Biggest Mistake ft.Preeran

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Character sketch
Truth out
Jealous
Plan
Meet??
Broken
Hurt
Shopping
Ritika's past
Marriage Proposal
Press-conference
Preeta Manao Mission
PreeRan and RiTika's roka ceremony
Thief in Preeta's room
Engagement
Tables turned
The End......

Roka

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Next day
It was roka ceremony of Rishab and Preeta
Rishab was happy but somewhere he is feeling guilty but not knows the reason
Preeran was sad

All were ready for Roka ceremony

Preeta's look

Rishab's look

Karan's look

Shrushti's look

Sameer's look

Kritika's look

Rahul's look

Kabir's look


Arora's came to Luthra house
Luthras greet them

Rakhi:Preeta puttar

Preeta: Jii Rakhi aunty

Rakhi:Puttar maa bolne ki aadat dal de

Preeta:Ji Rakhi aunt....I mean maa

Rakhi:Rishab ke pass chali ja vo kamre mein hai  aur baadme usko tujhe kuch logo se milana bhi hai

Preeta:Theek hai Rakhi maa (and left)

While she was going to Rishab's room
She bumped with Karan
Karan was lost in her
And meminizing her
They shared a painful eyelock
A lone tear escape from Preeta's eyes
Karan noticed it
First she came back to sense

Preeta: Karan Luthra mujhe khada kardo ya phir vo hi karoge jo kal kiya tha

A lone tear escaped from his eyes
But quickly wiped it as Preeta can't notice it

Preeta: Hello devar jii actually mujhe na aapka bade bhaiya yani ki mere hone wale husband ke pass jana hai so pls let me leave(in mind) mujhe bolna toh nhi tha but tumne mujhe yeh raah pe aake chod diya hai issilye mene bola

And she left

Tears was flowing down from his eyes
He can't take it more , he directly went to his room and locked the room

And fall down with a thug
He was crying miserably

On the other side
In Rishab's room

Preeta knock the door

Rishab:Kon??

Preeta: Rishab ji mein Preeta

Rishab: Aayeye na Preeta ji

Preeta entered in his room

Rishab:Aapko iss rishte se problem toh nhi hai na

Preeta:Nhi Rishab ji mujhe koi problem nhi hai

Rishab: Hmm

On the other side,
Rahul,Kabir and Kritika also entered Luthra house

Kritika(whispers): Man toh bilkul nhi maan raha tha yaha aane ka

Rahul: Kritika ham teeno mein se kisi ka bhi man nhi tha

Kabir:Vaise yeh Karan Luthra hai kaha mujhe usse baat karni hai

Kritika:Mujhe bhi uski khabar leni hai

Rahul:Par uski aakhon mein pyaar Preeta ke liye dikh raha tha

Kabir: Vo toh mujhe bhi dikh tha

Kritika:Shayad usne apne bhai ke liye yeh sabh kiya ho

Rahul and Kabir together: Haan shayad

Rahul: Baat karni padegi

Kritika:Abhi nhi yeh function khatam hone do phir baat karte hai

On the other side,
Sameer and Shrushti were talking
She told Sameer everything

Sameer:Mujhe nhi pata tha ke Karan bhai aasa karenge

Shrushti: Mujhe bhi aasa nhi laga tha but yeh kya hogaya

Rishab and Preeta came down and
Karan also came down

Rakhi:Chalo abh chula dhulan aagaye hai toh rasam shuru karte hai

Kareena: Jii Bhabhi shuru kariye

Rishab and Preeta gone on stage and sat on chair

Rakhi and Sarla started for rasam

Preeta(in mind):Kaha socha tha ke yeh rasam tumhare saath karungi but tumne sabh bigaad diya

Karan(in mind):Mera sapna tha yeh saare rasame tumhare saath karne ka but.....

Rakhi made Rishab eat sweets
And was moving towards Preeta
Rakhi kept sweet near Preeta's lips as she can eat from the same side

Karan(in mind):Pls Preeta dusri taraf se khaana pls

Preeta are from another side
Karan smiled

Karan(in mind):Yeh mein kya soch raha hu abh Preeta aur Rishab ki shaddi hone wali hai aur mein yeh sabh........nhi nhi Karan kuch mat soch tu joh bhi kar raha hai bilkul sahi kar raha hai(and left because he was not able to see Preeta and Rishab together

After sometime all ritual was done

Rishab was going somewhere but bumped with Kritika

And Kritika was about to fall but Rishab held her
Rishab was lost in her
And meminizing her
Rishab made her stand

Rishab:Aap yaha

Kritika:Haan voh mein Preeta ki dost hu

[P.S:Kritika Luthra (Karan,Rishab and Sameer's sister and Kareena Luthra's daughter)has married and shifted to America with his husband so don't be confused]

Rishab:Okay

After sometime function was about to end
Kritika, Rahul and Kabir went towards Karan

Rahul:Hamhe tujhse baat karni hai

Kabir:Chal

They all went to a corner

Kabir: Yeh sabh kya hai?

Karan:Kya kya hai?

Rahul:Hamne jawaab manga hai double questioning karne ko nhi bola hai

Karan:Mein jawaab dunga but Question toh dhang ka pucho ke answer bhi dhang ka aaye

Kritika:Hamara question hai ki tune Preeta ko dhoka kyu diya

Karan: Simple hai because she is not my type vo boht simple hai

Kabir: Woah woh simple hai ki tu playboy hai

Karan:That's my point she know it that I am a play boy meri boht saari girlfriend hai jabh se voh mujhse mili hai tabh se usse pata hai ki mein kya hu phir bhi vo aasa behave kar rahi hai ki voh mujhe janti hi nhi ki mein kya hu

Rahul:Guys chalo I think so isse baat karna hi bekaar hai

Karan:Haan haan jao na kis ne mana kiya hai

They left
Tears were flowing from Karan's eyes
He ran and gone to his room and started crying miserably

Karan:Sorry Preeta Sorry Preeta

On the other side,

Rakhi:Aaj ka function aache se hogaya abh agle hafte engagement kal ham shopping pe chale jayenge samaan lene

Sarla:Ji Rakhi ji abh ham chalte hai

Rakhi:Rishab aapko chod dega

Sarla:Nhi Rakhi ji Rahul aur Kabir hai hamare saath

Rakhi: Theek hai Sarla ji

They left

To be continued......

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