My kutti pattas(completed)

By nilasagi

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A fan fiction of Ashwin and Shivangi More

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my kutti pattas
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vanga pesalam
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Epilogue

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Sivaangi pov:

Intha rendu naala na avana avoid panranaa? Avan ennai avoid panraananu theriyatha alavuku rendu perum distance maintain panna start pannom..

Avan shivani avunga thathakita patha vechurvaanu payathula pesala..naa, enga avan pesa venanu solliruvanonu pesala.. Aaga motham yarum pesala pesala..pesala..

Ithula gaandanathu ennavo pugazh annaa thaan.. Enga rendu per kittayum maatikitu mudiya pichukatha kuraiya kasta padraru..

Lunchtime epovum naanga moonu perum thaan sapduvom.. Ashwinukum serthu thaan naanga rendu perum saapadu kondu varuvom.. Enga college hostel saapadu naane thookathula samaicha evlo tastela irukumo athula paathi thaan irukum.. Apo mulichrukum pothu bhat sir ke tough kudupiyaanu ketka kudathu.. Athaan nangale avanukum serthu kondu varuvom..

Aana sirku rendu naala melugu doll thaan kondu vanthu lunch kudukranga.. Nalla velai avan ava kuda poi sapdala.. Apdi mattum panni
Irunthaa nane avana konnutu jailuku poi irupen.. Paiyanuku aayul athigam pola..

Inaikum apdi thaan kaila tiffon box oda sapda vanthaan.. Naanum annavum avana morachitu naanga avanuku kondu vantha saapada close panni vechom..

" sorry machan.. Maama pecha marukka mudiyala.. Athanda tiffon vangi kiten "

Ithellam nalla sollu.. Saapatuke ipdina..naalaiku avar ponnai kattikonu sonnaa athukum marukka mudilanu kattiko..

' shivangi nee serial villi rangeku think panra '

Anna ennai pawama pakraru.. Ipdiye poona en ashwiney ennai vittu romba thooram poiduvaan..
Sikram athuku ethavathu pannanum..

" anna pesama sapda enaku bore adikuthunnaa "

rendu perum sapdama ennai pakranga..

" enakum ipolaa yartayavathu manasu vittu pesanumnu thonuthunaa.. "

Namma shivangiya ivlo matured ah pesrathunu enmela enake doubt varuthu..
Ashwiney face romba dull aaguthu.. Romba guilty ah feel panran pola..

" ennathu en paapavuku bore adikuthaa.. Solda antha bore ah namalum adicharlam "

" anne ponne. Enaku siripu varla "

" sari neeye solution vechrupiye sollu "
Epdiyo enga anne sariyaa point pidichitanga..

" enna irunthalum neenga ambala pasanga.. Oru ponnoda manasaiyum kanneraiyum purinjika mudiyathu.. "

Ipo rendu perum en thalaila etho kombu molachirukra maari aacharyama pakranga..

" oru ponnoda manasu innoru ponnuku thaan theriyum.. So "

" so" rendu perum vaaya openla vechukitte  courash ah soldranga..enakum sidela siripu varuthu thaan.. Aana intha rendu muttaa pasangaluku padam solli tharanume..

" so namma three idiots teamla oru bright ahna oru ponnu ah add panlamnu iruken.. Avunga name "

" shivaani "

Hahaaaa..hahaaa.. Ipo matttum en kaila camera irunthchu intha rendu ariya vagai jandhukala ulagathuku kaati irupen..just missu.. Sari intha social service ah future ah pannikalam..

" itho avungale vanthutangale " nu elunthu poi poorvi anniya kootitu vanthu enakum ashwinukum naduvula ukkara vechen.. Apdiye annaku opposite la..
Epdi ennoda master mind..

Anne nee ini epdi thappikarenu paakalam.. Poorvi anniya parthathum tha ashwin mugathula oru nimmathi..
Shivani pera sonnathum avlo payam unaku.. Unnai antha alavuka payapaduthi vechrukaa antha melugu dolluuu..

The great ashwiney paarthu payapadra aal intha shivangiyaa mattum thaan irukanum..

Magane unnai avlo sikrathula vituda maaten ashwiney..
Ava saapataya sapadra..iruku unakuu..

" poorvi anni " ayo anna irukratha maranthutu sollitane..samailkalam..

" ashwiney ithu en new bestiee.. Poorvie darling.. Poorvie ithu ashwiney.. Ithu pugazh anna.. "

Ennathaan avunga thariyama irunthalum konjam nervous ah irukanga..avungalum pen thane.. Avungalukum acham.madam naanam payirpu ellam irukum thane..

