Okay I have decided to finally edit this book. There will lots of hardcore editing and I will try to make it longer + better. It will be editing little by little. Since I got a lot of comments like
"You should write anymore you're really bad" or "this was really confusing"
I began to question wether I should continue writing or not. So I'm questioning if I should just stop. But then I realized this was my first book so everyone can just say your negative comments somewhere else. But anyways I will be editing this and I hope everyone will read it after. Thanks!