The Best Commander Ever (Azur...

By NEROSAMADA

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Y/N L/N, the one who fought the sirens alone, and won, even though he is just a normal Human He now have his... More

Chapter 1: Azur lane
Chapter 2: More Shipgirls
Chapter 3: Commander to the rescue!
Chapter 4: Maids and Commander
Special Chapter: TUDUM
Chapter 7: War goes BRRRRRR
Chapter 8: Y/N and the Kitsune sister
Chapter 9: The secret move of Y/N
Chapter 10: No to Masochism
Chapter 11: Vroom
Chapter 12: Daily life in the base
Chapter 13: Investigator/ Doting Commander
Chapter 14: Prank
1K follower Special: Backstory
Final Chapter: The tale of the Commander
Special Chapter: Nep
Season 2 Chapter 1: Wooden Waifu/Squid Lane
Season 2 chapter 2: Bye-Bye
Halloween Special: Trick or Treat in the base
100k Chapter: The Master plan
Season 2 chapter 4: Bully Y/N
Season 2 Chapter 5: Arbiter VI
Season 2 Chapter 6: The mighty Commander
Special Chapter: New Jersey
Special Chapter: Dunkerque
Season 2 Chapter 7: The start of the Legend
Season 2 Chapter 8: Northern Drunk Lord
Season 2 Chapter 9: Final Run

Chapter 5: Biscuit

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By NEROSAMADA

A/N: Going to jump directly to Episode 5 plot, because episode 4 isn't much of a banger for this story






Y/N POV

Ah! Another great day at being a Commander! A peaceful  day at least!

That was if Sheffield and Edinburgh were not trapped in an island by Sakura Empire and Fersang

And because i'm a big softie and i want to save them, i decided to go there, alone

Y/N: You truly are the best bro

I don't know why, but i could feel the hapiness coming from the wooden boat

I look ahead, and see an island overed by fog, and around it were sirens ship with Sakura Empire and Fersang boats

Y/N: They're not joking, like, at all. Why did i not call reinforcement again? Oh yeah, because it's a stealth mission, so.... yeah

I passed the Sirens boat without problem, since they were aiming at the island, as i cheered silently

Y/N: I'm a ninja.....

That was the case if someone didn't landed in front of me, and pointed her sword at me

???: Who are you, and what are you doing here?

Y/N: If you want something from someone, it's proper manners to introduce yourself first

She placed her blade at the side of my neck, glaring at me

???: I will not repeat myself, who are you, and what are you doing here?

Y/N: You just did

???: I did what?

Y/N: Repeat yourself

She didn't say anything, except launching her blade at me, as i didn't move

It was about to cut my neck, before she stopped inches before it connect, and jump away

???: You..... You are not a normal being..... You aren't afraid of death

Y/N: Wait, you were about to kill me? I didn't realize since you were too fast

???: O-Oh...... I see

Y/N: Anyway, i have to finish a rescue mission, see ya

I started to row away, calmly, before she was in front of me again

Y/N: Can you?

???: No

???2: Ara~ Takao, it's not nice to keep cuties like him for yourself

Someone landed behind Takao, and started to....... 'feel' her

Takao: Atago! This is not the time! He is an ennemy!

Atago: I know~ But it would be a shame if he die here~ I heard that he caught the interest of Prinz Eugen and Akagi~

Takao: Him? Are you sure?

Atago: Yes~ And for his look, i understand why~

Y/N: Can i go now? My girls need me

Atago: Why do you want to go so quickly~? Don't you want to stay with us~?

Y/N: No

???: YOU!

I turn to the owner of the voice, and see none other than Zuikaku, as she was enraged to see me

Y/N: Me

Zuikaku: This time, i will kill you for sure!

Y/N: You made a mistake, you forgot a word

Zuikaku: Oh yeah?!

Y/N: Yeah, it should be 'i will try to kill you'

Zuikaku: THAT'S IT!

She rush at me, about to cut my head, as i blink, and see Atago protecting me

Atago: I took a liking in this man here, you see~ So i would hate it if he got hurt in front of me~

She glared at her, still with her smile

Atago: So i would like if you stop this at once~

Zuikaku: You traitor!

Atago: I am not a traitor~ I am plaining to take him with me, and keep him for myself~

Takao: Atago....

Atago: What is it~?

Takao: He is running away.....

They looked to my direction, and see i was rowing at full speed out of here

Y/N: Fuck this shit, i'm out!

Zuikaku: Get back here!

Atago: Wait! I will treat you with love, i promise!

I was still rowing at full speed, before the house near me exploded, sending me inside a building

Y/N: The fuck?

I wasn't hurt thankfully, as i walk back to the main street, and see Prinz Eugen above me, smirking

Prinz Eugen: Guten Tag, my dear Commander~

Y/N: Hey, uh..... did you see a wooden boat? I was using it a minutes ago

Prinz Eugen: Look there~

I look to where she pointed, and see my wooden boat, destroyed, inside a building, as it was on fire

My mind goes blank, as i walk toward it, slowly

Zuikaku: I got you!

She was about to rush at me, before Atago placed her arm in front of her, a smile on her face

Atago: Do that, and i will not hesitate to kill you~

Takao: You truly like him, huh?

I kneeled near my boat, and smile weakly

Y/N: You did well, buddy, you can rest from now

Wooden boat: .......

Y/N: Don't apologize..... I am thankful that i had you as my partner in this adventure..... Thank you.....

Takao: Is he talking to his boat?

Zuikaku: I think he is

It turned into ashes, as i got up, and cracked my neck

Y/N: Guess i have no choice, huh.....

I turn to the shipgirls, and pointed my finger at them

Y/N: You've all really done it! I have to use my secret move, that only i, the Commander, know!