" poorvi darling..  Ivunga rendu pera paathu payapadringala.. Rendum pakatha tha terror ah irupanga..aana dummy pieceungaa.. Neenga sapdunga.. "

Anni sirichu avunga rendu perthayum veri etharangale.. Ohh apo nee pesrathaala yarum veri aaga matanga.. Hahhaa
Paakalam naanum evlo thooramthan porenu..

" poorvi darling inthaga en sarasu mummy panna vatha kulambu supera irukum.. Naamathan onnukulla onnagaitomla..ini enna koocham..enaku mummy na ungaluku aunty.. Tamil ah athai..unga aththai vetu saapada sapda maatingalaa "

Apdi sonnathum saapda arambichitanga.. Habba.. Nimmathi..
Anniyum veliya thaan room eduthu thangi irukanga.. Avunga samacha saapatayum kondu vanthirunthanga..

" anni.." Motha naaka kattupaduthanum..

" poorvi darling unga kaila magic iruku.. Naa ithu varaikum ivlo taste aahana vazhappoo saambara saptathe illa..
Ada potato fry ivlo crunchya ah iruku.. Unga kaiyala saapta naa puthu dress thaan thaikanum pola "


En munnadi rendu jeevan irukaratha naa kandukave illaye..  Aana naa rasichu sapdratha anna echil vizhunga pakratha matum theriyuthu..

Kittathatta ashwinum athe stage thaan..enna enga rendu pera vida tasteku important kudukrathu avan thaan..avanukum sapda aasaiya tha irukum..aana enna panrathu..athaan avunga mama ponnu kondu vantha fried rice irukula..athaye kottika vendiyathu thaan..

Oru ponnu illala rendu ponnunga ninaicha enna vena sathikalamnu summava sonnanga..

Naanum en poorvi anniyum summa sweet nothing pesikitte saapda aarambichom..aanalum avungalaku tharama saapda kastama iruku.. Manasu kekama oru vaayi annavuku ooti vittuten..

Aana ashwinuku ithe maari ootta mudiyumaa..  Aana avan mugam romba dull aayiduchu..
yaaru ennai ninaichalum avunga thathave ashwina thooki pottu mithichalum paravalanu avanukum konjama eduthu ooti vitten.. Avan kannu lesa kalangiduchu.. Enakum thaan..

" sorry ashwiney.. Inime ungooda pesama irukamaaten"
Avan kan kalangavum ennnala thanga mudila.. Sorry ketuten.. Ithula innum enna visayam irukuna, naa avanuku ooti vidrathukaga en left hand ah avan shoulder la vechi stand panni irunthen.. Ipo antha kai mela avan kaiyavum vechu irukikittan..

Ipdilam pannaa na i love you nu ulari kottiruven ashwiney..
Avanum anna oda platela irunthu sapada eduthu enaku ooti vittan.. Nallavelai ennai purinju vaichuruka nala shivani saaapada ootala..

" naanum pesama iruka maten shiva "

Inaiku na ulara porathu uruthi.. Avan ennai viratta porathu uruthiyo uruthi..

Epdiyo en maanam pogama saptu mudichu kai kaluvitu vanthutom.. Intha thadavai ukkarum pothu anni en pakathula varakku munnadiye avan vanthu ukkanthutan..

Annikuda pesaratha anna paarthu possessive aana oru logic iruku.. Aana ashwiney yen possessive aaganum.. Oruvelai annavayum anniyaiyum pakam pakkama ukkara vaika ninaikranaa.. Illa enakagavaa..

Inga naa ivlo pulambi kittu iruken..aana rendu jeevans kannalaye padam ootitu iruku.. Ellam namma annannum anniyum thaan..

Nallathoru kudumbam..palkalaikazhagm..
Nallavelai ashwiney engita pesa arambichitan..
Illana na intha marathukitta thaan pesitu irukanum..

Ini iruku antha shivaniku..en ashwinaya patha vaikra.. Nee Melugu dollnaa..naa anabelle dolluu.. Hahahhaaa..
Ini shivangiyoda aatatha paaka pora..

To be continued..

Last epi shivu babya ala vechathuku sorry friends.. Ini no alugai..

Intha story pathi neenga enna ninaikringa.. Story sariyana pathla tha poguthaa..
Ungaluku piducha epi ethu.. Ithelam share panningana naa romba happy aaven..
Vote mattum pannama konjam wordinglayum sollunga pa.. 😍😍😍 ilaina night unga kanavula sivangi anabelle makeupla vara vechiduven..lol..

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