Man's Greatest Mistake

By fire_Destroyer3

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Our super powered Cinnamon roll Izuku Midoriya was kidnapped and used for new quirk enhancement drugs along w... More

His Start
The Escape
The New Life
A#1
A#2
A#3
Awakening
A#4
A#5
A#6
A#7
A#8
What?
A#9
A#9(Continued)
A#10
A#12 (Before A#11)
A#11
A#???
A#??
A Time for Christmas and a New Year

How my life turned out

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By fire_Destroyer3

Hey guys i took a break off writing because i just had to think about life a little but im back and im better than ever........im kidding its the same old me

Thinking

Allmight weak form

Allmight

Normal


Previously on Man's Greatest Mistake

Shinro activates his quirk and jumps off walls into the alleyway to the villain and punches them in the face just like with the sludge villain but weaker

Shinro-BITCHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! FUCK YOU!!!

V-AHHHH!

The villain gets knocked out from that one punch

Shinro-Don't fear citizen-HOLLY SHIT HE'S DEAD there is a boy (Tanjiro Kamado RIP) Decapitated holding a wooden box and a sword thats had the words Nichirin Blade engraved on it "RAwr..."

Shinro-W-what was that did it come from the box?

???-RAWR

Some girl with a bamboo on her mouth and slits for eyes jumps out of the box and Shinro recognises her and says

Shinro-Nezuko? Is that you

Back to now

She stops the attack

Nezuko-How do you know my name ANSWER ME!

Shinro-U-UH NEZUKO ITS ME IZUKU FROM THE EXPERIMENTATION

Nezuko-No you aren't Izuku has green hair but your hair is black

Shinro-Uh umm ENVY HELP ME OUT

Envy-Uh ok

Shinro's hair changes green and so does his eyes

Nezuko-Izuku!, Hi

Shinro-So now can you please not kill me with your claws

Nezuko-Ok i wont kill you but what happened to Tanjiro

Shinro-Oh was that his name, before i got here he was already dead

Nezuko-Nooooo Tanjiro :,C

Shinro-Well the good thing to do is to bury him with his belongings

Nezuko-Well actually he said that if we found you then he would give his sword to you for respec


Shinro-Oh really

Nezuko-So *she gets on one knee with the sword in both of her hands* here is the sword my king

Shinro-(=_=) Im not a king and i dont even know how to wield a sword so i dont think i should be the person that should own this sword *he says as his green hair and eyes fade*

Nezuko-I think you should wield this sword

Shinro-uh okay...... ill take the sword but i dont think i would be able to use it because there are 2 days until the entrance exam

Nezuko-Oh yeah

Shinro-Are you gonna take the entrance exam

Nezuko-Yep

Shinro-Good that means that we will be friends reaching for the same goal

Nezuko-Yeah to become the #1 hero!

Shinro-Yeah!

While Shinro said that he realised that Nezuko might not have a home

Shinro-Where do you live or do you not have a home?

Nezuko-Well uh i uh dont have a home 

Shinro-Oh wow so you have been living on the streets 

Nezuko-Yup

Shinro-Well thats a problem because I dont have a home either

Both-*sigh*

???-Oh so you need a home

A figure with a suit says to Nezuko

Shinro-*shielding her*Yeah but i dont think you can help us because my mom told me to stay away from strangers *he transforms into his izuku looking form*

???-*gasps a little*Izuku?!

Shinro-How do you know my name

???-Because i am your father

Shinro-*Gasps* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

(What actually happened)

???-*steps out of darkness* Because i am your father and also the infamous All For One

Shinro-WHAT how my father walked out on me and he died

AFO-My face was destroyed by Allmight and i had to leave and get my face reconstructed

Shinro-How could Allmight do this to you

AFO-Enough stories tell me how you can change from being izuku from being that person with black hair and brown eyes

Shinro-Shinro

AFO-Yeah Shinro

SHinro-Okay here we go so

(TS bec i aint gonna write this down)

AFO-Oh wow thats a lot to take in but i can still take you and Nezuko to live with me

Both-Thats fine

AFO-Good

(TS AFO home)

AFO-Here is my home

Both-WOAH

AFO-Here is your room izuku


Both-WOAH

AFO-Here is your room Nezuko

Both-WOAH

AFO-Here is the Kitchen

Both-WOAH

AFO-Here is the living room

Both-WOAH

AFO-Here is the backyard

Both-WOAH WOAH WOAH

AFO-Here is my car

Both-WOAH

AFO-Here is your car Izuku

Both-WOAH

AFO-Here is your car Nezuko

Both-WOAH

AFO-ha ha ha

Shinro-You are the best dad ever

AFO-And you are the best son ever

*hug*

Nezuko-:D

Shinro-Im gonna go to my room

Nezuko-Im gonna go to my room too

(They go to their room)

