandini - Wo uncle ne kaha tha Mukti se kapre le lene ke liye par main bhul gayi
Manik sighed & say - Koi baat nai & goes to his wardrobe
Nandini felt hurt that he didn't take Interest in her problem
She was looking down when she saw Manik giving her a night dress (folded neatly)

Nandini looked at him...shockingly
Manik - Go & freshen up....you must be tired....I'll freshen up in guest room
Nandini nods holding the neatly folded night dress

She goes inside the washroom she thought that she forget the table
She turns to see Manik holding a pink towel for her
She takes it & goes inside shower

She looked right side to find Every product that she uses
She got shocked a lil she for once thought maybe He uses the same products but that are women's product then she looked at the left wall cabinet corner where there are men's soap shampoo cologne razor some shaving creams

But she chucked all thoughts....right now she's very tired to think all this
She takes bath....and her eyes widened realizing she don't have inner wears
with her

As she stood under shower wearing her inner wears
She thought to wear her night dress direct & she had no choice
She opened the shirt to see inner wears
She first looked at the size & it was hers
She was shocked to see this
She wears her dress & does her hair parting she come outside to see Manik looking at mirror while combing his hair
She was still in shock but she didn't have courage to ask anything from him

She silently goes & takes a pillow & lies on sofa folding her both hands on her chest sleeping sideways
Manik looked at her sleeping he saw her back he kept the comb on dressing table & come towards her
Manik - Nandini
Nandini turns her head to saw him
Manik - Sleep on bed
Nandini - I'm fine Mr. Malhotra you sleep on bed
Manik sighed & say - Nandini please get up & sleep on bed otherwise I had to pick you up
Nandini sighed & looked at him with her sleep screaming eyes
She got up taking her pillow & kept it on bed & sleeps on her side
She must be tired - He thought looking at her & switch off light....turns on the ac
Goes & sleeps on sofa !

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