Prinz Eugen: Oh~?

Zuikaku: No matter what you use, i will beat you!

Y/N: Well then.....

I smirk, before turning around, and run away

Y/N: SECRET MOVE: NIGERUNDAYO!

Zuikaku: This.......

Takao: This?

Zuikaku: THIS MAN! I WILL KILL HIM WITHOUT MERCY!

She started to run after me, as she was getting closer and closer

Zuikaku: GET BACK HERE!

Y/N: NO!

I look at the top of a tower, and see Sheffield looking around, before she saw me

Y/N: DON'T COME NEAR ME! OR ELSE YOU WILL DIE!

Zuikaku: YOU THINK YOU CAN KILL ME?!

Y/N: I'M NOT TALKING TO YOU DUMBASS!

Zuikaku was about to catch me, before something crashed between us

???: A shipgirl who have problem with a human? Pathetic

Zuikaku: Who are you?!

Prinz Eugen: Oh my~ It seems like she is here, after all~

Y/N: Wait what?

I could now clearly see the figure, who looked at me with a glare

Y/N: I like your hair

???: Oh? And who are you, human

Y/N: Y/N L/N, Commander of Azur Lane, nice to meet ya, lady who don't know how to smile

???: The commander, you say?

Y/N: Yeah, and i was fleeing from this girl who is trying to kill me

I pointed at Zuikaku, who still had her sword in hand

Prinz Eugen: Bismarck~ It's been so long since i didn't see you~

Bismarck: Eugen

Y/N: Your name look like Biscuit

Everything stopped, as Bismarck looked at me with a fiercy glare, and walk toward me

Bismarck: What did you just say?

Y/N: Biscuit

She grabbed my collar, and was now at my face

Bismarck: Don't you dare disrespect me! I am a powerful ship, and i will not tolerate to be disrespected by a human!

I grabbed her collar too, and glared harder than her

Y/N: Trust me that i don't give a fuck about you being a shipgirl or anything else. You are disrespecting yourself by talking like your a fucking weapon!

She was taken aback by my yell, as i pushed her away

Y/N: So i will say it once, and only once! If i hear the term shipgirl, or hear that you girls talked like your weapons, then the sirens will be the last of your worries

Everyone was silent at my outburst, as i calmed down, and get back my neutral face

Y/N: Anyway, while i was yelling, the girls trapped in this island were able to escape, MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Bismarck:  So you have decided to sacrifice yourself in order to save your friends?

Y/N: Yis

Bismarck only smirked, and walk toward me, before standing at my side

Bismarck: If you want to lay a hand on me, then you have to get through me!

Y/N: HA- wait what?

Prinz Eugen: Why the change of heart?

Bismarck: I was expecting some guy who think of himself first before anyone else, but i got the opposite. And for that, i will follow him, and respect his order

She looked at me, and smiled gently

Bismarck: What is your first order, Commander?

Y/N: Uh..... Protect me?

She smirked, before carrying me in a princess carry style, and charge her cannons

Bismarck: Then it will be done!

She fire her cannon at them, as they jumped away, and quickly run away

Y/N: Where are you going?

Bismarck: We are going back to our base, of course!

Y/N: The base of Azur lane, you mean?

Bismarck: Yeah!

Y/N: Will they accept you?

Bismarck: They have no choice! I am your assistant from now on, after all!

Y/N: ......What?


Timeskip


Hood: THIS WILL NOT HAPPEN!

I was currently in my office, drinking some tea, while looking at the scene in front of me

After Bismarck took us back to the HQ, there was a lot of commotion, saying she is an ennemy, blablabla

After i told them that she won't do anything, and that if she truly do something, i will do anything to pay them back, they calmed down

Everyone, except Hood, for some reason

Bismarck: You are just jealous because i am far more better than you, and the Commander like me more

Hood: YOU COME OUT OF THE BLUE LIKE THAT, CLAIM YOU ARE HIS SECRETARY, AND THINK I WILL NOT SAY ANYTHING?!

Y/N: Calm down, my ear hurt

Hood: AND COMMANDER, SAY SOMETHING!

Y/N: What do i have to say? What is a secretary for the Commander anyway?

Bismarck: For us, it is one rank  below the title of wife, in a way

Y/N: Oh....... So you claimed me as your husband without asking me

Bismarck: Yes

Hood: And i will not accept it! Only i have the right to be his secretary!

Y/N: The fuck is that contest? Am i some piece of meat or something?

Bismarck: Oh? You really think that YOU, are more skilled than me?

Hood: Yes, and i will not back down

They were about to fight, before i look at the window, and see something coming to our position

Y/N: Hmm.....

It got here quickly, as i blinked, and see a sort of spear in front of me

It crashed on the wall, creating a cloud of dust in the room

Bismarck & Hood: Commander!

Y/N: Hmm.......

The dust died down, as they could see a spear inches away from my face, missing me by a little

Hood: Commander! Are you okay?!

Bismarck: Who dare try to hurt him like that!

Y/N: HMMMMMMMMMM....

Hood: Are you hurt, Y/N?

Y/N: No, i was just wondering...... Can a girl, who fight the siren, be scared of water?

Bismarck: You almost died, and that's the only thing you have to say?

Y/N: Yeah

Y/N: *Mind* So, she made her first move, huh?



Somwhere else.....


???: Oh? It seems like he was able to dodge my spear~ You truly are someone special, Y/N L/N~

The figure smirked from where she was, and had a crazy look on her face

???: I will break you slowly, so you will entertain me~





Chapter 5: Finished


A/N: Yeah, i'm a madlad i'm adding her into the harem, not happy? You know the plan

What? You don't know the plan? Well then.....

Not happy? Fight me (ง'̀-'́)ง

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