Shinro-In two days the entrance exam starts

(Ts) For the two days shinro trained with his quirk a lot and found out that he gets more tired the more he uses his quirk and he also tried boosting his quirk and his body started hurting and he passed out so he made a quirk evaluation

Shinro's quirk

The more he uses his quirk the more his stamina gets used up

If he boosts his quirk to and even powerful point which he averaged to about 30% his body starts hurting and he averaged that he has been using 10-15% of his power

(end of evaluation)

Shinro's father has been making a hero costume for him (just like cannon but more colorful)

Then the day came

AFO-*normal*WAKE UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SHinro-IM UP IM UP

Nezuko-Im up

Shinro-oooooo eggs and bacon

Nezuko-Meh i hate eggs 

Shinro/AFO-WHAT HOW CAN YOU NOT LIKE EGGS 

Nezuko-I just dont

AFO-Okay ill give you extra bacon

Nezuko-YAY!

Shinro-*mumble*No fair

Nezuko-*teasing* What was that

Shinro-Nothing

AFO-GO NOW GET OUTTA MY HOUSE

Shinro/Nezuko-OK FINE

Shinro gets in his car and nezuko gets in his car too and they drive to the exam place they get there and many people are talking to him to sell them the car but he says no and activates the drive home button on the car and it drives home

Shinro-Here we go

Shinro gets in the exam hall and listens to one of the pro heroes President Mic

PM-NOW TELL ME HOW ARE YOU ALLLLLL TODAY

Nezuko-GOOD

PM-THAT GOOD PARTICIPANT 104

Then PM talks about the written exam and the practical exam robots until a blueberry boi speaks up

BBB-ON THE EXAM PAPER IT SAYS THERE ARE 4 ROBOTS SO IF THIS WAS A MISTAKE UA SHOULD BE ASHAMED OF ITSELF AND YOU *points to Shinro* STOP SNORING HERE ITS DISTRACTING

Shinro-*snaps*You dont tell me what to do BlueBerry Boi if i wanna snor then i can snor and can you shut up its obvious that President mic was gonna get to the point about the last robot so if you didn't pick that up you should be ashamed of yourself

BBB-U-uh w-well *sits down*

PM-Okay so Participant 105 was right i was gonna get to that the last robot gives you 0 points so its best that you avoid it

(TS)

Shinro puts his hero costume on (just like cannon) *Thanks dad*  

Nezuko puts on her hero costume (same as in Demon slayer)

(TS to exam place)

Shinro saw a girl that was trying to calm down she was a brunet and decided to walk to her and calm her down until 

BBB-*grabs shoulder* You aren't trying to sabotage her  are you

Shinro-*snaps* Im not trying to sabotage here bitch so stick your dick up someone else's ass

He backs off

Shinro-*walks to the girl*Hey i see that you are trying to calm down

???-Yeah i just dont know if im gonna get in

Shinro-Don't think that you are gonna get in just know because with determination you can do anything

???-Thanks

Shinro walks away

PM-OK SO NOW *the doors open*

Shinro runs through the doors as though there was no tomorow while the other participants dont move because PM hasnt said go yet

PM-THERE ARE NO COUNTDOWNS IN A REAL FIGHT LOOK THAT KID WITH BLACK HAIR KNOWS IT GO GO GO GO GO

Everyone runs and destroys robots and racks up points

(Heroes room)

???-These kids are super cool and powerful (says a woman in a stripper costume)

???-Yeah they might have a lot of potential right Aizawa? (A chimera says)

Aizawa-Yeah and especialy these few 

???-Izumi Midoriya, Katsuki Bakugo, Katsumi Bakugo, Shoto Todoroki, Shota Todoroki, Nezuko Kamado, and Shinro Akame right?

Aizawa-I want them in my class Nezu

Nezu-Ok but lets see how they handle this *he presses a button*

Shinro-AND 78 i got enough points so im just gonna watch the clouds*he gets on top of a building and watches the clouds

EXPLOSION

Shinro-WHAT THE HELL

A giant Robot appears destroying buildings

Shinro-I better run

Shinro hears two girls Yelling for help and realises that one of them is that brunet

Shinro-Ive gotta save them

Meanwhile 1 minute earlier some other place

???-Im hacking the robot right now, nezu is very skilled in coding and firewalls but i can still break through them aaaand done im in control now lets have some fun

Back to now but in Heroes office

Aizawa-Shut it down

Nezu-I CANT!

PM-PEOPLE ARE GONNA DIE OUT THERE WE GOTTA DO SOMETHING

AM-WAIT look *he points at Izuku*

Shinro's hair and eyes turn green and more and more and more lightning forms around him

(Pretend the lightning is green ish and there is no eri)

Ive gotta get them out of there

He starts walking towards them and other participants are running away

Nobody else is gonna save them which means......they might die

His hair turns green and his eyes turn neyon emerald green

I should go to 50% no 60% no FUCK IT


His lightning becomes intense

All of my lightning in my fist

Lightning starts forming in his fist

LETS GO!

Izuku runs towards the robot, he destroys and dodges debris at the same time 


(pretend that they are both Izuku in his hero costume)

he runs to the girls

Shinro-Are you ok

???-Yeah but my leg hurts

Girl-my leg and arm hurts

Shinro-Do you both think you can walk

Both-Yeah

Shinro lifts the rubble from on top of them

SHinro-GO GET OUT OF HERE

Both-OK

they run away from there

Now lets GO

The 0 pointer punched at Shinro but Shinro put some of his strength into his left arm and destroyed the arm

(pretend allmight is izuku and what allmight punches is the 0 pointers fist with his left hand)

Envy-THATS MY BOI 

Felt-SPEEDY BOI

He jumps up to the head of the 0 pointer and he punches it in the face

Envy-YEAH PUNCH THAT THING

Felt-OH YEAH

Shinro is in the air and then questions himself about how is he gonna get down

Shinro-Wait how the hell am i gonna get down

Shinro starts to fall down

Shinro-AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ok so maybe to stop me from splating i should punch the ground or run down walls

Shinro realises his legs and arms are broken

Shinro-THE HELL MOM, DAD, NEZUKO, IM SO SORRY I COULDN'T BE A HERO

Shinro is falling very fast

Shinro-IM GONNA DIE

Shinro is 12 feet from the ground

Shinro-Im sorr-

Shinro gets SLAPPED from the brunet and he starts to float

Girl-RELEASE

Shunro starts to fall again but he was a foot away from the ground so when he fall he only hurt his nose and thats when an old lady with a sort of doctors costume started to walk towards him

Old Lady-You are so reckless if your quirk can break your bones dont use it

The old lady then kisses him and he starts to heal and when he was fully healed he was very tired and then he realised 

Shinro-YOU ARE THE RECOVERY HERO RECOVERY GIRL

Recovery Girl(RG)-Yes i am but still DONT BE SO RECKLESS

Shinro-Okayyy

Nezuko starts running up to him and hugs him

Nezuko-THAT WAS SO COOL ESPECIALLY WHEN YOU WENT ZOOM AND THEN VOOP AND POW AND AND AND UH thats it

Shinro-*Laughing a little* Okay Okay Okay Nezuko you really are bad at describing a situation

Nezuko-    >:(

Shinro-So lets go home

Nezuko-Okay

TS house Same day

Hisashi-Hello my friends how did it go

Nezuko-It went well and Shinro Did something really cool

Hisashi-YEAH I KNOW RIGHT

Shinro-How do you know?

Hisashi-UUH i hacked into the school cameras nothing too bad

Shinro- =_= welp ima sleep

Hisashi-But what about lunch

Shinro-ima just sleep

Hisashi-I made katsudon

Shinro-KATSUDON GIMMIE GIMMIE GIMM- WAIT NO I AM NOT GONNA SICUM TO KATSUDON I KNOW IT TASTES SO So so good.................GIMMIE NOW GIVE IT TO M- NO IMA GO TO SLEEP

Shinro goes upstairs and starts to shower

TS bedroom

Shinro-I really hope i got in

TS Two days later

Hisashi-ITS HERE 

SHinro-OMG OMG

Nezuko-OMG OMG

Hisashi-I ship em'

Shinro and Nezuko take them upstairs

Hisashi-WHAT YOU ARE GONNA TAKE THEM UPSTAIRS I WANNA SEE THEM TOO

Shinro-Sorry dad i just wanna watch this myself

Hisashi-NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

TS Nezuko room

Nezuko-Time to open it up

a hologram slides out of the mail box

An old lady pops up

RG-Hello Nezuko My name is Recovery Girl and i just wanna tell you that you got 77 villain points and that means you got into UA so CONGRATS *Nezuko is squealing out of joy* Your class will be class 1-A so welcome to UA

TS Shinro room (at the same time as nezuko)

Allmight shows up on the hologram

Shinro-Wow just who i need

Allmight-Hello Young Shinro My name is Allmight as you probably know i am the #1 hero

Shinro-No shit Sherlock

Allmight-And i just wanna tell you you got 78 villain points but thats not all we added a secret point system which is hero points and for every participant you save you get 60 points which means for saving those two girls you got 120 points which means in total you got 198 points

Shinro-OH YEAH

Allmight-But *Allmight's Smile fades* that isnt enough to get into UA

SHinro-Wait what

Allmight-Im sorry Shinro but 













You failed



So HOW WAS THAT it Pretty nice cliffhanger right? Well im out and always remember PLUS ULTRA Im out peace

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